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2026

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#4552143

Review of Reminiscing on you

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hi Heather lane,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of grief and sorrow and regret. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who wishes they could have helped someone after they ended their life. I am hoping that the speaker will find the peace and acceptance they need in their life. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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2027

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#4552141

Review of The Creature

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Rated: ASR

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Hi Sam,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with anxiety and discomfort. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if August is having delusions or if something, or someone, is actually tormenting him. They will read to last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story a man us made uncomfortable by a strange entity. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

2028

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#4552136

Review of Ombrophobia

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Rated: ASR

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Hi Jellyfish,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. If one does not know what ombrophobia is, the title tells them very little about what the piece is actually about. They will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamblke. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your feelings about rain. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

2029

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#4551828

Review of Animal Instinct

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Rated: E

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Hi Kavindra,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of exhileration and aggression. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how an animal might feel when hunting. I love animals and was fascinated with this interpretation of a part of their life. I read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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2030

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#4551825

Review of The Biggest Price of Economic Capitalism

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Rated: E

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Hi Naveed,
This is a fantastic article. The title is direct and enigmatic all the one time. The reader knows they will be reading about the biggest price of capitalism but not what exactly that is. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion of how mankind viewed itself before the Industrial Revolution. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the cost of capitalism to humanity including happiness ambition and individuality. I believe that capitalism might encourage ambition as opposed to stifle it, but to the rest of the things we lose, it's a definite yes. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

2031

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#4551677

Review of The Pink Dress

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Rated: E

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Hi Lilli J.,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with shock and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Kristi and Mark will remain happy. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a woman who wondering if her background will affect her impending marriage to a prince. The conflict is well defined. There is not doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

2032

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#4551674

Review of winter in Ketchikan is still hard on me

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Rated: 18+

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Hi Minja,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time when you wanted to write about what was going on in your life but was unable. I sort through my thoughts by writing about them directly a great deal of the time. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2033

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#4551525

Review of Dear Father

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Rated: E

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Hi Lyricite,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about all the things father's do for their children. I am so grateful for the relationship I have with my own father. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2034

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#4551524

Review of After It All

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Rated: E

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Hi Mar,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a man who has turned to alcohol to deal with the memories of serving an a war. I am hoping that the man in the poem can find a more positive way to deal with his feelings. I read to the last word to find out if this happened. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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2035

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#4551199

Review of Time and Anguish

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Rated: E

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Hi rl,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone looking for relief from their troubles in more tranquil circumstances. I am hoping the speaker will find a way to deal with the things troubling them. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2036

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#4551190

Review of Hook, Line, And Sinker

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Hi Bill, "
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my poem "After All These Years". This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with disbelief and panic. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will find a way to escape from the fishermen. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a young man who is put in danger when people he is at a party with play a joke on him. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. The characters come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:

1)Eventually, I heard the sound of a motorboat and I was roughly dragged toward it.-There should be a comma after "motorboat".

2) “All right you two, you’re gonna get it now. I’m definitely pressing charges against the both of you.-This is a piece of dialogue and needs to end with quotation marks.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job

2037

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#4550494

Review of Time Riders

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi Don Two,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject very well. The poem is about a maid who is given a chance to experience time travel. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2038

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#4550488

Review of Freedom From Little White Lies

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Rated: E

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Hi CrisMiss,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with discomfort. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is troubled about the lies their partner tells. The reader is wondering if the speaker will reveal the lies they know of. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2039

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#4550486

Review of Freedom From Little White Lies

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi CrisMiss,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with discomfort. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is troubled about the lies their partner tells. The reader is wondering if the speaker will reveal the lies they know of. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2040

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#4550483

Review of Earthcycle

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Rated: 13+

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Hi Laurie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with desparation It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the people described in the poem will find a way to improve their lives. They will read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2041

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#4543001

Review of For fake people

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Rated: E

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Hi Chained,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone whose world has fallen apart because they refused to be honest with themselves. I am hoping that the person in the poem can rebuild their life and be true to themselves from now on. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2042

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#4542998

Review of The World's Gone!

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Rated: E

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Hi Brenda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of excitement and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a little girl who is excited when she first sees fog. I remember when I first saw fog. It was confusing for me as well. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2043

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#4542997

Review of Open Letter About Social Distancing

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Rated: E

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Hi ForeverDreamer,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the piece. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the piece by telling the reader exactly why you are posting it on the site. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your frustration with those individuals who refuse to practice the Social Distancing guidelines. I feel exactly the same way you do and have only been outside of my once in the past month to pick up a prescription from my doctor. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a forceful, aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

2044

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#4540861

Review of CHRONICLES OF A CABIN CREW 1

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Welcome to WdC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon"

Hi amlan,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the piece by telling the reader why you wrote it. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a small service you did for a passenger when you worked for an airline that meant a great deal to the passenger. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs you attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

2045

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#4540354

Review of Smile

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Rated: E

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Hi Skittles9802,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full full of joy and encouragement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about smiling through the troubles in you life. I believe in staying positive and finding as much good as I can in situations. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2046

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#4540351

Review of Tired

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Rated: E

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Hi kathy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when the horrible things people thought of and said about you made you think of ending your life. I truly hope you are in a better place now. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2047

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#4540350

Review of My Fears

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Rated: E

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Hi Soma,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and the deepest sense of being alone. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the biggest fears of you had and how you got past them. I so glad these feelings of aloneness are no longer a part of your life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader's from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2048

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#4539974

Review of Ascend

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Rated: E

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Hi John,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with confusion and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about an unusual, disturbing event from your life. I hope you have recovered from the effect this experience had on you. I read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2049

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#4539459

Review of Broadway the way I know It

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Rated: E

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Hi Miss303,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and self doubt. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone whose happiness is dependant on someone else. I am hoping that the speaker can find the strength to be their own person. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You do not use punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

2050

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#4539271

Review of A Breath Away

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Rated: E

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Hi Miranda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with disappointment and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you reached out to a friend for help during a panic attack, but they were not there for you. I am so sorry that you did not get the support you needed. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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