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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Candroid,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone if tinged with confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how we struggle to express ourselves in ways that will be acceptable to others. I usually try to phrase things so as to not offend to hurt anyone and still get my point across. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi RomanticPoet27,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes then want to read on. The poem is about the difference between comedy and tragedy. Comedy and tragedy are both enjoyable in their own ways. I like some comedy and tragic works can be somewhat enjoyable. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi jaya,
This is a fantastic article. The title direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. John F. Kennedy and his career has always interested me. I anxiously began to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the reasons John F. Kennedy will never be forgotten. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your to topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Neur0s1s,
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is full of love and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if this soldier will reunited with his wife soon. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the piece, a soldier writes to his wife while he is away at war. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece focuses on the soldier, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Neur0s1s,
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is full of love and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if this soldier will reunited with his wife soon. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the piece, a soldier writes to his wife while he is away at war. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece focuses on the soldier, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
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Review of Gutters Today  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jatog the Green,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who has a tries a home improvement project with little success. I live in an apartment and have little experience with home improvement. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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2057
Review of Picturing Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Carol,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the many images an artist paints. Our art, whatever kind of art it is, comes from inside us or from the things that happen around us. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Life is antique!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi ana,
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. They are wondering why you are describing life as antique. They will begin to read to find out. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. In the piece you talk about your view of life and how it is precious, exciting and should be cherished. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi aksa,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have told the reader about what decision us hardest for you to make and challenge them to think about the same thing in their life. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)chose apple-"chose" should be "choose".

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Empty Chair  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Miss V,
This is a wonderful piece. The tone is full of wonder and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will actually get to enjoy supper with Jesus. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, someone finds joy in trusting completely in Jesus' love. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is only one line of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. The speaker speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. I did come across a couple of structural issues that need your attention:

1)and I caught my breath,-"caught" should be "catch".

2)“thank you,-"thank" should begin with a capital letter.

The piece is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Bill,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Bill will let his family know he has been hurt. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, a Thanksgiving injury makes it impossible for a man to act normally in front of his in-laws. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Review of The Golden Watch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi lezismore,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about an incident from your life when you lost a gold watch you had won on a radio contest. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Moonglade,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who would love to live alone in another part of space. I have always been curious about what is out in space. I loved this poem and read to the last word.The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Charlie Wade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Patrice,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the speaker will tell her mother about her discomfort with the relationship with Charlie. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a teenage girl whose mother is trying to push her into a relationship with a boy even though the girl is uncomfortable with the situation. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SpookySpirit,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the Ghaf Tree and the stories it might hold. I love poems about nature and, especially, about trees. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Carol,
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my "Dear Me" entry. This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. it grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about problems with the people that are a part of Generation "Z". There might be a future problem with these people's apathy and apparent disinterest. I loved t his poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used the available phrases very creatively in this poem. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of NY City Lights  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Sophia,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how we should all feel connected to each other in this world but don't. I makes me sad, at times, to see us not really connecting or not getting along at all, even though we share this planet. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Say No To Snow!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jellyfish,
This is a fantastic article. The title is a command to the reader. They are wondering why they should say no to snow and will begin to read to find out. You introduce the topic with a brief account of the first few days of your life. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on you and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about how dangerous snow makes England. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Academic Lies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Naveed,
This is a fantastic essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about how we are fed lies as we go through the education system. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of My best friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Zarathecookie,
This is a wonderful essay. The tittle is enigmatic and attention grabbing. The reader knows that they will be learning about your best friend but not much more. They will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about when your family moved and you started to have trouble with the best friend you had in your old home. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)february-This should begin with a capital letter.

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of build something  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Augustin,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you decided to stop settling for an unsatisfying life and built a new one. I am hoping that you succeeded in building the life you want. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi NOBODYLEARNS,
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is tinged with excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Dolores will get a place on a UFO. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The piece is about a woman who is waiting to get a placement on a UFO. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The piece concentrates on Dolores, and she comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sharmelle,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about what God brings to your life. I am still looking for a way to have a deeper relationship with God. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Betraying Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Crissy,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a soldier who is thinking about everything the war he is about to fight is taking away from him. The reader is wondering how the soldier's emotional state will affect his performance. They will read to the last word to find out. The Nonet poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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2075
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Laurie,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a man who, try as he might, was misunderstood by others. I have felt that way many times in my life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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