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Murder mysteries.
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Long sad stories.
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Murder She Wrote, Columbo and NCIS.
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)


Ho-hum word games. Reading this possession story reminds me of Catholic Catechism.
The Devil doesn't want to show himself. He wants to possess your desires. He will mimic
you and enter your fantasies. This is very close to the Native American Coyote, who is a
trickster. Coyote apeared to a hunter as a beautifull woman. The woman asked to enter the
hunter's tepee. The hunter slept with Coyote and awoke to find all his belongings were gone.
All about his home were Coyote' paw prints. It's easy to blame Coyote, but the hunter should
have been more carefull.

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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)



I just saw the Transformer movie. Awesome! I like the the fight seen
in the white birches. There's something liberating about beating a person
to a pulp in the woods. You just be yourself. The birds keep on singing
and air is heavenly. Traffic is fun. I like it when a sports car races up my
old pick-up bumper. I just wave them on. Chance are good they'll run out
of gas. Then, I can pick them up and beat them to pulp in the woods.

Just Joking!
I love the line "I felt like I had to reach to touch the bottom."
I get lite headed after I've beaten someone to a pulp. That's why I always
bring a candy bar. .. Heh-heh.. Joking!

:)
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


You like to describe things like, "black hair half covered his face."
For me a story is a look inside a person. You see how they tick.
I get the impression you love heros and sexy lady wariors. I'm
more sinister. I see wars as cylical and damsels are
never happy, because they place too much expectation in their
shining knight.+
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Review of Revelation  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)

"Sets Eden's blazing army free." you wrote. Sometimes prophesy can be
self-fulfilling. "On the seventh day the old king gave me a golden medal
bearing on one side the words, 'Art is the creator's nature' and of the other,
'Nature is the daughter of time.'" (The Chemical Wedding, 1616)
All things great and small must live in the time allowed.+

^^^
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)


Where's this museum? I took a russian exchange student Yanni to the Boston
museum of arts. She told me the story of all the russian kitch: little thimble size
sculptures of fishermen and woodsmen ect. There were hundreds of them.
I was amazed at her knowledge of the Egyptian exibit. She worked at the Kittery
Mcdonalds in the grill. Ya-know she left for New York to pursue a career as a
curator's assistant. Kind of makes you think twice about the folks making your
burger.

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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Fun read. Jehudah of Worms(1217) German Hisidism mystic believed in the
inner inspirational glory from God and the divine right of prophets, who are
born to serve God. This is made evident in their lives and visions. The Jew
means of the tribe of Judah. If the mother is Jewess, then her children are
joined with the Kindom of Judah. Zion is Jerusalem, the throne of King David.

Well, the world is spinning faster
and who knows where it is going?

Mercy for the meek.+
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


This is ready to be published. It reads like a chapter from The Wind and the Willows.
I like owls. Squirils are pests. Fortunately, owls eat squirls. I can't think of anything
to correct in this story. I wonder if Celia is a witch? Maybe, this look alike is a
reflection of Celia's aura. Some witches have such great power, their egoes
unconsciously create alternate egoes. The flagae appears to them in a mirror
and can have a seperate ideantity as a familiar, predicting future events.
(See: Snow White)

A pool of water can be used for this meditation also.
Magic is all around us.

L+Y!
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


The moon and the sun race toward each other only to embrace in an eclypse.
"Radiate Nature's instinctive qualities" you wrote. How many times have we
felt the radiance of life? The seasons pass too quickly and we become forgetfull
of heaven's gifts.

I enjoyed your thread.
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Free verse is fun: "Beauty transcends decrement, tender wrinkles of time,
* lost in patterns of light and shadows of yesterdays."
That's my favorite verse in your poem. We must live in the time nature allows.
"O'lady! we recieve but what we give
And in our life alone does Nature live."
Samuel Taylor Coleridge; Job 16:32.

:)
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Review of Passages  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Death. The death of those we love is not only bitter to endure,
but also hard to realize. Yesterday they were here by our side,
looking into our eyes, and now they are so far away. We cry to
them and they do not answer. Love is left to prayer, nature needs
a human touch.

You struck a cord in me.+
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Review of Sweetwater Flames  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Very well writen. Olivia is frontier stock. There are so many sad stories of
injustice during that time, but the Union was preserved. I'm reminded of
Harriet Tubman an abolitionist and escaped slave. She helped other slaves
escape to the north by way of the underground railroad. She was also a
scout and a spy for the Union army.

Long live the Republic for which we stand.

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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)


Hey ya-know, just because someone is psychotic doesn't mean they'll go on
a killing spree. I just watched ZODIAC directed by David Fincher. It was a study
of society's dissosiation as well as the pathology of a serial killer. You brought
that mind set out. And I say great! But, remember anyone who is feeling
discriminated against or has a distrust of people generally could be labled
psychotic. There are too many diagnosis for simple human weaknesses.
If a someone is antisocial and disruptive, just slap them and tell them to get over it.
Nine times out of ten you wont have to cut them up into chum.


Keep writing!

<^>
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


I given this outline a low rating, because of my low IQ.
I think I heard somewhere, maybe on the Sci-fi channel, that
demential jumping can cause every molicule in your body to explode.
Our atomic structure is bonded to the eltromagnatic field of our Earth,
which is essentially a big ball of water spinning in space around a firey
hydrogen bomb.. the Sun. Another dimention may have a different polarity.
Tertullian's pledge may apply here, "I believe it because it is impossible
and nothing is impossible for God." Ah-so. Maybe your right.

I can't wait for the new Star Trek!
Peace out, Spok!

:)
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Review of Floppy Disk  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


Ha! Do you remember Aladin and his lamp? Every wish Aladin made was
made a curse by the evil jin of the lamp. Finally, Aladin wished the jin back into
the lamp and tossed it into the sea. Cassie sounds like Casandra, who prayed
to see the future only to be cursed with by the fates. She could change nothing.
Well, I enjoyed your thread. Spin some more!

:)
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Review of One way to fly  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Napoleon sounds like snuggly. I was confused, who was pregnant the object
of the adverb was not clear. But, I guess it was not Napoleon. Do you ever test
your dogs intelligence? Throw a blanket over him and see how fast he can get
out. Put out two bowls one with food cover both with a paper bag; see how quickly
he finds the food. My favorite: throw the ball, but hold on to it.

Loved the poem.

:)
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Review of Changes in Zelda  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)


Michael rowed his boat a shore. It was his private island.
He was free to explore it and his fantasies. Isaias24:5-6
spun in his mind. His father objected to Michael's fantasies
and quoted scripture against his son. But, God is God of
the rightous and the sinner. Who can defy Him?

I wanted to do more writing in your space, but it was very limited.
There is the playfullness to erotica, but the motive can be spiritual.
Why do I want to do this? Why is it so exciting? And of course, is it wrong?
The river is wide and the river is deep... Hallelujah!

Fun topic. I wish you'd allow more writing.

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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
4-16-2009

Well I read John Macdllen diary. It was great.
I'm writing so someone else will read it. John Macdllen was great.
I think the touching story of Amy, a pregnant jew, going to NAZI Germany
to meet up with John Macdllen was.. great. It was very touching when she got shot.
I hope other readers will appreciate this.
I need a drink.

Thank You John Macdllen.
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)


This is a very compelling story. God is amazing. So many people talk with him/her.
Sometimes they hear God. Once you realize that God is the source of all things,
then anything is possible, "I form the light and create darkness: I make peace and create evil:
I the Lord do all these things(Isa.45:7). It strange though how much suffering is wrought
in the name of God. Any-who, It was nice to see the girl got help.

:)
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Review of Tracy  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


The love a woman feels for a woman is divine.
What is mine is yours and what is yours is mine.
The pleasing punishment a woman can bear.
Is an ape of a man in her hair.


Oook! :)
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)


metalica4evr where is your story? Giantism or love of oversized people is a infantile fetish.
Yup. Some folks want to be treated like babies. They have large cribs and diapers.
Strangely, Jack and the Bean Stock has some submisive images. Jack is tiny
in the Giant's kingdom and that bean stock is enormous. I think you should write a
story about a giant woman, who is found of a tiny man. How would the ordinary folk react?
Just a curious.

:)
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I like fish sticks. This is a fun idea: everyone chips in on the story.
Fish and chips are yummy too. Did you ever grill lobstah? The buggahs
beat on the lid. Good eatan though. Ay-yah! I feel like some tuna cheese
toasted.

Loved the menue!
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Sororities were never part of my college life. I like the melancholy of the photo.
It's sad but true; we can't go back. Time moves faster as we grow older.
Should we have turn left or right? Intolerable a thought must be faced.
Are we immortal? Is this life perfecting us or leading to complete annihilation?
Nope, never been to a sorority.+

Whimsy thread. I like it.

:)
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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Welll, the cats in the cradle.... Do you read Aesop's Fables?
"The Bird, the Beast and the Bat" a bat sides first with the birds,
then with the beasts, and in the end is rejected by both groups
as a two faced traitor.
You can buy bat houses with scent lures. It's an eco-friendly way
to keep the mosquitoes down. But, the bats would eat the butterflies too.
Little boy blue and the man and the moon...

You've got a sweet thought, "She has the most gentle wings
and lands on beautiful things."

Keep at!

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Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)



The course for beauty is severe. Doctors, fitness experts and messages
are all very necessary. X-rays are also be used to sculpt facial features.
Plastic implants and vacuumed fatty deposits are relocated. Soon total
reconstruction will be done before birth. A race of genetically perfect people
will walk the land in speedos.
My only criticism would be to make the dialogue more interesting.
I like Zizi's humor. Tiny's leg is to be amputated and Ziti exclaims, "Oh my God!
That's gotta be like 25 pounds! Your gonna be a rockstar!"
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Review of Eyes...  Open in new Window.
Review by bob county Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)


This is perfect. The eyes are the window to the soul and mine are blood shot.
"I'm drowning in your two eyes" you wrote. This is the first step to love.
Total surrender. There is a fine line between love and obsession.
If your offer is refused and you continue to pursue, then your a stocker.
"The blessed damozel leaned out from the gold bar of Heaven;
Her eyes were deeper than the depth of waters stilled at evening;
She had three lillies in her hand,
And the stars in her hair were seven."
Faust: The Blessed Damozel, Stanza 1.
Love is a fire that consumes us all.


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