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Rated: E | (5.0)
Still have to enter, I will though!! *Bigsmile*

Here are some gp's for your contest From The Angel Army!! Enjoy! I know Im not winning, lol, so heres some for others more pc literate than me! Hooked on I.T. werkd fur mee! lol. *Smile* I hope this helps a little!!

Anna
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I am Anna, I am here to review your work! I am highly inspiring and encouraging and my reviews are fair & honest!
Okay, so Let's Begin! *Bigsmile*
My Thoughts on this piece:

Very cute write bout the mis-haps of Cookie mixing. I loved the simplicity, the enjoyment, the funny ways to tell the wonders of The Holidays!!

Keep it up!
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Review of By My Side  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I am Anna, I am here to review your work! I am highly inspiring and encouraging and my reviews are fair & honest!
Okay, so Let's Begin! *Bigsmile*
My Thoughts on this piece:

Great tribute to our Lord!! I loved ow you weren't sure of his presence, yet you still knew he was there with you! Magnificent! Unconditional love and gratitude goes into this poem. I see a grammar mistake, yet am not one to talk about Grammar and spelling. I get my share of "this is grammatically wrong" lol. I wont hold that against you at all!

Fav part:
"So here you are,
Carrying me in the sand,
Only one set of footprints,
Means your here, holding my hand!"

Keep that faith! It will always carry you through anything! I'm a living example. *Smile*

Keep it up!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I am Anna, I am here to review your work! I am highly inspiring and encouraging and my reviews are fair & honest!
Okay, so Let's Begin! *Bigsmile*
My Thoughts on this piece:
I enjoyed how you tied the undercovers beneath the snow as a way to feel good about new change, happiness and new memories to be stored and nurtured. This was a great write! It was food for thought! I like the nature in it, using the snow and murky compost underneath to convey the feelings! Nice.
Fav Part?:
"I cry while the snow melts
To nurture the grass, trees, and offspring
To help them grow and mature
So that better memories will occur"
Very Heartfelt and positive!

Keep it up! *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I am Anna! I am here to review your poem!!*Bigsmile* All of my reviewing is meant to encourage, insipire, also being fair & honest!

So, let's begin! My thoughts:

This was an unbelievable surreal write. It had nothing but love, inspiration, good intention and your inner truth behind the words! I enjoyed the way it was easy to read, yet, I saw a little repetiiveness in the work "Turn to me, I turn to you"
I have been told(I have this repetitiveness inmy works too, that it takes away from the strength in the message. I really took that advice and I changed how I wrote, and got better reviews! *Smile* Helpful advice, I must pass on. Otherwise, I loved this!
Fav Part:
"Gone away, like a breeze
Far away, and through the trees
Stirring slightly, with passing time
Winters silence, stay a while"

Glad you like Winter. More of a spring-early summer person, myself! *Smile*

Keep it up!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I am Anna! I am here to review your poem!!*Bigsmile* Al of my reviewing is meant to encourage, insipire, also being fair & honest!

So, let's begin! My thoughts:

This was an absolute brilliant creation, It used animals and people alike to describe the feelings within! I appreciated that thinking outside the box! I love the underlying tone of having all innocent hearts reunited. This was really a great simple piece!
My Fav Part?
"The bears, they love us,
and the crows do, too,
and I'd never say they've made
a mistake.
None that compare to ours."
A great message for humanity!

Keep it up!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
NickD,

Awesome way to teach! I like the education and the benefits from it! Keep it up! *Smile*

Blessings,
Anna
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Kiya,

I really loved your images! You must be very proud, I am proud of this! *Smile* I thank you for emailing me and thanking me for the gp's hun, Anything that I am abe to do to make this site a better place, I will try my hardest to make that happen. You have some really great sigs. "Precious Moments" 'We Are Family At WDC!'
was super cute. Thank you for sharing! *Smile* I'm glad to be apart of The Angel Army.

Blessings To You And Yours,
Anna
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi,

My name is Anna. I love the idea of this group, and always have! I think what you do is so inspiring, helpful, and all around great-natured to all! I belive I could be a good candidate for this group! I would likke to inspire more, and encourage more, and become apart of an Angelic community. The hugest reason I came here was becasue of phairo(Wes Hall). He reffered me and invited me to be apart of this group, and he is truly a wonderful Angel. I trust him and his judgement, I respect his generosity, and I like how he always encourages others and me, and always goes a step above and beyond to show his dedication. He is like a mentor to me, so I would love to join this group and he said Id love everyone here, which I am sure I will! Youre all Angels, and I'd be flattered to be apart of the giving and allowing others to feel the love and support they need and deserve as WDC members! Thank you so much for taking my application into consideration. I hold great respect for you all, and I would love to get to know you all better, and help this group to help others in anyway I can. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to speaking to you soon! Thanks so much again! *Smile*
Blessings Eternally To ALL,
Anna
(Violet the Nun)
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Review of TRUST IS A MUST  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful teachig through words! I loved the down to earth message, we should all listen to the words within this, and really reflect. That is what I do, try to reflect and learn from educational poems. Yes, without trust in others, especially in yourself, it is very difficult to be all trusting. I know this all too well. I wish that people would read this and really see your message and try to grow from it! I will! Wonderful job!
Fav Part:
"The trauma of my younger years have shadowed me all my life,
and have come to haunt me now.
But, now that I know that I am a survivor, I will become healthy,
this I vow!"
Very brave of you to write that. I also had a highly dysfunctional childhood, howevewr, I woulodnt change that because it made me stronger! Keep this up! Its very inspiring.
Blessings,
Anna
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Review of True Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved the poem! Loved the way you described these feelings. I am the postergirl for feeling this, yet I will never dwell on it. I guess I have been jaded or maybe think differently, it seems the people in the past that said they loved me, dropped me and broke me. Not all of them of course, thats how I know what is and isnt true love. True love is unconditional, and that is not being "In Love". That is loving no matter what, not lusting no matter what and then you take the lust away, because you thought you were truly loved or did love, yet you only fooled yourself. Lust is nice, but Unconditional love is te TRUE love that never ceases nor does it die, it is this love, purely, that keeps us alive.
Well written however, the end contradicts itself.

you wrote:"It is endless, forgiving--a new challange each day
But LOVE is not TRUE LOVE til its GIVEN AWAY!!"

How do you give True love away, like trash, if it;s true?? Thats some food for thought. I dont give true love away ever, I give to its bond, however, If its true, I would never give it away, like a hand me down. lol. Maybe I misunderstood this...I hope. *Smile*

My Fav Part:
"And what if the other has no love to give you?
This happens to some when their love is not true.
It is easy to love when the other is kind
So consider all this if TRUE love you will find."

The first line in this verse, I have a question to? How does one give love away? What is your opinion of "Giving" love away. I cannot give materialistically in love at the moment, that doesnt mean I cannot love though TRULY! I would be interested in what you think is REALLY giving TRUE love away?? How exactly does one do that? Especially if its intangible and an emotion? How do you GIVE something intangible to someone so they know its true? If they cant give materialistically or physically? Does this make it not "True" love then?

Blessings,
Anna
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Magnificent!! I really loved the way you put "love" into perspective, for me, it's unconditional, and I always give and care to show that. Mostly, to my best ability. I dont understand the people that say I love you, in vain, either. They must not mean it, yet, maybe its an illusion that they feel, rather than the tru feeling of "Unconditional" love, the love from angels, the love from God! I love everyone in this way, and I will say it! I wish the people who dont love unconditionally would keep their lips sealed because it is confusing and only hurts two parties, us and our beloved. Just as you wonderfully explained with precision!
Fav Part:
"You can’t physically touch love, but you can touch a loved one. You can touch it mentally, you can it spiritually. Love is something that you have unconditional and very special feeling for. When you love you care, when you love you share"

Well done!!
Blessing to you and yours!
Anna
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Review of Love fuelled hate  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
There was so much hate and dillusionment in these words that I am actually praying for you. I dont usually do that when I review, of course, but I think you need the extra help and maybe it will help. I thought this was absolutely insane, the way you describe killing this person with a pen, and the blood rushing everywhere! My! You are angrrrryy! lol.
I hope that this is fictional or, if not, you are able to resolve this inside, because I am not sure if the other makes you feel this way, or YOU are making yourself feel this way. I am not disrepecting you, only telling you my honest review if this write. It was extremely Morbid, and I can feel the pain in it, I am so sorry you feel this way! I was astouded by your creativity however, so that balances the negativity out. I thought the explanation was extremely intelligible within the contents, yet the contents were so abrasive, this makes me worry. Only if this is true! I really hope you can allow forgiveness and positivity in your heart, you deserve that as we all do!! Blessings to you!
My Fav Part:
"You think you know me, but you never read my words, so how can you know what little restraints are stopping me from tearing your life away. I’m blinded by the notion that I can be saved by not giving in to this demon gripping my heart; the only emotion I know is really real. "

Gripping, yet it could be softened to receive better response and rating. I hope that your heart softens as well, as I am only here to help you both in writing and in conveying feelings.

Praying For You,
Anna
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple, gratititoius, meaningful, and a tribute to the Best Man, Our Lord, Our King. I loved the way you gave thanks and appreciated what God has placed in your life! This was really soothing, peaceful, and really what i needed to see today! Thank you so much for sharing! You are a great person to have written this! Keep that up! *Smile*

Fav Part?
"
When I look at the stars
I am always left speechless
I see your wonders from afar
When I'm with you all is bliss"

This is very true!! He is afar, yet always there ready to talk or recieve communcation! Especially gratefulness!
Blessings Eternally,
Anna
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Review of Hearts  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a wonderful write! You are wise to have taught your views on the different types of people and creatively tied in the traits of those! The imporatant message that you relayed is it does not matter whom we are, we all are very diiferent, yet can be so wonderful and emrace those differences!
Great job at conveying this!
My Fav Part:
"the pristine, those who
live as the wind,
the most palpable,
the most intangible,
these are those who have yet
to reach potential,
and those who so few reach this
potential,
are the greatest of all."

Very educational and very light hearted!

Blessings to you & yours,
Anna
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Review of FRIEND  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Almost perfection! Yes, I know all too well about the words you wrote, and they are highly wise! I loved the way you reffered to friends as snakes, or maybe not. We have all had friends that are less than true, and I have learned that real friends you dont chase, they are there always, through it all, with no deceipt in mind, nor trying to bwl over another loving soul, out of selfishness or jealousy. I think everyone has been a snake to their friends at some pint, remember, we cant be perfect! The important thing is to realize we hurt someone and to heal the hurt, rather than run from it! Truth and loyalty are the key factors in any relationship! However, we can learn from the fakest and most destructive people, how not to act, and how to trust even in the midst of all these snakes. I am trusting again, not holding grudges, I hope this poem teaches others to do the same! Fine Job!
Fav Part:
"While one had it nice
the other died twice,
a life of regret
and death to behold."

Blessings Eternally,
Anna
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Review of To Please Me  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was absolutely breathtaking! You have a worthy write here just talking about our King, our Master, God! You beautifully painted words in nature, and give a gracious thank you to God for placing them before us all! You are a really good soul to have written this piece! I was extremely delighted! I respect your Religion to the upmost, however, I really believe that Jesus was a prohet, not Gods' Son.
That is my belief, and we are all entitled to the differences in them! I thank you for sharing this, the importance is that you wrote a poem about God, and now, you have inspired me to do the same. I feel I definitley should take the time out and thank the one who makes the world go round and created every living thing within it!

My fav Part:
"To please me God gave treasure,
wealth untold,
(Far, far more than just mere gold!)
He gave the Earth
The Skies,
The Seas.
And all because He wants to please!"

Great Job!! Keep up these inspirational ieces that teach, they are my favorite!

Blessings Eternally,
Anna
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Romantically delightful!! What a love writer you are!
I was enthralled by the words, leaving almost breathless! Serious, I dont lie, thats one thing about my reviews and how I really am. I say what I mean. So, I will say, honestly, this was a gem. A masterpiece for love and for your beloved. I am so happy you found this love, as we all deserve to feel this way, and you made it so inviting!

Fav part:
"Nor for your beauty.
To say your eyes are more blue that the sky,
deeper than the oceans,
brighter that the stars at midnght, could not do you justice."

Keep it up! Your heart speaks in such loving and consistent beats here.
Blessing to you and yours!
Anna
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Review of To hide a tear  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Flow in this poem, yet its confusing and I wasnt sure what the underlyung message was getting at. Some lines seemed to just be a jumble of words, and I thought this took away form the strength of your message, however, I give you alot of credit for the flow, it was easy to read, and it did have that wonderous freeverse feel. I apologize for not knowing what this means, though thats intended for you to know, I suppose, makes it harder for the reviewer tho! lol
Fav part:
"It starts from the eye
a drop
filled with pain
but to show it not
it is just a mist
just a rush of breathlessness
to show not the emotion
to show not the feel
it is just to give another face of excuse"

I belive the poem really meant to cry instead of suck it up, to show your weakness, and not put on a facade! Thats a great message, I love it when people are honest, real and truthful in their feelings!
Great Job!
Blessings,
Anna
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Review of Where 'R' You  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful!! How creative to take one letter out of friend and then its fiend! Very witty! *Smile* I think you have friendship pretty well summed up and I agree with everything you said. People need more friends like you in this world, and writers too!

My Fav part:
"Friends steer you right,
are true and real
and never make you sorry."
Isnt this the truth to a "tee?"
I am proud of this work, it teached the value of honesty and truth in friendship!

Blessings To You And Yours,
Anna
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Review of Solo Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was brilliant!! Good fantasy write, at least I hope its fantasy! *Frown* If not, then I wish toy the best healing in this situation! You pegged this in so little words! Wonderful!

My fav part:
"All alone,
no one to keep me company.
My love vanished, like a ghost.
Just disappeared."

Keep writing!! This deserves an award!
Blessings,
Anna
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Review of To Dear Friends  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ohhh...how respectful toward Women!! I liked the dreativity, the fishing(yet, I have already unlocked that bit) and the men spending money to get a girl! Is this the way they teach you? Is this fair to you? Dont you feel these Women are people, and not just animals? I think not. I really enjoyed the free verse and the great flow, and the contents were educating, yet not to me. Amusing, is more how I would categorize this! You did a wonderful job proclaiming Women as Fish! Hahah! Reel em in, and see what cuts you get! If you know about the fisherman in New England, (based on fact, not cunning entertainment)
Then you will understand the fisherman with the most greed, end up in a boat thats capsized, and no lil fishies in sight to save you! Better save those dollars, boy! Entertaining, nonetheless, to each his own, and to each learn from it!

Favorite part?
"I think that it’s clear, no need to pretend,
We never wish for this party or great night to end.
Amid all the sorrow and heartache in our lives,
Our friendship gives us strength, our hope survives;
And if the girl we really like should like one of us tonight,
Congrats’ are in order, there’s no need to fight."

Shouldnt be any reason to fight over the fish that only want your bait and money!! Thats a prostitute, not a woman nor a fish. So, there you are wise in this to say, only two wrongs dont ever make a right!

Please take this as solid advice, and if youd like, then obliterate my poetry, if it makes you feel better. I am only trying to help you see what message of hatred you are spreading and that will only become harder in time when the fish outsmart you and your buddies! Womans point of view, for ya. I know you will appreciate it. Or shall I say a "Ladies" point for you! Good luck with your literature and keep writing! *Smile*Just know if you are inrentionally palying games, the games will get you!! That is my reality and opinion and take it as you may.
Blessings,
Anna
Shouldnt you look in a more constructive place for the prime pickings? Hmmmmmm....maybe the library or School and I dont mean a school of fishies..hehe. *Smile*
Only trying to help, you can love it or leave it, doesnt matter to me! If I can change a desolute outlook, I will! If not, then good luck!


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Review of Strength  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a write that I understood in full form! I especially loved the references to being fallen and to stand up is the epitome of "strength". I have battled this my entire life, and always got up again. I appreciate the compliments to those who are really true to themselves in spite, of the wordly unkindness and my (our) neverending fight!

Fav Part:
"Too Calloused or Too Frail
Too Meek or Too Stubborn
Balance is the Key."

Balance is the key! word I have learned to respect and cherish with true meaning, not just words on paper or screen. The ending was really impactful,"In the end, weakness is strength."

Very true, real, and very honest. Did you raid my port? lol, just kidding, I am fglad to dee that others see the exact same thing I do!

Blessings To You And Yours,
Anna
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good story, definitely. Lena and Lola, and Rhysen were all perfectly characterized in your vivid description, it was playful, the way they acted, just like in High School. It was innocent yet had a really strange ending, which is always interesting. Blaze wasn't too happy about Rhysen. And then his innocence and his firt impression seemed to wash away within a sentence. That was really impactful, and that really was my favorite! Alot of suspense and a really easy to read story. All around, this deserves a 5. I really enjoyed this, thank you so much for sharing.

Keep it up!
Anna
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Review of Joys #1  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good religious and political write! This was short but held a good deal of meaning with the lack of wrods youve displayed. Thats really difficult to do, at least for me! I give you alot of credit with this one! Very good and deep!

Blessings To You & Yours,
Anna
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