Hi Joy,
I read your poem 'Tuiti-Fruti Hat' and I think it's really a good poem. A lot of the poems I read on this site seem ok but not anything to rave about. This poem of yours, Tuiti-Fruti shows some real creativity and I think it's an excellent read. Thank you for sharing. TC.
Hi James,
I like your poem, 'The Poet's Dilemma' and I think there's a lot of truth in the words I read. Scrabble, courage, and strength seems to write a poets book and finds universal understanding. Writing is free for all who live this world. It's just sad that there are countries that limit the writer and forbid anything that is written that goes against the government. I'm grateful to live in America. Thanks for sharing your poem. TC.
Hi Mrs. B. Ray,
I read your poem '1994' and I felt badly for you. It sounds like that particular year wasn't a lot of fun. I am sorry that you lost your friend to apparent violence and I am confused by the senselessness of such things. It's also sad that these tragic events happened at a time when you were graduating, moving from one phase of life to another, and I hope you found a happier place in your world. I've had my share of ups and downs also. Somehow we just take life day by day, my husband and I always say we'll make lemon aid out of the lemons. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi HuntersMoon,
Your poem 'Honor' pays a rightful tribute to all of our veterans from past and there after. I agree that the freedom we have in America has come with a price and I am grateful for our veterans. Words are hard to find sometimes. You pretty much expressed the way a lot of people feel, including myself. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
HIJ.D.,
i really and truly like your poem titled 'Hidden Hope.' There was obvious thought put into the words you wrote down. It shows a heart in every word that you, as a writer, would offer a positive affirmation to the downtrodden reader(S)that stumble on the page. I agree. We, you, and I are never alone. We just have to believe in miracles and keep on keeping on. Thank you for sharing your creative writing with the site. TC. Have a great day!
HI fYN,
My favorite line in the poem you've written, "Simply Magical" is "Enchantment does, indeed, exist here but you need quick senses. The entire poem is a beautifully written sentiment for love and believing in magic. I walk away from the poem looking outdoors to see the vibrancy of nature and I feel the morning change. Your words make me "Stop to smell the roses," as corny as it may seem, and I like the way you word play a man or woman heart into the good graces of our flowers that grow. Thank you for sharing your excellent poem. TC. Have a nice day.
Hi Just,
I READ YOUR POEM 'Emitt' and I felt sad. I'm sorry you lost a friend and I'm sure it's all pretty confusing to you. I don't know the details behind your poem. I only know the grief I feel pouring through the words of the writer. I hope you will comfort, that God Himself will give peace to you. Thank you. TC.
Hi Fyn,
I like your poem titled 'The Purple Poodle Polka.' I think it's pretty creative when a writer can create a fun poem. I have very clear visions of the purple poodle and I think it's hilarious! Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. I hope you have a really good week, too. TC
Hi Fyn,
I read your poem titled, 'Ka Moe Lumi' and I think it's creatively written, offering the reader excellent visuals of a beautiful vacation spot and returning home to remember. Ka Moe Lumi sounds like a lovely dream room and I suspect excellent poems are written there. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi Keaton,
I read your poem 'Blaming Everything' and didn't agree with all of the words you wrote but I think it's a creative poem. The blame game doesn't put any houses or hotels on Boardwalk or Park place. It just makes the walls of the house we live in thicker cement and plasters our defiance. It's the easier, softer way though and I suppose we've all been there and done it: It's Mommy's fault, Daddy's fault, my teacher's fault, God's fault. Wah wah wah. I think crocodile tears should stay in the swamp. Thank you for sharing your interesting poem with the site. TC.
Hi Fynn,
I enjoyed reading your poem, 'September Rain,' and I think it's a creative description of nature and rain, along with an undertone. To feel the poem is to get behind the words and explore the heart of the day, how even in the rain, searching for self can find answers. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi Keaton,
I like your poem titled 'Eviction Letter' and I thin it's quite the picture, tells a thousand words that can never be painted. A man loses his sense of direction and the cosmic world is cruel. The hurried walk of life has no time for a man that mirrors the reflection that is truthful. We're all the same, saint or sinner, and we all have our own labels and signs. A bus comes and hits the pedestrian, unintentionally destroying someone who had a right to be. You are a talented writer, Keaton. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC and have a good day.
Hi Joy,
I really like your haiku chain on autumn. It's creative and nicely put. The picture you posted to go with the poem makes the words I read even clearer to me. It's sad though, that a lonely heart is breaking in the bare arms of oak, as you say. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. TC and have a nice day.
Hi She,
I read your poem titled 'She is Free' and I immediately thought of a young person who is bullied in school, taunted by classmates, and hating the clock that ticks. The clock ticks and she has to stay alive and live in a world that mocks her. She cries and her tears fill the oceans up. Then one day she rises above it all. She leaves herself and becomes somebody else. Perhaps she becomes an actress that hides her hurt and her tears. Even better, perhaps the person she becomes is her natural self, without a facade, and she has decided to heck with the rest of the world. She is free because she loves herself now. Somebody helped her. God. Friends. a diary. SOMETHING or someone. I've been there and done it. I know all about being bullied as a kid and rising above it. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt and creative poem with the site. TC and have a great day.
Hi Connieann,
I like your short poem about recovery and I think it's creatively expressive. Recovery of almost anything brings gratitude to the soul. I, too, am in recovery and I can relate to the words that I read in your poem. It's the simple things that mean the most. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC and have a good day.
Hi Pony Tale,
I read your poem, 'My Brain' and I think it's short and creative. The writer of this poem asks questions about her brain, or his, and I think to myself: This person seems to be downing themselves. Yet, this person really does have a valuable mind and is a creative writer. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC. Have a good day.
hI Jarianna,
I read your poem, 'March' and noted your request for critique. You say it's not one of your better poems? It's not that terrible, actually. I read a desire in the heart of the writer. The words form a circle around resolution, inviting others to join in a march for change. Change is a verb. An action happens when the willingness of man takes control. Positive affirmation has a leader. You and I. Sometimes I think the best way to 'march' on, as you say, is to make positive changes in our own lives. Maybe one day hope will follow. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC. Have a good day.
Hi Dweena,
I read your poem 'Flight' and I think it's a good poem, creative in though, especially it being the entire poem is about 'remembrance. When I keep in mind the theme of the poem, all of the words I read lead to the heart of the writer. I sense the 'remembrances' are thoughts that take a person to high, beautiful places. Those memories are the best memories to hold on to. I think of my beloved father when I read this poem. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC. Have a good day!
Hi Audra,
Your poem 'Spiraling' is a good write and a creative Shadorma. I VISUALIZE SOMEONE "feeling trapped, reaching out, and spiraling further out of existence," as you put it, and it's sad. i think this is a state of limbo and I suppose everyone has felt this way, from time to time, even myself. The thing is to keep reaching out. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. TC. Have a good day!
Hi Hitalot,
I read your poem, 'The End of Innocence' and thought of John Lennon's statement, "Life is what happens while you're making other plans." Your poem is written to the thinking man. That's how I feel about what I read. I think you are right and I quote: "The time for change is today!" i think the problem is that we have so many diverse opinions about what changes need to be made in our world. I think it all begins with us as individuals. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC. Have a good day.
Hi Sum,
I read your poem, 'No One Knew Jack' and it made me feel sad for the guy. Your creative write flows to a lonely river where guys like Jack skip their pebbles and dream. I'm happy Jack found someone to love him, heartbroken that Jack died. You wrote an interesting poem-story and I enjoyed reading it. Thank-you. TC. Have a good day!
Hi Fyn,
I like the poem you wrote, 'A Moment Out of Time' and could feel t lot of emotion in the writing. Something like de ja vu or time playing back, how you cross paths with a stranger and see a familiar faith. I, too, have walked in your shoes, spotting a stranger and seeing my Grandmother. I think the angels arrange these things to give us comfort. or, God Himself does it. Your poem is creative and well written. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. Have a good day. TC.
Hi Carter,
I read your poem titled 'Ethos Paradigm' and I found it to be an intriguing word play, in every sentence. You've taken the word 'lie' and created the world it surrounds, moving from place to place without any limbs (as a lie is like a limped winged eagle)drawing strength from the wind it blows through miscommunication. I've always found it's easier to tell the truth. Less to remember. More to gain when the mirror isn't steamy. Thanks for sharing your well written, creative, and thought provoking poem with the site. Have a great day. TC.
Hi BKC,
I read your poem 'Before I'm Rejected by You' and felt sad. This is a creative poem, heartfelt. I don't read it to be exclusively about painting. I read it to be about a man or woman taken a step forward and then stepping back. The picture he is painting could be so beautiful if the artist believed in the possible. It's sad when fear of rejection keeps a person from becoming his highest and best, with or without the approval of others. The words you write in your poem made me think and that, to me, is what good writers are about. Thank you ror sharing your poem with the site. Have a great day. TC.
Hi Keaton,
I read your poem 'Keep Your Faithful' and felt the heart of frustrated words and a mans life torn between his own feelings and the self-imposed thoughts of others. I can appreciate that the writer of this poem doesn't hate the religious views of others. He seems to want only to live and be. I take the poem to be a prayer to God and I don't read the author of these words to be a faithless soul. I read live and let live in these words and I don't agree with the words "damaged goods." Every day is a rebirth. New dreams are not damaged. TY and TC.
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