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Review of Where Did I Go?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is so touching. A elderly woman looks in the mirror and wonders.
She looks though old photos and wonders.
She shows her granddaughter the picture of her in her youth but the granddaughter wonders.
The woman understands that she will be remembered by those that love her the way she is.
The past is gone. The wrinkles are here but hugs are worth all the wrinkles in the world.

Thank you for sharing this sweet piece.
Out of the mouths of babes. Right?


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Review of Lonely  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a man doing some soul searching. He is so miserable living alone. Apparently they had been together for a long time. He made mistakes and didn't trust her. He restricted her with his constant demands.
Anyway a number of things sent her packing.
Well, he is so sorry and hopes to reach out to her.
Will it work?
Only time will tell.

By the way. Love that beautiful butterfly on your port.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of My Lost Love  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Don't we all remember our first love. A lot of the time it doesn't work out. So those wonderful memories linger surrounded by a blanket of 'what ifs'.

Here the character shares the desire to rekindle that first love if it should ever be possible.
He wants her to come back and give it a second chance. He even asks for God to help with this effort to reunite them.

Those things that reach us down to our core direct us to His power and love.

The font adds well to the piece.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He is alone because of mistakes he has made. When he finally remembers her. His first love. Like so much of his life he let her slip through his fingers. In his mind tonight he is really fighting to survive. He thinks of her and pictures the light she still brings to him in his darkest hours. He is struggling to reach her and her safety.
Although she cast a light for him she is hidden in the fog of life and carried away by the wind.
When he finally reaches the shore, looking up, his heart crashes because she is forever gone.

This is really good.
Reminds me of the old song by Against the Wind.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Isn't it wonderful to read about a couple that made it work? For fifty years they did all they had to do to make a strong foundation for their future and their loved ones.
The work was hard but so worthwhile.
The chance to share a loving smile with all those hearts brought together as one.
All in a circle of life and love that few have known.
Their example will be an inspiration for generations to come.

Thank you for the lovely and touching piece.



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Review of Im so broken</3  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece we find a woman writing a letter.
She knows she messed up so bad that it can't be fixed. That doesn't stop the feeling she still holds for her partner.
She understands an 'I'M SORRY' won't be enough to repair.
The mere thought of never holding this person again is more than can be dealt with.
The final entry is that she still feels love no matter what.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We need to escape from our planet. There is another one found. We send some of our people there. A war breaks out and we defeat them.

Now, those of our species that have survived are on this new planet. What will happen now?

Were there others from the other species visiting on another unknown planet? Could they come back to claim there original planet again?

What about the fact that this planet can sustain life? What if it somehow effects our genetics.
What if we began to show signs of the former species and their powers.
Will the mixed people hide? Will the mixed people be a targets?
Or what if the mixture creates death?
What if the planet is now contaminated by mutant deadly beings?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Monsters  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She tries to fight her demons yet they find a way in. It has been going on for a while and has her a bit beat down. All the garbage those demons tell her about her chances of seeing the light, is as worthless as an old worn out tire.

She isn't stupid and she knows about faith. She has fallen more than once and gotten right back up again.
So now, she is going pooh-pooh at them and shaking off the fear.
With Jesus as her inspirational guide, can't no one really get her down.

As our author reminds us, have faith in God and yourself. Use those Heavenly Words to help you find a way.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


As I read this funny thing all I could think about was part of our government.
Full of fruitcakes and totally consumed with nothing.

As our character finds one after another in the characters office; some of the insanity sounds really familiar in any office.
Fruitcakes a la mode driving down the white house road. Showing up for meetings and giving all the greetings.

Meaning absolutely nothing, twiddling their thumbs until lunch break. Agenda overflowing but nothing gets to going.

However there is Pork project hocked on to a bill that will take care of fruitcakes from now on. 4 out of 5 will be on permanent paid leave and the rest will take turns baking real fruitcakes.

Thanks for the laughs and for sharing.




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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a touching and inspirational piece for this evening.
How can any of us reading this feel any thing but humble and thankful?
When we think of the things God has blessed us with and then see someone so happy with his gifts; it really make you take a second look.
Of all those in the church that sees his wonders it is surely that young boy.
Give this touching piece a read or two. Find out something about yourself between the lines.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review of Eighteen  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is young and just starting a new chapter in her life.
She has been waiting for this time for all the school years; like most kids.
Well, here it is and she is overwhelmed.
What to do? How to do it? Everything is on her now. Her goals are out there waiting but can she actually achieve them?

All the doubts seems like giant mountains right now. Soon she will find her footing and take the steps she has prepared for.
Just right now, she needs to catch her breath.
Then watch her fly.
She can do it.

Thanks for sharing.


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Review of Scruffy  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The story is written from the little puppy's point of view.
On his walk he becomes a bit adventurous and gets lost. The darkness is beginning to fall and the puppy is afraid.
Before long he hears his masters voice. Faster than fast he runs and jumps into the safety arms waiting for him.

I like happy endings.
Thank you for sharing.
The puppy picture is adorable.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A little boy felt left out, as the other children played. That wasn't suppose to be that way.
One of the children went behind a tree and began screaming. The other children ran to see why. Each froze at the sight including our character.

The explanation is sad.
Very unexpected.
Good twist.
Good descriptions.
Easy to follow the events.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Song for Francis  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a beautiful piece. I had to read it over and over again. I can picture him with his hands outstretched and preaching to the birds and animals.
They weren't afraid of him and listened to his words about our Lord.
Think of all the Lord's blessed handy work that so many never take notice of.

St Francis was a simple man and felt blessed for God's love. At first he felt insignificant and unworthy. Although he felt humble, to be loved by birds and animals alike brought him such joy.
Next time you see a statue of him; notice how the birds make it there resting place. Could your heart begin to understand how much they are loved.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece on this blessed Sunday.







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Review of River  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a thoughtful piece about life.
The river of life continues to flow. We grow as individuals as it flows.
Some will use this flow as an inspiration to create beauty. As Thoreau considered the Concord River his muse, bringing his thoughts and wonder of this talent to mankind.

Then Chapin considering nature running in constant circles. First the moon then the dawn and back again. Even the chance of meeting someone in life again is likely because of the interwoven circles.

When the end comes, will we have created beauty as nature does and find the familiarity Harry spoke of?

Will we embrace the beauty we are blessed with and share it with others?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Monster Mash 2014  
for entry "Night Game
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This was creeeeeeeeeeeepy and ickeeeeeeeeeeeeeey and ooeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey and gooeeeeeeeey.
The poor lady thing didn't have a chance in the dark of night.
I know you wanted a one star but I just couldn't do it.
Considering the imagination and the clever last line; my thought forced 2 stars on you.

Good job
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of AN INDIAN'S DREAM  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author opens up her heart in this piece. There was so much done to her people so long ago. She cries even now for those dreams lost and their land as well.

Can money or trinkets bring any of them back?
Can the eagle watch from above the love that is gone for Mother Nature?
Can the owl watch the forest and warn of evil coming?
Can the white buffalo bring victory and respect to them again?
Are those long paths of pain and tears, left for all to see?
Are the rocks along those paths stained with children and elders blood?
Do those promises and papers blow aimlessly by the mountain winds?
Do you see their spirits on the horizon and hear their songs across the valleys?
Do you see the tears in the young ones eyes?

Thank you for sharing




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Review of Deceiving Ways  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He is letting her into his heart again. He is under no illusion she might cheat again. He wants something to hold on to. Something to count on. Something to believe in.
But can he have that with her?
They have been down this road so many times and he is always left hanging. Wondering why. Thinking of her words and how they meant nothing at the time.

Then they get together, talk, become united again with more and more promises.
This poor guy loves her enough to try one more time. Lets pray she is worth it.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Our Love  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It might come the time when one of the partners decides that he loves her enough to let her go. he wants her to be happy and he knows he isn't doing the job. Staying away and leaving her lonely. Taking her for granted and watching their love fall apart.
Finding the strength to do what's right isn't an easy task. It would be so much simpler to put the blame on the other person and leave Scott free.
Our character might have made mistakes but he knows what is right and wrong. He is accepting his fault in this tragic love story. He wholeheartedly wishes her all the best and to find someone worthy of her.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Being part of humanity has some special circumstances involved. As soon as one human becomes strong enough to take control of the other human; we loose our free will.
Then what are we?

Lets say that one human is in charge but that human has forgotten about morals and intellect. Perhaps even forgot about love and feelings or compassion.

Lets say that human is nothing more than an empty shell with the power to transform and move another about as ordered.

In other words that one human is pulling the strings as the other helplessly dangles as the wind blows back and forth like a pendulum.

Shouldn't we have more to do with our existence than to be a puppet on a string. Should we allow one to control us? NO.

Should we not stand up and find that humanity that once was ours? As the piece suggest, humanity is sad. We don't have to let others destroy what happiness we find or joy we feel. What right do they have to pick at our flaws and make fun of our choices we make.

Stand up, fight for you.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


An elderly man is going fishin by himself. His wife is gone on without him and his son has his own life elsewhere.
The elderly man reflects on his life and how things are moving slower now.
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Then his mind is carried away on the wings of the past. To those times when he was young and his wife gave him a son. She was pretty and he misses her. When the son and dad finished fishing there would be one really good dinner.
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Then he comes back to today. He has a big fish on the line. Heavy in weight tells him that the fish must be old. Finally after a struggle; he lands it.
Looking at the elderly fish and thinking of himself; he decides she needs to keep on going like he does.
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The best part of the story comes next. The part that will change his life. The part that brings joy to his heart.

Thank you for sharing.
You words brought the piece together well and believable.
I love happy endings.





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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Apparently at one time there was a contest on WDC about a good rant.
Well our author rants about reviewers.

Putting them into 3 different categories.
Nitpicking
A-hole reviews and raters
I am God

Well there are nitpickers; that can be no doubt.
There are also those that find insult the objective.
Then there are those that feel their opinion is the be all end all.

The opinionated piece goes on and on to make a point.
Try to look at others work and realize it took a lot of time and effort. Don't just blow it off like it was a feather caught on a blustery day.
Find something inside it that shows meaning.
Sometimes the meaning is obvious and sometimes it take time and thought.

Any way you look at it, we all had to start somewhere.
Give the author a fair shake. Words can help to build them up or tare them down.

Thank you for sharing.




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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Young boys on a camp out have to welcome any new members in a special way.
To pass the new boy must eat a disgusting T-rd dog.
As our character gets closer to the moment of truth; he must have been a lovely shade of green.
His friend was taunting him with the object that very well could remain in his digestive system for eternity.

The ending made me feel better.
Glad it came about the way it did.
Sometimes kids can get a bit carried away.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of A Fallen Angel  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a man calling his lady an angel.
Well, even angels need to know where they stand.
The man thinks she might want to be free and says it's ok.
Perhaps she was expecting a different answer.
She begins to leave and it finally dawns on him he better speak up.
So he tells her how much he will miss her. How she is the best of them all.
Being a woman, that statement right there would tend to really p-ss me off. Like how many are there and where does she fit in the line.

The thought of her leaving makes him sick, he says.
Still he continues on with a guilt trip and she comes running back. Promising her no worries or fear.

I read this piece three times and finally figured out what he was doing.
He is playing her like a fiddle. More than likely in about 3 or 4 weeks she will need reassurance again.
Never forget, he admitted there were others.(she was the best) What does he tell the rest?



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us an uplifting piece this evening. The fact that a writer has a passion for the work. A dedication and the acceptance that there may be good or bad reception of the piece submitted.
Still the writer's heart keeps doing what it does. It dreams and converts those dreams to the pen.
Indeed we are blessed because we never will give up.

Thank you for sharing.


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