This is a simple but pretty poem...I love how you can picture as you read it...loads of imagery...The descriptions are short, sweet and simple...You could see them walking through the woods on their own little path...I hope to read more from your port and you are on my favorite authors list....Keep on writing...
This is cool...I am sitting next to a 3 yearold right now...that is exactly how he is...I am so glad to read this and see your 3 yearold playing with the rock and with the wood in on the ground...but I think you forgot the number thing that 3 yearolds are best at: "why"! This really cute...lots of Imagery!!
This is awesome...I could see the vines perfectly with all the imagery going through...I hope to read more in your port...I could see the colors of the petals off each vine...I am on to read another one of your poems off there reveiwers request page...You are in my favorite authors too...Keep On writing...
I just want to say that this made me think of every relationship I have been in...how love has affected in each time...I love the imagery in here...and I could see it every line i read...I hope to read more in your port...I have added you to my favorites...Keep On Writing...
Well I can see everything in the poem...I hope that you are not really feeling like this...To me if you are feeling like this then you should write more of the emotion into it...imagery and description wise it is flat...I really think that if you put more emotion into it and Put WDC as your achievement for your writing then maybe you will feel better since you have peers to read and review your work...again that is just my opinion...I have learned more on here with my writing then even in my creative writing class where it was necessary to have peers critiqu in taht class...I really helps...Good luck in the future...I will be back to check more on your port...you have been added to my favorites list...and all I can say is Keep on Writing!!!
Well it has alot of content in this...but you did not really get into it as you could with your feelings about how depressed and how low you are really are...I was really expecting alot more imagery and description when I was reading it...I hope to read more of your port and will be adding you to my favorites list...Definitely need to express more feelings and more description into this...just so you know...I have BPD..and I can relate...but when I write like that I use my poetry and writing as somewhere to escape and add all my feeling good or bad into my writing...great way to vent!!
I just wanted to say that I am glad that you are here to help others...Especially for everyone that needs upgrade...helping the community of Writing.com...I hope to see others come here to either receive help or to nominate others to help...Keep on Helping others her on WDC...
This is an excellant way to help others learn what to do with the memberships...I am one of those who needs to know because my membership is down graded at the end of next month to basic so I have to get my gp's back up again so that I can get my membership upgraded...I would use some of the other groups to help...but I think that I am going to do this on my own since I was given these memberships as gifts...I would have to see if others need it first...
Another perfect auction to help out one of the groups helping with the newbies and other Writing dot com members...Will definitely donate gps to this cause...Hope that you continue to help other WDC members in the future...and I hope to participate more in the next few months...
This is a great start to your new book...I have read the first segment of the original novel...and have been trying to make it through the segment...will have to sit down this weekend and try to make it through other segments so that I can give you some ideas for this character you are working on...Hope to read the next novel in print too...
This again was a really cool story...definitely a read between the lines kinda diner...Hope that this turns into more of a short story as some of your other stories have...I really enjoyed the mother out of the whole thing...until the end when she knew that she was going to have the sam problem too...live and learn...
First of all...I think that this was an interesting way to get back at people on the shift that made you anygry...and then for you to elplorer in your own sexualy feeling for big women...I think that you made the whole gaining experince some waight greadually instead of it all in one day...You could picture this as you read this with the descriptions of the crew...would like to know if Steve has his pills to not gain as much weight as he said and is keeping them from Mike...will definitely have to read the next part...definitely different kind of reading for me...Keep on writing...
I think that this article is a great peice...yes there is going to be outdated info...taht is what the internet is all about...nothing that you can control...I went through each topic as you described it and you did a great job with teaching how to do this...I am glad that you were able to do this and make it easy enough for the reader to follow along...
I think that this is a really good poll...I think that it makes you think about the importance of religion is...especially when you have had a chance to experience many religions...I have had that chance...and so I have decided that for myself, I am going to sometime find a religion for myself...
Wow...really imformative on how to look at your BiPolar...I never looked at that way...I have BPD...but the wall is what you described perfectly...I hope to read more of your port...There is alot of imagery in this too...This piece also shows the progess on how you grew with this and were able to have a relationship and let someone into your life with out getting hurt...Keep ON writing...
Wow this was a great one...I actually had a tough time getting this one done...I love challenging ones...I hope to go visit your port...will definitely be back to look for more of these from you...Have a great day and Keep on writing!! Write ON!!!!!
This is a great way to introduce your story...I know that I have two children that would love the story it has a unicorn and my son would love because of the dragon...Lots of description and keeps you ready to go to the first chapter of the story...which is worth the wait to read it...Keep on Writing....
Wow this is a great start to a novel...this will definitely keep the reader interested...I am ready to read the next chapter...Hope that you are already writing that...Hope to go and read your port soon...Keep on Writing...and hope fuully you will get some helpful criticism from other readers too...Good luck!
That is a wonderful poem to write for Cookie...I hope that my girls will someday be able to get on here and write...It is beautiful and lots of imagery...Good Luck!
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