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Review of The Ironist.  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Ironist.

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe this story.

What style? Relationship drama.

Are there three genre listings? Relationship, Other. Only 2.

My favorite lines: -- Marriage. A curse on society. A blight on us all.--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written
story about people interactions at a dance.
Good descriptions, characters and good dialog.
I like Catalina.
Thanks for sharing this, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: A title that better describes the story. List three genres, this helps a browser can find this story easier.

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Review of Little Red  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Little Red

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Children's fairy tale.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Children's, Fantasy

My favorite line: --"Wow, you have big teeth!"--

This is only one opinion: A great idea for this fairy tale. Well written and constructed.
This story has a good flow.
An awesome work, short, simple and straight to the point the way today's reader likes things.
Thank you for sharing this, it was a enjoyable read.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Blue Blaze: Chapter 1

Does the title describe story? Good title.

What style? Teen fantasy folklore.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Action/Adventure


This is only one opinion: An Awesome story line with great potential. A good opening that gets the readers attention well.
Well written with good descriptions, a lot of dialog and introducing a strong character.
I like the purple stomach hints of the dragon, making the reader want to know more.
Thanks for sharing this, I have enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make a suggestion: A great story as is. If a had to make a suggestion I would double space to make it easier on the reader. Consider editing out some of the dialogue and a little more action at the end.
For the novel I like the title, for the chapter was looking for some description.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Forbidden Fruit

Does the title describe story? The title works well for this story.

What style? A teen drama written in fairy tale style.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, LGBTQ+, Supernatural


This is only one opinion: A well written story with good descriptions and strong characters'.
I like Juniper and Ember.
A good idea for the time of the Salem witch trials for this setting.
Great job with the ending.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: Most readers like a little bit of dialog.

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Review of Precision  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Presession

Does the title describe story? The title fairly describes the story.

What style? Adventure drama.

Are there three genre listings? Experience, Career

This is only one opinion: A well written story, short and straight to the point.
I like Max and Lucy, both are strong characters. Good narrative, descriptions and dialog.
A good ending.
Todays reader likes things short and straight to the point, they are in such a hurry. This story does that well with just enough information to make the reader hungry for more.
Thanks for sharing this I enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Is the title spelled correctly?
It is always good to list at least three genres so that a browser looking for such a story can find yours.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Flashes. Chapter 33

Does the title describe story? The title doesn't describe this chapter that well.

What style? Action, adventure.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Other


This is only one opinion: Good construction and layout. A well written story with good descriptions, strong characters and good dialogs.
I like Elfwine and Morgan, I hate Morgan had to die.
A good ending that leaves the reader wanting more.
Thank for sharing this story, it was a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: By listing 3 genre's a browser will be able to find this story easier.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Those Pesky EV Shortcoming

Does the title describe story? This title works well for this article.

What style? Enviromental advise article.

Are there three genre listings? Community, Cultural, Environment

My favorite line:--The elites who advocate the sole production of EVs have an answer for this: You just won’t be able to do these things anymore.

This is only one opinion: I agree 100% with everything here, thank you for sharing this.
Good information-packed article.
Constructed well with plenty of information on electric cars and modern society.

If I had to make the suggestion: With the short attention span of todays readers consider a good edit to shorten a bit.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: All Souls on Board

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Educational documentary.

Are there three genre listings? Educational, History, Opinion.



This is only one opinion: Thanks for sharing this article, Mark Twain is a favorite author for me.
Well told and constructed with good information.
A good job of writing for this essay.

If I had to make the suggestion: A bit more about his life and personality.

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Review of Mr. Prendergast  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Mr. Prendergast

Does the title describe story? Good title.

What style? Realistic biographical.

Are there three genre listings? Ghost, Fantasy, Religious



This is only one opinion: This well written story held this readers attention well.
Reads like a true story. Constructed and laid out well.
A nice tone as if you were speaking to me.
Well described with strong character.
Thank you for sharing this story, I enjoyed reading it.


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Review of 100 Days  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: 100 Days

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe the story.

What style? Presidential quotes and speeches.

Are there three genre listings? Political, Cultural, Opinion


This is only one opinion: A well written and informative article about politics and presidents.
Well constructed. Unfortunately nothing happened in the Obama years.
Nicely done, I do like presidential quotes.
Thank you for sharing this work, it was a good read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Peanut Butter Thoughts

Does the title describe story? A good title that describes the story well.

What style? Realistic short story.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry, Other



This is only one opinion: A well written short story with good descriptions as well as good dialogue and strong characters.

Short and to the point, just the way most readers like things today. Well done.

I love peanut butter, this story has made me hungry.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Aunt Marge's Big Mistake

Does the title describe story? Yes the title is a good description of the story.

What style? Young adult, sci-fi.

Are there three genre listings? Contest entry, Sci-fi, young adult.

My favorite lines: -- It's really gross.--

--You have an incredibly sane explanation for an idea that sounds completely nuts."--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written with good descriptions and strong characters. I like Rita and I think I've met Aunt Marge.
This story is well constructed and has a good realistic flow.
A nice happy ending.
Thanks for sharing this, It was a joy to read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: A year playing dead

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Biographical, political

Are there three genre listings? Biographical, Travel, Personal

My favorite line: -- Bad enough to have a pandemic, it gave an opportunity for the wealthy to win the war on the poor and the righteous the right to enforce their rights over others--

This is only one opinion: You said it well. Thank you for sharing this, it has been a joy to read.
Nicely written article venting about politics and our entitled society.
This is a strong article that I'm sure many others agree with, it has me wanting to start venting but there's not enough time.

I like the way you constructed this, it flows good.
Awesome writing!


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Review of NaNo 2017 premise  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: NaNo 2017 premise

Clarity: Good title for this work.

Style: Summary of Tangled Rootd.

Genera listing: Mystery.

My favorite line:--He thought they were his friends, but they were just using him.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: Beck Firing back up! Thanks for sharing this summary premise behind your 2017 novel. I have enjoyed reading it.

Well written and constructed with useful information to prepare to read your novel.

It is obvious you have put a lot of time and work into this mystery novel. Laura and Chad sound like good strong characters.
I am going to have to read this novel, it sounds really awesome.
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Review of Life Hotel  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{i{b}}My impressions of: Life Hotel{/b}

Clarity: A nice title for this story. Gives a good idea of the content.

Style: Realistic philosophy.

Genera listing: Philosophy, biographical, emotional.

My favorite line: --To Be Happy.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: A good opening making the reader wants to and know more.
Good reference "retiring is like finishing the competition and reaching the plateau."

Nice touch about -some of us become Grandparents'.-
I am supposed to become a grandparent in March.

Good reference to people that have left.
I like the references to the River.
Well written, thank you for sharing this story, it is a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: A Hard Pill to Swallow.

clarity: Good title for this poem.
style: Free verse poetry venting about our health system.
originality: Nicely written.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Amen, written and told the way it is.
This poem hits on a hard truth that most people don't like to admit or talk about.
A lot of information in these few words. Well said.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Eternal Struggle.

Clarity: The title could better describe this article.

Style: Informative and educational article.

Genera listing: educational, informative, psychological.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: Well written article about depression and fighting depression.

A brief discourse on depression is a good description for this article about depression.

I like the comparison with war and fighting to keep
Strong.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Everything comes to an end, Eventually

Clarity: A good title for this work.

Style: Realistic opinions.

Genera listing: emotional, writing, experience


My 2 cents is only One opinion: This well written article is sad but true. Everything ends eventually.

Spend time with your family is almost always a positive.


Suggestions: A good proof reading to correct any typos or grammar, I seen at least a couple.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{b}c:blue}My impressions of: What is Success?{/b}

Clarity: The title describes this article well.

Style: Informative educational article.

Genera listing: Opinion, Reviewing, nonsense.

My favorite line: -- I think the definition of success is something you accomplish and that you're happy with how things are in life.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: Hey Ash, you have posted a good question and you're right each person measures success in their own way.
Success is a person's happiness in life. Society often has a different opinion about everything it is our job to weigh those opinions and make our own opinion.

Well written article. Looking forward to seeing more.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
{{b}i}My impressions of: April 2018 Prompts.{/b}

Clarity: The title describes this article good.

Style: Written like a news article.

Genera listing: Writing, contest, contest entry.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A nicely written and very educational and informative article.
Good information about the genres.



Suggestions: Even though a contest entry it is better to list something different in the genres for the browser looking for this in the future.

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Review of Anger Understood  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Anger Understood

Clarity: The title describes this story well.
Style: Biographical, political.
Genera listing: Personal, emotional, Family.



My 2 cents is only One opinion: A nicely written story.
Our politics and the views that are modern society has is in a beautiful shape.
It is easy to be angry at the system the hard thing is what can we do to change it.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Cartographers Compass.

Clarity: The title fits well with this story.
Style: Adventure
Genera listing: Contest, contest entry, other.



My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written story. I like Amina and her description.
Rashid also is a likeable character for this pleasant story.
Thank you Sharing this, I much enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Path  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Path

Clarity: The title fits this well.
Style: Poetry.

My favorite line: --We will walk until life runs dry--

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem that has a good rhyming scheme.
A nice flow for this poem about the path through life.

Thank you for sharing this work it was a most enjoyable read.


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
{i{b}}My impressions of: Johnny-by-moonlight.{/b}

Clarity: A good title for this story.
Style: Childrens
Genera listing: Fantasy, Mythology, other.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A nicely written story about Johnny visiting his Grandmother and helping in her garden.
A garden is like magic, if you plant a little seed work with it then watch it to see what it eventually becomes.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a pleasant read.


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Review of Prompt #8 Taurus  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
{c:b{b}lue}My impressions of: Prompt #8{/b}

Clarity: The title could better describe the work.

Style: Realistic romance.

Genera listing: Contest entry, family.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written story.
Very realistic sounds as if it could be a true story.
Nicely constructed this story has a good flow.

Suggestions: Even though it is a contest entry it's always better
for future results to list at least three genera listings.


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