Incredible Girl! I think this was your best write yet, because you were focusing on you and life and learning from it! I always have your back and I back this poem 110 percent because we all have a life to look back upon that was leass than rosey, doesnt matter how it happened at all, all that matters is what you learned from it!! Youre awesome and courageuos in my eyes, and I have no doubt that the one Above will lead you to that love and trust and to that next chapter. You are a magnificent girl!
Always Truly,
Anna
btw- I write a peom 'Truthfully Yours', you should take a look at it..
You are a wonderful Daughter Diana, and your Mother is wondeful to have raised you to be that way! The two of you are Angels to me! I love this devotion and loyalty to family! Your words were beautiful!! Please keep this up, I bet this would make your Mommy cry! If my daughter ever wrote something so touching for me, I would!! Blessings all around you and your family, your Mother is lucky to have you and you are lucky to have her!! These are the best relationships, ones that can never be broken, Of course!
This poem made me cry! I was so enamoured in the fact that you can sum up such appreciation into such a small yet hugely significant human value. The value of shaking when being in love! What is better than that? I loved how you were wearing a jacket when 70', yet smile in spite! You are a great writer, and I am sure a great lover! Thank you for sharing this! I am glad to read! I am swept off my feet! Nice!
This was a really simple beautiful poem! Please allow yourself to feel unburdened! Everything will work out for you! I feel the words and the reference to the quilt was brilliant! I have felt this way as well. I just know now, I am not old, not even close, and age doesnt know a number! Great job, and if you need to talk, I am here!
This one made me cry! It was wonderful, and it made me think of my own daughter and my Mother, and how one day, my little girl is going to ve all grown with children, and I will just sit back and wonder where has the time gone? This was so loving in the way you wrote it, it was a treasure to say the least! You have alot of talent, and one lucky girl to have you as her father! Keep it up! I really felt this was one of your best poems yet!
Wonderful poem, I loved the descriptive detail about you and this loves' heads touching and both of you breathing so deeply, fixated on on anothers eyes! This poem was sincerely a confident treasured yearning from the bottom of your healing heart! I really appreciated this as I have felt this way very often, especially after dec. 5th!
Loved this literary work! It is really a base upon something special. You expressed your toughts concisely, which is highly accepted, and you also were mysterious in your words, the word of a writer! I really loved your poem, Timmy. It was nice to see a side of you I hadnt previously seen before!
Good poem, although I was confused y the contradiction within, however, it os my contradiction as a reader, and only you, the Author, know the full meaning or the one intended. I liked the "starry night" inclusion as Van Goth' is one of my favorite painters, however, many more I hold sacred to me! I realy loved the enrichment here and the metaphors, it was really nice. Thank you for sharing!
Perfectly saddening, I hope tis really did not happen to you, and if so, I send my prayers and blessing for you to heal. I couldn't imagine a parent being without their child, never being able to see their innocent smile, their button nose that is remembered for a lifetime, and the joy and personality and teaching they bring to this world! You wrote wonderfully, My condolences in every way, if this was non-fiction!!! May God Allow You Peace.
Simple, short, and so sweet! I believe this held a high signifigance to me, as I feel i am going through these transformations at this very moment!! It was really a nice treat for me to read this, and you put alot of your inherent talent into this! Great job!
Very Beautiful write! I am so sorry that your treasure is gone! Love is the best thing and it really does last a lifetime! You captured that essence well, I wish I could say something to make you feel better, all I can say is that your work would make your true love proud! It sure did make me feel that way! If you ever need anything, just stop in! Blessings to you and yours!!
Beautiful poem, diana!! This was really emotional, funny, I have the same feelings about my Dad, I just dont tell him. Did your Dad pass away? I am so sorry if thats the case! That must be horrible. I feel for you! I know that you just did make him smile whereever he is, just by writing these compassionate words! Keep this up!! It was really heart felt!!!
Highly insightful....again! I love the reality that was thrown into this the Government does not want the dummis to know! However, dummies usually are the ones that believe in our new age politicains more than the the intellects that believe in what our country was based upon. That would be The Constitution without amendments, our Declaration Of Independance, not the ones who fought so after to make it the "heckler"-ation of Independence, and the ones who really know what our countries intended meaning is, Unity, peace, Liberty, and Justice For ALL!!!! All does not mean this person gets perks over that person, this person has more money, so she gets the advantage.....let the politicians fake their true selves on stage and watch the others that desperately try to fake their true selves be found out through wavering conviction, through nastiness toward other candidates rather than focusing upon the most important thing this country should stand upon. Bringing one another together through equal rights and liberty! I am going to vote for the Democrat this year, that will be in the final democratic election. Obama. I thought he was too pacified at forst, but now, his true self shines through!! If, not, I'd say Huckabee or Romney for Republican!!! Wonderful piece!
I would have sponserd this if it weren't already! This is a really intelligible moral literary work! I only pray that more people think just the way you do! No-ones perfect, including me, it's just about recognizing the imperfection either on the outside or within or even both, that makes us evolved enough to be able to understand these words and actually implement them in their lives! I needed the inspiration, so thank you for that! You are a highly insightful writer!
Very thought provoking Phoenix! You are quite the writer! I must say I was very confused by this piece which is good, not all literature can be deciphered when it is so creative and gothicly fantastic! The style and grammar was exceptional, and I enjoyed reading it, although it did have a very sad undertone to it. That was eery, and I don't know why I felt that. However, only you are the brilliant creator of this pice, I can not possibly even begin to understand fictional reading yet, as I am a a better non-fictional writer and reviewer. I did enjoy the pice though, in spite. Maybe you could teach me how to write in this genre better. I am open-minded and always open to new suggestion! Thank you for sharing!
Many Blessings To You,
Powerful piece of literature! You must be really missing your father! That never changes throughout life, especially if they were absent in your early and childhood years! I respected this poem, it struck a chord in me, and I hope your Daddy comes home to you! Keep writing, please! I will be praying for you to make amends with your Dad!!
I have to say that ending is strong like steel! I loved the whole poem, and your appreciation for what people present to you in your life! This is a gratiutous masterpiece, the flow was not choppy (mine often is, lol) And there was metaphoric value, and the creativity combined with that ending make me say this poem is a ten in my eyes. Where's that 10 rate??? Oh well, I'll give you a five!
Wow, this was superb! The way the words were painted was vivid and put a picture of incredible inspiration and beauty in my mind for this person you speak of! I am sure you hold them very high in your eyes! You did a wonderful job! I do have to say that. Nothing scattered, just words flowing together like a creek that flows to the dam! I loved this! Many Blessings to you! Keep up the inspirational pieces!
Wow! I was really grateful for being able to read this loving literary work! It's funny, I have the same title for one of my poems. So, naturally, I was drawn here! I am glad I came to see what you wrote. It is inspiring, powerful, and candy to my eyes! Very well written, and may Blessings always be right around every corner you turn!
This was so sad, Lee! I empathized with the contents in the poem and it was written beautifully. Why do you feel like this right now? I am getting older myself, and there are days I feel the same, however, i was just wondering, are you having a baby? That was my interpretation, and I could be wrong of course! Back hurting, is a huge part of being very pregnant, so is worry and doubt about oneself! If I am wrong, let me know! I am here to tell you, no matter what the meaning, I appreciated it.
Short and impactful. What is this accident you speak of? You mention over and over, bringing a great deal of attention to it! This was angry, powerful, emotional, yet sad, all the emotions wrapped in one! My favorite! This was mysterious and that I give you credit for as well. The short lines of verse are brilliant! I have gotten this type of feeling in the past. Especially being turned away from someone you love so much. It hurts! Keep your faith!
I loved this poem! Diana, this is really good and highly powerful. My addiction has been co-dependency, in an environment I was scared to change. I related to the poem on so many different levels, that it was like an explosion of fireworks coming off the page! Your words are wise to say blame no-one but yourself, that is the way I feel to an exact. I feel if I would have walked out on this situation and my daughters' father a long time ago, I wouldnt be feeling so awful right now! And neither would she. I finally am standing up for myself no matter what he tries to pull, he is not good for me and I am not good for him! We are like oil and vinegar, we may compliment the other when others see us together in the salad bowl of life, however, in the fridge, we seperate and become a nasty, yucky mix. We agree on nothing! I am the one who loves all, he is the one who doesnt, which is fine, he is allowed to be whomever he wants, but I will not enable him anymore! lol.....as if I could anyway! Ive lost it all. I want to get it all back, and I will. The most positive things in life are love and support and laughter, and bringing smiles by being a constructive person in all areas of life! Especially when you have a child! I want that life back again! I will stop at nothing to get it, and this inspired me even more so to do just that. Your writing is remarkable!
I loved the metaphoric value in the poem comparing emotion to nature and its elements. I really enjoyed the pwer in such a short word form. This was nice to read! I want to say that without a doubt, you have the heart of a true writer. I especially loved the reference to snow, as that is something I grew up with, yet now, is so sparse!! I would love nothing more than to be able to again build a snowman, with my child! Too bad she is sick, I'd fly to the western plains! Just to build that snowman with her!!
This was head spinning, it was so good! How do you wrap feelings up so quickly?! This was absolutely a cut to the chase poem with such a powerful message, it gave me the chills. My Style for reviewing, because I am certainly not a great writer like this poems Author! WoW! Happy New Year!
Blessings To You And Yours,
Anna
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Blessings all around you and your family, your Mother is lucky to have you and you are lucky to have her!! These are the best relationships, ones that can never be broken, Of course! 
Oh well, I'll give you a five!