Each month Maryann- summer travel and katherine76 will highlight members and items in a variety of categories and place those items on a page that is in each of our ports (double the exposure). The owner of each chosen item will receive a plug in the two "Check It Out" pages for that month and will receive 500 gps.
Your item, "Roaming Through Rivendell" , has been chosen in the category of 'madlib' for the month of February. During this month, you can see it here, (Maryann's) "Check It Out..." and here, (Katherine's) "Invalid Item" .
Wow! That was lots of fun.
First I'd like to point out that your instructions were easier to follow than most madlibs. I feel that this is because you gave examples of what you were looking for.
All in all, the story didn't turn out half bad! I guess you wrote it in a way that helped the thrown in words to make sense. I have read funnier madlibs, but yours turned out to be an enjoyable story.
Someone once told me that the owners of the madlib items never get to see how the visitor's stories turn out, so I always try to remember to copy and paste mine so that the owner can actually see it.
So, here it is:
You fell asleep one night, and as slumber gently fell upon you, you couldn't help but dream about Johnny Depp. When you woke up, you felt a blanket of moss underneath you and the sunlight dancing across your nose. You didn't know where you were, and the first place that came to your mind was the mi casa. But this place, it couldn't be the mi casa, because there were elves, men, dwarves, hobbits, and wizards shuffling to and fro around you.
You quickly got up and looked around to see if anyone noticed you. You began to walk forward and ran into a car. Great! you thought, could this day get any worse? Just then you notice a man looking at you and you begin to feel happy. He shoots a weird look towards your direction, and you decide to go elsewhere.
You walk into an open room, where there are many different people, art structures, and a breaktaking view of a waterfall. Seeing the beauty of this place makes you a little homesick and you begin to think of mountain from your home.
You see a hobbit as he walks up to you and smiles. He welcomes you to Rivendell and says that a special council is to be held here. He then introduces himself to you as bashful.
The two of you sit down and begin to talk. He suddenly gets up and walks before you. After he does that, he begins to sing " Because You Loved Me." Then he holds out a ring and begins to slip it on your arm.
Everybody around you looks at the two of you and the ring in horror. A group of elves pull the hobbit away from you and puts the ring safely away. One of the elves apologizes and asks to talk to you in the corner.
He introduces himself to you as Comet. He explains about the ring and you become concerned. As you listen you wear a funny expression on your face. You explain to him that you are lost and that you are not meant to be here. He says he will kindly show you how to leave. You thank him as the two of you begin to walk towards an exit.
Just as you are about to leave, Comet takes you in his arms and whispers in your ear, "I'll be back." You look at him with a tired expression as he lets you go and waves good-bye. As you walk away he shouts, "Stop right there! Click your heels three times and think of your home!" You think he is windy, but you do it anyway, and when you are done clicking your heels and thinking of your home, you open your eyes and you are back in mi casa!
You are so happy to be home, but now you're not sure if you wanna go back to that pretty place again!
I hope you enjoyed how your madlib turned out as much as I did!
~~Maryann |
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