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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Chaos: Deathly Beginnings Chapter Two

Does the title describe story? Seems like a good title for this story.

What style? Teen fantasy, drama.

Are there three genre listings? Dark, Fantasy, LGBTQ

My favorite line: -- She always begged Beatrice for therapy, but she always denied it. Beatrice didn’t want her saying too much; her childhood experiences taught her not to trust therapists or counsellors --

This is only one opinion: Well written and nicely structured story.
Good descriptions with strong character's and dialog.
A realistic writing style. Some good twist with the prophesy that keeps the reader alert.

Good ending leaving the reader wanting to know more.
Holds this readers attention well.
Thanks for sharing this interesting story, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: A good proof read and edit wouldn't hurt the story.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}My impressions of: truck and tractor books - Books For Boys

Clarity: The title works well for this outline.

Style: Childrens Books
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My 2 cents is only One opinion:
All six or nicely worded and well structured. Toddlers should love them. My favorite 3 are below.

I like #1. "Tractors help us every day in many ways."
Just some ideas, Consider: "To conclude"
"Tractors help grow our food."

#5 Looks good. I like the structure, especially the scenery's should make for great image's.

#6 Definitely, I think it is my favorite. Consider starting with "Tractors work hard day by day" "In the sun" "In the rain" "Sometimes in the snow"...

Great work as is, tried to throw a couple idea's. Thank you for sharing this great work, I enjoyed it, I'm a toddler at heart. :)



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My impressions of: Grandma McGonagall

Does the title describe story? The title decribes this story fairly.

What style? Childrens fanfiction.

Are there three genre listings? Experience, Fanfiction, Children's

My favorite line: -- It sounded like the tiniest breeze blowing as all opened the wrappers simultaneously --

This is only one opinion: A good idea for this well written and structured story.
Grandma's are among the wisest people in our life.
Great descriptions. Great dialog.
Thanks for sharing this delightful tale.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

My impression of this newsletter: Smart Quotes and Dumb Coding.


Clarity: The title describes the work well.

Genres: Writing, Computers, How-To/Advice

My impression: A well written, informative and educational article.
I had wondered about the quotation marks. Also have wondered about the typewriters keyboard being outdated. I found this to be a very helpful article, thank you.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Harry and Winnie

Does the title describe story? The title works well for this story.

What style? Crime/mystery

Are there three genre listings? Crime/Gangster, Detective, Comedy

This is only one opinion: Well written mystery story. Good descriptions and strong characters.

This story has a good flow. Very realistic sounding story.
Short, simple and to the point the way todays readers like it.
Thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My impressions of: A Prom Night To Remember

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Teen romance, drama

Are there three genre listings? Friendship, Romance/Love, Other

My favorite line: --My nervousness began to subside and instead was replaced by anger.--

This is only one opinion: A good idea for this nicely written story. Great descriptions and strong characters with good dialog.

A lot of emotion can be felt from this work.
Very realistic as if a true story.
A good flow for this story.
Thanks for sharing this drama, a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: A great story, a good edit to shorten a bit would not hurt the story. Todays readers have a short attention span.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: A Letter to Myself

Does the title describe story? A great title.

What style? Resolutions.

Are there three genre listings? Activity, Contest, Contest Entry

My favorite line: --Creativity Unleashed! --

This is only one opinion: Awesome! A well written motivational letter. Adventure ahoy! Kindness makes a splash!
This has got me psyched up. I like it.
Great advice and suggestions. Indeed its going to be an wonderful year.
Thanks for this entertaining letter, I have enjoyed reading it. Happy New year.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Green Mermaid Inn

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Fantasy, adventure, mythological.

Are there three genre listings? Horror/Scary, Mythology.

My favorite line: -- Relative to what?--

This is only one opinion: An awesome adventure/ thriller story. Kept this readers attention well from start to end.
Well written, great descriptions and strong characters.
Great idea for this work, followed by unique original descriptions.
A realistic tone, this story flows well.
Thanks for sharing this awesome story, I enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: I am 72 and I Remember!

Does the title describe story? A great title for this story.

What style? biographical folklore

Are there three genre listings? Experience, Biographical, Family

My favorite line: Life was hard, but there were love, learning, family, and relationships.

This is only one opinion: A great story and descriptions from a much simpler and different time not so long ago.

You got me by a few years but I can remember well going to the store with .25 cents and get a drink and a candy bar. The pay wasn't much however the cost of living wasn't as inflated as now.

Love riding on the back of a truck. These days I have seen the law require seat belts for children in back of a truck, ain't that crazy.

Families friends and neighbors helping each other was indeed the way of life.

Electricity an indoor plumbing was still being upgraded into the 70s and early 80s.

JFK was president when I was born, killed the same year.

I do remember George Orwell's 1984, would be the end of the world. Predictions said the return of Haley's comet would be the end of the world. Y2K would be the end of the world. The Mayan calendar...

This is a great story well written and very true from a time not long ago.
Thanks for this awesome story.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review of Hidden Trail  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Hidden Trail

Does the title describe story? The title describes the story fair.

What style? Outdoor, nature, activity.

Are there three genre listings? Nature, Activity, Other

My favorite line: --"You've got to try to fit in, or you will be miserable."--

This is only one opinion: A true story about young scout's on a canoe trip down a river.
The descriptions of the trip, events, and characters are all described well by the main character Craig.

Strong characters, I like Craig and can relate to his story. A powerful story that brings back my childhood memories of scouts and tubing down the river. I feel that most people will relate with this story.

Great descriptions of scout picking on each other.

A nice happy ending. I am glad that Craig was happy with his nickname.
Thanks for sharing this great story, it is a joy to read.

If I had to make a suggestion: The title could better describe the story. Consider more action in the opening lines. Great descriptions, with the short attention span of today's readers some could be edited without hurting the story.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: Sergeant Gus and the Day of Joy

Does the title describe story? A great title for this story.

What style? Humorous political folklore.

Are there three genre listings? Comedy, Military, Other

My favorite lines: --Even The Naked Guy was there wearing only a strategically placed stop sign.==

-- The signs stopped waving; people craned their necks, straining forward to hear what this recruiting sergeant was going to announce.

This is only one opinion: Thank you this funny tale. I had to laugh at -- “Ah, ah, ah, ah, oooh!" Oooo Rah!" --. A great story to make me laugh and change my mindset.
I liked it when Gus was talking to himself in the mirror. Great descriptions and names for the protesters, there chants got me laughing again.

All a wonderful story, the last line is the best. A great ending.

If I had to make a suggestion: A great story short funny and to the point. If I had to edit anything it would be the second paragraph.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Honor of Liondin's Legion

Does the title describe story? Good title for this story.

What style? Fantasy adventure, folklore.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, War, Drama



This is only one opinion: Well written with a good realistic narrative.
I like the poem that begins this story.
Written like a historic event gives this story a realistic tone.
A good flow to this story that held this readers attention well.
Thanks for sharing this great story, this reader enjoyed it.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Baby 9 and the Toddlerhood Ceremony

Does the title describe story? A great title for this story.

What style? Children's story.

Are there three genre listings? Children's, Entertainment, Family

This is only one opinion: A well written entertaining story. Baby 9 is a great character.
Good idea for this unique story. Nicely structured, the story flows well.
Thank you for sharing this story, It is a joy to read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:Christmas Anticipation

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Poetry sixteen lines.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: The anticipation does indeed build.
A great Christmas poem. This poem takes me back to childhood memories.
Well worded and structured, I like the emoticons at the end.
Thank you for sharing this great poem. I enjoyed reading it. Merry Christmas


Write on! Keep on writing!
Joseph

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Review of Magical Creatures  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Magical Creatures

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Fantasy, mythological

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Animal

My favorite lines: -- When my mother got really mad, she always spoke in her mother tongue.--

--The snake opened a large mouth, exposing knife-sized incisors, venom dripping from their tips--

This is only one opinion: A great storyline, with good descriptions and strong character.
This great story has the makings for a classic fairy-tale.
I like the ending.
Thank you for sharing this story, I enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking the long paragraphs down into several smaller ones, to make it look less intimidating to the reader. A good proof reading and edit never hurts, as today's reader prefers short and to the point.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Chapter 16.5 to Chapter ???

Does the title describe story? The story currently being updated, the chapter itself has no title yet.

What style? Adventure drama.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Writing

My favorite lines: -- Why is she walking towards the danger? I thought she was a siren.--

This is only one opinion: Well written and described story. Hysteria is a strong character, I really like that name.
I can see a lot of potential with this storyline.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: Today's reader seems to like a bit more dialogue. Several unanswered questions for the chapter to stand alone.

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Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: A Lifetime of Firsts ~ Chapter One

Does the title describe story? The title works well for this story.

What style? Sci-fi drama

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Action/Adventure, Mystery

My favorite line: --"No," she yelled!" Gigi darted behind Greg, hiding as Emily calmed herself, "I mean do I have too?"--

This is only one opinion: A well written story with good descriptions, characters' and dialog.
Emily, Greg and Gigi are great characters.
Gigi hearing the voice is a great idea for the story.
A nice structure making a good flow.
Nice ending. Thanks for sharing this story, it is a good read.



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Review of Stop Or Slow Down  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Stop Or Slow Down

Clarity: A Great title for this.

Style: Humorous folklore.


My 2 cents is only One opinion:Hey PB Curtis, thank you for sharing
this funny story I thoroughly enjoyed it.
A well written story with good descriptions' good dialog and good characters.
Short, simple and to the point the way modern readers like it.
I really liked the ending a very funny story great job.

Suggestions:
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Girl From Mile End. Ch 17.

Does the title describe story? The title works with this story.

What style? Drama, relationship

Are there three genre listings? Drama, Military, Other

My favorite lines: -- He passed the shovel to me. "Your turn," he shouted above the noise of the locomotive.--
--I could taste the fine coal dust on his lips and the salt from his dried sweat, but it just added to my excitement

This is only one opinion: Bruce, I like this story. Well written and structured. Great descriptions.
Strong characters, I like Bobby and Elsie.
Good dialog.
A nice ending. Thanks for sharing this story, it was enjoyable to read.

If I had to make the suggestion:

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Review of The Ironist.  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Ironist.

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe this story.

What style? Relationship drama.

Are there three genre listings? Relationship, Other. Only 2.

My favorite lines: -- Marriage. A curse on society. A blight on us all.--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written
story about people interactions at a dance.
Good descriptions, characters and good dialog.
I like Catalina.
Thanks for sharing this, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: A title that better describes the story. List three genres, this helps a browser can find this story easier.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review of Little Red  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Little Red

Does the title describe story? A good title for this story.

What style? Children's fairy tale.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Children's, Fantasy

My favorite line: --"Wow, you have big teeth!"--

This is only one opinion: A great idea for this fairy tale. Well written and constructed.
This story has a good flow.
An awesome work, short, simple and straight to the point the way today's reader likes things.
Thank you for sharing this, it was a enjoyable read.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Blue Blaze: Chapter 1

Does the title describe story? Good title.

What style? Teen fantasy folklore.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Action/Adventure


This is only one opinion: An Awesome story line with great potential. A good opening that gets the readers attention well.
Well written with good descriptions, a lot of dialog and introducing a strong character.
I like the purple stomach hints of the dragon, making the reader want to know more.
Thanks for sharing this, I have enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make a suggestion: A great story as is. If a had to make a suggestion I would double space to make it easier on the reader. Consider editing out some of the dialogue and a little more action at the end.
For the novel I like the title, for the chapter was looking for some description.

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Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Forbidden Fruit

Does the title describe story? The title works well for this story.

What style? A teen drama written in fairy tale style.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, LGBTQ+, Supernatural


This is only one opinion: A well written story with good descriptions and strong characters'.
I like Juniper and Ember.
A good idea for the time of the Salem witch trials for this setting.
Great job with the ending.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: Most readers like a little bit of dialog.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review of Precision  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Presession

Does the title describe story? The title fairly describes the story.

What style? Adventure drama.

Are there three genre listings? Experience, Career

This is only one opinion: A well written story, short and straight to the point.
I like Max and Lucy, both are strong characters. Good narrative, descriptions and dialog.
A good ending.
Todays reader likes things short and straight to the point, they are in such a hurry. This story does that well with just enough information to make the reader hungry for more.
Thanks for sharing this I enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Is the title spelled correctly?
It is always good to list at least three genres so that a browser looking for such a story can find yours.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Flashes. Chapter 33

Does the title describe story? The title doesn't describe this chapter that well.

What style? Action, adventure.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Other


This is only one opinion: Good construction and layout. A well written story with good descriptions, strong characters and good dialogs.
I like Elfwine and Morgan, I hate Morgan had to die.
A good ending that leaves the reader wanting more.
Thank for sharing this story, it was a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: By listing 3 genre's a browser will be able to find this story easier.

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