Welcome to writing.com. I hope you will enjoy your stay here. I love your little fairy story. It is very imaginative and has lovely visuals. I am happy to say I found no grammatical or spelling errors.
Good luck with all of your writing. Best Wishes, Cynaemon
I really enjoyed reading your story about the interrupted muse. LOL. I would love to meet your muse. Well, more to the point, my muse would love to meet yours. Mine is a pesky elve who thinks he is a lord, and who thinks he can just take control of my brain and my life whenever he wants to. Good luck in the contest. I liked the way you used the prompts.
Welcome to writing.com. I hope you enjoy your stay here. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It has a great sentiment. I am happy to say I found no grammatical or spelling errors. The poem has a good rhythm and flow.
Welcome to writing.com. I really liked your little poem. I like the sentiment. It has a nice rhythm and flow. I am happy to say I found no grammatical or spelling errors. Great job.
This is a very interesting poem. I am not sure that I really consider it to be a poem so much as a short essay, but it has a great sentiment, so I can overlook the fact that it is a non-traditional poem. You ask some very deep and valid questions.
I loved your little flash fiction story. And congratulations on the Honorable Mention! You story has a great beginning, middle and ending. I was happy to find no grammatical or spelling errors. I especially liked the word 'fiercsome.'
This is a great little piece of flash fiction. I think you did a good job of using the prompts, and created a story with a good beginning, middle and end. I was happy to find no grammatical or spelling errors.
This is an interesting little piece of flash fiction. I liked the way you used the prompts. There are a lot of little grammatical errors though.
in a while, perfect! - while. Perfect! - Start a new sentence
mile-ish, actually, just - actually. Then start a new sentence with JUST
tracks, I could walk. - period after tracks. Then start a new sentence
of course, they only - period after COURSE.
By the time I got there Jeff had it all set up, the guy was apparently in a rush to close, he handed me the keys, and left. - This should be three sentences
Welcome to writing.com. I hope you will enjoy your stay here. I liked your little poem.
You did your time, we paid our dues; - I would change it to YOU paid your dues, since all of the rest of the poem is addressed to a person to whom you are speaking. Other than that I found no grammatical or spelling errors.
I really enjoyed your poem about loneliness. It has a great rhythm and flow. I liked the way you repeated your question at the end of each verse. I can so relate to many of the things about which you have written.
I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your piece.
I loved your poem about a stray cat and dog, and two people. It has a wonderful sentiment. I have had over 80 cats in my life, most of them abandonees or rescues. Your poem is well-written, and has a great rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your win.
This is an interesting little poem. I like the way you show how quiet moments can bring so much to one's life. It does have a nice sentiment, and it flows fairly well. The last verse doesn't really fit that well. I think I would leave out the word BECAUSE, and just say Jesus cares for THEE.
I loved reading your little poem about nude bowling. I wonder if you have ever bowled nude. You can, you know. Your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. I found no grammatical or spelling errors. I think it was interesting to write an erotic poem about a sport. :)
I so enjoyed reading your poem. It really speaks to me. I love the images in your poem. I can relate to them so well. Your poem has a great rhythm and flow. I see you haven't been on WDC for awhile, but I hope you are writing wherever you are. You have so much potential.
I enjoyed reading your little discussion on who Cain's wife might be. I can see that you have done a great deal of research on the subject. I agree with you. I have always contended that Cain would have had to marry a very close relative, most likely a sister. Of course, I have also heard many other answers to this question. But who can know for sure?
Welcome to writing.com. This is an interesting little poem, or statement, as the case may be. I think it has all been said before, but I do like the way you have presented it. It is an interesting sentiment.
Welcome to writing.com. I really enjoyed your little sci-fi story. I imagine this is part of a larger work. I loved all the names you gave your characters and places. I know how difficult it can be to come up with believable names in a story.
I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your piece.
Wow! Like 20 years ago is like forever man! LOL. Just kidding. I really liked your little haiku, and I especially like that it follows the traditional format of 5-7-5 syllables in the three lines. I don't think I care that much for the new non-traditional forms. I think that defeats the whole purpose of trying to write a haiku. Your haiku really captures the feeling of a vampire.
I really enjoyed your little poem about Gawnbeck. I am not sure it fits all the rules of a limerick, but it is still a cute poem, so it probably doesn't really matter. I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your short work.
This is a great little haiku. It follows the traditional form of 5-7-5, and it is definitely about nature, or at least something natural. I have never read a haiku about a cow. It brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing.
I really liked your little roundabout poem. It has a great rhythm and flow. I am guessing that the style itself would give it a good rhythm. Your poem has a lovely sentiment. I can just see the lovers dancing in a beautiful garden.
I really liked your poem. It has a nice rhythm and flow, and an interesting sentiment. I wasn't sure that the title went along with the poem, but as it seems to be part of some larger tale, perhaps it is just that I don't know the whole story.
I really liked your little ode to a teddy bear. It has a lovely sentiment. I hope you are enjoying your poetry class. It must be interesting to take one. Your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. I found no grammatical or spelling errors.
What an interesting concept, and interesting story. I read a few of the chapters, and found this quite fascinating. I was a bit confused on how exactly to navigate this. I can't exactly imagine anyone sitting down and reading the whole thing, but I guess there are those who would. I was wondering how one would rate or review an individual chapter.
Good luck with your story. I will have to check back sometime.
Best Wishes, Cynaemon
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