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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Interesting hook. It leaves so much open. It could be horror, zombies and monsters. It could be Science fiction, androids and aliens. It could be a murder gone sideways. I would love to see where you could go with this hook. it would be an interesting story no matter where you went with it.
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Review of All about Poems  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Difficult but doable puzzle. I loved all the words you selected. I think they were a good mix of long and short ones and they all applied to the subject matter of the word search. I found two bonus words, blend and eat. Eat didn't so much go with the theme but I think blend would work.
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for entry "Mr. Raccoon's Day" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So absolutely adorable. It captures the antics of a mischievous raccoon in a perfect child-like way. It tells a cute story and I don't think there is a thing I would change. The emojis are wonderful accents to the subject of the poem and definitely fit the prompt.
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for entry "Spring's Blessings" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lovely poem. it works on so many levels each of the haiku could stand alone but together they are way more than the sum of their parts. I think it was an inspired use of the prompt words. The other words were excellent choices to add to the flow of the poem.
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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think this is really cute. I think my leprechaun had a little brew too. The first line seems long but it works really well. The rhymes were solid for me and so was the little story of Paddy. This poem fits the prompt well and is funny. Well done attempt.
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Review of Even Prompter  
for entry "Mirror Man" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
interesting story poem. I enjoyed it a lot more than some of the things I have read or even written this week. I like the character of the mirror man as presented and the idea that the poet found him hard to comprehend. I wonder if the mirror man was a part of him he didn't understand.
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for entry "Week 32 - a Triolet" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It follows the form as I understand it. I think the subject is timely. You might want to include a dropnote with the prompt in it so people can see why you wrote it this way. It will remind you later why you wrote it as well. I find if I don't do drop notes like that I get confused later when someone does a random read and review years later.
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for entry "Week 29" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhymes look good but I am not sure you got the repeated line in the last stanza from the right line above. You might double check. Don't mind me I had a rough time with this one and was really uninspired yours was positively inspiring good show and better poem.
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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fit the prompt quite well. I would suggest embedding the prompt in a dropnote though just for the looks of it, it is what I do. Otherwise, my entries could get messy with long and involved prompts. The poem really was a positive one and seemed to have real thought put into its construction.


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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is quite twisted. I liked the turn on expectations it has. Really nice making the entomologist sound like a serial killer, I mean they kind of are. This describes what they do in such a way that it seems much more brutal than you would usually think.

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Review of Dreamcatcher  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
THis is scary. That his nightmares could be that bad in a month he needed more than a dreamcatcher it almost sounds like he needed medication, there are medications that can suppress dreams and that can reduce nightmares. If not therapy would be an option. In any case i would hate to think a dreamcatcher could split and spill out nightmares all at once.

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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is an uplifting piece that reminds me that sometimes fake it till you make it can really work in some circumstances. I have found for much of my life people have told me to smile. It can be really hard, but since I found my true love smiling happens spontaneously and I don't know if I smile because I feel good or I feel good because I smiled.

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Review of Minions  
Review by Sox and Sandals
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ooooh sooo creepy. This is a twisted story. I can see my nephew doing this to his parents if they tried to take his youtube away. Yeah, maybe the parents shouldn't have been so strict. Or maybe they shouldn't have given him a set of demon-possessed construction toys
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for entry "January PPC prompts" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I thought this was a very dreamy fantastical view of a candle flame. I went for a more practical view. I tried to wax fantastic but mine didn't work anywhere near as well as yours. This is a lovely poem for this prompt. I might have put all of the info on the poem into the dropnote rather than just the meaning of candlelight just to leave the poem in stronger focus.
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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The theme of this poem is lovely. I like the contrast between the two homes and views. I hate that the view isn't as nice in the apartment but it's really good that the poem ends with the poet making some sort of peace with the changes that came with the move.
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for entry "Time" 
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the focus of this poem it is very direct. It takes a very serious turn on the prompt. I saw a lot of light in the picture and this poem almost seems to take a darker take on it. It just goes to show how different people can see the same thing in so many different ways.
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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way your theme flows all the way through the poem telling a story of a character. I had so much trouble I was throwing in practically unrelated sentences to keep to form. I feel you did a very good job because of this. I would put the prompt in a dropnote though it takes away from the poem to have the prompt almost taking up the same amount of space.
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Review of Lucky In Love  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am glad your lack of luck at gambling didn't put your luck in love on a tilt. This poem definitely illustrates the premise you present. You were lucky in love but it didn't allow for luck elsewhere. I hadn't heard the overall premise before but I have to say my life proves it out too.
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Review of Loser's Club  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
It isn't really a full scene to me more of a short vignette. I didn't pick up any real character growth or change the stakes of the conflict just weren't quite clear enough for me. I understood the wager but not why kissla went along with it... she really didn't seem to gain much.
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Review of The Caring Soul  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am glad this story had a happy ending. So many in the middle of the worst part of the pandemic did not. I was worried the woman would give up and join her husband. I am glad that not only did she survive but she made new friends. Her kids are over protective.
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Review of Crashed Witches  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wonderful magical PSA. I love the premise and the story. Don't drink and fly! I would wholeheartedly get behind a tv campaign on this. I feel bad for Eliza. to go out that way in the middle of a successful career. It really is a sad cautionary tale. I promise never to drink and pick up a broom!!!
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Review of What's Behind Me?  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome! It is totally cool and hilarious! I definitely think she should date steve! He at least didn't run away screaming like a girl! I love the twist you put on all of the horror characters I hope steve and Jessie become really close and invite the whole crew to their wedding!
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Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an excellent synopsis. It draws you in without revealing too much. You should reference whether this novel stands alone or whether you should read the first one first. Meaning do you have enough backstory that someone who hasn't read the first one will be able to follow it. I think that is the only thing I would add to this.
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Review of Triple Danger  
Review by Sox and Sandals
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is good it is the perfect treatment for a cheating husband he deserves every thing he gets. The fact that the wife arranged it is totally cool and I would hope the trio eventually runs out of customers. But men will be men and follow their little friend around...
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Review of A Strand of Hair  
Review by Sox and Sandals
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Yipes. Somebody leaped to a conclusion. There are dozens of reasonable explanations of hair from other people on a person, well maybe not a "personal" type of hair in a personal type of location but that was not specified. Heck she could have even worn a wig for one of her meetings just because a client didn't trust blondes or brunetttes.
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