Hi Logan,
I like your poem, 'Elements.' It's an interesting word play of human emotions. I think of the regrets one weaves and how time stitches the results of our lives, not always in the way of truth but always in the way we see it. Like you say,"With voltage down the wire
Electric to the touch." Good poem. Thank you for sharing it with the site.
Hi Austin,
I like your poem, 'Ut-opium Profusion.' What a great, catch title! I've always thought that it's the title that gets the readers looking further. The poem itself is interesting. I think of perfect paradise reading the words. I think of de ja vu and I think of worlds outside of worlds where profound findings of self discovery are en lighted. Thank you for sharing your poem with the site. I am happy I read it. P.S It's your great title that makes me want to read more of Austin's work. TC
Hi Harry,
I like your poem titled, 'A Lifetime of Loneliness.' It's sad to read though. Poor Betty Brown. Like your poem seems to say though, "many Betty Brown's populate every town." It's true. Thanks for sharing your thought provoking words.
Hi Ken,
I like your poem, 'Dancing with a Heartache' and felt the words I was reading. I think this poem of yours would write a country song or write a novel, perhaps. I'd love for Harry Connick, Jr. to have the lead role in the film! i read of a love that once was and a man who dreams of what should be but probably never will. Life goes on and sometimes disappoints the heart of a man but the dance lasts forever. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Hi Fyn,
I read your poem 'Asleep' and felt sad, how it seems that a sleeping world doesn't seem to see what's really going on, why the wars and the senselessness repeats itself. I agree with your words, how walls go far beyond mortar and tone. Very true. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Hi Smores2Four,
I like your poem, 'Hope' and have enjoyed reading it today. It is uplifting, to read of one "being wrapped up in the security of self." That's nice. Thank you for sharing your poem.
Good poem, Mr. Fyn. I like it! i read the words you write and think that yes, indeed, "Anything is possible" as anything is when you see the "magical meanderings" of the beginning. Very nice poem. Thank you.
Hi Saloni,
I read your poem, 'Those Eyes' and I really like the analogy of the sunset and a person's eyes, how dreams, memories, love, and scars are behind the sunset and constellation. I liked how you wrote about a "homecoming" and "coming back" to describe the feelings you have when you look in "those eyes." That's nice. Good poem. Good read. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Laura,
I read your poem 'West' and I think it's creative, though I'm not sure what it's really about. I have clear visuals of the sea and a ship, Captain, crew, the sky and the stars. That's not a bad visual to have and I think you have created a well written poem. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Pat,
I read your poem, Absence of Time' and was impressed, thinking it to be creative words of write that open doors to the heart. I thought this way because of an elderly woman I know, age-82, who suffers from dementia, though I'm sure your intended meanings in the poem, differ from my interpretation. I thought about this 82-year old woman with dementia and her absence of time, how she can sit with me and talk, leaving the conversation entirely. She's not in the "serenity" your poem mentions but I think she does escape in her mind to go to the ocean. Hers is a life of absence of time and your poem your poem creatively reminded me that any of us, dementia or not, can meditate to places of serenity. Thank you for sharing your words with the site for others to read. I, for one, like your poem very much. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Kalai,
I like your poem, 'My Mother' and I think it's a truly sweet tribute to your Mom. I feel the same way about my mother. I hope you let your mother read what you've written because it's quite creative and heart felt. What daughter of a loving mother couldn't relate to the words you have written? Thank you for sharing it. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Jeff,
I like your short story of 99 words, 'The Oriental Retreat.' It's creatively written and expressive. Home is where the heart is. It's nice that the person in the poem felt at home in her small surroundings. I think that people like her are probably happier then people who have all the material wealth. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Tim,
I like your poem entitled 'Trusting Them.' It's a creatively written poem that puts the reader into the heart of the writer, understanding feelings and relating to the words. Trust is a bold word and a verb of action. I think we have to trust ourselves, first and foremost, that our feelings are valid about the people around us. I listen to my gut instinct when it comes to trust. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Rhyssa
I like your poem 'Of Frogs and Kissing.' I think its quite creative and fun to ready, a humorous play with words and a story all in one. Thanks for sharing it. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Tim,
'All Stars' is a creative poem. You write the stars with just the right light and I notice, life's meaning becomes greater as the number of stars exceed, passing through twilight "without ration" and finding cheer in God's guiding light of love. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Tim,
Your poem, 'You Better Believe it' says a lot to me about the values we have in this life and what really matters. Like you said, we all make a choice, to be what we are and live as we do. We have to live with our own skin. Your poem reminds me of that old classic poem I read entitled 'The Man in the Glass.' Thank you for sharing your words. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Fyn,
I like your poem, 'Independence Day' and interpret it, if I may be so bold to say, as an interesting analogy about having a word cramp-writers block and rising above it, like a flag rises, and finding independence. Independent writers are the most creative and so is our flag. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Harry,
I like your poem, 'Simpler Times.' The last 2 lines took me to Harry Chaplin's song, 'Cats in the Cradle,' and the other lines of the poem took me to my own childhood, though I was never into flying toy planes. My brothers were into the planes and I was into pretending I was a teacher. Your poem does paint a nice picture of a young boy in simple times. tc and have a nice day.
Hi She,
Your poem, 'Freedom' writes as it lives to breathe the aroma of the words; the gradual charm of life and beauty, yes, I think I understand. It's a "mind phenomenon," you say with the "message loops" circling around life and death; a phantasm passing through "logic and external rules." Freedom is indeed an "opportunity" to rely on self, by grace are we given that choice and the decisions we make are our best and worse teachers. I like your words, if I may be so bold to say, and interpret your poem as a positive affirmation. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Pat,
I like your poem, 'Color My World' and I think it's about perseverance and hope, knowing from experience that the gray clouds really can move away and make room for the rainbow. Your poem is creative. Thanks for sharing it. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Tony,
I like you poem 'Absence' and think it's a bit of a puzzle to solve, like WHAT it is that is lost but absence itself. Absence of a substantial something or someone that is or isn't a void. tc and have a nice day.
Hi Carly,
I like your poem,'The Pain of Heartbreak' and read\feel the pain in your words, how devastation nearly takes your breath as you find your way to the triumph of trust, an emotion that has been tried and tested, and you are able to love again. if someone leaves you, in my thinking, they have left themselves behind in a mystery. What he is looking for, will it ever be found, and are you able to solve the puzzle of your own life without him? Good poem. tc and have a nice day.
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