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Review of The Bet  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "The Bet"  by Louis Williams

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this tale.

What is the style? Fantasy horror drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Horror/Scary, Comedy, Other

Does the opening line grab my attention? A good opening line that does get my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?A good structured story that is easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Well told mystery with good descriptions. The reader is slowly pulled in.

---"The easiest two hundred bucks I've ever made," Steph with a tail wag.--- [I have a feeling it wont be that easy.]

Good well described characters with realistic dialog. This helps the reader to relate with the story.

A good job with the suspenseful descriptions that build up for the reader.

This story holds this readers attention well

The ending leaves the reader wanting to hear more.


If I had to make a suggestion:Consider experimenting with a more resolved ending or a cliffhanger.

Louis Williams, thank you for sharing this suspeseful story, it has made my heart beat faster. A good read.

Sharing your work is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "The Legend of Captain Six Pins"  by Detective

Does the title describe the story? The title does describe the story well.

What is the style? Legends of pirate treasures, children.

Are there 3 genre listings? Children's, Action/Adventure, Other

Does the opening line grab my attention?Yes the opening line does get my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?Yes this is a good structure for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:

Detective, thank you for this delightful pirate tale.
Very entertaining, a good read.

Captain Six Pens sounds like an honorable pirate.

Well written story. A nice job with the descriptions they seem very kid friendly. Black skull Island and Red Roost trading Company both are good settings for a pirate adventure.

A great ending, this is probably a true story.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review of At Folsom Prison  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Jaeff, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"At Folsom Prison"  by Jaeff KBtW of the Free Folk

Clarity:A good title for this review.

Writing style:Reviewing music personal.


Overall impressions:A well written and informative review of At Folsom Prison and Folson California. :)

I enjoyed hearing about Folsom California. I grew up near Mayberry so I can relate to your reference of out-of-towners and how they can get such a kick out of the town.

I never was a big fan when I was younger. Johnny Cash's music as his voice just grows on you through the years. He was a gifted musician with a distinct style.

A great job writing this informative work about Johnny Cash.

Jaeff, thank you for sharing this work I have truly enjoyed reading it.

Suggestions: None.

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Joseph
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Review of Love Necromancer  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi JCosmos, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Love Necromancer"  by JCocsmos

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great use of the bolded prompt words, in my opinion.

I am going to look up Necromancer to satisfy my curiosity. -A wizard or magician- I have learned a new word.

---If circumstances changed….--- A great choice of words. I really like this entertaining poem.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:A good use of your artistic voice to portray this delightful story.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Well done.

JCosmos, thank you for sharing this inspiring work. I have enjoyed reading this.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi St. Francis II, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Delusion of a crimson fire"  by St. Francis II

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A unique rhyming pattern adds to this poems strong and original flow.

Well worded, this deep poem draws the reader in while holding his attention.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Nicely done, an image of a pirates ship and crew is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics.

St. Francis II, thank you for sharing this strong work, it has my mind working.
A good read! Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Seuzz, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Monster of the Prophecy"  by Seuzz

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy horror drama.

My favorite line:--- "Every seventeenth year," he said, "on the night of the first full moon after the spring equinox, the Hammawihiyo falls upon those stones, there to replenish its storehouse of wisdom ---

Overall impressions: A well written and described tale that reads like folklore or a classic fairytale. Entertaining while holding the readers attention well.

A great job describing the settings this helps get the reader into the story.

Well structured making it easy for the reader and appealing for a browser or potential Reader.

Strong characters with individual sounding dialog.

Well done tale especially considering it starts from a prompt.

Seuzz, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow, I came across this story while random reviewing. I am glad that I did this story has inspired me to set my goals.

My impressions of:"Dear Me"  by Prosperous Snow celebrating

Clarity:A great title for this inspirational story.

Writing style: personal inspirational diary

My favorite lines:--- When your inner critic says, “It can’t be done!” Prove your inner critic wrong. ---

Overall impressions:I love the way you start this letter, telling yourself to focus on the future instead of crying about the past. I thought I was the only one that did that.

I like the way you start the paragraphs with the dates and news of the time.

A great reference to your Grandfather Newland and his strong will and determination.

Your strong writing has inspired me. Well done.

Prospherous Snow, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Joseph
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Review of Liminal  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Mirage, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Liminal"  by Mirage

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A very deep poem, short yet strong enough to
get the readers mind thinking about the words of this unique poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Well written poem, painting an image filled with questions.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Mirage, thank you for sharing this unique and strong poem. It is a joy to read.

Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Seuzz, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"S02E07 "A Game of Cops and Robbers""  by Seuzz

Clarity:A great title for this adventure tale.

Writing style:Fantasy comic adventure.

My favorite line:--- "Those weren't the real cops, you numbskull!" ---

Overall impressions:Well told story filled with action. This draws the reader into the story line.

Well described characters, this keeps the story real for the reader.

Nicely structured story. This makes it easy for the reader and inviting for a browser or potential reader.



Seuzz, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi GERVIC,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Antique Mirror"  by Gervic

Clarity:Awesome title for this classic.

Writing style: Inspirational and descriptive fantasy drama.

My favorite line:--- This was the Mirror dimension, where time ran backward and logic took a holiday.---

Overall impressions:This is a beautifully described story. A picture is painted well for the reader.

Well chosen words in this deep tale are what grabs this readers attention, holding it throughout the story.

A great job. Scarlett comes to life then guides the reader with her through time, learning together that life is not already written in stone but a canvas yearning to be painted.

GERVIC, thank you for sharing this magical story that has taken this reader's mind in a positive direction.

A great work of art! This story has had a strong effect on this reader.

GERVIC, thank you for sharing this powerful work. It is a joy to read it.

Suggestions:No way.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Sheba, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Predator And The Prey 1"  by Sheba

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Fantasy drama.


Overall impressions:Well written story described in an entertaining style. The descriptions help the reader to picture the settings.

A unique idea for the predator to be the prey.

A strong and likeable character, this helps the reader get into the story better.

Very well structured story making it easy for the reader and enticing for a potential reader or browser.

Sheba, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider more of a cliffhanger style ending.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Scarypotato-Gullible, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Siblings In Their Natural Habitat"  by Scarypotato-Gullible

Clarity:A great title for this humorous story.

Writing style: Humorous tales about children, and human nature.

My favorite lines:---As referenced earlier, children playing in Jumporee Playhouse follow no rules but their own. This results in some behavior that is very abnormal to adult eyes.---

Overall impressions: This is a well written story in a very humorous way, I am still laughing.

Well defined scenarios that are so true, yet funny. Human nature has it share of quirks.

Marcus and Cynthia do sound like typical siblings, your descriptions has done a great job painting their picture.

Scarypotato-Gullible, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Gone  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Mirage, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Gone"  by Mirage

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well written deep and emotional story expressed artistically in these few strong words.
The unexpected lost of a loved one can cut very deep.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: With these few well chosen words you have expressed pages of emotion.

---I am none the wiser.--- A great ending for the strong work.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problem with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Mirage, thank you for sharing this deep and emotional poem, this Reader has enjoyed it. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Conorwriting, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Love's Dancing Petals "  by Conorwriting

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A declaration of loyalty to a lifetime partner. Well written with a unique rhyming pattern that gives a steady flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A beautiful picture of times landscape is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I can see in the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Conorwtiting, Thank you for sharing this delightful poem, is a joy to read. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Jay, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"My Future Children"  by Jay

Clarity:A good title for this work.

Writing style:Letter to my future children.


Overall impressions: Wouldn't it be nice to be able to reach into the future to advise our loved ones.
A unique idea for this short story. The emotion can be felt from this strong work.

Jay, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider line spacing to make it easier for the reader and more appealing to a browser.
A proofread and edit never hurts. Shorten any long rambling sentences.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Myles Abroad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"An Overactive Imagination"  by Myles Abroad.

Clarity:A nice title for this story.

Writing style:Suspense drama.


Overall impressions:A well written and structured story given it a realistic tone.

Good characters sharing realistic dialog.

Great job with the descriptions, they paint the stories images well for this reader.

Myles Abroad, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Review of Buffy  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Tracker, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Buffy"  by tracker

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Tracker this is a beautifully written work of art. Emotions jump out of this poem and grab the reader. Well chosen words and a unique rhyming scheme give this poem an unforgettable flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Your artistic voice shows as you bring Buffy the orange haired cat back to life with this classic poem. Well done.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problems with the spelling, grammar or mechanics.

Tracker, thank you for sharing this awesome work. It has been a joy to read and has inspired me.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Big Bad Wolf, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"True Grit Book-Movie-Remake"  by Big Bad Wolf is hopping

Clarity:A good title for this entertaining comparison story.

Writing style: Reviewing and comparing works to one another.

My favorite line:--- At first, the trio doesn't get along, but after a while, they warm up to each other.---

Overall impressions:A great comparison of the two movies to the original book.

A great job describing the movies, it has been a while since I've seen them but you brought them back to life for me.

Big Bad Wolf, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi AmyJo, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Home for a Holiday"  by AmyJo-only 2 steps behind

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful holiday poem. Well-worded with a nice structure to create a nice flow for this poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:---Dreaming of a white Christmas and being with the family-- those two lines say it all in a few words.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems with the spelling grammar or mechanics that I see.

AmyJo thanks for sharing this poem, it has taking me back to the holidays.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)

My impressions of: "The Project 2435 words"  by amateur40

Does the title describe the story? The title does not describe this story.

What is the style? Action/adventure drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Other: By listing 3 genres your story will be able to be found and read by more viewers looking for that time genre.

Does the opening line grab my attention?The opening lines could be better grab this readers attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?Better line-spacing would make this story easier to read for a reader especially those with weak eyes.

My two cents worth is only one opinion: Amateur40, thanks for sharing this adventure tale. It is an interesting story.

Well written adventure story full of action. Very detailed descriptions.

If I had to make a suggestion:Consider line-spacing and a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader. A good proofread and edit to catch any typos or mistakes. A title better describing the contents of this story.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review of I am jobless  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Ashok Banerjee, Welcome to the disability writers group and WDC.
I feel sure you will like it here as I do.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "I am jobless "  by Ashok Banerjee

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nicely worded poem that most readers will probably relate to. A nice twist with the humorous ending.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: This poem paints a picture of going for a job interview. Most everyone has had this experience before, that's why they will relate to this original poem.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can find no problem at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics .

Ashok Banerjee, thank you for sharing this unique poem I have enjoyed reading it.
Write On!

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Review of 17. Blindsided  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of: "17. Blindsided"  by aracrae

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this work.

What is the style? Biographical drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Thriller/Suspense, LGBTQ+

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening line, however it could be stronger to grab the readers attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?Nicely structured, easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Well written story with a good structure.

Well described with a lot of detail. This helps the reader to picture the scene's.

Good characters sharing well-written dialog.

The story ends with a lot of action keeping the reader drowned in, and wanting to know more with a little mystery at the end.

If I had to make a suggestion: A good proofread and edit never hurts consider a stronger opening line to draw the reader in faster.

Aracrae, Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi J.R. Pete I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Masterly - Express it in Eight - 4-1-24"  by J.R.Pete

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great job for this acrostic poem. This short poem is deep and says a lot in only a few words.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:A masterpiece, sometimes we get so caught up with worldly matters that we become overwhelmed. That's when its best to step back and reboot.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:All looks good for me.

J.R.Pete this eight line poem has said a lot to me, thanks for sharing your work.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Monster V, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Crocodile and The Plover"  by Monster V

Clarity:A great title that describes this story well.

Writing style: Childrens, animal drama.

My favorite lines:--The crocodile seemed content with her answer and turned around to slide back down into the river, shouting a good-bye as he swam off. The plover herself shouted back and quickly took off, her belly full and ready to feed her hatchlings.--

Overall impressions:Monster V this is a delightful and entertaining tale, thanks for sharing it.

Well written words that make this story relaxing and joyful.

Nicely structured giving the story a delightful flow and making it easy for the reader.

Reads like a classic fairy-tale.

thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Kevin, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "The Stuttering Hedgehog of WW Two."  by Kevin F Dunn

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:WOW! What an epic work. A nice touch by using stuttering in a positive way. A unique rhyming pattern that works great for this poem and enhances the overall tone.
Formatted well with a catchy structure that is easy for the reader.

With the short attention span of today's reader, I wonder if this classic poem may actually be to long for children, or young children.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:You are blessed with an artistic voice . For me this poem paints a nice cartoon like image of WW2.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see nothing at all wrong with the grammar, spelling or mechanics.

Kevin F Dunn, thank you for sharing this strong ballad this reader has thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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