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Review of Seaside Musings  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
along with emotions of ocean, emotions of writer has also been exhibited in the poem in an interesting way.This one is the coolest paragraph of lovely song:-
"tourists
and snowbirds
pack up kids, coolers, blankets
cram cars to make their reluctant way back
to their inland homes
or flee with the sweet-throated songbirds
to southern states of perpetual sun..."

Nice writing.
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
IT is a beautifully written poem that reflects a very postive message and also the grasping power of the writer to find something so important in ringing bells. Lovely poem with a great message that heals minds.These lines are just wonderful:-
"A ray of hope from God descends.
The brutal scars begin to mend.
I see the babe upon the throne.
I know I'll never be alone."

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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this style of poetry, saying big messages in just few words. This is the talent that lies with very limited number of writers. It is a philosophy :-
"What does it mean to be me?"
And everybody must ask this question from his heart and mind.

well done
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Review of Three wishes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reflects such a sweet thinking on the part of author. It is very wise of the poet to select three wishes, the wishes that are above any financial gain. may all three wishes come true.

These lines in the poem show the special talent of the author to convey complicated matters in a very simple way:-
"If I ever had the power
For even just one hour
I would order world peace
Then all crimes and war would cease"
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Review of Mark Of Respect  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is just an unique and touching way to convey the message. Very commanding message that throbs hearts and minds and induces courage into the readers. These words are very positive and impactful:-
"Into surrender, won’t live in fear,
I hope my message is loud and clear."



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Review of My Hero  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is just great, showing the understanding of love. Yes, very true, each word written it, seems to not come only from writer's mind but also from the heart. The heart touching poetry is the original poetry in my opinion. Nice words:-
"When I want to cry.
You give me strength
When I can no longer try.
You hold me so close
You hold me so tight."

Excellent simple expression of complex feelings.
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It is a beautifully written poem about pain and it's significance. The words have been knitted in an interesting manner one after the other. The writer deserves appreciation and applause. These lines form the soul of the poem:-
"When I spoke of that, I felt it more

So there I sat, Knew why so sore.

The pain was there, For me to take

Not to share, For my own sake"

It is best as original, no need to change or modify on other's review.
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Review of Clouded Image  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written poem that shows writers honest realisation of facts after undergoing a relatioship. Very few words, much matter expressed. light and nice.These words are most meaningful and expressive:-
"You Are The Keeper
Who Never Keeps
And The Creeper
Who Always Creeps"
well done.
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Review of One special guy  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice emotional expression of the writer and hiding of feelings from her boyfriend. The words knitted in an interesting and honest way.
These are mind tickiling words in the peom:-
"The feelings that have been replaced
You might even notice how much I think about him,
You might know that I miss
Kissing him
I berry these feelings so deep
To the point I can’t sleep"

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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is a nice emotional poem with a suffering as well as relieving soul in it. I find the emotional poetry to be the petry with soul. There is reflection of experience, pain as well as relief and lessons in it.

These words are most effective:-
"I have no friends,
I have no money.
I live day by day begging for food.
I'm covered in dirty rags that I found"
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Review of HERD MENTALITY  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

I think, I have already written a review on this poem but I am not sure.I particularly like the writings on animals and those which deal with emotional aspects. This one also comes in the category of my likings. These words are especially most impressive:-
"Moonlight adrift dappled backs
velvet muzzles pressed to pungent Earth"

Nice writing.
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
An impressive emotional expression that tells the feelings of this girl. The thoughts of "wall talking"
provoke mind to think more.
These words express deep pain and sorrow:-
"They would tell of her as a whole
Her struggles,heartaches, and pain
Her loves,hates, and cries
And her being her and no one else"

nice expression.

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Review of TAKING YOU HOME  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem expresses deep emotional pain and the pain and emptiness that is prevailing in writer's mind because of this loss. The author has clearly put into words, the thoughts and memories going on in his lonely mind.
These words:-
"I FEEL YOU HERE, YOU'RE STILL WITH ME
YOU EASE MY THOUGHTS YOU COMFORT MY SLEEP
I DREAM OF YOU AND IT SEEMS REAL"
express firm attachment of the writer with departed personality.
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Review of THE MASK  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So perfect expression, specially in the words:-
"When I opened the closet door and saw my son terrified,
And crying in the corner; that’s when I realized,
That I was leading my father’s troubled life.
Kneeling on the floor, I looked in his eyes; crying."

I will say it is just heart-touching. Well written.

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Review of To The Wolves  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice sweet poem about the wolves, expressing observation at an emotinal and also gross level. the author seems to be thinking right from the angle of the wolves as well his own point of view.
Yes, the eyes of animal glow in shining colours during the night because of tapetum of their eyes.
Well said:-
"feelings for the world to know
We could not possibly begin to understand all you do and say
As the shadows lengthen and the light fades away to dark,
you leap out to run and play, yellow, blue, and gray eyes shining like the moon
Whispering wind wisps through your fur"
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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It seems to be a nice and successful expression of depressed mind. This is how perhaps the depressed people think, that is why they take extreme steps.
These words clearly express the prevailing frustraration of such suffering people:-
"with it all happening the right way,
I'm dysfunctional now
and I feel that I lose
this battle we fight"

But they must come out of depression by somehow adopting positive thoughts and live a fuller life.
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Review of My Guardian Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an inspiring emotional poem giving and conveying so many hopeful words.
The author seems to awakening all those who live in despair and frustrations.
These words are the soul of the poem:-
"Angels are all around us,
Even though they just can't stand us,
So come on dear,
It's time to here,"

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Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

A very philosophical and sweet writing. It tickles the mind to think about the various faces of personalities, those at dispaly and those hidden ones too. Nice attempt.
These words are most impressive:-
"That performs each and every task.
No one will know,
Cause no one can see,
That she’s not her,
And I’m not me."



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Review of Born too soon  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, ofcourse she will be fine. This is what a reader would say after reading this heart-blowing writing. Nice expression of emotions and blend of flow, continuity can be seen within it for a baby perhaps born pre-mature? I suppose. If the reader wishes happy life for the child, the writer is ofcourse successful in his/her writing. Keep writing, as you have abiltiy to express.

An awareness effort to speak for someone who can't speak herself
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Review of Heart Breaker  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

it is a very emotional and heart touching poem with true looking expressions. The writer has perfectly expressed the things and controversies going up in his/her mind. These words:-
"Please believe that I still love you.
Believe that I mean well.
Believe that it will stay that way,"
are most impressive in it.
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Review of Bring me Down  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful and thoughtful expression can be seen in this writing. The questions put up in such a way that these are the answers as well as reply in themselves.
Philosophical words:-
"Seperated from the end with a thin line of question
Won't you kill me before I know I ever lived?"
I liked it.
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Review of Path Not Taken  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

It is a perfectly heart-touching poem with beautiful rythm, continuous flow, easy understandabitlity. This is nice example of saying more with limited number of words rather than burdening the reader with huge burden of words and expressing very little. Wonderful, keep writing.
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Review of The Badd Spelor  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


This one reflects unique and different thinking of the writer and his ability to observe even the minute details.

" Flavour, Humour, Etc. I like my U's. I need my U's."
very beautiful, put his thoughts and querries into the words and made it a very good writing.
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Review of Tortured Soul  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It is a nice and emotional read. Writing is continuous and flowing and that is the beauty of this poem. The expression of emotions is actually very nice. These words are very impressive:-
"To make my heart
Speed up...
And slow down
At the same time.
Even with knowing so much about you
You are still a stranger to me".
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Review of I'm Done  Open in new Window.
Review by spaul Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

This one also is a sweet writing again marked by very less words but conveying many feelings and thoughts. As these days everyone is short of time these small pieces touch the readers and refresh the writers. Keep writing, go ahead and compositions will keep touching and reaching people.
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