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Review of Rabbit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Crissy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time when you found a stuffed rabbit. I love poems which tell stories, including true stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done an consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Laurie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who tries to rob a man but has her plan foiled by his wife. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The limerick poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Ashen Halls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ken,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with sorrow and regret. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has lost the person they love because of something they did. I am hoping that the speaker can find a way to make up with the person they love. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from reading pleasure. Great job.

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Scooby,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering what is going on in the Egyptian exhibit. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a museum administrator finds something strange about the Egyptian exhibit as he is getting ready to leave. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The museum administrator comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Loft Monster  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brenda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with panic. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a child who is frightened by something he saw in the loft. I love poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Blake's Fly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Pony Tale,
This is a fantastic essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the essay. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about your thoughts on William Blake's comparison between the life of a fly and a human. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Are We There Yet?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Greg,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anticipation and impatience. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Des will get through the day with his sons. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a man who gives his wife a break and takes out their two energetic sons. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story being told from a few different points of view was a very intriguing idea. The story well structured and consistent in terms of tense. Great job.

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Review of Atlas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi kathy,
These are fantastic lyrics. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The lyrics are about leaning on those who love and support you instead of facing everything on your own. I let the people who love me love and support me, always. I loved these lyrics and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the lyrics a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The lyrics flow extremely well. They are a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in these lyrics. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Never Land  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Soma,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about, although it does bring to mind the story of "Peter Pan". They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the perfect world, and what that would be like. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of SS 1  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi KR LaLonde,
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my essay "My Positive Experience With Social Media". This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker is having memory problems or emotional problems. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about someone who seems to be getting confused more and more often. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Anna,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have discussed changing your attitude from a bad attitude to a good one. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Haberak,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the piece. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have given a synopsis of one of the chapters of your next novel and given information about when the reader can expect the other chapters. The reader is delighted with the look they get at the progress of your project. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Darius,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the piece. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about having the strength to stick your goals and persevere. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Keaton,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and aloneness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who feels alone even though they are surrounded by others. I am hoping that the speaker will find someone with whom to share their life. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Hermit's Tale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Amilcar will find peace in the life he has chosen. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a young man who retreats to mountain in order to live a life of meditation and contemplation but is inundated with followers. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story focuses on Amilcar, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Feeling Fall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jatog the Green,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone enjoying everything Fall has to offer including Halloween. I love Halloween and the vibrant colors the leaves turn in Fall. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Short Story Plots  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi WriteKimmie,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have outlined some plot ideas for stories you plan to write. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your thought process as you write. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Where is my cake?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Turters2,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is aggressive and full of confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering who has taken the speaker's cake. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, someone has lost cake and must search among people he finds distasteful to find it. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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for entry "Prompt - July 23" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Kristina,
This is a fantastic entry. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the entry is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by giving the reader the prompt by which the entry was written. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the entry. They will read to the last word. You have written about being on T.V. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the entry tedious. You use am emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi vinnye21,
This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about a player trade between football teams which turned out better than expected. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Irish Sweater  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Carol,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who finds and hangs onto a sweater because of the memories it invokes. I had a shirt which my aunt always wore with a butterfly on it. I cherished that shirt and all the memories of her that it brought back. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jay,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who enjoying a hot day and wondering how to spend it. I love hot weather. We don't get much of it where I live. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Me And Brad Pitt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Bill,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety and doubt. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how Jenny and Carl's date will go. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a man and woman who go out even though they both have misgivings about the date. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of To Fly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Legerdemain,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who would love to have the freedom of flying. We all dream of having more freedom and doing things we have not done before. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of deaths embrace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ice princess,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about accepting death when it comes. I have lost a few family members to Cancer, and all of them accepting death after mourning their own loss. I thought it was very healthy. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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