This is really nice...I love the descriptions in it and the imagery...I hope to see more in your port...Good luck with writing more...I think that you have as niche for writing...Really would like to read more of your work...Just want you to Keep on Writing...
Well I think that this is good...not something I personally would read...You have alot of description used as you read the story...I think I was lost when it went from now and then back to the greek gods...which has to do with the title...I really think that this will be come a great novel....I hope to read more of your stories on your port! Keep Writing ON!
I think that reviewing is an excellant way for readers and authors to meet...also for authors to get more edits that they need for the type of writing...I think that the reader can express how they feel about what they just read and relect from the review...I also think that if you are giving the review that you need to be honest...and rate them honestly...and not give 5 stars and a bad review...I have heard many people that has happened to and I think that is terrible and it gives no help with the author to know what needs to be looked at...That only shows that the person did it for the points and not for helping out with critiscm...
This is really great poem...I really like the imagery in it...You could picture it as you read it...Hope to read some more from your port...I like that it was short and simple, and to the point...Also were you doing a certain rhyme scheme with this...or a poetry form with...Keep on Writing....
This was a great paper to read...I love to know the differences...I see some of me in one of the temperments...I think that this would be something to print out for others to read in my sociology class. I would have to get your permission though... I think that it would help us out a lot from it...Well I ao off to read more and review...Tbanks again for something educational to read....
Vivian this was a great read...I love the story...as uaual morals take over no matter what...hope to see more of this story and find out about Abby and where she is...I could picture the whole story as I read it through out the whole thing...can't wait to see chapter 2, hopefully....
I am glad that I read this...In my sociology class we just talked about Marx and fuctionalism tooo...I know that I that thinking marx is alot better than doing the functionlism in sociology...so I hope to read more about what you write so that it will help me in my sociology class...
This is a great poem...I know where you are coming from on here...I have bpd so I am like that everyday too...but it does get better I promise...great imagery...
This is a great beginning of this story...I hope that you are writing more to this....This was really touching...I like the imagery in the story too...I know for elderly it is hard to loose a youg friend when they die..because they miss the companionship...
Wow that is a cool story too...You really need to get these published...I love this one too. I hope to keep reading more of your stories...Please let me know what you port is so that I can read more of you stories...Keep on writing and hopefully you will get some of this published...and if you have...I would love to know where...
Wow this is great...glad I get to keep reading you works as I go down the static item lists...I hope to keep reading them as I go down it...You really need to get this all published if it is anything like what I just read...I wish you the best of luck in the future...Keep writing on!!
This is a great story too...I would like to read more of these stories if you can let me know where to read them...I hope to that there are more of your works...I hope to see your work published so that everyone can enjoy your work...Please send me the link to read more...Keep Writing...
This is a pretty cool story...I am not one for aliens...but this is cool...I think that you should try to be published if you have not yet begun to look for a publisher...I hope to read some more of your works...hope that you keep writing!!!! I am also trying to get enough points so that I can get my basic membership!! This way I can more for my port...Good luck again with your works!!!
Wow this is powerful...make life choices are hard to do when you are not sure what to do...I really can understand this myself...Good luck with more poems...
I think that this story has potential...I think that if you add more to the story and let the Prince know about Mireth, then maybe it can be a better story line...Keep up the Writing...
This was a very interesting story...was this a personal experience or a fictional one? This is a great story...hope you have more to read...I would really like to read what you have...I have BPD... I am always interested in reading what other people have to write...
Wow...this is a great story...I could see how you felt through the whole story as I read it...I think that the emotions in the story are great...I know that it is hard to see someone die in the hospital while there is nothing that they or you can not do....But then, when it is time, he will not be hurting any more...
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