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Review of The Letter  
Review by fyn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good one! Using this in this week's Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Reality of Words.  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Using this in this week's Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was sweet. Hopefully your love loves you right back!!!


The last two stanzas especially stood out! Well crafted!

I'm using this piece in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
And it so, so does, indeed!

Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my... *sits here laughing!* It's perfect for my newsletter this week. So giving you a heads up should you want to delete the gp reward! LOL. Poetry for Dummies...just too, too funny!~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was awesome! Curling up at the trunk, rustling whispers. Just so, so good! Using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes! Absolutely! Well done! I'm using this piece in this week's For Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Elemental  
Review by fyn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Loved this!! The language of water...much to unpack in this piece! Loved the final lines...

Using it in this week's For Authors newsletter!
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Review of My Insulation  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this piece! I love poetry that presents a road well traveled with no regrets. Wonder if you have some of your adventures enscribed yet. Need to go look! I'm using this in this week's Poetry newsletter. ~fyn
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Review of The Golden Thread  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yup!!!!!

Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter
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Review of Poetic Tension  
Review by fyn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well crafted!!

'Streetwalkers of discourse' so, so, so, SO good!

Using this in this week's poetry newsletter!
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words... sometimes I feel as if I've walked into an overhanging steel beam! (That's a good thing!)

One little suggestion. Don't negate the sheer power of your words with embellishments--underlinings, italics, bolds etc. You do not need them!!!

Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter. ~ fyn
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Review of Truth to Oneself  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (4.5)
There's a lot to like in this piece, but I do have some suggestions.I would suggest breaking up some of the lines and making it three verses so the part in the middle works better (when it isn't rhyming)

Also, the line needs a missing word or three-->Slowing it down for there’s things that the can be quickly passed,

If 'there's things' as several, then it would not be 'there's' <--there is but 'there are.'

Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent points. The verse about the toddlers was priceless. I'm using this piece in this week's Poetry Newsletter~ ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this--it made me smile! Traveled roughly the same number of miles. Puts a new spin (ahem!) on the idea! I'm using this in this week's Fort Authors Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, this made me smile and ... of course... it was real! *grin*

I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved this!!! From start to finish! Well written and cannily crafted! I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of The Knight  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good article. I'd classify it as such rather than as a short story tho. Me, I was brought up to believe in that noble knight. They kept falling on their swords, losing their horse or failed their chivalry courses!! I did end up with my knight eventually though. His armor is battered and bent. He's rusty around the edges. But he treats me like gold, has a heart that wants to save everyone and is the reason I can believe in happily ever afters!

I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes! Using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter!
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Review of NATURE  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes. Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of The Snowman  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes. This made my day!!! Using it in my newsletter this week! Even if it is the poetry one. Because, it its way, it is! ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Been there, done that. Then I raised a ruckus and least some of 'em come home for Christmas. Course, my youngest is forever young (like her mom!!!) so we have all the olden magic again! Using this in this week's Poetry Newsletter! ~fyn
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Review of Special Snowfall  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't care how old one is, Christmas Eve snow is pure magic! Using this in this weeks Poetry newsletter. ~fyn
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Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfection!!!!! Using this well-crafted piece in my For Authors Newsletter this week!!! ~fyn
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Review of Smucker's Jar  
Review by fyn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This made a very tired lady smile! I'm using this in this week's For Authors Newsletter!~fyn
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