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Review of THESE OLD HANDS  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


While the piece suggest getting old isn't for sissies; it indeed is true.
This man has used his hands to show love and commitment.
To show compassion and courage.
Willing to put his life on the line for others and his country.
There may be scars but they happened over time.
Nothing has been easy for him but it's all been worthwhile.
Just to find his loving partner waiting with a smile.
Life has given ups and downs but never will his heart let go of those things our hero knows.
To be a leader as he is with an honest grateful heart; there will be many who remember those hands who helped them make it through.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is only two years old but doesn't like green beans.
The family is out to dinner an all you can eat buffet.
The routine was for the child to try different things.
She decided right from the beginning that those green beans were not her friend.
Mom said try some carrots then.
That left the smart little girl with an option.
She wanted mom to eat the carrots.
Mom says no.
The child figures if mom can so she can too.
This is a cute piece.

You got to love kids. They can really surprise you sometimes.
Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A mom is on a business trip, when she gets a call from school about her daughter not feeling well.
The mom can't come right away, so she does what she knows will work.
A soft soothing voice to help the girl calm down.
Moms are funny like that. We have a way of doing things to help our children while others stand by and don't know what to do.
I am sure the mom was a bit frightened for her daughter but from her reassuring conduct she took care just find.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was at the mail box and trying to figure out where the post card came from.
It was indeed a mystery and she was a bit unnerved.
She needed to see if someone had been in her house.
She search for something that meant so much to her but it was gone.
Why would someone take her collection?

Then, the best part of the day happened.
She is more than happy and completely overwhelmed by surprise.
I like happy endings.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Hidden Indentity  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Most young people want to go to high school and be accepted by the other kids.
There seems to always be a group of kids that find it amusing to pick on someone a bit different.
No matter how hard and all the effort, nothing seems to work.
So the young person wears a mask that seems she doesn't give a flying flip what others think.

This causes pain inside as though they are constantly judge her.
Hurtful words echo through her ears but, unfortunately, they are deliberately heard to hurt.
Why do kids have to be that way?
I remember it when I was in school like forever ago.
That same culture of bullying still exists.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Friends  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us the importance of friends in our lives.
Some friends are merely casual friends but others are those that invest in your well being.
They find the good parts of you and point them out to you.
They bring us a kinship that no other can do.
Most of all they help you reach your dreams and are excited for you when you succeed.

What is better than a true friend.
Though they may be few and far between; hang on tight to the ones that are golden.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of What is Love?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is sweet and touching. Loving and giving.
As the piece suggests to us love has many dynamics.
That understanding smile that warms your heart.
That quiet song that you sing inside and a dance you feel in your heart.(I LIKE THAT PART).
Giving yourself unselfishly to someone you love.
Missing them is almost without explanation.
Knowing when things are good or bad your love will keep you together.

Thank you for sharing this piece that shows love isn't a mere word but a way of life.







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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man just starting his day, watches out his window at the bird feeder.
In the beginning no birds were there.
Then six different kinds of birds all come one at a time. They seem to get along fine until more of their kind come. They then form groups and begin fighting and acting out.

One could see this in people as well.
Say there are several students from different countries all in one class room. They get along fine but when school lets out; they form groups of their own kind.
Now, instead of overlooking their differences some in the group point them out.
Society is the same way.
Too bad we just can't get along.


Thank you for sharing and bringing us a message.
Yellow
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Review of Perpetual Hell  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a sad but real piece about a woman who has lost herself in the misery of dementia.
A touch frightens her. She screams for no apparent reason. The life seems to have drifted out of her eyes. Recognizing anything familiar is never to be again.
She is only fifty but the disease has left her without memories or identity.
She is indeed in a H-ll.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He is a player while she wants commitment.
They seem enchanted by each other but it is short lived.
She has been around and knows what he is.
She knows he will eventually break her heart.
Still she falls for his sweet talk but ends up escaping the pull of him.
She chooses to protect her heart and moves on.
He is welcome to look about for other conquests, while she remains steadfast in her determination to find a man worthy of her. In her heart she knows she deserves better.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us two different people who begin to pray.

He had his needs on his mind and didn't hesitate to ask God on his behalf.

She, on the other hand, is thankful in her prayer for those things He has given her and wants only to serve Him.

Think about it when you pray.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Creativity  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece about creativity.
How in the artist's mind there are many thoughts and images.
Once they begin to come to life they take on a mind of their own.
Turning a few ideas, both in words or visions, into a consuming entity that must continue until it's finality.

As the saying goes;
The Whole is greater than the sum of it's parts.


Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


I would guess our character is a teen.
During his evening alone he did something bad.
He knows he must face his parents as the time gets closer.
What to do?
They told him to be careful but accidents happen.
He knows if he had done as he was told there wouldn't be an issue at all.

Here they come.
How long will it take for them to notice what he did?
Not long at all.
After all how often does one look at a clock throughout the day.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of My Favorite Bison  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


OH my goodness what a friendship. What love shown to a creature and then it shown back. For those that hurt animals; they should really read this.
Some forget that animals have feeling and they hurt and they love too.

I couldn't believe you actually stuck your whole arm inside his mouth to save him from swallowing that.
Then him lifting you with his horns. Wow.

This is so sad but at least he is at peace now.
If ever you think you don't reach your readers heart, think again.

Thank you so much for sharing and caring as you do to for the helpless ones that can't help themselves.

Love the pictures too.

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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Apparently our character has tried over and over again to win.
Well, we all know there are always winners and losers.
There is discouragement felt in the piece.
Like why try again, it will just be the same.
With a grumble in the heart and a negative attitude present, one might just let this competition go.

Thank you for sharing and keeping it real.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Wouldn't it be great to look back on your life and feel like you did pretty darn good.
We have a lady here who feels like the choices she has made have led her down the right path.

There appears to be no regret in the piece.
A bit of contentment is felt as well.
She might even feel confident enough to help others on their journey of life.
Maybe helping those who doubt their capabilities.
A positive person to teach others to be positive.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of The Zombie Diner  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


An strange ad lured a man to a place of no return.
The people that ran the joint made no 'bones' about the content of the food.
To even investigate must make a person wonder. Why in this world or cosmos would a temptation lead him there.
Needless to say, the ending wasn't good for our Curious Hunter.
He does hold a special ranking on the menu though.

Well, you did it again. Totally good poetry but yucky ucky barfy barfy.

Thank you for sharing YOURSELF COMPLETELY.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What can you say to your mom after all those years of love and caring?

Here we have a tribute and a heartfelt thank you from a daughter to her mom.
The daughter knows it has been hard but her mom did the best she could.
Always standing by her side through the good and bad.
Being a parent isn't easy but it is sure worth it when your child says something to make you feel like you did your best and then some.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A simple review has a reviewer feeling like she has been run over by a freight train.
All you can do is tell what you got from the piece. Some reviewers find errors and structural problems. Giving advice only to help others.

I have been on here for a few years and have had several people tell me my reviews are worthless and mere fluff. You know what, if I feel an emotion, I express that.

Besides think of your average reader. Do they sit down and dissect the book or do they find themselves inside the happenings in the book.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a woman with a problem.
The royal throne isn't serving her well.
While some people might use this as a meditation structure, others might use it to read a newspaper.

Our lady uses it to pray. To seek relief from a situation she doesn't like and certainly needs help with.
Eventually her prayers are answered turning her into one happy camper.

This was funny and lighthearted.
Thank you for sharing.



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Review of The Pit  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.

Our author brings us a piece about depression and despair.

The character finds himself falling into the pit of despair. The darkness surrounds him but far above he sees a small beam of light.
All he has to do is reach for it as if he were reaching for a life line.
Actually, he is doing just that.
He musters up courage he didn't think he had and hope he felt was lost and began pulling himself up rung by rung.

It's a tough climb but the light is getting closer. He feels more like himself now.
He is under no illusion that there might be another time he falls again.
Next time, however, he will know he can make it through.

Struggling with depression and despair can change ones outlook of life itself.
Our character is a fighter though. He fights for his life and wins.

Thank you for sharing this inspirational piece.




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Review of The Empty Box  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is strong even though she has been through a lot of disappointment. Two engagements, both by the same person, fell through.
She realizes how people change and even say things they don't mean. Sometimes people just want to be loved but when commitment comes into the setting they run away.

So an empty box is now a reminder of how change just might have turned out to be the best thing ever for her.
She holds no bad feelings for the lover even though betrayal is hurtful.
It is better she found out before taking vows than after.
Better not to invested a lot of time in a mere illusion with no foundation of truth.

Thank you for sharing.
Thank you also for showing others how they can accept this type of pain in a negative way or a positive way.
Moving on, being free from damaging chains that bind.




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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have our poor bull on an ordinary errand for his human. Off to the post office wearing a fashionable man purse. Plenty of room and lovely colors, any bull would catch anyone's eye.

The post office line is long. Finally at the counter comes the most ridiculous thing our government has done yet.
Who ever the post master general was at the time must have been a bit under the weather or had a bit too much to dr-nk.

We have all heard of the about the rule of SUPPLY AND DEMAND. Well this got thrown out the window while the printing was going on.

Thank you for this delightful piece.
It is funny to think brains like that are in charge.




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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Remember those old Star Trek shows? I remember to never miss one. Watching the TV Guide to stay up to date.
Well, here we have a bull who dreams of being at the helm of the ENTERPRISE.
There seems to be a bit of doubt as to whether the crew would follow a bull into uncharted territory.
What strikes me as really funny is how this brave bull, willing to travel the cosmos, is afraid of a Cling-on or two.

Thank you for the laugh and for sharing.



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Review of Sweaters  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever given a gift to someone you love and have it filled with sentimental value. Then they don't seem to get it.
That hurts inside.
As this piece suggest, a heartfelt gift was given and it ends up thoughtlessly on the closet floor.

One might draw a different conclusion. Does the love they share mean anything or is it being tossed about.

Thank you for sharing.


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