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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kathleen, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"College Should Change Your Mind by Kathleen Cochran

Clarity:A good title for this article.

Writing style: Personal opinion article.

My favorite line:--- They already know it all. ---

Overall impressions: A well written and informative article.
A good idea for this story, personally I feel that these days college is overrated and all about tuition.

This is a well written and well structured article, easy for the reader.


Kathleen, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hi bob county, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Next; the rings of Jamie Lee Curtis by bob county

Clarity:A good title, however it could better describe this story.

Writing style:Short story.


Overall impressions: This looks like it could be the good start of a story or a rough draft.

These two paragraphs seem to be well written. I'm bad for jotting down ideas and outlines figuring to look and finish at another time. This appears sort of like that to me.



Bob County, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Take another look at it, a good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Severance  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Writer_Mike, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Severance by Writer_Mike

Clarity:A good title. The title could better describe the contents of the story.

Writing style: Spiritual short story.


Overall impressions: A well written contest entry short story.

A good opening line. It could be stronger to better grab the readers attention.



Nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

Writer_ Mike, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of WHAT SHOULD I DO?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi friska kida, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"WHAT SHOULD I DO? by friska kida

Clarity: a good title.

Writing style:Personal documentary drama.


Overall impressions:Well written diary entry style. College is only an extention of high school. In these times it is overrated and all about getting that tuition money. When the economy slows down they are among the few that still show profit.

friska kida, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi J.R. Pete, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Chapter Forty-Five - Hello Again by J.R. PETE

Clarity:A good title for this sci-fi tale.

Writing style: Sci-fi adventure drama.

My favorite line:--- "OK, that's it. I am standing right here in front of you and you both are acting as though I am an inferior being.---

Overall impressions:J.R. PETE, thanks for sharing this descriptive sci-fi adventure tale, it reads good.

A well described story, with strong characters. This makes the story more believable for a reader.

Good opening that draws the reader into the tale.

A good job of world building. This helps to draw the reader in and makes him want more.

A nice professional structure that is easy to read and looks more inviting to a browser or potential reader.


J.R. PETE, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A good proof read and edit never hurts.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Jaeff, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "The Mystery of Malachi by Jaeff KBtW of the Free Folk

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Well written poem in a challenging style. Pantoum with reaping lines, begins and ends with the same line. I bet that could get tedious while writing.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait of Malachi (the poet) is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Jaeff, thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, a joy to read. Write On!


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Bob County, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The End of the Rope by Bob County

Clarity:A good title, however it does't describe the contents of this story clear.

Writing style: Fantasy religious political drama.


Overall impressions: A nice use of present day people and icons in the story. The story is laid out similar to poetry with 8-9 line stanzas.

Perhaps a screenplay. Is that what this is?
This story seems to jump around a lot and this is a bit hard to keep up with. Some great writing and the unique idea.

This story definitely makes an interested reader work to try and see if you miss something.


I Like this story, can see great potential here.



Bob County, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider some line spacing and bigger font to make it easier to read. Take another look a good proofread and some editing and you have a masterpiece.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi sinbad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Knowledge is crucial by Sinbad

Clarity:A great title for this educational article.

Writing style:Educational opinion.


Overall impressions: Great job on this informative well structured historic article.

You're preaching to the choir brother, don't get me started.


Those pandemic times seem so long ago when in reality it was yesterday. Now it seems the world is trying to make up for lost time. Where that leads us is the question I would like the answer to.

Knowledge is crucial: well said, so true.

This is the most informative article about the pandemic that I have seen. It is amazing that humans become so vulnerable that they will believe almost anything. In a panic they can even be herded like wild animals. What history will uncover about the pandemic conspiracy will be a story that I would love to read.


I like ---I will list *5 important things* that we know now that we didn’t know in February 2020 for your understanding.---
Interesting the new things learned after 6 months of the pandemic.


Sinbad, thank you for sharing this strong work that has taken me back in time. :) It has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A updated follow-up from then to now.

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Review of Flood  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi again Eveandthetree, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "Flood by Eveandthetree

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful love poem that seems to turn to hate. A good rhyming pattern. There is a thin line between love and hate because the emotion is so strong.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:Your artistic voice paints a picture of a worn out relationship that needs to be left behind, looking toward a better future.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Eveandthe tree, thank you for sharing this poem, it is a good read.
Write On!


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jeffhans, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Project Argus meets Project Archimedes by Jeffhans

Clarity:Seems like a good title.

Writing style:Sci-fi world building.


Overall impressions:Well written introduction for what looks like the start of building the setting for a sci-fi adventure.

A great description.


Jeffhans, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider breaking down the long paragraphs into shorter ones to make this appear less intimidating for a potential reader.


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Joseph
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Review of The Kinfolks  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Kodah, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Kinfolks by Kodah

Clarity:The title somewhat describes the story.

Writing style:Mythological folktale drama.


Overall impressions:A well written tale that reads much like our classic fairy tales.

Billy is a strong well described and likable character.

A great job with the descriptions. This helps the reader to get into the story better by pictureing the setting.


Kodak, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a more detailed conclusion or a cliffhanger.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi InPraiseofFolly, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "The meal You made Yourself by InPraiseofFolley

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: The meal you made yourself. Ain't that the truth.
A well worded and well written deep and emotional poem.

I think that our human nature dictates we can't be happy. I can't think of anyone that is.


Artistic Voice and Imagery: The image of someone feeling sorry for their self is painted.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

InPraiseofFolly, thank you for sharing your work, this is a good read.
Write On!


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Review of Alone  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sumojo, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Alone by Sumojo

Clarity:A good title for this entertaining short.

Writing style:Fantasy personal drama.

My favorite line:--- My heart hammered, the sound pulsed in my ears.---

Overall impressions:Sumjo, thank you for sharing this story, it is a good read.

I like the large font. A well written short story that reads sort of like a mystery.

How did the window get broke? Did the bird break it? What killed the bird? A bit of mystery that leaves the reader wanting answers.


Sumjo, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a blank line between paragraphs to make this story appear less intimidating for a potential reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Shika/Noah, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Black Fur Coat by Shika/Noah

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Fantasy folklore drama.


Overall impressions: Well written with a great narrative voice.

Great descriptions that helps the reader to get into the story.

A bit of mystery in the story as to whether Sam was and animal trapped in a human body or there was some kind of spell on the coat. I had to reread the story and still am not sure.



Shika/Noah, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider a little more detail to solve the mysteries that this reader found.

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Review of Bitter Tears  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Kristi, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "Bitter Tears by Kristi

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Kristi, thank you for sharing this poem,
and teaching me about constanza. I like new challenges and gonna have to try this.

Well written, a good job with the rhyming pattern, as well as the overall poem.


Artistic Voice and Imagery: Your artistic voice can be heard in this beautiful yet sad poem.
I know it had to be challenging.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can see with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi StephBee,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Bubba's Corner BBQ by StephBee - House Targaryen

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Comedy drama.

My favorite line:---“Well, Bubba’s Curve BBQ don’t make no sense now, does it?”---

Overall impressions:Well written story and contest entry. Nice use of the prompt.

Good characters with great dialog.

Written in a very realistic style. I like the use of the 63 Ford Falcon they were driving in.



StephBee, thank you for sharing this entertaining work, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Tim Chiu, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "The Wrong Way - A Visionary Totality by Tim Chiu

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Tim Chiu, thank you for sharing this unique poem. It is a good read.

A well written free verse poem with good descriptions and a calm flow.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:Nicely described poem. I picture politics a/k/a a dog and pony show.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the spelling, grammar or mechanics.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Amid Heaven and Hell Chapter 1 by Stam Kourz

Does the title describe the story? The title some-what describes this story.

What is the style? Spiritual fantasy drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Dark, Fantasy, Religious

Does the opening line grab my attention?The opening line could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?A nice structure, however it would be better for the reader with line-spacing and maybe breaks between longer paragraphs.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:
Stam Kourz, thank you for sharing this powerful story. I have enjoyed reading it.

Well written story with good descriptions that help the reader to picture the scene.

Strong characters with good dialog. This helps to draw the reader into the story.

A good story-line and narrative.


If I had to make a suggestion:Consider a stronger opening line to grab the readers attention. Line-spacing and breaks would make the story less intimidating for a reader or browser.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ravi Ranjan Goswami, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Examination Result by Ravi Ranjan Goswami

Clarity:A good title.

Writing style: Personal childrens drama.


Overall impressions: A well written story with a good structure.

Good description's of Raju and his feelings.

I'm glad Raji was happy in the end. So I guess the parents were examined earlier that week.


Ravi Ranjan Goswami, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider more action in the story to grab the readers attention.

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Review of Oops  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hi Beholden, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "Oops by Beholden

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written, nicely structured, entertaining poem.

This is my favorite line.
--- see myself entrapped in age,
aware the body falls apart---


Artistic Voice and Imagery:Clean and cob-web free something just ain't right.
Great choice of words that give a nice flow to this poem.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi ikiyasama,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Kleenex Confessionals by ikiyasama- House Targaryen

Clarity:A nice title for this tale.

Writing style: Personal experience drama.


Overall impressions: Well written in a realistic tone that sounds as if a true story.
Many readers love true stories, as I do.

Sounds like we were raised similar in the old ways.

A good writing work, I know that writing true stories can be extremely hard to do.


ikiyasama, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider breaking some of the longer paragraphs into shorter ones, this will make it appear more appealing to a potential reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi jackiemuse, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Saturday Night WC 297 by Jackiemuse

Clarity:Seems to be a good title.

Writing style:Personal drama.


Overall impressions: Well written story, especially considering it was written as a contest entry.

Written with a soft leisurely tone that works well for this unique story.

I like the way you ended this story with a bit of humor.


Jackiemuse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Bex, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.


My impressions of the poem: "Pretending just a little bit by Bex

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Nicely written poem in a unique style with repeating lines come together in this poem for a great unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:--- pretending just a little bit--- just enough to get the kick of it.---
These catchy lines work well and add to this poems tone.


Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A great job no problems at all that I see.

Bex. thank you for sharing your work, it is a joy to read.
Write On!


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Review of Mama Bear  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}My impressions of:"Mama Bear by Temperance Stone

Clarity: The title works well for this delightful story.

Style:Personal experience drama.

Genera listing: Animal: by listing all three genres your work will be able to be found by readers looking for that genre. Giving your story more views.


My 2 cents is only One opinion:A well written and well described nature tale.

I like how you describe the mama bears thoughts.

Well-worded and told story with a calm easy going tone.

Do you really see this bear every Sunday?

Bears in the woods usually do not pay much attention to a humans, at least the few times that I have seen one in the mountains.

Temperance Stone, thank you for sharing this delightful story. It has brought back memories for me I have enjoyed reading it.



Suggestions
: None

Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!
Joseph

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Review of Abandoned  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Presley Rhodes, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Abandoned by Presley Rhodes

Clarity: This title works for this story.

Writing style: personal biographical emotional drama.


Overall impressions: the emotion screams out from this strong writing.

Everyone experiences these type feelings at certain points through life's journey. I'm reminded of a poem.

Lord, give me the strength and wisdom
To change the things I can
To not dwell on the things I can't
And to know the difference.
Amen

Focus on tomorrow, make tomorrow better. One step at a time.

Presley Rhodes, this is a strong work. Try the opposite approach and write something to make someone laugh. Writing may be your gift.


Presley, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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