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This is a very interesting little poem with a dark sentiment. The poem has a good rhythm and flow, but there are many errors which need to be addressed.
Its written on your face. - IT'S - possessive tense
I really liked your little poem about wishes. Well, I liked what there was of it. I could see this poem going on and on. LOL. But it is also fine as it is. You have done a great job with the format and the 'aabb' rhyming scheme. The poem has a nice rhythm and flow, and of course, there were no grammatical or spelling errors.
I really enjoyed reading your diamante poem. I think the title is perfect for the poem, and the images of crocuses heralding spring are lovely. I found no spelling errors in your poem. I like the words you have picked to describe your subjects.
This is a great little diamante poem. These are such fun to write, and you have perfectly contrasted sadness and happiness. You did a great job picking the words to describe the two emotions. I found no spelling errors in your piece.
I loved your little poem about the Sunshine Girl. It has lovely images which are easy for the reader to see. I liked the way the poem takes you through the life of your poem's character. I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your poem.
I really enjoyed your poem. It has lovely images, and is uplifting and inspiring. The poem has a nice rhythm and flow.
I didn't really find any grammatical or spelling errors.
drifting seamlessness through space - I think I would change seamlessness to seamlessly
I always enjoy reading your poetry. It has such a nice rhythm and flow. This has such a beautiful and positive sentiment. And I am always happy that I find no grammatical or spelling errors in your work. I love all the positive words you have used in this poem. It makes me feel good.
I really loved your poem about a little sparrow. It has some lovely images in it. I especially liked the way the bird says "I am here."
Your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. And I found no grammatical or spelling errors. Keep up the great writing. Best wishes, Cynaemon
Welcome to writing.com. I hope you will enjoy your time here. I am not quite sure what yo are saying in this little piece. There are quite a few grammatical errors which should be corrected.
full 5 minutes - spell out FIVE
their agents, it - should have a period after AGENTS
it was their business was theirs; - this sentence makes no sense. Also, it should have a period at the end of it.
not worth her nose to know what they were sending her here for girl named Marise - actually this sentence doesn't make sense either.
I will be happy to re-rate this once the errors are corrected. Cynaemon
This is a wonderful piece of writing. It has a nice and positive sentiment. I hope you did well in NaNo last year. I have considered writing my memoirs, but I am still fascinated with my fanfiction which I write for NaNo every year.
At any rate, back to your writing. I found no grammatical or spelling errors. Good luck, as always, in all of your writing. Maybe I will see you at NaNo this year.
This is a fascinating poem, and I am glad that it has a happy ending. I found the way you presented it in such an unusual form to be great. The poem itself has a good rhythm and flow. I am also happy to say I found no grammatical or spelling errors.
I really enjoyed reading your little blog piece. I think it is interesting that you see it as a place of spiritual growth. I wonder if you have kept writing and discovering new things about yourself even though you only have one blog entry here. I think this is excellent writing.
I really enjoyed reading your little blog entry. It was very interesting. I see you haven't been on writing.com for a long time. I hope you are still writing, wherever you may be. I think you have a lot of potential. I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your work.
It is really interesting to read these little biographies that people have left behind on writing.com. I see you haven't been here for a really long time, and I wonder if you are still writing. I think you have a lot of potential.
Hope you are having a great life. Best Wishes, Cynaemon
I really enjoyed reading your little blog entry. I hope you have found a lovely home and are having a lovely time in it. I wonder if you are still writing. I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your work. Have a great life.
Your blog entries are very interesting. I see that you wrote them a long time ago. I wonder if you are still writing. I like that you believe in qulity over quantity. I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your writing.
Keep writing wherever you are. Best Wishes, Cynaemon
Welcome to writing.com. I hope you will enjoy your time here. This is an interesting little piece of flash fiction, or short story. It has a good beginning, and you have developed the characters fairly well. There are many grammatical errors here which should be addressed. You constantly change from present to past tense and back. Use either one or the other.
I really liked your butterfly poem. You have done a great job with this format. The title fits in well with your poem. I found no grammatical or spelling errors.
Congratulations on being featured in the Feb 2018 Poetry Newsletter.
I hope you are still writing. Keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed reading your short story. I thought it was interesting the way you told the story from the point of view of the person who wasn't there. You did a great job punctuating the conversation too. I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your piece.
I enjoyed reading your little poem about a dead bird. It has a dark and sad sentiment which could easily make one cry. Your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. I am happy to say I found no grammatical or spelling errors in your piece.
I really enjoyed your little poem about Mongolia. Have you been there, or are you from there? This is a great picture, and your poem tells its story well. Even though it is short your poem has a nice rhythm and flow. I can feel the laughter in it.
I really enjoyed your story about flying and about horses. I love horses, and I wish I could ride like you obviously do, really well. I especially loved your description of flying in your dreams. I have had the same dream so many times, but for me, it was jumping off a rooftop and soaring. I too hated to wake up.
I had lost the joy and freedom of flying - should be HAVE lost - other than that I found no grammatical or spelling errors. Thanks for sharing your flying with me.
Best Wishes, Cynaemon
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