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Review of The Caverns  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

Hi Rojodi! This story came up while I was random reviewing. Thanks for sharing this story, it is a good read.

My impressions of: "The Caverns"  by Rojodi

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Fantasy, mystery.

Are there three genre listings? Horror/Scary, Supernatural



This is only one opinion: Well told story with a realistic tone.
Short and to the point, the way todays reader likes it.
Structured well making it easy for the reader.

A nice ending with a touch of mystery leaving the reader wanting to know more.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Grace Anne. The title of this poem caught my eye, so I had to read it. Thank you for sharing your work, this is a joy to read.

My impressions of the poem:"An Ancient god’s Fury"  by Grace Anne

Clarity: The title fits well with this poem.
Style: Free-verse poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A strong poem in a unique form. This poem has a strong tone with a consistent flow.
Well done.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}Hi Maalik, I came accross this while random reviewing. Here are my impressions.

My impressions of: Talk About It Vol. 3 by Maalik

Clarity: The title fits well.

Style: personal thoughts

Genera listing: Men's, Personal, Writing

My favorite line:--How does one keep their sanity, integrity, & light in a world full of ego & pride?--

My 2 cents is only One opinion:A good idea for this work. Well written and structured in a poetic kind of way.
Well done, I like this it's like you read my mind.
Thanks for sharing this, it has taken my mind to a different place.

Suggestions:None
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Review of Knock Down Ginger  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Nick! After reading "Knock Down Ginger" , I offer you these comments:

My impressions of: Knock Down Ginger by Nick


Clarity, does the title describe this story?: The title described this story good

Style: biographical comedy drama .

Genres, are 3 listed?Biographical, Comedy, Other

Plot: Reminiscing on childhood memories of some of the mischief we use to do. Knocking on someone's door and then running, getting chased at times.

Well told and described in a humorous way. Kept this readers attention well from start to finish.

This well told story brought back some of my childhood memories of very similar events ending with getting chased or yelled at.

Characters:Nick, Steve, Cliff and the woman in pink. All characters were well described.

Structured easy for the reader? Structured nice making it easy for the reader while keeping a good flow .


Any suggestions?None.
Nick, thanks for sharing this fun, strong story that brought back my childhood memories. I enjoyed it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Nuclear Winter (part one) by Sweet thistle

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Sci-fi drama

Are there three genre listings? Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Paranormal

My favorite line: -- Something that shouldn’t exist, Something to give the laws of nature a huge middle-finger to the face, something given life by the death and enslavement of the human spirits found deep within itself, and something behind all still shrouding itself from scrutiny.--

This is only one opinion: A well written story with good descriptions strong characters and good dialog.
A unique structure, using different fonts for the dialogs of characters. This reader likes it.
An action-packed story that held this readers attention well from start to finish.
Strong opening that pulls the reader in.
A good ending leaving the reader wanting to know more.

Sweet thistle, thank you for sharing this work it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider shortening the long sentences. A good proofread and edit to find and correct any typos never hurts.

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Review of The Smile  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: The Smile
by Zane

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Friendship drama

Are there three genre listings? Family, Friendship, Relationship



This is only one opinion: A well written story with strong characters great descriptions and good dialogue.
Indeed cancer is a sad thing. You have taken some of that out with this good entertaining story.
Thank you for sharing this story it was a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review of Anger  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Anger by LightinMind

Clarity: The title well describes this poem.
Style: Four line stanzas poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well worded and structured with a nice rhyming pattern.
The first stanza is my favorite.
This is a strong poem with emotion that can be felt.
Thank you for sharing this strong poem, I have enjoyed reading it.


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Review of Whose Authority?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem: Whose Authority?

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Free verse poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A strong emotional poem. Well written and worded. A nice structure, easy to read.
Indeed this poem is so true, a reflection on todays society.
Thanks for sharing this poem, it is a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Eclipse's Change Part One: It Begins
by RBM5


Clarity, does the title describe this story?: Seems to be a good title for this story.

Style: Fanfiction, sci-fi

Genres, are 3 listed?Fanfiction, Entertainment, Fantasy

Plot:
A strong storyline with great potential for a longer work.
Eclipse transforms to a female and mother figure that his race needed to survive.

Characters:Eclipse

Structured easy for the reader?Structured with long paragraphs and long sentences, both are intimidating for potential readers.


Any suggestions? Consider breaking the paragraphs down to shorter versions as well as some of the long sentences . This will make it less intimidating for the browser looking for something to read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: FOUR QUESTIONS ABOUT GOD--an article by Dr M C Gupta

Does the title describe story? The title is a good description of this article.

What style? Opinion, informative article.

Are there three genre listings? Opinion, Scientific, Philosophy

My favorite line: -- God has given us intellect and discretion and freedom to use or not to use that intellect.--

This is only one opinion: This is an interesting article. Well written. A good idea for the question and answer style.

Informative with good examples for the readers to relate too.

Dr M C Gupta, thank you for sharing this interesting article.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking down the long paragraphs to make it less intimidating for a potential reader.

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Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:BRAIN WAVES--award winner: by Dr M C Gupta

Clarity: The title describes this poem well.

Style: Scientific, spiritual poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and worded poem. A good structure that helps the flow and tone of this work.

This poem brings up interesting questions.
A strong poem that gets the reader's mind thinking.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Pippin's Milk Run by:Coffeebean


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title works well.

Style: Children's fantasy

Genres, are 3 listed?Children's, Other: Listing 3 genres will make your work available for more browsers.

This is only one opinion: Very well structured children's story about a family of cats, mom and three kittens. Pippin is one of the kittens talk to his mom into letting him go to the store.

On the way he meets his friend Bully who goes with him to the store. At the store they run into Lily who has lost her toy they help her find it.

Coffeebean, this is a very nice story. The children's book market has changed a lot through the years, in today's fast pace society the readers like short with a lot of pictures for children's books.
I like this story. You might consider more action to hold the readers attention. Some years ago this would be a good fit for a children's book.

A good story greatly structured making it easy to read. Good characters and descriptions with good dialog. Well done. Thanks for sharing this, it is a good read.

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Review of Final Prey  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Final Prey by the.shay 1


Clarity, does the title describe this story?: A good title but it doesn't really describe what the story is about so good.

Style: Folklore thriller

Genres, are 3 listed?Thriller/Suspense Listing three genres helps more browsers to find your story.

Plot: Jim is a long time employee of the dollar store. He is so use to his routine that he don't even notice for a while that the store has been robbed and is littered with bodies.

A well written and described story with action and suspense. Strong characters, well written dialog.
The story flows well and held this reader's attention good from start to end.
Thanks for sharing this strong story, this reader has enjoyed it.

Characters:Jim, the dollar store employee.
The old man with mud under his fingernails. A regular customer.
The thief that robs the store and kills the customer. Turns out to be a girl wearing black leather and a motorcycle helmet with the visor down.


Structured easy for the reader?The story is structured well, easy to read.


Any suggestions?A good proof read to correct typos(I seen at least a couple).
Good descriptions, a few could be edited without hurting the story. This would make it a bit shorter which is how most of today's readers like it.

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Review of Black Cats  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
My impressions of: Black Cats by Princess Megan Rose.

Hey Megan, this newsletter came up while random reviewing. I have enjoyed reading this greatly detailed newsletter. Thanks for all you do for the WDC community. Always professional, entertaining top shelf writing.



Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title describes this story great.

Style: Newsletter.

Genres, are 3 listed?Animal, Holiday, Supernatural. Good genre's to list.

Plot:I love history, it was a joy to see some cat history. A lot of people are still suppositious of Black Cats ( Krazzzeeey ).
Nice idea listing some famous cats.

Your descriptions of Bella are so good I can see her.

Hey Angel. Maxi, Molly and Goldie sound like great companions. Well told story about them and Roger.
I hope none had to be arrested and sent to Doom Town.

I think any cat owner will relate to this. We have three cats, Mutton is black with a white belly and feet. TomTom is tortoise shell, she is the same age as Mutton. (7years). JoJo is Siamese, we have her 17 years. All three are spoiled, JoJo is the hunter. She loves to show-off her kills, leaving a mess of blood and guts.
Thank you both for this awesome read> :)




Structured easy for the reader?A good structure, easy to read. Nice use of colors.
Awesome image's that anyone would have to like.




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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Anonymous, page 195 & 196



What style? Summary, poetic.

Are there three genre listings? Mystery, Young Adult, Drama

My favorite line: -- Us against the world.--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written and very unique summary. Peace, a great start.
Indeed it does seem like its us against the world at times.
Trying to make a difference. Trying to be us. Both strong phrases that you have used well in this work.
A powerful page to make me start philosophizing. Thank you for sharing this work, it is a joy to read.

Often most of us do get in such a hurry that we miss and overlook many things. Next thing you know its all in the past, as we look back it becomes clear that we learn from our mistakes. Molding us into the person we become. Then we seem to make sense out of it.

If I had to make the suggestion:

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Advice for an electrician

Clarity: Great title for this poem.
Style: Romance, free verse

My 2 cents is only one opinion:I like this poem, well being an electrician
I would have to like it. I never thought about comparing electrical work to romance, a good idea.
I do know about the static hair-do, for me that's when you get a good jolt. The sun burst's glare I have seen.
A well written poem, worded good with a bit of humor.
Thanks for sharing this good read.


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Review of Passageways  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Passageways

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Flash fiction.

Are there three genre listings? Contest entry

My favorite line: --He floated through the passageway, and now he knew it was him in the dream, not the revolution.--

This is only one opinion: A well written contest entry story. Good opening with a bit of mystery.
A good plot with strong characters. Good descriptions' I like that Terrano decided to let the woman go.
A nice ending with the passageway and light, just enough to make the reader want to know more.
Thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: THE CAR WAS WHERE THEY WENT

Does the title describe story? The title works for this chapter.

What style? Action/adventure, sci-fi

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Detective, Sci-fi

My Favorite line: --The quiet hung like a fly in a spider’s web,--

This is only one opinion: A good story-line full of action and mystery.
Good descriptions with a lot of dialog. A lot of the descriptions detail could be edited without taking away from the story. Todays reader's have a short attention span.
Still in rough draft form with some typo's and grammar mistakes. Also some repeated phrases which takes away from the flow a bit.

I like this story and see a lot of potential. It appears that you may have rushed it a little. In need of a proofread and edit.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider keeping the dialog between 3 characters.
Richard, do you have the work read out loud to you? Most writers do this to catch a lot of mistakes easily missed from being so into the work. I know that I have too.
Consider formatting with more spacing to make it easier for the reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: Plot and characters The Resurrection Men

Does the title describe story? A good title for this work.

What style? Outline

Are there three genre listings? Dark, Gothic, Crime/Gangster



This is only one opinion: A good outline for what looks to be everything needed for a classic thriller.
Good plot. Ironic ending having the bodies donated for dissection.
Good chapter outline. I like chapter 3 showing the characters getting careless.
Good characters. Great idea to outline them giving you a chance to know them better.
Thanks for sharing this great outline for what
looks to be a classic, I have enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: How could they simply appear

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Sci-fi adventure.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Detective, Sci-fi

My favorite line: --“I cannot see where it has gone? They jumped the controlling manifold,” Jason said as he had his hands dance across the keyboard. He looked up, “Lost it.”--

This is only one opinion: Richard, I like this action packed story. Well done. Thanks for sharing it, this reader enjoyed it.
A well written sci-fi adventure tale with good description's and strong characters. A good narrative for a longer work or novel.
I like the teleporting theory, this mystery holds the readers attention. Leaving him wanting to know more and turn the page.


If I had to make the suggestion: A good proof read and edit to catch any typos or repeated words is always a good idea.

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Review of Dear Me.  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Dear Me.

Does the title describe story? Great title for this letter.

What style? Letter, memories, sci-fi.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry, Sci-fi, Biographical

My favorite line: -- But only time will tell if I do.--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written, well structured letter, PureSciFi.
I was thinking about entering the dear me contest, after reading this I think you got it won already.
Good childhood memories, in particular the sci-fi visits when you were 16.
It sounds like an awesome screenplay you are working on. Also sounds like you are really busy and using your time wisely and efficiently.
Thank you for sharing this awesome work, it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Of This Prophesy

Does the title describe story? A good title for this work.

What style? Religious, prophesy, preaching

Are there three genre listings? Religious, Community, Spiritual


This is only one opinion: A well written religious interpretation, with prayers.
Informational and educational article with many bible quotes in no certain order.
The Bible is a powerful book, the only book that can be read by everyone and each person can have a separate and different interpretation, without being wrong.
The makings of a good sermon.
Thanks for sharing this article with your interpretations.


If I had to make the suggestion: Todays readers in this fast paced society have a short attention span, liking articles short and to the point. A good edit never hurts.

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Review of Caribbean Silk  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Caribbean Silk

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Free verse poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written poem. I think fishing, maybe with a camera.
This poem takes me to a dream state, where I am fishing but catching everything but fish.

Nicely worded and structured poem. Thank you for sharing this strong poem, I haven't been fishing in a while.
My favorite line: Seahorse salutes
my return to whence I came.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Blaze of Glory

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Action, adventure, western, outline

Are there three genre listings? Western, Crime/Gangster, Action/Adventure

My favorite line: --He trusts no one but family.--

This is only one opinion: Awesome! I love westerns. A great structure for the outline by chapter.
Great character outline, defining strong characters and a few twists that are unexpected.
Great job, held this readers attention well and left him wanting more.
Seems like all is in place to begin this historic adventure.
Thanks for sharing this work, this reader thoroughly enjoyed it.
Great descriptions with strong characters, I cant wait to see more.

If I had to make the suggestion: Always a good idea to proof read and edit to try and catch any typos are flaws.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
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My impressions of the poem:A Wayward Romance: Avenue of Style

Clarity: The title works well for this work.
Style: Wayward love poem

My 2 cents is only one opinion: I see a forbiden type love in this poem. A love that exists but is only known to the ones that share it. Love has a power and a mystical hold that sometimes is there and can not be denied. Can not be acknowledged either for reason's of the love.


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