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I am merely a reader.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What better place to have a heart to heart than in the beauty of nature.
Our character begins his walk deep in thought and decides this day to find out how his heart feels about certain things.

How many times have we been faced with a decision and relied on our brain and not considered our heart.
I know I have done that before.
So this time he is going to listen to the wisdom of his heart. His heart inspires him to write. Explained how the words will come like a water fall. Filling the pages with what matters most to him.
Using his artistic talent; think of the lovely yet engrossing things he could put to pen.

His heart is glad to finally be a part of his endeavors. The man promises to turn over a new leaf and listen more to his creative passionate side motivated by his heart.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Tears and Rain  Open in new Window.
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What does one do when you know your friend is hurting and you can't physically touch them or hold them.
In this piece we find a poem that our author hopes will help.
A reassuring tone. A compassionate group of words to reach those many miles away.
Explaining tears can fall like rain; yet behind those rain clouds lingers the sun.
So tears are therapeutic and strengthen the soul.{I LIKE THAT}

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Bold  Open in new Window.
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I will not dissect your work.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we find a motivational piece.
The author tells us to believe in ourselves.
Don't let things stand in our way.
Have a plan and some goals and stick to them.

If you don't learn to fly while you have the chance; something might stand in your way later.
So while it's just you and your dreams; dream to the fullest, plant those feet on that right path and never say you can't do it.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two seasons dueling it out. The summer is in command right now. Everyone is on the summers side. There is still too much to do. Too much fun to have. To much sunshine to enjoy. But wait, there is a breeze in the air. That pesky Autumn in trying to force it's way upon the scene. It won't be easy. Summer is still dominant. Then they try to negotiate.

Of course we all know what will happen.
Thank you for sharing this unique spin.

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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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I will not dissect your work.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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This is sweet and heartfelt.
The author brings us a tribute to moms out there. Reminding us that all the things we do for our children stay inside them forever.
Sure, life might keep them busy, but there comes a time when moms need to hear the words.
Just for her, love coming her way, nothing can stop it on this special day.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Freezing Cold  Open in new Window.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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One can't help but feel sorry for these poor guys. In a ice cold pond just to satisfy their boss and a charity event.
Well, needless to say they start talking. To be quite honest, one would expect at least one that wanted revenge.
Well, true to human nature, there is one. Look out mister boss man.

Well, they get him good.
I love happy endings.
Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Corporate World  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece about working. How we must work to survive. How we are taken for granted by upper management. How we can easily be replace if they decide to.
We get our pay checks and most go to bills. A few coins go to a bit of enjoyment but all too soon it back to the grind again.

For some crazy reason; we the little guy, is suppose to make it on virtually nothing and the big guys are doing more than fine.
They are eating lobster and we bologna, if we are lucky.

Then you get down to the important stuff; the love our families hold for us. When we say our final breath we won't be alone. When they take that final walk there may not be many goodbyes.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of A Rose  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A love came in his life today. A rose of such beauty he figures he can settle for a bit of a thorn prick. No minimal pain will turn him away; knowing that this is his new love today, tomorrow and in the future.

Right now they are inseparable cause he aint no fool. Finding such a special lady doesn't happen every day.

Thank you for sharing.
Like the font as well.






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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He found it was time to close the door on yesterday. All the pain and sadness needed to stay away.
Who would have thought that a new life and love would come his way? A heart to help him all the rest of the days of his life.
Forgetting all the pain and looking forward to tomorrows.
A better happier life is so worthwhile.
To realize that every new dawn gives one more day to love and be loved.

Thank you for the feel good piece and a bit of inspiration this evening.


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Review of THESE OLD HANDS  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


While the piece suggest getting old isn't for sissies; it indeed is true.
This man has used his hands to show love and commitment.
To show compassion and courage.
Willing to put his life on the line for others and his country.
There may be scars but they happened over time.
Nothing has been easy for him but it's all been worthwhile.
Just to find his loving partner waiting with a smile.
Life has given ups and downs but never will his heart let go of those things our hero knows.
To be a leader as he is with an honest grateful heart; there will be many who remember those hands who helped them make it through.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A mom is on a business trip, when she gets a call from school about her daughter not feeling well.
The mom can't come right away, so she does what she knows will work.
A soft soothing voice to help the girl calm down.
Moms are funny like that. We have a way of doing things to help our children while others stand by and don't know what to do.
I am sure the mom was a bit frightened for her daughter but from her reassuring conduct she took care just find.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose Author IconMail Icon
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I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was at the mail box and trying to figure out where the post card came from.
It was indeed a mystery and she was a bit unnerved.
She needed to see if someone had been in her house.
She search for something that meant so much to her but it was gone.
Why would someone take her collection?

Then, the best part of the day happened.
She is more than happy and completely overwhelmed by surprise.
I like happy endings.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Hidden Indentity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Most young people want to go to high school and be accepted by the other kids.
There seems to always be a group of kids that find it amusing to pick on someone a bit different.
No matter how hard and all the effort, nothing seems to work.
So the young person wears a mask that seems she doesn't give a flying flip what others think.

This causes pain inside as though they are constantly judge her.
Hurtful words echo through her ears but, unfortunately, they are deliberately heard to hurt.
Why do kids have to be that way?
I remember it when I was in school like forever ago.
That same culture of bullying still exists.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Friends  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us the importance of friends in our lives.
Some friends are merely casual friends but others are those that invest in your well being.
They find the good parts of you and point them out to you.
They bring us a kinship that no other can do.
Most of all they help you reach your dreams and are excited for you when you succeed.

What is better than a true friend.
Though they may be few and far between; hang on tight to the ones that are golden.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of What is Love?  Open in new Window.
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is sweet and touching. Loving and giving.
As the piece suggests to us love has many dynamics.
That understanding smile that warms your heart.
That quiet song that you sing inside and a dance you feel in your heart.(I LIKE THAT PART).
Giving yourself unselfishly to someone you love.
Missing them is almost without explanation.
Knowing when things are good or bad your love will keep you together.

Thank you for sharing this piece that shows love isn't a mere word but a way of life.







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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man just starting his day, watches out his window at the bird feeder.
In the beginning no birds were there.
Then six different kinds of birds all come one at a time. They seem to get along fine until more of their kind come. They then form groups and begin fighting and acting out.

One could see this in people as well.
Say there are several students from different countries all in one class room. They get along fine but when school lets out; they form groups of their own kind.
Now, instead of overlooking their differences some in the group point them out.
Society is the same way.
Too bad we just can't get along.


Thank you for sharing and bringing us a message.
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Review of Perpetual Hell  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a sad but real piece about a woman who has lost herself in the misery of dementia.
A touch frightens her. She screams for no apparent reason. The life seems to have drifted out of her eyes. Recognizing anything familiar is never to be again.
She is only fifty but the disease has left her without memories or identity.
She is indeed in a H-ll.

Thank you for sharing.


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I am merely a reader.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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He is a player while she wants commitment.
They seem enchanted by each other but it is short lived.
She has been around and knows what he is.
She knows he will eventually break her heart.
Still she falls for his sweet talk but ends up escaping the pull of him.
She chooses to protect her heart and moves on.
He is welcome to look about for other conquests, while she remains steadfast in her determination to find a man worthy of her. In her heart she knows she deserves better.

Thank you for sharing.


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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us two different people who begin to pray.

He had his needs on his mind and didn't hesitate to ask God on his behalf.

She, on the other hand, is thankful in her prayer for those things He has given her and wants only to serve Him.

Think about it when you pray.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Creativity  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece about creativity.
How in the artist's mind there are many thoughts and images.
Once they begin to come to life they take on a mind of their own.
Turning a few ideas, both in words or visions, into a consuming entity that must continue until it's finality.

As the saying goes;
The Whole is greater than the sum of it's parts.


Thank you for sharing.


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I am merely a reader.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


I would guess our character is a teen.
During his evening alone he did something bad.
He knows he must face his parents as the time gets closer.
What to do?
They told him to be careful but accidents happen.
He knows if he had done as he was told there wouldn't be an issue at all.

Here they come.
How long will it take for them to notice what he did?
Not long at all.
After all how often does one look at a clock throughout the day.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of My Favorite Bison  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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OH my goodness what a friendship. What love shown to a creature and then it shown back. For those that hurt animals; they should really read this.
Some forget that animals have feeling and they hurt and they love too.

I couldn't believe you actually stuck your whole arm inside his mouth to save him from swallowing that.
Then him lifting you with his horns. Wow.

This is so sad but at least he is at peace now.
If ever you think you don't reach your readers heart, think again.

Thank you so much for sharing and caring as you do to for the helpless ones that can't help themselves.

Love the pictures too.

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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Apparently our character has tried over and over again to win.
Well, we all know there are always winners and losers.
There is discouragement felt in the piece.
Like why try again, it will just be the same.
With a grumble in the heart and a negative attitude present, one might just let this competition go.

Thank you for sharing and keeping it real.


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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Wouldn't it be great to look back on your life and feel like you did pretty darn good.
We have a lady here who feels like the choices she has made have led her down the right path.

There appears to be no regret in the piece.
A bit of contentment is felt as well.
She might even feel confident enough to help others on their journey of life.
Maybe helping those who doubt their capabilities.
A positive person to teach others to be positive.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of The Zombie Diner  Open in new Window.
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


An strange ad lured a man to a place of no return.
The people that ran the joint made no 'bones' about the content of the food.
To even investigate must make a person wonder. Why in this world or cosmos would a temptation lead him there.
Needless to say, the ending wasn't good for our Curious Hunter.
He does hold a special ranking on the menu though.

Well, you did it again. Totally good poetry but yucky ucky barfy barfy.

Thank you for sharing YOURSELF COMPLETELY.



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