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Review of Lilly's Poem  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a sweet piece about a little girl who is loved. The description of her eyes and talking about her as a princess brings back so many memories of my daughter.
She may have a tiny little heart but her love for her mom is bigger than the a mountain.
As they grow, we moms, still look at them and see those little angel eyes that opened for the first time and said I love you.
Every day, there after those eyes will wrap around her heart and not let go.

Thank you for sharing and bringing back some special memories.


Yellow
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Review of Love me some me  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


After a break up, it is easy to think that you are a real looser. Also, you might think, why would any one love you again?
This piece gives us a wake up call.
That person left but you are still you. They choose to leave you. There are good things about you and don't let it get you to far down. After all, who left and who is missing out.
Who knows some talk might have saved things but the other person wasn't willing to invest the time. So who is the real winner here?
Pick yourself up, dust yourself off, start all over again. They are out there waiting for someone like you. Don't be down on yourself.
Think about it and realize it just might have been for the best.


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Review of Special Time  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sure we all get down now and then. If you really think about it, we should feel blessed to see another year.
As this piece suggests; time has come and gone at a rapid pace. Still he holds a smile on his face.
If we all wear that same attitude as a cloak. Nothing would get us down.
So thank God for one more year to love and be love. Thank Him for the birds that bring us their special melody.
The seasons each holding its own magic and how blessed we are to be a child of God.
LOVE THE PICTURE. BEAUTIFUL

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of News  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We have some curious boys looking for a way to make a buck.
We have a sheriff with the intention to keep an eye on those boys.
We have a deputy hesitating to investigate a strange finding.
People gather around the river to see what's going on.
Then a man is suddenly moving out of town.
His wife's whereabouts is a mystery.
Most of all we have the blessing of heavy rains. The rains came and cleared up so much

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Monster  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a piece to ponder this beautiful day.
Unfortunately man and his conduct has brought about evil in thoughts and actions.

Throughout history, with wars and religious differences, man has found little reason to live peacefully.
This monster, man created, has been having a field day. Watching and waiting for us to destroy our world and ourselves.
The more we conform to his will, the digger we dig ourselves nearer to the pit.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of Your Storm  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two friends in the same room. One happy and the other sad.
Why does the happy one feel guilty on such a sad day for the other.
What would you do?
Would you talk to the sad person and offer a listening heart. By listening, that won't take your joy away and it might even make you feel better.
Would you just walk off and leave the other person alone in their sadness?

The choices we make says a lot about our characters. Granted by listening you can't change anything but you were there for that sad person. Sometimes being there is worth more than one could know.

After all, wouldn't you want someone to be there for you?

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of random etchings  
for entry "Frog" 
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two kids are playing outside. The mom decides to check on them after an unusual sound.
One child is missing and the mom finds out the sister worked some magic on him.
Mom is a bit upset.
The little girl fixes things but the little boy changes back again on his own.

I remember that old show 'Bewitched'. When she had her daughter; she had to keep her under control to avoid problems like this.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Bleeding Heart  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


To love someone and know they don't love you is hard to deal with.
All the time and wishing won't result in change.
With so much to offer and no one to give it to; our character feels hopeless.
Perhaps the other person is cold and illusive because of other relations ships that caused pain.
Our character could use this as an excuse for why it can't happen.
Who is the character really kidding?
Dreaming that impossible dream and shedding those invisible tears, are something that must be hidden from view.
If it should ever be a relationship it must be real and not from pity.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The End  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A woman drives upset at her husband. He tries to reason with her and make her slow down but she doesn't like what he is saying to her.
He is trying to make her stop living in a fantasy. He wants her to except that things have changed and will never be the same again.
The more he talks the angrier she gets. She can't let go.
She won't accept what he is saying or why he is saying it.
He knows she has to start to heal so she can go on.
She is confused.
Soon she is stopped by the cops and brought back to reality.

Ending caught me by surprise. Good job.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She knows he is just playing games with her heart. As a consequence she is depressed about it. She is empty inside and he was to be the one to fill it. As it turns out his words are worth no more than feathers on the breeze.
The more she holds back the anger the more she is about to blow up.
The sad part is she really loved him and he just played the part.
She should walk away but her heart won't let her.
He should walk away but he has it too good right now to leave.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Invisible Tears  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She's looking for love to make this world a better place.
Someone to make her feel safe and to stop the invisible tears.
There must be happiness out there waiting just around the bend.
Love has a way of showing up when we least expect it. That face, those truthful eyes, the inviting smile and the open soul ready to love as well.
Don't give up; keep hope alive.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of What is Love?  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


How many of us have tried to define love.
Here our author reflects on different versions of what it might entail.
Could it be flowers, an arrow, candy, angels singing and rainbows.

When you get down to the nitty gritty these last two lines, pretty well says it all.

To me it's just the way
I feel when you're with me.'

Thank you for sharing this touching piece.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It only took a 'week' to apologize to her.
As she packed for her trip she listens but kept on packing.
He was feeling a bit insecure with her leaving for two weeks.
He even asked if she was coming back.
He took her to the airport and they parted.
Once he opened the door at home he knew the truth.
Sometimes enough is enough

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Something  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us how love can change our whole life. Finding that certain someone to make your life complete.
Here we have a woman in love and the reader can feel the excitement in the piece.
The happiness is so apparent.
There are shooting stars to light up the night.
If that doesn't say how wonderful she feels, I don't know what does.

Oh to feel so good, so new, so loved.
What a lucky lady indeed.

Thank you for sharing this touching and happy piece.



Yellow
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Review of The Collector  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a writer. It is the first snow and she collects the right words to express the sights she is seeing. Something so pristine can only be spoken about with purity.
If she were to step outside; she feels she might takes some of the magic away. So she waits until things begin to melt and then ventures out.
Granted all she collected in her mind is so determined to flow like a waterfall; she is in charge of her creativity.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Summer Life  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece our author reminds us of summer and all of the hours spent having fun with friends.
Of course there is some work like weeding the garden. Once that garden starts producing the work will be so worth it.
Going to the beach and the sandcastles.
We all remember that feeling like the summer might last forever.
Unfortunately it doesn't but there is always next year to start all over again.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Well, what can one say. There is a bit of funny venting going on here.

Good part:

Stuffing us like turkeys, with synonyms and antonyms,

It is so true we do open up our hearts in our work and sometimes being put down is a bit hard to take.

interesting take:
placing us on your literary skewers.

(YOU KNOW HOW PAINFUL THAT MUST BE.
WE KEEP PUTTING OUR HEART OUT THERE AND GETTING BURNT. HA!!!!!!!)

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A lady is dealing with a love that ended. She seems a bit surprise that it was so fragile. Like fine crystal it shattered but now there is only the black and white of truth. Was it really love or a simple illusion?
Most of the night she tried to understand and make some sense of things. She is alone in the morning sun and finds no warmth.
Her thoughts center on how this could happen and why. Maybe even blaming herself for what happened.
Could she have loved stronger?
Could she have given more time?

When you get down to the nitty gritty was she just a play thing? Perhaps only another name on the score card.
It's the other person loss for not being strong enough to at least explain why.




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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author reminds us that water can be serene or vicious.

The ocean, at times, appears vast and open to travel. Other times the ocean holds so much force it can turn an ocean liner upside down.

A river is smaller yes but it too can have a deceiving depth.

Creeks appear soft and one can see stones. Yet there can be hidden danger.

So there is no doubt that when water is in charge we best better get out of it's way.
A path of destruction will be left in it's wake.

Thank you for sharing a glimpse of nature with us this day.


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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Love the title.

Sitting there quietly as the day comes to an end. We find our author noticing how God's creatures lay down and rest. The forest is silent but yet magic is everywhere.
How many evening pass without listening to the silence. Before you lay your head down; pray and feel blessed. Be thankful for the bright blessed day and all it holds for you.
Welcome the dark sacred night and the peace only He can give.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us we all age. Our bodies will change and the years will be seen. Along the way, there have been good times and bad. Reflecting over everything; it hasn't been all that bad.
So have a positive attitude and be satisfied with the way you turned out.

After all, what more can you ask.




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Review of Burned  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It's funny how some people think they can betray a loved one and think they deserve a second chance.
This character gave a willing heart and had it tossed aside. Trusting that same person again is too much of a risk.
Meaningless talk won't be received and certainly holds no merit.

As this character; be strong and protect your heart. Be careful letting your guard down to quickly. Don't become vulnerable for more hurt. Take time to learn whether they mean what they say or if they are merely playing games with your heart.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Fireflies  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Fireflies aren't they a wonder? Here we have a piece about them. They go about twinkling. Children always try to catch them and laugh. I know I remember doing it when I was little.
Now, we grown ups, might find it a joy to watch the kids but what about the kid inside us.
Honestly, don't they bring that child out as well.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Beach Scene  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author shares a beautiful image of nature with us this day.
The beach is such a soothing place to collects ones thoughts.
Our author not only gives us images to create in our minds but sounds as well.
Drawing the reader in.
Even the bell on the buoy.
This piece is peaceful and well done.
A relaxing find on a hectic day.
Thank you for sharing.
Even the font soothes the eyes.



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Review of Springtime  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author shares the excitement of Spring with the reader this day.
Although each season is beautiful, the one that seems to be full of life is Spring.
All the trees and flowers start saying hello.
Of course the children find so much to do after a long winter.
There might be an occasional bit of rain but that's ok.
Play, eat hot dogs and enjoy the sun.

Thank you for sharing.


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