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Review of I testify  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good afternoon to you! I clicked on the Read and Review Section, and your poem "I testify" popped up. I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer my input on how I felt after reading it.

Your poem is full of inspiration. I enjoy poetry that can uplift a person's mood. You must have put a lot of thought into this, which means you must have worked on it for hours before deciding to submit it. I congratulate you on putting in the time and effort. You are a good writer. You are an inspiration. I encourage you to keep writing. Don't give up.
I hope your life is surrounded by good health, friends, thoughts, memories, love, and much happiness. I hope my review helped you. It's important to have God in your life.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you!

I clicked on the Read and Review Section, and your poem "The Battle's Blaze" popped up. I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer feedback on what I thought about after reading it and how it could be improved to sound better.

You said a lot in your writing. It was great to hear that the water won the battle in putting out the fire. The impact it had on me was impressive. It's amazing how much can be said with a few lines. Keep up with your writing. I encourage you to do that. Sharing your poem with the public can be scary at first. The more you write, the better you'll get, and the better you'll feel.

Let your life be filled with good health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and much happiness. I hope that my review was helpful to you. Let sunshine and laughter be a part of your daily routine. When downtimes come around, don't give up on your writing. Keep strong, be brave, and don't let the harsh criticism of others interfere with becoming a writer.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Summertime  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you!

I clicked on the Read and Review Section, and your poem "Summertime" popped up. I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer you my opinion about how I felt after reading it.

Your poem was excellent! I could surely tell how much thought was going on behind the scenes as you were writing it. I could feel the emotion behind it. I want you to continue with your writing. Sharing your poems and stories with others is a beneficial practice, as it contributes to your overall emotional well-being. The more you write, the better you'll get. Thanks for sharing this with the public.

I hope you experience a miracle of blessings in your life, including good health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and all the happiness that life can bring you throughout the rest of your lifetime.

I hope that my review was helpful to you.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review of The Liver Pump  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you! I clicked on the "Read and Review" Section, and your fictitious story, "The Liver Pump," popped up. Although I am not a professional reviewer, I can offer my opinion on how the story sounds and make corrections so that your story will sound better.

I found your story to be interesting. I have learned something about the medical field when you brought up the subject of liver pumps. You talked about a marathon runner at the age of 78 who felt herself as being younger when she had gotten one installed. Her hair became darker at the roots. She regained her vigor. She felt like she was 39 again. I felt happy; I felt like I wanted to be celebrating with them.

I hope that you will be blessed with miracles of health, friendships, thoughts, memories, and much love to last your whole lifetime.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening to you! I selected the Read and Review Section, and your poem, "The Pain of the World," showed up. Even though I am not a professional reviewer, what I can offer you is my opinion of what I thought of your poem, and correct what I think may be right ones to correct.

Your poem was an interesting read for me. As I was reading it, I could feel the pain of war. It was painful to hear the cries of individuals who had lost their loved ones due to the devastation of war. It pains me to hear that innocent people have to lose their loved ones due to a senseless war, and hear that people laugh when war is happening all around us.

I am praying for a miracle of blessing for you in your health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and that you will have much happiness in your life from here on out.

I hope that my review has lifted your spirits. Have a nice day.

I encourage you to keep writing. It is good to be able to share with others. It could help someone who is also experiencing grief when war is happening around them.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Muses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening to you! I clicked on the Read and Review section, and your piece, "The Muses" popped up. I am not a professional reviewer, but, what I can offer is my opinion on how much of an impact it had on me.

This inspirational piece is very well written. I enjoyed reading it. You put a lot of thought into your writing and I can tell it took some time to write it.

I encourage you to keep up with your writing. Your creativity really shone.

I hope that you will be blessed with many blessings of good health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and much happiness to last your whole lifetime through.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, and good evening to you! I clicked on the Read and Review Section, and your poem, "Your Original Scar" popped up. I am not a professional reviewer, but, what I can tell you, is my opinion on what I got from reading your poem.

The title of your poem should be capitalized on the the first letter of each word. The words in your poem spoke volumes to me. I can tell that this was an emotional piece to write. I liked how you described the scar as follows: In your scar, I read protection, as if your worst occurred before your pure self emerged, and bound, to a healing future. It's good to know that, even though a scar shows on yourself, doesn't necessarily mean that it's a bad thing. The first four stanzas read: You were born with a forceps slip, missed your blind eye, by a blink. A hello gash, and then the light, the first slice slashed from your raw face. That bloody newborn mark lit up your perfection and with the weeks was bleached to your own branding scar, A pearly dent, of half an inch in length, only clear to the eye in harsh light or when looking

I enjoyed reading this. It was interesting to see a scar portrayed in this way.

I hope that you have many miracle blessings of health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and much happiness.

I hope my review has helped you.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of A memory of you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening to you. Your story, "A Memory of You" popped up on the Read and Review section. I am not a professional reviewer, but what I have to offer, is my input on what my thoughts were on your story.

Although I didn't understand your story completely, I can relate to how you must have felt when you wrote it. First of all, I don't know what diptique is. It sounds like you were at a party and gave her some of this stuff. You sprinkled it on her hand to take her away from a woofer. It sounds like you were in love with this girl, and you caught her with someone else.

Your emotions must have been going wild. You may not have understood why. This could have been your best friend who ended up betraying you.

I encourage to keep on writing. It is good to share with someone what you're going through. I am glad that I was able to read it. It takes a lot of courage to share your story with the public, but don't give up. The more you practice writing, the better you become.

I hope you have many miracles of blessing in your health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and much love to last the rest of your life.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of A Strange Place  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, and good morning to you! Your prose, A Strange Place" popped up on the Read and Review Section. I am not a professional reviewer, but, I can give you my feedback on how I thought your prose resonated with me.

Your prose gave me something to think about. I can relate to the strange feelings one gets when shadows, those eerie things that can cause a scary reaction to come inside you. For instance, when I see myself in the moonlight and then I see my own shadow following me everywhere I go. It's a great feeling when those eerie moments go away, they disappear. The exhilartion is very satisfying.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Time Spent  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good morning to you! Your poem, "The Time Spent," popped up on the Read and Review Section. Although I am not a professional reviewer, I can give you feedback on how your poem resonated with me.

Your poem is interesting to read. Your poem rhymes well. Sometimes it takes a while to get words to rhyme, and you have managed to pull this off very well. I encourage you to keep writing. I am so happy that you shared your poem. It takes bravery to go out in public and share your work. I especially liked the last stanza of your poem: Those shifts so hell-bent Are simply time spent, but just paying the rent Will make you Clark Kent.

My hope for you is that you will have miracles of blessings in your health, friendships, memories, thoughts, love, and have much happiness in your life.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Oh Bother!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening to you. I hope that you are having a good day. Your NaNoWriMo 2023 Notes popped up in the Read and Review Section. You have to bear with me. I am not a professional reviewer; I can offer you feedback on your work based on my impressions after reading your story.

I had fun reading your story. I entered the NaNoWriMo Contest myself in November 2024. I was nowhere near the number of words needed to get a published novel. It gave me experience, and I got myself involved in the storyline. On the last page, I wrote, To Be Continued; I felt compelled to write more.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening to you! Your poem, "Raging Rapids: Millennial Waters", popped up in the Read and Review Section. I can give you feedback on how I felt after reading your poem, since I am not a professional reviewer.

Your poem was powerful. When I read it, I felt that you put a lot of time and effort into writing this poem. It was an enjoyable read for me. It kept me going. I could see myself saying that it made a lot of sense. I marveled at the way you handled each word with dignity and grace.

I want to encourage you to continue writing. You're off to a great start.

I hope you will continue to have miracles of blessings in your health, friendships, thoughts, memories, love, and lots of happiness throughout your life.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I solved your puzzle. I love the search a word puzzles. They're good exercises for the brain. Thanks for coming up with the Scooby Doo Puzzle. I like watching the cartoon, Scooby Doo. I encourage you to come up with some more puzzles. You have a great day.

My hope for you is that you will have a miracle of blessing in good health, good friends, good memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness the rest of your life.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello, and good afternoon to you! Your story, "Where There's Smoke" popped up in the Read and Review Section. I was reviewing your story, thinking I would be done in time to get credit, but I was being picked up for my 50th Sequim High School Class Reunion". I wasn't able to complete it in time, but I wanted to finish reading your story.

Your story was very well-written. Even though it was a little hard for me to read at times, and not particularly my topic of enjoyment, I found it to be good to read.

I am not a professional reviewer, but, what I can give you is my feedback on how I felt after reading your story.

My hope for you is that you will receive a miracle of blessing in your health, friendships, memories, thoughts, love, and have much happiness to last your lifetime.

I encourage you to keep up with your writing.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Anti-anarhisticki  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good morning to you! This is written in a language that I cannot understand. I would have read it, otherwise. I apologize for that. Your piece showed up in the Read and Review Section of Writing.com.

My hope for you is that you'll receive the blessings of a miracle. Good health, friendships, memories, thoughts, and happiness are what I wish for you for the rest of your life. Even though life is very uncertain right now, try to keep your head held high. You can survive with love in your heart.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of 'I hear no news'  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, and good afternoon to you! Your poem, "I Hear No New" popped up on the Read and Review Section. I am not a professional reviewer, but, what I can give you is feedback on how I felt after reading your poem.

I get the impression you've gotten so caught up in everything that you no longer would listen to anything. You didn't get the news, you just assumed that you and yours were happy. But it seemed like that was okay when you said so be it. I felt like I could get the whole picture of where you were coming from. I want to encourage you to keep on writing. I enjoyed reeding your poem . It got me to thinking about the way I feel sometimes. At the same time, I feel that the world will come around to meeting our needs and get along with everyone once again. I feel like we will have people that are friendlier to people . They will feel back to themselves again. I would like to encourage you to keep writing.

My hope for you is that you will find a miracle of healing in good health, good friendships, good memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Cactus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, and good afternoon to you! Your mystery thriller "Cactus" popped up in the Read and Review Section. I don't have the expertise in doing reviews, but, what I can offer is my perspective on how I felt after reading it.

You said a lot in 28 words. I wouldn't have thought of using a cactus as a weapon, but, when I thought about it, a cactus has stickers on it. They are sharp and they stay stuck on you. It kind of reminds me of a porcupine using its quills to stick you. The moral to this little story is don't mess around with a cactus or a porcupine because you just might get stuck.

My hope is for you to have a blessing of a miracle healing in good health, good friendships, good thoughts, good memories, and have much happiness to last throughout your lifetime.

I encourage you to keep writing. I see the potential of a good writer in you. Have a nice day.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you! Your short story, "The Old Man and the Ocean of Love", popped up on the Read and Review Section. Even though I am not a professional reviewer, what I can offer is my perspective on how your story made me feel after reading it.

Your story had a great impact on me It's good to hear other people hold on to hope, even when something not so good happens in their life, such as having a bad dream, or just experiencing a world of chaos in their lives. With all that's happening in the world around us, it's important to carry that hope.

I encourage you to keep writing. There are so many people in the world today that don't feel that they have any purpose in this life. Even in our dreams, when it's a bad one, you have to have hope. Keep hanging on to that. I appreciate you sharing your story. I believe that it will help others to grab onto hope.

I pray that you will have a miracle of blessing in good health, good friendships, good thoughts, good memories, love, and much happiness to last your entire life.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Play Pretend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you! My hope is that you will have a beautiful day. Your poem, "Play Pretend" popped up on the Read and Review Section. Even though I'm not a professional reviewer, what I can give you is my perspective on how your poem made me feel.

The way you expressed your feelings in this poem is very powerful. I could feel the emotion behind it. Playing Pretend can be either good or bad, it doesn't matter. When bad things happen in life, we can make believe or pretend that it's not as bad as it's proclaimed to be. We can feel better in a world filled with chaos, when we have hope. We have to have hope, otherwise, we will get nowhere. I keep thinking that our world will turn around for the better, eventually. Keep your eyes focused on God and His Son Jesus.

I encourage you to keep writing. Continue to see that there are still good people in this world. Your poem got me thinking.

My hope is that you will have a miracle of blessings in your life. May you have good health, good friendships, good memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness. Keep believing in yourself. I am glad to hear your words written down. Don't be afraid to share.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you! I hope that you are having a swell day. I am not a professional reviewer, but, I can offer my perspective on how your poem resonated with me. Your poem "Image Caught In Time" popped up on the Read and Review Section.

Your poetry was well-written. It was deep and powerful. It inspired me in a very good way. What I got out of it was that our minds are full of creativity just waiting to be explored. I have a very creative mind. Even though it may not be a reality, it's fun to take my mind into a different realm of thought. It's okay to share the brilliance of what our mind is capable of. Don't be afraid to express your thoughts, as long as it doesn't harm anyone.

Thank You for sharing such a beautiful poem with me. Keep up with your writing; I encourage you to do so.

My hope for you is that you will have a miracle of blessing in your health, friendships, memories, thoughts, and love, during your whole life. I hope that it is filled with much happiness.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Then and Now  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you! I hope that you are having a good day today. Your poem showed up on the Read and Review Section. I am not a professional reviewer, but, what I can offer, is my perspective on how your poem made me feel after reading it.

I am not a drinker. I'm not sure that I understand what the question was "Is that straw plastic?" My take on this is that when you are drinking, whether it's an alcoholic drink or not, it's best to make sure that you are drinking through a straw that's clean for your own protection. It's admirable how you came up with this poem in such a short time. And, when you've taken a selfie of yourself, make sure that the selfie gives a good impression of yourself having a good time, rather than one that would depict your bad side.

I encourage you to keep up with your writing. It's good to be able to express yourself.

My hope for you is that you will have a miracle of blessing in your health, friendships, good memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness to last your whole lifetime.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good morning to you! Your poem, "I'm An Angel, You're An Angel" popped up on the Read and Review Section. I am not a professional reviewer, but what I can offer is my feedback on how your poem made me feel as I was reading it.

Your poem speaks volumes to me. I liked the part where you stated, "Besides talking bold, brash, hearty, We must actually perform soulful, honest work In somewhat lengthy duration In our blessed, jubilant social lives - Associating our own guilt in those activities Would surely spell imminent ruin For our important efforts, And alert everyone of our subconscious, And highly deleterious ways. Therefore, in a friendly, positive way, We are truly angels. You and I, Despite gravitating toward useless, But hearty and meaningful, Trash talk", really resonated with me, it truly shows that no matter where we are in life, that we are truly angels in our own right.

The way it sounds to me is that, even though we are doing some trash talk, it means that through all of our efforts, we are still truly angels. Sometimes, it's fun to talk that way to someone that we love, as long as it's not hurtful to them. I don't think that's meant to be shared with other people. This would mean that other people may get the wrong impression and get ideas into their own heads that they can talk that way to you too. Some things are just meant to keep secret.

I encourage you to keep up with your writing. I enjoyed reading this. We are not perfect. We are all unique. There are certain things that aren't meant for others to share. It should be kept between you and the one you love. Did I get this right? I truly agree with you, in that, in our own way, all of us are angels.

My hope for you is to have a miracle of blessings in good health, good friendships, good memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness throughout your lifetime.

Have a nice day. I hope my review has helped you.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Arlene  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening to you! Your Rondell form of poetry entitled "Arlene" popped up in the Read and Review Section. I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer you feedback on how your poem made me feel after reading it.

This was a wonderfully written poem. The rhyming pattern was easily understood. The rhyming flowed together like honey. Your words were carefully chosen. After reading the words, I could feel the rhythmic flow in action; I felt like I was walking on air. You must have felt a sense of serenity and peace of mind as you were writing it. Your writing is also very descriptive. I could feel myself relaxing and unwinding as I read each word. I encourage you to keep on writing.

My hope for you is that you will find many healing blessings of good health, good friendships, fond memories, good thoughts, love, and much happiness through the rest of your years.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of world capitals  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was happy with this quiz. I did better than I thought. I got five out of eight right. I encourage you to keep doing these quizzes
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