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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"When You Stood Beside Me"  by Angel

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: This strong poem is so true.
Threw life it usually takes sometime for most people to realize how our faith has impacted our life.

A well written and well worded poem. Structured nicely making it easy for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this unique poem, it is a joy to read.


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Review of Silence  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Silence"  by Kevster

Clarity: The title could better describe the contents of the poem.
Style: Relationship poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A nicely structured and well written poem.
Very nice unique idea for this poem with every stanza starting out "I don't like it when you don't... "

A nice rhyming scheme.

Kevster thanks for sharing this poem it is a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}My impressions of:"I'm angry. Don't mess with me."  by Kathleen Cochran

Clarity: The title is a good one for this story.

Style: biographical drama.

Genera listing: Relationship, Health, How-To/Advice

My 2 cents is only One opinion:Hey Kathleen, this is a strong story. Emotion can be felt from your written words. This strong story has gotten me to philosophy.

It is good that you have toughened up, through life people often will try to run over you. We learn to stay on guard and keep most people at a distance from our real self.

However it's not good to dwell on a bad thing for so long. That is like letting the bad person control your emotions and personality. Best to put it behind you and get ready for tomorrow. Keep positive, be happy, make the best out of every situation. Try to dwell more on all the good things instead of a bad thing . It is hard but in the long run it's so much better for you.

In life we learn from trial and error. The worse the error the more we learn from it and remember, making us stronger and defining our personality.

Thank you for sharing this emotional story, I have enjoyed reading it.
Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!
Joseph
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Review of Black [#1 Tamara]  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
My impressions of: "Black [#1 Tamara]"  by Kare Enga on hiatus

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe the story.

What style? Parenting

Are there three genre listings? Animal. Your work can be found by more readers looking for this genre, by listing three genre's.



This is only one opinion: Reads like a parent or authority figure talking to their child.

It is a hard thing to explain to a child when they're pet disappears and perhaps died.

Thanks for sharing your work.

If I had to make the suggestion: consider a good proofread and edit.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: " A memorable journey to Africa "  by sealbaraza

Does the title describe story? A good title for this work.

What style? Documentary essay.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Cultural, Animal



This is only one opinion: A well structured article, makes it easy on the reader and less intimidating for the potential reader.

Informative article about Africa.

Thanks for sharing this informative work.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "The Importance of Social Media "  by khan

Clarity: The title works well with this essay.

Style:Documentary essay.

Genera listing:Other, Community, Cultural



My 2 cents is only One opinion:
Nicely structured giving a professional look.
Well worded, with good impressions of social media.

You have listed the pros of social media well, consider listing some cons also.

Thanks for sharing this essay, it is a good read.

Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!
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Review of Mirror, Mirror  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:Mirror, Mirror by Anni Pon

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Portry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A great idea for this well worded and nicely structured poem. If mirrors could talk.

I like that it's written kind of like a puzzle.
Well done.

Thanks for sharing this poem, it is a joy to read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: "A walk in the forest."  by Sumojo

Does the title describe story? A nice title for this story.

What style? Nature, pet biography

Are there three genre listings? Animal, Ghost, Dark


This is only one opinion: Pets are part of the family, it is hard on us when they die. With their short lifespan it prepares us for tragedies that come with life.

Awesome structured story, extremely easy for the reader, with a calm flow.

Sumojo thanks for sharing this awesome story, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

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Review of Burger and Fries  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi tracker, I hope all is well. I came across this while random reviewing and I'm so glad I did.

My impressions of:"Burger and Fries"  by tracker

Clarity: The title describes the story well.

Style:Biographical


My 2 cents is only One opinion:
It is funny how fate works in life, one split second decision can have life-changing effects.

Sure was a good thing you decided to walk in instead of the drive-thru. You probably saved that boy's life, we never know what's going on in someone else' mind. A blessing that Chance encounter revealed the reason for making that decision to you that quick.

It feels good when you know you've done something that helps someone. That proud positive feeling of accomplishment can be felt from this story.

Nicely written with detailed descriptions that lets the reader see the picture.
Easy to read structure. Great images. A nice touch with the quotes.
Short and to the point, while showing the benefits of keeping a positive attitude.

A great read, thanks for sharing this story traker!



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of:"Evidence For Gods Existence - By Adam S"  by CrusaderAce

clarity: The title describes work well.
style: Religious documentary.
originality: An original written unique article.

Hi CrusaderAce, I came across this article while random reviewing. Here are my impressions.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written, educational article about the exitance of God.
Many references to a variety of Bible stories. A informative article.
I too have often wondered how anyone alive could believe that we exist without a higher power.

Thank you for sharing this article this reader has enjoyed it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
{{c:black}My impressions of: "My crazy assassin wives:The Death Parade"  by Akihiro

Clarity: The title does not really describe this particular chapter.

Style:Fantasy drama.





My 2 cents is only One opinion:Hi Akihiro, I came across this story while random reviewing.
Well described with a strong character.
I like Xander. A good story-line with a lot of potential.

Thank you for sharing this strong story-line. This reader enjoyed it.

Suggestions: Consider breaking down the long paragraphs to make easier on the reader and less intimidating.
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Review of Mother's Pray  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Mother's Pray by Serhii Sobol

Clarity: The title fits well with this poem.
Style: Spiritual poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hi Serhii, This is powerful poem. Well worded and structured. A nice flow. I can feel the emotions.

This is my favorite stanza:
-- It's an elegy, a song of plea!
Happiness, strength, not for my own sake!
To shield the little ones from early farewells,
To them, like the sun in the sky, I wake!--

Thank you for sharing this great poem, this reader has enjoyed reading it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)


Hi Prosperous Snow Happy! After reading "Christmas Solitaire" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "Christmas Solitaire"  by Prosperous Snow Happy


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title describes the story well.

Style: Family drama.

Genres, are 3 listed?Holiday, Women's, Relationship

Plot:Granny Sarah plays solitaire all the time since the passing of her husband Mores, even though the house is always full with grandkids.
A nice ending with Granny flying to Hawaii.

Characters:Granny Sarah.

Structured easy for the reader?A nice structure.


Any suggestions?None
Thank you for sharing this story, it is a joy to read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of:"Day 22 Required and Bonus Completed"  by Rojodi


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:A good title for this story.

Style: Family drams.

Genres, are 3 listed? listing 3 genres will make this story available to more browsers when they are looking for something like this to read.

Plot: Ronnie ask her older sister Ewa for advice. Also to be with her when she tells her parents that she wants to go into arts and graphics in college. Her parents do not think it is a good choice.



Characters:Ronnie, her older sister Ewa.

Structured easy for the reader?Nicely structured making for an easy read. Carries a natural flow.


Any suggestions?None

Thank you for sharing this story, this reader has enjoyed it.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Angelica! After reading "Munching on a New Year" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "Munching on a New Year"  by Angelica-Snowy ground week.


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:A humorous title for this poem

Style: Fantasy poetry.

Genres, are 3 listed?yes

My impressions: A very nicely worded and written poem. A good job using the keywords for the contest. I like the age difference between human years and dragon years.

This is my favorite stanza:--A century-year-old in human years
just ten years old in dragon years
lots of goals made to achieve
for the beginning of a brand new year!--


Thank you for sharing this unique poem, this reader has enjoyed reading it.




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Review of Free  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Smbriem ! After reading Free, I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: Free by smbriere


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:A nice title for this poem.

Style: Inspirational poetry.



My impressions are only one opinion:A well written, strong emotional poem. Most people do wear a mask when out in public.
A nice rhyming pattern, very unique.

The last stanza is my favorite.





Structured easy for the reader?A nice structure.
Thanks for sharing this strong poem, it is a joy to read.


Any suggestions?None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi Joey! After reading "A Response to Grace" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "A Response to Grace"  by Joey says, Back to work,now!


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:A nice title for this poem.

Style: Emotional poetry

Genres, are 3 listed? Biographical, Emotional, Melodrama

Plot:Nice images gives a professional look.
A nice rhyming scheme makes for a great flow.

A strong emotional poem that reads well.



Structured easy for the reader?A great structure.

Thanks for sharing this poem, this reader enjoyed it.


Any suggestions?None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Richard! After reading "What does Dera learn from Lady Quan" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "What does Dera learn from Lady Quan"  by Richard Allen


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:A good title for this story.

Style: Mythological adventure.

Genres, are 3 listed?Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Drama

My impressions:A great story. Well written. A nice opening line. The structure looks much better.
Good descriptions and dialog.:

Structured easy for the reader?Nice structure.


Any suggestions?The structures reads much easier for the reader. Consider a good proof read and edit to correct errors.

Thanks for sharing this story, it is a good read.

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Review of Gaze  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Scotty! After reading "Gaze" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "Gaze"  by Scotty 1615


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:A good title for this poem.

Style: Romance poem

Genres, are 3 listed? Relationship, Romance/Love

My impression is only one opinion:A well worded poem, nicely written with a great rhyming scheme.

Thanks for sharing this great poem, this reader enjoyed it.



Structured easy for the reader?Nice structure makes it easy to read. has a nice flow.




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Review of Band of Gold  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:{item: #2311392} by Hunters Moon

Clarity: A fair title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice rhyming pattern.
My favorite stanza: I kneel beside the empty spot;
I supplicate in prayer.
“Please Lord”, I ask, “forbid all thought
and feelings that I care.”
A well worded and written poem with a good flow.

Thanks for sharing this powerful poem, I have enjoyed reading it.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Jay! After reading "Some Thoughts on This Thy Wedding Day" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of:"Some Thoughts on This Thy Wedding Day"  by Jay O'Tool


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title works well for this poem.

Style: Shakespearean Sonnet.

Genres, are 3 listed?Family, Emotional, Inspirational

My two cents is only one opinion: A well worded and written emotional poem.
A nice touch thanking the Mother in the second stanza. Advice for the child in the third stanza.

Thank you for sharing your work this reader has enjoyed it.


Characters:

Structured easy for the reader?Nice structure, easy for the reader.




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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hi Mary Anne, I came across this poem while random reviewing. Here are my impressions.


My impressions of the poem: "EASTER Day in 1950/ P50 GIVE 100" 
by Mary Anne MCPhedran

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Free verse poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem that takes me back to my childhood and Easter egg hunting.
The second poem seems as though it was written more recent. It also is well written and worded, with a unique rhyming pattern.
Thanks for sharing these poems, this reader has enjoyed them both.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi John ! After reading "Bellbury the Rabbit" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "Bellbury the Rabbit"  by John Andrew Jenkins


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title describes this story well

Style: Childrens fantasy fable.

Genres, are 3 listed?Death, Family, Cultural

Plot:A well written story with good descriptions and good dialog.
Bellbury the young rabbit is forced to move out and be on his own so he can grow up . A famine comes with not much food around . Ending with bellburry being shot. His parents are at the funeral.

John, thanks for sharing this tale. It held this readers attention well. Well Done!

Characters:Bellbury, his Mom Monica & Dad.

Structured easy for the reader?A nice structure, easy for the reader.


Any suggestions?None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: "The gap of the elevator doors"  by Guimo

clarity: The title could better describe the contents of this.
style: romance drama, poetic
originality: an original idea for this unique piece.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: short and straight to the point which is good for today's reader.
A strong and emotional work.
Thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hi Richard! After reading "What the watch will learn" , I offer you these comments:

My impressions of: "What the watch will learn"  by Richard Allen


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title works for this story.

Style: Fantasy adventure drama.

Genres, are 3 listed? Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Drama

Plot:The watch try to find Oliva, who had disappeared into the woods.
An action-packed adventure with good dialogue, great descriptions and several characters.
Good story-line.

Characters:Sir Grey Arm, Ger, Queen Marisa, Dera

Structured easy for the reader? The structure could be easier on the reader with more spacing or double spacing at least between paragraphs.


Any suggestions? Consider a good proofread and edit to correct typos punctuation and capitalization errors.

Thank you for sharing this story, it is a good read.

Write on!
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