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Review of Traditions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me smile. :) Using it in this week's Poetry Newsletter!
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Review by Fyn-elf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this! Super great story on numerous levels!

Teensy typo in last line--waste, not waist.

I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter! :) ~ fyn
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Oh my. Wow. THAT was awesome!!!! Sniff. (goes back to read it again.) Yup, still an 'Oh My!' More sniffles.

Using this in this week's For Authors newsletter. :) ~fyn
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Review of 5. Gratitude  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This made me smile! I can think of many folks who would do well to read this and get, perhaps, a good reminder! I'm using it in this week's For Authors Newsletter. ~ Fyn
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Review of My Next Poem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ok, Nailed it! What a superior read! Love the bear and the never-empty tea pot!

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter!~fyn
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Review of The Platypus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was fun!

Using it in this week's poetry newsletter!~fyn
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Review of LAYERS OF CLOUDS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this - a mind being 'entangled in layers of clouds.' Great, superior line!

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of I don't mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Exactly! Great attitude for it does fly by so darned quickly! Still flies by with the great-grands! Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter!~fyn
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Review of Odd, Isn’t It?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this poem, as I've had the same thoughts that you expressed so well. Especially these ending lines:
How odd to think their brilliance
May have burned out long ago,
But their light is just now reaching us!


I'm using it in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Chasing Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dreams should be chased! Firm believer in that. And glistening hearts are awesome!!! I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newletter! ~fyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mmmm-- I really like this. It made my heart smile! I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dreams are worth the effort and rarely come true without it! I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Schema  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
And that moment . . . makes all the difference in the world! Shine on! As Kind Arthur in Camelot said,
"One of what we all are, Pelly. Less than a drop in the great blue motion of the sunlit sea. But it seems that some of the drops sparkle, Pelly. Some of them do sparkle!"

I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by Fyn-elf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW. Extremely powerful. This is one I will remember. I checked your bio block, wanting to know more about you, but, sadly, you haven't added it as yet. This poem, however, spoke volumes about who you are. ~fyn
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Review of Promptly 4 and 5  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yeah. You nailed this!!! On multiple levels! I ended up writing this week's Poetry Newsletter about the difficulties I had writing about joy. ~fyn
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Review of Time Stood Still  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really, really enjoyed this poem and the truths shared that many, I think, need to read! I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by Fyn-elf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
rainbow's peak and rainbow's free -- (slight typos!)

Really enjoyed this fantastical poem. Didn't feel like fantasy and the best 'fantasy' doesn't! Well done!

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of The Book  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good one!!! Loved it! Using this piece in my Autors newsletter this week! ~ fyn
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Review by Fyn-elf Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awwww...sad and sweet all at the same time! Know the feeling well. Slightly different, but the same in the long run! Great read! I'm using this piece in my Authors newsletter this week. ~fyn
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good one!!! Had me from start to finish! I'm using this piece in my Authors newsletter this week! ~fyn
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Review of Revelation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Got to love those moments! Especially liked the line: looming large for too long without the attention it needed sooner.

Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Wake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Really liked this piece. Especially the line: avalanche pouring down time <---brilliant image! This one too: ---> on a glass sea set on its side

Well crafted!

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hard to say I 'enjoyed' this poem but more, I think I enjoyed how you communicated a difficult set of feelings. Particularly the line: in the outskirts of our love. <---excellent phrase! Fresh and different!

I'm using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review of Heavy Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yeah, you nailed being there. Spot on. I've never forget as a parent, standing on the deck of the aircraft carrier, USS Ronald Reagen (CVN 76) with the Navy personnel lining the decks at attention. We parents, all saluting as well. After we passed, I looked around. EVERYONE had tears streaming.

Using this in the week's For Authors newsletter. ~fyn
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Review of Pearl In December  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You pretty much nailed this! Have you ever been to Pearl Harbor? If you haven't and ever have the opportunity, do so. Mind-boggling. Heart-wrenching. Using your piece in this week's Authors Newsletter on befores and afters. ~fyn
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