Hi happy to write, I came across this beautiful poem while random reviewing. Thank you for sharing this work this reader has thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
My impressions of the poem:"I am Beautiful!" By Happy to write.
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: This unique poem is very strong the emotion can be felt while reading it.
Artistic Voice and Imagery: "I am beautiful because" A great idea for this strong work.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: This poem moves in a nice timely fashion giving it a unique flow.
It is funny how our weaknesses do make us stronger.
Well-worded with a realistic learning tone. Humans learn from trial and error, always have all through history.
Does the title describe the story? A good title for this adventure story.
What is the style? mythological fantasy drama.
Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Political
Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening line however it could grab my attention better.
Is the structure good for the Reader?Nice structure however a little more lines-spacing would help the reader.
My two cents worth is only one opinion:KC thank you for Sharing this is awesome adventure tale this reader has enjoyed it.
Well written story with strong character and good dialogue.
Good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the scene.
Seems like a good introduction for an on going adventure book.
If I had to make a suggestion: Consider experimenting with a stronger opening line and more of a cliffhanger ending to make the reader want to turn the page. Double spacing with an extra line break between some longer paragraphs would make it easier for the reader and more appealing for the browser.
Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.
Does the title describe the story? A good title for this work.
What is the style? Philosophic personal drama.
Are there 3 genre listings? Nature, Experience, Philosophy
Does the opening line grab my attention?A nice opening line.
Is the structure good for the Reader?A nice structure. This makes it easy for the reader.
My two cents worth is only one opinion:Ameliorating, Thank you for sharing this unique celestial story. This reader has enjoyed it.
This well-written story reads much like a free verse poem. From this story a nice poem could be written.
A lot of good philosophy and descriptions here however it could confuse most of today's readers with their short attention span. They don't like going back to reread to see if they missed anything.
I went back and reread and to me it's still reads more like free verse poetry. I like poetry but was expecting a story. I know from personal experience the river does inspire creativity.
If I had to make a suggestion:Consider a stronger opening that's not quite as wordy. A good proofread and edit never hurts. Personally I feel this story could be shortened without losing any of the message. It seems to crowded with descriptions. That is just one opinion.
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My impressions of: "Taking Stock" by Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love
Does the title describe the story? A good title for this essay.
What is the style? Personal advice essay.
Are there 3 genre listings? Inspirational, Other: By listing 3 genres more people looking for something to read in that genre will be able to find your work better.
Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening line that does grab my attention.
Is the structure good for the Reader? Nicely structured article that is easy for the reader.
My two cents worth is only one opinion:Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love, Thank you for sharing this work, it is a good read.
Well written essay with a lot of good advice.
Well worded and structured, this makes it very easy for the reader.
If I had to make a suggestion:None
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Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well worded with a unique rhyming pattern that gives this poem a nice original flow.
Elizjohn, thank you for sharing this unique work I have enjoyed reading it. I had just read your poem "of pirates and villains, mothers and sons" it was so good that I had to read another. Thank you.
Artistic Voice and Imagery:This poem works the words together making a great tone for this work.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:A nicely structured poem.
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:elizjohn, this is a beautiful poem with a great rhyming scheme.
Thank you for sharing this unique and original work of art. This reader has enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
Artistic Voice and Imagery:Jack the Knife is a strong character. An excellent job, writing a poem this size that makes since with the words flowing together so well. I know it is no easy task. You have an artistic voice.
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Nice layout and structure for this unique work of art .
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nice form with the mirror that lets a few words say a lot. Short and to the point just the way today's readers like things .
Artistic Voice and Imagery:The equinoxes are signs of the changing seasons usually coming when we are ready for change .
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A nicely structured poem that really has a good flow, well done .
Prosperous Snow Valentine, thank you so much for sharing this unique and strong poem, I enjoyed reading it, thank you
Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well worded St Patricks Day green poem. I agree with your poem and I to have some Irish in me and wear green on St Patrick's Day.
Artistic Voice and Imagery:This strong poem makes me see green. :)
Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:JCosmos, thank you for sharing this green poem it is a joy to read .
Does the title describe the story? A great title for this article.
What is the style? Parenting advise.
Are there 3 genre listings? Parenting, Children's, Family
Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening that does get my attention.
Is the structure good for the Reader?A good structure that makes it easy for the reader.
My two cents worth is only one Kathleen, thank you for sharing this educational article. I agree with you 100% and have enjoyed reading this article, thank you.
We were raised the same way if you get in trouble at school you get it again at home. Things are so much different now than then. Kids seem way different to.
Well written article with a good structure that is easy for the reader.
I think the title says it best.
If I had to make a suggestion:None.
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Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.
What is the style? Biographical.
Are there 3 genre listings? Other: By listing 3 genres your story can be found by more readers who are looking for that style genre.
Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening.
Is the structure good for the Reader?Nicely structured. Easy for the reader.
My two cents worth is only one opinion:MisticMoon, thanks for sharing this original story. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It does me good to know that there are good people like you in the world.
Well written and told story.
Good dialogue. Well described helping the reader to visualize the scene.
I agree that we should not judge anyone unless we have walked in their shoes.
If I had to make a suggestion: A good proofread and edit never hurts.
Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.
Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.
What is the style? Personal drama.
Are there 3 genre listings? Other: By listing at least three genres your work will be able to be found by more readers.
Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening that does grab this Readers attention.
Is the structure good for the Reader?A nicely structured work. Easy for the reader.
My two cents worth is only one opinion:Your friend Doug sounds a lot like some old friends I used to have.
A well written and well described story that held this reader's attention well.
That horn blowing lady I've seen before too.
Winchester thank you for sharing this entertaining Tale this reader has enjoyed.
If I had to make a suggestion:None
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