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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My Impressions of: The Soul of Society

clarity: The title goes with the story.
style: Cultural, point of view.
originality: A unique idea for a story.

My favorite line: "There can be no keener revelation of a society's soul than the way in which it treats its children."

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written short story or news article. This story touches on some good points about our society and how our children are treated. Nice ending pointing out flaws in our society.


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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Warcraft verses StarCraft interview

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Talk show interview. Screenplay. Sci-Fi.
originality: A unique idea for this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and described interview or screenplay type story. Realistic formatting and interviewing for the story. A nice amount of humor throughout the story. Good dialog. Well structured.

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Joseph
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Review of The Unsaid  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: The Unsaid

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Emotional, relationship, poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written work with nicely chosen words. Indeed this work speaks the truth, it is those words that are not said that usually hurt the worse.
A strong poem the emotion can be felt.


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Joseph

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Review of Eleventh Dress  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Eleventh Dress

clarity: The title fits well with the story.
style: Short story.
originality: Nice idea for this story.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice descriptions of Pun- Hall Mall in Smoothie, Alabama. Strong character and good dialogue. Well written short story, straight to the point just the way today's readers like things. Held this readers attention well. Thanks for sharing this work, I enjoyed reading it. :)


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Review of Unrequited  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Unrequited

Clarity: a good title for this poem.
Style: poetry, romance, love.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely written, strong
And emotional poem. These well chosen words have a great flow.
The emotional feeling can be felt well in this short work.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a joy to read.

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Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Command Post Capture

clarity: The title is a good description for the story.
style: Action, adventure, military.
originality: A unique idea for this story.

My favorite line: --Just no pleasing some people.--

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written story. Good descriptions with a strong character. I could feel the heat of the day. Held this readers attention well. A good twist toward the end. I liked the note relating back to childhood.

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Joseph

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Review of The outcast  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: The Outcast

Clarity: The title fits with the poem.
Style: Emotional poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: This nicely written poem has a good flow. Most people at one time or another in life probably can relate to the outcast. The feeling of being different defines us as individuals, each having there uniqueness. Thank you for sharing this strong work.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Directive Violation Notice #90013

clarity: Nice title for this story.
style: Fantasy, Sci-Fi
originality: Creative idea for this newsletter.

My favorite line: --Remember, glory to the Urchain Sovereignty and the Viceroy!--

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely done, looks like it could have come out of any of today's headlines with only a few words changed. Thank you for sharing this entertaining read.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
{{c:blue}size:3.5}My Impressions of: Cinderella: Different Written Versions

clarity: The title describes the story well.
style: A comparison of different versions of this story.
originality: An original and unique idea for this classic fairytale.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written and documented comparison for these three versions of Cinderella.
Disney is hard to beat in most all of their stories. It is interesting to see the differences as you have pointed them out. Well done.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: The little Village

clarity: The title describes the story well.
style: Reads much like a poem.
originality: Unique idea for a story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: This unique story reads much like a children's story or a fairy tale. A nice flow for this short story. Thank you for sharing this interesting tale, it was a good read.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: The Energy Survives, This Time.

Clarity: The title fits well with this poem.
Style: Sport's, sportsmanship, entertainment.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem for this event. In today's fast pace society sportsmanship for people go many directions. Most people will put more emphasis on making excuses for not winning than offering praise to the winners.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: A nickel for your thought.

clarity: The title could describe the story better.
style: Realistic, ancient and a bit of Sci-Fie
originality: A unique idea for this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written story. Great descriptions, good dialog and construction. Benjamin is a strong character for this adventure tale. I like that the story goes from modern day to ancient Mayan with a twist of Sci-fie while leaving hints for unanswered questions about the Mayan people. Nice image's spread out at good locations, for a well constructed adventure with a steady flow. The story moved at a good pace and held this reader's attention well. Thank you for sharing this it was a awesome read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Not Just Another Haunted House

Title fits well with the story.
Realistic style.
Unique idea for this story.

This is only one opinion: Well written story with good descriptions. A realistic flow. Held this readers attention well. Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it.
Write On!
Joseph
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Review of Thankful Wish  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Thankful Wish.

Clarity: Title fits poem.
Style: Cinquain 5 line.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: I like this poem. Short and straight to the point. Blessed indeed. If you got that one wish then truly you have more the most people will ever in todays fast paced busy world. Thank you for sharing, this was a good read.


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Review of Silent Night  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Silent Night

Clarity: A Nice Title for this poem.
Style: Acrostic poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely done. Well worded
poem. Held this readers attention well. Nice touch with the color font for the first word. Short but straight to the point. Well done, thank you I enjoyed reading this, it was a good read.

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Review of Hat of Trick  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Hat of Trick

clarity: Title fits the story well.
style: Short ghost story.
originality: A good idea for a story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written short story.
Good job with descriptions. Holds the readers attention well.
Short but to the point like todays reader likes. Leaves the reader wanting more. An interesting work.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Dr Seuss, Bless Your Birth!

clarity: Title fits well, title and poem.
style: Family poetry.
originality: Unique birthday poem for Dr. Seuss.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written poem celebrating doctor Seuss's 115th birthday, well done.
This poem flows well. Indeed doctor Seuss was ahead of his time. I like it, thank you.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: The Haunted Classroom

clarity: The title fits well with the story.
style: Scary, realistic.
originality: Nice storyline, a realistic tone.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well told story. Good descriptions with a great narrative. This story holds the readers attention well. I like the different font styles.
Well told story, thank you this was a good read.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: A Journey to Evergreen

clarity: Title fits the story.
style: Fantasy entertainment.
originality: Happy tone with this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice story. Good descriptions. Nice narrative. I like Justice, she has a positive attitude. A happy flow keeps the readers interest.
They live happily ever-after, a good children's story.

Joseph
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Review of At Any Time  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
My Impressions of: At Any Time

clarity: Title fits with the story.
style: Personal experience.
originality: Reads like a true story or diary entry.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A nice story. Reads like a true story or even a diary entry. It is a shame how time slips away from us and years and decades ago by. It always does me good to try and get back to my roots, although in this fast-paced society today it is hard to do.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Love Won't Overcome- Status Decided

Clarity: the title fits well with the poem
Style: Romance, Relations

My 2 cents is only one opinion: a nice poem. Love is a strong emotion usually running either very hot or terribly cold. Add times the can just be like performing a play as you wait for that right soul to come along.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: The Vampire Princess

clarity: The title fits well with this story.
style: Drama vampire living among humans.
originality: Unique idea well written story.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Good story. Good narrative and descriptions. Strong character I like Raluca, I wouldn't want her to bite me though. I like she has been fascinated by humans since childhood. Nice that she started understanding toward the end. Thank you very much I enjoyed this story it had a nice flow.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Reading and Coloring

clarity: Title is good
style: Children, animal.
originality: Origonal helping animals


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice childrens characters.
I bet the kids love these animals. Great learning tools to help kids and keep them interested and wanting more. I loved talking animals when I was a kid.
Well done.

Joseph

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Review of Yoda the Hen  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Yoda the Hen

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Realistic country farming style.
originality: A unique idea and story.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A realistic story. Well told good narrative good descriptions good characters. Holds the reader's attention well. Nice touch with the recipes at the end. I am glad to see that Joe and Dan made a nice compromise.

Joseph
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Review of Camo  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem: Camo

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Chameleon of many colors.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A good poem. A nice consistent flow. I like Callie I know some people who are similar, they can't choose just one. It would be nice to be a chameleon, be able to blend in anywhere, anytime.
Nicely done.


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