You are so right on this about persons with dyslexia...I am a fellow writer that has this problem too...Mine seems to be more now that I am no longer able to work. I ran a cash register for 8 years, so I had to focus on getting everything correct so I would not put the wrong code in for produce, soda 12 packs, and beer cases...I know that it is more difficult to type and see a word that was misspelled, and not correct it before I go to the rest of what I am writing about. I also have to write looking at my hands when typing on here too.
I am so glad that you have wrote about this...You did a great job on this, and it explains it carefully and precise...Yes everyone who has dyslexia have it in a different way, and no one is "dumb or stupid"! These persons who call all dyslexics "dumb and stupid" just have hide from the ignorence of what Dyslexia is! Keep On Writing!!!
Here I go again to stalk you...hehe...I think that this is an awesome contest that benefits the person being reviewed and reviewer...I Think that reviews are the most important part whether you are the reviewer or the reviewee!!! I can't wait to participate!!! Keep On helping!!
I think that this is a great idea to keep track of all your friends, comments, experiences, and reviews for your work...I think that you have a great way to let others know how they care about you!!! I hope to come back to lever more messages for you!! Keep On Writing!!!
Wow I love this, I could see the imagery as you described about your blindness. I could never imagine being with out my sight. I could only imagine how it is for you and your family to get through the day and at night. I liked where you mention "eyes that die in night, feel nothing from the division". You are already in the dark...that is hard to "see" with other senses....
You described everything with words that paint the picture of you struggling with your sight. I know that you have great poetry, that you use all your senses as you write these. That is more important because then you can really picture everything. Especially senses that you took for granted before. I am on to read more of your port! Keep On Writing...
I think that you have described the person exactly as player...I could picture the person when reading this poem...The sad part is that there are many out there men and women that have to be a player because they do not want the commitment and want you when the feel and nothing more...Within this poem you have show many emotions that you went through with this person...
You show how the player messes with the emotion inside of you. I especially like the parts where you have shown that you are strong and will not let him get to you...I wish that I was strong enough on that part...I have let my guard down to many times...I am honored to have reviewed this...Keep On Writing!!!
Sherri this poem is short, sweet and simple...I love the imagery that it suggests when you are reading this...I enjoyed reading this poem becuase of the positive feeling it brings as you read the descriptions of the words, and it really describes you. I can picture it all as i am reading this...i can see you chasing the rainbows, and reaching for the stars. You can also picture you reaching all your dreams. This is great poem that you have showed everyone about yourself! Keep on Writing!!
I have to tell you that this is a great story about a strong character. I hope that this is a fictional character that someone did not really have to go through all this...I hated to see that this daughter had to go through the rape and then having to get rid of the baby...All because she wanted to be "normal" and was not prepared for this...I hope that there will another short story to this, seeing what happens next...I would love to read it if you have it in your port already!! Keep On Writing!!!
I think that this is an ineteresting poll...really tells you were everyone stands with Politics, and America...I think that this could possible be a prompt to do an essay or other types of prose...I hope to visit your port again....Keep On Writing...
This a great poem...I like that it is short sweet and simple...The description sets the imagery...Great imagery on this...I love the picture get while you are reading it...Ilike how you can see the flowers flowing...the waves rolling over...I hope to read more of your work...Keep On Writing...
This is are great poll...You have to really think about what rating that you would be as a writer...I think that most of the members here would give themselves a 4 stars or a 3star since that is average for authors on here...and since a 3 star is average for your work that would make since...Thank you for having this poll for others to do...Keep On Helping and Keep On Writing...
MM this is really cool forum that you have to help others with...I think that it has helped many members so far as I have read through the first page of posts...as usual you seem to keep helping other members on here...Keep up the great job...may be one of these days I will post in here with my port...Keep On Help others!!!
Wow that is deep and powerful...I can see why it gives you the chills why you read it...love the imagery in it...you can see your son as you read this...I hope that as he gets older they will come out with a cure...Love to read this with the descriptions of the words...you are awesome...Keep On Writing...
First of this is a beautiful poem...The imagery in this is so cool...I love how I can picture the light from the candle and the glow of her in the candle light...this is my favorite part of this...I can also picture the death upon her, as he is begging for her not to die...This is really pretty...I hope that this was not wrote about someone you need...if so I hope that the love for her, has been found in someone else since then...I will be reading more of your port!!! Keep On Writing...
Well I am trying to figure out why you have a low rating for these haiku's...they have perfect 5-7-5 syllable count...they are on nature that follows the traditional haiku...The imagery is awesome...you can picture it as you are reading it...You can picture the Sun and the rays...you can picture the rays going through the ocean sprays to make the rainbow...I think that this is great...Keep On writing!!!!
You did a great job on this...would have loved to read the story that went with this...I could picture this perfectly with the imagery...I think you need to boost your're confidence, missy...I am glad you went out of your norm...so that you could give a try for this contest...Keep On Writing and Keep On helping!!!!
As usual you are always trying to have fun!!! This was a blast to do...I love doing this...I was just reading some of the reviews when I saw one for this and had to go and take a look at what you were doing...Thank you for cheering me up today already...Will let others know about this too!!! Keep On Writing...Keep On Helping...Always Have Fun!!!
Wow, Vivian this poem is powerful!!!! I love the imagery in this...I can feel the emotion that you have put in this with the descriptions as you wrote it...I can see you staring horror watching the towers go down one by one...I can picture son sobbing in pain watching as the terrorist have became our enemy and have killed some many...I love this poem!!!! Keep On Writing...
Wow that was awesome...I think that is great...I love how you all had met almost a year later and was able to meet 3 generations of your family...Did you marry Barbara or did you go back to the woman that you were getting married to in week...I sure hope that you were able to get to know your father too...and that you were able to get to know your son...I sure hope that you did marry Barbara...This story has excellant imagery...you could picture this as you read it...I could see that you were surprise to find out about your son and then more of a shock that the older man was your father!!! Keep On Writing!!!
This was grewat...I like how this went from killing his wife, and Veronica, to Timmy giving him back the viagra...which he will be having problems in the new few hours after he leaves...What happened to his dad...is this going to become a book or series of short stories? I love that you could picture all the characters in the story, the description was great and so was the imagery in this...Please let me know if you go an further with this story...since this leaves the reader wanting to continue where this left off...Keep On Writing...
This sounds like a cool activity...I love watching the amazing race every Season...infact when I am taking classes at school...I work around the evening for my evening classes so that I do not miss this one and a few others...I think that you helping other members out by having this to play...and they earn gp's and to make other friends too...Keep On Helping!!!
This is funny...thought there was going to be more into it, but the ending was better...I thought when he turned around it might have been someone he actually knew or even his wife secretly working there....But the ending was even better than that...Keep On Writing!!!
This is pretty good...I am glad that you shared this...I think that it will be a great book once you get it going...I hope to read it when you get the story going!! I think that you will get good reviews on this story as you write it out and have everyone review it for you...I am not sure why you have a lower than 4.0 for the review...Keep On Writing!!
This is so funny...Thank goodness your dad got home when he did...or everyone would have had alot more to say...and it may have gotten back at school too...I have had that happen too...It is the worst when you do start laughgin becuase it is too funny...I feel sorry for you sister since she was the one that got the pee shower...hehe...I am glad that you wrote this...and this will become a memory that is funny now or later on...Keep On Writing...
"All we had has been erased" this line is hard to read in your poem...I would either take out had or has, to make it flow better...other than that this is a great poem with lots of imagery, and wonderful descriptions through out it...I hope that this was not about anyone you knew...This is sad, but at least the fears were faced and that is all that matters...Keep On Writing...
Wow this poem is beautiful...love the imagery in it as I read the words...Love the rhythm and rhyme to this as you read it...You can picture it perfectly as the cupid is getting ready to help with Valentines day for your wife...I think that this was probably one of her best presents she received for valentines day!!! Keep On Writing...
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