Hi Harry,
First off, I want to say that I forgot to thank you for the GPs you sent me the other day after I reviewed another one of your poems. Thank you. Secondly, I want to say that I like your poem about Uncle Sam having a rude awakening. There is a lot of truth in the words you write about America's Uncle. I agree. We've grown to fear our good old Uncle and I hope he shapes up like he does in your poem. Uncle Sam is a good guy that just needs to go back to being old fashioned. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. Your poem about Uncle Sam made me think TC.
Hi ChrisBreva,
I read your poem, 'Empty' and I think it's a heartfelt arr-owing of words that are aimed towards change. Understanding life, the many roads, and others who have traveled, missing what's missing, and making a statement. Where do you go with the feelings that take you to the people you've learned from? How have they changed the course you've chosen to take and are you better or worse from life's experiences? Your creative poem makes me ask myself these questions and more. As a reader of your poem, I relate to the words you have written. TC.
Hi Turtle,
I like your poem entitled, 'Progression' and I agree with every word. We don't "break the cycle" by "passing judgment." Like you write, "it starts with you and I," and we have the ability within ourselves to make the change, even if it's a small and seemingly unnoticed. Aa a kid, I threw tiny pebbles into the rivers and watched the ripples. Seeing the waves, ever so small as they were, made me envision the ocean that was miles and miles away. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi sum,
I really like the design and structure of the words you write in your poem,'small town roots.' It's nice. First I read the poem, line upon line. Then, I read the first word and last word, second line and second to last line, and on and on. It was an interesting experiment to read two different poems in one poem, sort of, and I also got to thinking about my own childhood as well as the town I grew up with. You are a creative writer. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi Connieann,
I like your short and word wise poem about the raven.I look at the first word of each line and picture the mind of the bird. Ravens are not my favorite but I like the poem you wrote. It's short and to the point. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi Keaton,
Your poem, 'My Dark Star Angel' is quite profound. I may be interpreting it all wrong but I read it and think of someone who has wronged another person in a really bad way. His heart is guilt-ridden and his eyes see her everywhere he looks. A dark angel. Wow, you sure do have a way with words, Mr. Keaton. I have read a lot of poetry on this site and yours are the poems I actually look for. I really think you should have a book out there, published for the world to read. No bull. I don't want to make your head swell though. You aren't God but you sure do have a lot of talent. Thanks for sharing this spooky poem with the site. TC.
Hi Jay,
Your poem about Robert Burns is amazing, to say, the least-quite creative. I see a lot of thought and intelligence in the words you have chosen and the complimentary picture you've painted of another poet. Robert Burns smiles from heaven. Surely. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi Alexi,
I truly like your poem, 'My Nana's Cooking.' It's creatively written and offers a friendly touch to the soul. I read the words and travel backwards to timely places my Grandmother lived, how she was a lot like this 'Nana' in the poem I read. Thanks for sharing your delightful poem with the site. TC.
Hi Fyn,
Your writing is quite creative and your poem, 'Phoenix Rising,' along with the vibrant picture speaks volumes to me. I see the phoenix, ever so cautiously moving forward into braver hearts of thought, mightier winds with a calming effect reaching possibility through old friendly hands, touching and connecting tomorrow with a brand new identity. Phoenix defines freedom to me and I sure do you like your poem. Thank you for sharing your well written craft with the site. TC.
Hi ChrisBeva,
I like your poem entitled 'Treasured Ghosts.' It's a creative holiday write and it takes back to my own treasured ghosts. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. For me, Christmas is such a lovely time of the year and I appreciate writers like you that bring back the memories. TC.
Hi Naturerose,
I like your poem entitled, 'Only Children.' What mother or father can't relate to what you've written? My own mother used to cry out loud, saying "You kids are making me crazy." I'm sure we did but, like your poem writes, we were young and learning. My mother is 86-years old now and she wouldn't trade us for the world. The feeling is mutual as we would never trade her. Your poem comes from the heart. I feel your stress but I also feel your gratitude. Thanks for sharing your poem. TC.
Hi Jimminycritic,
I like your poem,'Last Pain' and I think it says alot, even though there are only 8 lines to it. They say mother nature can't be tampered with but she, too, has been created so we just never know. The world is self-destructing but poetry lives on. Your prayers will be the same prayers uttered by others in a thousand years. I really believe this is so. Thanks for sharing your poem with the site. TC.
Hi Pamela,
I like your poem entitled, 'Creative Heart' and I can relate to the words you have written. I don't think you've lost your mojo at all! Sometimes I think our creative hearts need to rest just as much as we do, a little here, a little there to revive the life of our passion. Your poem is creative and written nicely. Thank you for sharing it with the site. TC.
Hi Kortaro,
'Hard to Imagine' is an interesting read and I'm going to have to read it several times again to even try to understand. You are obviously a thinker and obviously intelligent. What could possibly travel faster than the speed of light/ Thanks for sharing. TC.
Hi Keaton,
You sure are a good writer. I've read quite a number of your poems, commenting on some, not commenting on others. This particular poem of yours, 'Faces Melting' is really interesting to read. I think of time standing still as the people all around you are having an emotional meltdown or its your own emotional meltdown magnified a million times in your head, reflecting in the world that surrounds what your minds eye sees. Your writing is creative. Thought provoking. Brilliant. Thank you for sharing. TC.
Hi Harry,
I like your poem 'The Unattainable Dream' and wish that the peace you speak of were actual and fact. I agree with the 6th and 7th line the most. If only love filled mans heart, there would be no wars. Your poem has meaning to it and food for thoughts. Thank you.
Hi Java,
I like your poem, 'Where Evil Dwell.' It's a sad but true assessment of life. In my opinion. I agree with the last line of your poem, equal to the first. Yes, evil can overwhelm us but there is a light that shines brighter. Even if that 'bright light' doesn't erase all of the darkness, it's far better to light a candle then to stumble in the night. Thank you for sharing your creative, thought provoking poem. TC
Hi Connie,
Thanks for sharing your poem, 'Peace,' with the site. I feel enlightened because I never knew what a 'Lume' poem is. I never thought of rain and white streaks symbolizing peace but I think I understand your thought though. It's true. I don't think life itself was ever intended for darkness. It's all our comprehension of night and day. I know some people who have light filled hearts and minds that, even in darkness, they see the white streak you talk about. Thank you.
Hello Ximena,
I read your poem, '11:34' at 9 a.m., our time, and felt saddened by the words. Your poem is heart felt, about a love gone wrong or a life longing to be right and I think its creatively written, not too long and not to short but exactly how it should be. Life doesn't crank out appointment calendars. We somehow manage to get there on time. Thank you. TC
Hi Winnie,
I think your poem, 'Times Deceit' is a creative word play on the aging process. Time keeps ticking on, slowly but surely, and our hands start looking more like Grandma everyday! It's the truth and you've quite the brave soul for talking back to time the way you do. Good riddance to you, my fellow writer, and don't sweat it. I just read that oldest living person lived to be 115 years old. Oh my heavens. Thank you for sharing your fun and witty poem. TC
Hi Tricia,
Your poem, 'There was a time,' is very sad, realistic, and creatively written to tell it like it was in most horrible times. I never have been able to understand why Hitler reigned in such horrid power, for so long, and why the killing of Jews even happened. Poems like yours are a necessary reminder to us all, Jewish or not (I'm not. Thank you.
Hi Keaton,
I like your poem, 'Someone Else' and I relate to the words, how similar and differently the same, an individual connects, like dot to dots, creating solutions. You write well. I've read quite a few of your poems and I always appreciate the heart of the words you share.
Hi Neva,
I like your poem 'No Easter Bunny.' It's funny as heck and sad. I loved the Easter bunny when I was a kid and I hope the food police are never actual in life. Anyway, I've been away from the site for awhile but I remember your name and your writing. It's good to see you're still at it, contributing. TC
Hi Lottie,
Welcome to writing.com. I like your thoughts in poem, 'Useless Advice,' and agree. 'Be yourself' is a nice verb garden to grow uniqueness but its pretty hum-drum. Like you say, we're constantly changing in this life so being ourselves isn't a set status to reach. I love re-inventors who dare to try themselves in different ways. Your poem is a thought provoker and I appreciate you sharing it. Thank you. TC
Hi Rhychus,
I like your Buddha poem. It looks like Jim had one heck of a dream!!! I like to think of the same type of thing, only with a Genie in the bottle. Your poem rhymes nicely and tells a story, all in one. Nice work there. tc and I hope you keep writing.
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