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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This makes me nostalgic for my dating days. I think the most important thing about dating is having shared goals. There's a vague reference to standards, but what are they, specifically? Standards often refer to physical appearance, income, and other superficial metrics. Goals go deeper than standards, and many people don't wind up discussing goals until it's too late. The beauty of online dating is the ability to put one's goals at the forefront.

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Review of Dark Side of Love  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Love indeed has a dark side. I blame our evolutionary heritage, yet I also look to it for answers. When we understand more about how we got to the place we are at now, we can talk more openly and celebrate the processes that led us here in consensual ways.

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Review of U-224  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a very intriguing scenario. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

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Review of Training Camp  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This makes me nostalgic for my high school years. After winter awareness training with Scouts, all I wanted most was get into a sleeping bag with someone who wanted to keep me warm.

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Review of Intro  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Agents are sand in the gears. I say keep writing from your heart. Go where your heart leads, and that passion will continue to shine through your work.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've created an intriguing scenario with vibrant characters. Keep it up!

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is fascinating. I wish my childhood cat was still alive so I could test a wet toothbrush on him.

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Review of WHAT SHOULD I DO?  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Getting out and learning about other parts of the world is a valuable thing to add to your education. Of course, it takes money to do that, and it can be especially difficult without parental consent. Do you have any reason to be afraid of your parents if they do not approve of this, or are you simply worried about having to let go of your dream?

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I found this through the random “Read & Review” feature.

I take slight offense at the assumption that I have, or have ever had, a car. Due to climate change, I made the decision to reject driving before I turned 16. I took two bicycles to university. Now I am 35 years old with a 3-year-old son, and I still do not drive, though I am considering an electric bicycle to handle the hills while hauling my precious cargo.

I would definitely say that university enriched my beliefs, as there were no drastic changes for me. I did attend the same university as my parents, so that probably had a lot to do with it.

Thanks for sharing your writing :)
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Review of in the NICU  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello! I found this through the random “Read & Review” feature.

You've conveyed some powerful emotions in a few short words. It must be an extremely difficult thing to bear indeed.

Thanks for sharing your writing :)
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Review of Flood  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This sounds like a very traumatic experience. Please seek professional help as soon as you can. I recently had to seek therapy for a relationship from 2009-2014, as the trauma from that is impacting my marriage.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a very fun read and gave me lots to laugh about. Thank you for brightening my day.

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Review of The Midnight Hour  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review of The Kinfolks  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I enjoyed how this ended. It's mysterious and comforting at the same time.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a very intriguing opening. Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review of A final justice  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start. Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review of Ritual  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I've never lived completely alone, but I enjoy being alone when I get the chance. I don't think living completely alone would suit me.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start. Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've shared a magnificent tale in just a few words. Thank you for brightening my day with this.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of Abandoned  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. Thanks for giving my mind something to chew on.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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