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Review of Nature's Grace  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi again Dave, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Nature's Grace"  by Dave

Clarity:A good title for this delightful poem.

Writing style:Structured poetry.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A nice rhyming pattern that gives this unique work it's refreshing flow.
Natures grace, no artist can encase. Well said this is so true wouldn't it be amazing to be able to write something as beautiful as nature's grace.

Dave, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi April Desiree, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Get Out of My Mind"  by April Desiree-I'm back!

Clarity: A good title for this poem.

Writing style:Poetry.

My favorite line:--- I occupy the battle cry of warrior women scorned
and forge in fire
your funeral pyre,
our union seldom mourned---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written poem with a nice rhyming pattern that that gives a good flow to this poem.

A nicely structured poem. I like the big font, it makes it easier on my weak eyes.

April Desiree, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi HollyMerry, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Rosie westie at the park"  by HollyMerry

Clarity:A good title for this poem.

Writing style:Nature pet poetry.

My favorite line:--- Her coal-black eyes glisten for an adventure---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written poem with a nice structure. This makes it easier for the reader.

A delightful easy going relaxing flow to this poem.




HollyMerry, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nanapockets, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"MY MOM IS THE WORST COOK IN THE WORLD!"  by Nanapockets

Clarity: A great title that describes the contents of the story well.

Writing style: Family children's drama.

My favorite line:---Mom has a habit of trying to fool us into eating whatever it is she cooks.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well written entertaining story. Nice structure for this story. This makes it easier for the reader.

I can't help but to feel like you're exaggerating a bit however I have heard of people that could burn water, so I suppose I believe it.

Nanapockets, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Dave, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Puppy's Portrait"  by Dave

Clarity:A good title for this pet poem.

Writing style: Pet poetry.


My favorite lines: ---When artist paints the doggy's face
and pigments color empty space,
arranged in glowing graphic style
to show her Mona Lisa smile,
emotions flow at rapid pace.---



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great rhyming pattern that contributes to the unique flow of this lovely poem.

Well done, this poem is very entertaining.

Dave, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Mary Ann MCPhedran, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Sylvester Is A Smart Cat"  by Mary Ann MCPhedran

Clarity:A great title for this poem.

Writing style:Pet poetry.

My favorite line:--- Jumps on to the sink
'I need a drink.'---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A lovely poem. Short, sweet and to the point, with a few words you have said a lot about Sylvester the black cat.

Mary Ann MCPhedran, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi intuey, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"A Fisherman's Tale"  by intuey

Clarity:A good title for this work.

Writing style:Animal, environment poetry.

My favorite line:--- Jonah would know this intense feeling.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: --We watched the stars starting to wake up from their sleep.-- I love that line.

A well written poem that is strongly worded which gives this work its realistic flow.



Intuey, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Bobby [162]  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kare Enga, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Bobby [162]"  by Kare Enga in Montana

Clarity:Seems like an appropriate title for this tale.

Writing style:Friendship drama.

My favorite line:---Boys will be boys... if they only knew.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great start for this story. I love the part about the treehouse. Eleven is a good age, growing from a child to a young adult.

A well told story, the emotion scream's out to the reader. This 385 word story is two or four thousand words worth, factoring in the emotion, the mystery. This draws the reader deep into the work, leaving him wanting to know more, wanting to turn the page.

Nicely structured making it easy for the reader while inviting to a potential reader.

A great use of the prompt words.
Kudos.



Kare Enga, thank you for sharing this wonderful work, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:No suggestions.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi MoonChilde, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"An Observation of Homelessness"  by MoonChilde

Clarity:A good title for this informative article.

Writing style:Educational research article


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Very well written is this extremely informative article. A lot of what seems to be well researched information.

Your hometown sounds like a good one. Unfortunately around here where I live I guess someone homeless would starve pretty quick.

Good luck I agree with you there's a lot in our system that needs fixing homeless no doubt should be up on top.

MoonChilde, thank you for sharing this informative story, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A nice structure however you might consider a blank space between paragraphs or some of the longer ones. This might make the article appear more inviting to a browser or potential reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Cr1tkalZer0, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Crying in the Midwest "  by Cr1tkalZer0

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Sounds like a great place to be. This is an awesome poem, Midwest living sounds a lot like country living where I come from.

This is a well written poem that describes well enough to take the reader there to Camelot camping out under the stars.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I think we all have that happy place we remember yet can't find.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:A great poem, no problems with the mechanics.

Cr1tkalZer0, thank you for sharing this awesome poem that has transported this reader to that happy place .
Write On!

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Review of Emoticon Fun  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Sum1, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Emoticon Fun"  by Sum1

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Nicely done. I remember when emoticons started being used. They have progressed leaps and bounds from then, yet they are still a lot of fun.

A good rhyming pattern in the poem that helps add to its unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of a kid waking from a dream.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: All good here.

Sum1, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review of Think  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi elie444, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Think "  by elie444

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse diary style writing about personal thoughts and questions at a crucial time in life's journey. Emotional questions regarding the future.
God works in mysterious ways. One day all seems grey with thoughts of doom and gloom then comes the day when all makes perfect since, clear and focused understanding that those dark times are what makes us strong, defining our true self. Understanding that walking thru those dark times led us to our true identity, to the place where all is clear as a spring morning. A time we realize it was never about him or her or this place or that place, only about our journey that brought us closer to our creator.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:This reader see's the portrait of a young caterpillar lost then finding the light, blossoming into a beautiful butterfly.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Ellie444, thank you for sharing your story, that has awoken the philosopher.
Write On!

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Review of A Musing  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi Words Whirling 'Round, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "A Musing"  by Words Whirling 'Round

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:I love this awesome poem, I know Eb and Flo quite well.
A great rhyming pattern that contributes to the creative flow of this epic work. The comic font is perfect for this entertaining poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: For this reader the portrait seen is of two people paddling down a river, one is a little tipsy the other a little too serious.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that this reader can see.

Words Whirling 'Round, thank you for sharing this classic work.
Write On!

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Review of Bunker Kitty  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Inkly Ascension, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Bunker Kitty "  by Inkly Ascension

Clarity:a nice title for this story.

Writing style: A cats tale

My favorite line:--- Oh my, I'm getting old and it's catching up to me….---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A nice structure for this tale. This makes it easy for the reader while inviting for a browser or potential reader.

Well described making it easy for the reader to picture the scene.

A delightful cat tale.



Inkly Ascension, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: With the short attention span of today's reader you might consider a good proofread and edit, I feel this story could be shortened without taking away from the flow. Consider adding some action to better keep the readers attention.

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Review of Caress  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi Ken, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Caress"  by Hunters Moon

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:I love the image, nice art work. A nice rhyming pattern for this romance poem. A bonus bit of information given about the English Sonnet also Morpheus.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a temptress is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:A great job.

Ken, thank you for sharing your this delightful poem, it is a joy to read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi intuey, I came across this story while helping Tracker.

My impressions of:"Down The Rabbit Hole"  by intuey Go T Survivor

Clarity:A nice title for this tale.

Writing style: Fantasy supernatural drama.

My favorite line:--- Or is it my physical essence dripping from this world to enter the next? I'm not sure.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A strong emotion filled trip down the rabbits hole.

Well written with great descriptions. This reader can feel the emotions from the words in this story.
This reads much like a dream. Well done.

A good easy to read structure that makes it easy for the reader and inviting for the browser.

The dialog reads very realistic helping to bring the reader deeper into the story.
We are loved. I know because I've been down the rabbit hole. A great ending.

Intuey, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi WW, I came across this poem while helping Tracker review.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Boiled Peanuts, Grits and Straw Hats"  by WW On The Road Again!

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A calm easy to read form with a random rhyming scheme giving this work it's poetic flow.

--- It would be a coin of silver so that you never know poverty,
a piece of cake so you never know hunger
and a piece of coal to guarantee your warmth.---
Well said, this is familiar to lines from several classic poems.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait of a yearly family reunion is brought to this reader's mind.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I see no problems with the mechanics of this awesome work.

WW, thank you for sharing this cheerful work, it has taken my mind to a happy place.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Bombs Bursting In Air"  by W.D. Wilcox

Clarity: A good title for this adventure tale.

Writing style: Adventure war drama,


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A great adventure tale paced with realistic action.

Strong characters, great descriptions that takes the reader into the scene hearing the bombs dropping.

A great job with the dialogue very realistic and individual for each character.

A great structure with the large font and good spacing making it easy to read for any reader.


W.D. Wilcox, thank you for sharing this entertaining and exciting work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Have a Heart  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ned, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Have a Heart"  by Ned

Clarity:A great title for this mystery tale.

Writing style: Mystery short story.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great mystery short story. Well written with a good structure that is easy for the reader. A good narrative with strong characters. A nice twist at the end which caught this reader off guard.

Ned, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of BUTTERFLY  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Dr M C Gupta, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "BUTTERFLY"  by Dr M C Gupta

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A beautiful poem with a unique rhyming scheme.

Meticulously worded to end with a delightful poem.


Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait of a butterfly with its wings clipped is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I can find no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Dr M C Gupta, thank you for sharing this gracious poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi John Q Public, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Thoughts About Life"  by John Q Public

Clarity: The title describes the content of the article well.

Writing style:Personal opinion article.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written article describing personal views on life.

Well structured article that is easy for the reader.

Indeed Mother Nature is unpredictable.

I like the use of a Patrick Henry quote.

John Q Public, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kanishka, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Having the last laugh"  by Kanishka

Clarity:A good title for this article.

Writing style: Personal opinion article

My favorite line:--- Humour is a time-tested way of coping with stressful situations.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Well said. Humor is a good thing and does help break the moods. True it does have to be played right or someone might take it the wrong way.

Humor is indeed an art form and some people have it and some don't. It is funny how some people have no sense of humor at all however they are extremely sharp in a different area.

Kanishka, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review of The Book of Truth  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Book of Truth"  by Jacky

Clarity:A nice title for this story.

Writing style:Personal relationship drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A delightful story about relationships and opposites attracting. It is true that opposites attract.

Nicely structured making it easy for the reader. Good descriptions that help to visualize the story.

A nice job with the dialog.


Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi again Ivey,I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "dear Lord give me a new start "  by Ivey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A powerful prayer poem. Nice rhyming scheme. A good form that is easy for the reader.

Indeed we are so blessed to have a merciful and forgiving God who seems to understand how weak humans are. God works in mysterious ways, it is those darkest times in our lives' that make us stronger then aids in defining us individually.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of the early life of a saint is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I see no problems with the mechanics of this beautiful poem.

Ivey, thank you for sharing this strong poem that has inspired this reader.
Write On! God bless!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

Hi Ivey, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "That Big Beautiful Tree"  by Ivey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nice form with a good rhyming pattern.
I particularly like the structure of the first 5 or so lines.
I like that you used a tree and the four seasons of the tree and leaves growth and decay. This is a nice easy to picture scene for the reader.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait of a big oak tree weathering the seasons is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: All the mechanics of this poem look fine to me.

Ivey, thank you for sharing your lovely poem. Write On!

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