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Review of Never say never  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a woman who doesn't have a pet. There are reasons given. She sees her invaders coming to her door.
Kind hearted, whether she admits it or not, she opens a can of tuna to feed the mom and babies.
Invaders in her garden but still welcome to her care.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Night  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Oh how the night holds the magic when two people are in love. The moon, with a big smile, casting it's light. The stars scattered about. The stardust softly falling on the lovers. A just a bit of moonbeams to top it off.

Days are great but the night, oh the night, is when lovers dreams come true.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Unrequited  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She stands in the background and watches the young woman giving so much to a cold man. Young love is felt by the young woman and doesn't understand that being taken for granted isn't right.
The watcher is only concerned with the young woman and how she will eventually be hurt. Years will pass by and she will slowly become less and less of herself. She could let her pride take over and never retreat from the situation. Upholding her dignity is what matters after a while.
Admitting that all the nay sayers were right is hard to swallow.
So her mother watches in pain.
Her mother can see the signs of her life being repeated right before her eyes.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece to inspire and motivate us this beautiful evening.
The piece takes us through the excitement of childhood. How things are simple then and our parents are the ones we count on.

Then comes adulthood, and with it comes bumps in the road. Things might be going just fine and then WHAM, here comes the storm.
How we deal with and get through the storm says a lot about how we are growing in our character. How we turn to God tells about how we are living in his words.

Storms are part of life. If we can't endure the storms how will we enjoy the blessed sunshine.

Most important part;

Please be patient with me..... I shall come forth as pure gold

Just remember, as the song goes, God's not through with me yet.

Thank you for sharing and caring.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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Here we have a character reflecting on married life. Trying and investing honestly in the marriage brought only disappointment and betrayal.
Now comes the part of coping with the knowledge that the one you thought you could trust is a liar.
Vows, were they merely words for the ceremony?
Sneaking around, was it fun and made it more exciting?
Was any thought given to the despicable actions that were taken?
Then the thought of looking at the one you are suppose to love and telling lies constantly.
Eventually you get caught in your web of lies.

Then what?

So if our character sounds bitter, why not?


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Review of Wings  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What if your life was going well and someone took your freedom away. Your wings won't allow you to fly any longer. You can't achieve your goals and can't reach above your misery.
Finally, after realizing you weren't the kind to be broken or caged, the one responsible feels guilty and wishes to turn things around.

That happens sometimes, whether it be a parent or lover, they can say something to hurt a person. That hurt will turn into depression and loss of enthusiasm. Before long, what a person wants waits in the sidelines and is overrun by others ideas.

Thank you for sharing.




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Review of One Hundred Words  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a image of a garden. Tending the garden with the cool breeze encircling. The sun helps with the growth as well as the soil. The insects take their turns doing their insect things. Spider webs catching flies.

You did well with the restrictions on the piece. With the word count and the fact words couldn't be repeated. That's not easy.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of A dying breed?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us how our society has changed. The values that once were so important were thrown out the window a long time ago.
There isn't any mutual respect for one another any longer.
The population is so large now; its hard to make a friend or trust another.
Do we have time any longer to stop and smell the roses? Instead big business makes sure those roses are replaced with concrete parking lots.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is really pretty. Just think about a rainbow and two people looking across the valley.
A soft wind gently deepening their love.
Then the clouds carrying their dreams on the wind. Safely they rest there and whisper from time to time how much their love brightens the world.
Is there magic as they vow eternal love?

I like this part:

For all time there's you and me
Forever . . .
As it should be


Thank you for sharing.
The color of the font works well. Like a rainbow.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we find a lovely heartfelt piece about how a wife has impacted her husbands life.
He feels so strongly that she is the be all and end all.
The very essence of her brings him happiness and removes any doubt. She has completely captivated him. He feels as though he can fly.
She makes the day warm and the night sweet. He wouldn't give away a single minute that he could share with her.

Sometimes, when we love someone, it's hard to put into words how we feel.
I think this man has done exceptionally well.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Obsesión  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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After a breakup we find our character still very much in love. Thinking about the past and the time they spent together, is still very vivid.
Obsessed with these feelings, not a night goes by without crying alone.
The room is empty but memories still linger. All together making things so difficult.
The lover has changed and our character can't fight it and just has to deal with still feeling love without it being returned.

Thank you for sharing.




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Review of Michael landon  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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This piece is about a good man. I remember him well in his portrayal of a father in Little House. The way he connected with the girls. How he always knew the right lessons to teach them about being kind.
I bet his own children felt so blessed to have him in their lives.

I think it was his eyes that spoke to the audience. When his little girl was lost on that tall mountain; he found her and cried.
Good heartwarming TV.
A far sight from TV now.
I still watch that show when I can.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of The Haunted Room  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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Here we have a hotel that tries to accommodate all its clients. A strange looking gentleman comes seeking a room. The owner tries to discourage him and even warns him.
The stranger feels this will be fine with him.
This one room is for those special clients.
Really special.

Thanks for sharing.
Creepy.


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Review of Lost  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The character was lonely in the sea of life and finally found someone to end the loneliness.
As time went by the lover began to pull back. Lack of trust was beginning to bring about uncertainty. The relationship was suffering.
Our character was willing to help get over the problems from the past but was met with hesitation from the lover.
Soon they drifted apart.
Our character still wants to try. Promising to be a listening friend as well as a lover.
Fearing the lover is now lost in the sea of life, what can be done?
Words aren't working. There is a wall to break down.
No one knows about tomorrow but if given the chance our character will help find the path back to what they had.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Another Royal baby is coming.

All the fuss over the first one and here we go again.
Wonder what it will be this time?
Harry is getting farther and farther from the thrown.
Hope everything goes well for mom and dad.

Thank you for sharing the news.

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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He came home late and she was already mad.
The dinner was cold and he had the nerve to gripe. She finally told him about her condition.
He was in shock. How could this be because they hadn't be together in a long time.

Well, this wasn't one of those helpless women you might meet everyday. She forgot to take her other pill. He dropped to the floor in fear.

Oh well, he will be a cheater no more.

Thank you for sharing and the catchy ending.
Wasn't suspecting it at all.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We have a country girl who is unhappy about her shoes. She has some fancy ones but no one likes them. She can't dress fancy that often, so they set in their boxes alone.
Being a country girl, she has to make sure she has the proper kinds of shoes to walk around in dirt and wear with her jeans.
She has boots but they can't get wet.
Most of the time she wears sneakers which brings about her sorrow.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Shiver  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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What can you do if the one you love doesn't act like you exist? Two people living in the same place but strangers inside and out. No words to say.
There have been excuses but they don't fly.
Everything is falling apart. If the other person doesn't want to save the relationship then you are fighting a loosing battle. It takes two to make a marriage and two to sustain one.
If one stops and doesn't care any longer, what are you fighting for?
If there were, at least, some talking to understand what's up. That would help.
Being confused with total silence and neglect can turn love to hate. After so long, leaving wont be a problem at all. Why stay where you aren't wanted or loved.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Something is wrong as the cat waited outside the boys room. Her food bowl was empty and had been for a long time.
Finally the cat, the very unhappy cat, decided to go down to the den.
There she found the dog barking and barking. The dog was very sad and unhappy too but for a very different reason.
Finally the cat finds food.

What an ending.
Caught me by surprise.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of MOURNING  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When we loose someone we love we go through a series of emotional challenges. The grief is so deep inside. As we age, we find illness and pain are just part of it.
After a while it becomes to much and we wonder how much longer before fate steps in.
Right now our character is so depressed that there is no doubt God is in charge.
Secretly wanting it to come sooner than later.

Thank you for sharing.
This piece should be easy for many to relate to.



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Review of Sunsets  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


To share a spectacular sunset with the one you love is better than gold.
Our author brings to life the colors and transition of the clouds and the sun as it makes it's way below the horizon.
This is peaceful and touching.
Using the lovers eyes as mirrors to view the sunset. Those eyes capturing the view and heart as the piece suggest.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Woods  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Alone in the woods she is running from hurt. She is troubled and is escaping the torment.
She hears a noise when she stops to rest. The noise makes her run farther into the woods.
She can't figure out where it is coming from. There is the noise again.
She makes her way out of the woods and realizes where the noise is coming from.
She was surprised but when she reads the message she was even more frightened.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Never a Father  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a sad piece about a father who never has been able to really be a parent. He has children but circumstances have kept him from them.
Divorce is hard on everyone.
Missing out on the everyday excitement of watching the children grow is what carries so much regret for this man.

Thank you for sharing this piece.
Time passes so quickly and you turn around and they are all grown up.



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Review of Free Once More  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Right now she is in a place that she feels she can't reach her full potential. She calls it a cage.
Did she create this cage out of fear. The door is wide open. She could move on anytime she wants to. No one is keeping her there except her self and her insecurities.
She needs to fly like a bird. Be all she can be. Sure she might be a bit hesitant but is it really wise to let opportunities slip through her hands.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Cars  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


For some unknown reason a man begins to see tragic images of the future. They were like nightmares but showed up in the news the next day. The last one he saw was him being hurt.
Because of that he never gets in a car. Like he feels he can change the future. Avoiding cars is his answer.

Interesting piece.
Creepy
Thank you for sharing.


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