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Review of Music  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Music

Inspirational story with dialogue between a couple. Andrea is hearing music but he doesn't.
The title fits well with the story.
Original idea with realistic dialogue.

My favorite line: She was finally free.

This is only one opinion: Strong characters exchanging good dialogue. The story held this reader's attention well. A nice twist at the end caught the reader off guard. A good inspirational ending leaves the reader satisfied. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Impressions of: The Paradoxes of Reviewing

A newsletter detailing some paradoxes that come up while reviewing.
Written as the title suggests.
Using some original realistic problems for examples.


This is only one opinion: An informative newsletter. I like that you used original examples that you had recently run into. I like your example about personal preferences like cussing and do you hold it against the work or not, a good question. When reviewing we try our best to look at things from an unbiased perspective. This can truly be hard to do at times. I liked this newsletter. I found it informative, realistic and well written. Thank you,
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
My impressions of: Psychic Vampires, Vampire Subculture

Clarity: A newsletter for Halloween about different types of vampires.
Style: Informational style
Originality: Original style talking about two different types vampires today's culture.

This is only one opinion: a well written and very informative newsletter. I liked the information about the two types of vampires.
I have never heard about psychic vampires however I know several people that fit the description. I have heard about the cult type and all I can say is there's some crazy people in this world. I don't particularly want to drink nobody's blood.

Keep writing! Write on! God Bless! Well Done - Write On!
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Review of Review Breakdowns  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Review Breakdown

How to type blog on different type of review breakdowns as title suggest.

This is only one opinion: well written informational newsletter. A nice breakdown, a good idea with the pros and cons of each type well done.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Another Day to be Free

This is only one opinion. This Spiritual poem is refreshing. I like work that praises the Lord. A strong poem with a lovely flow. A good consistent rhyming scheme. Thank you, I enjoyed reading this refreshing envelope style poem. Happiness is in the eye of this version of me, Awesome!
Suggestions: Consider experimented with different versions of the 1-8 number line. I wonder if you listen to your work out loud with a computer voice.
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Review of Delicious fruit  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Delicious Fruits

A well written 30 line pantoum poem.

This is only one opinion: I like this poem it has a unique rhythm, good rhyming scheme and I like the repeating lines.
A good job describing the image were they consistent rhyming scheme.
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Review of World Hunger  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
My impressions of: World Hunger

A sci-fi story about the fictional planet Yenion
attempting to cure their planets world hunger.

This is only one opinion: A good idea, nice start comparing it to the 1945 article. A lot of repetitive words and phrases used throughout this story, makes it harder for the reader, loosing his attention. Also gives the appearance of trying to meet a word count. It does sound a lot like the typical politicians in one of their conventions.
Suggestions: A good proofread and edit couldn't hurt. Today's readers like things short and straight to the point.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Life Lessons From E-mails and Forwards

a superb short story is the title suggest. About life lessons and making the best out of work & life.

This is only one opinion: I do know that singing Amazing Grace helps motivate you and lift you to a better mood. I have never heard anyone else say that though. Prayer also helps make a better day, a better mood, and a better you. It is sad that knowing these truths sometimes we still forget to use them. I really enjoyed this story and found it very refreshing.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Life's Questions

A strong poem written from the point of view of one ready to give up.

This is only one opinion: Most people today get caught up from time to time in a boring routine. Changes can be made. Often those hard times make us stronger in the long run.
I'm reminded of this prayer. God give me the strength to change the things I can to understand the things I can't and to know the difference.
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Review of Special Care  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.0)
My impressions of: Special Care

A review type poem about Animal Planet shows on rescuing animals.

This is only one opinion: The author shows emotion as a pet lover. Takes very serious any reference two pets on TV shows.
God give me the wisdom to change the things I can, understand the things I cannot, and no the difference.

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Review of Dragons  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of Dragons

A cute short story about Jeffy

this is only one opinion: I like this story. I think Jeffy's parents were trying to raise him normal and not let him know he was a dragon. This story is short but gets the mind point across good in a timely fashion.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Khun Lek says I am Tired of Waiting

A story about The Love of Life of Sam Adams.


This is only one opinion: I like this story and I can relate to Sam. A good story short straight to the point the way today's reader likes things.After my first marriage I did not want to settle down again. For a time I ran from my second wife when chances to get together came I would find an excuse to go the other way. I knew once we got together I would not be able to say no to her. I just knew from the first moment I met her, well almost 40 years later I'm glad I found her.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: A Mark Left Behind

A strong emotional poem that speaks to you.

My favorite line: If only we could mimic the tree,
And leave a mark for others to see.

This is only one opinion: Superbly written with a natural rhythm. Nature is full of so many hidden treasures that most take for granted. Today's fast paced Society thrives on keeping everyone so busy we forget to stop and smell the roses. I could feel the emotion from this inspirational
work of art.
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Review of Just Do It!  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Just Do It

An inspirational article on how to get things done and quit procrastinating.
The phrase “just do it”, adds a sense of urgency.


This is only one opinion: Superbly written article. If there is one thing that I'm really good at, it would be making excuses. Thank you, I am going to use this
to try and get out of my bad habit of putting off things. Just do it !!
It sounds so easy, just do it. It doesn't have to be perfect, you don't have to reread, edit and rewrite a dozen times, just do it. Just like Tracker said.
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Review of Date from Hell  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Date from hell

A fantasy story about Stanley, a college frat boy and his encounter with a little man who was able to grant wishes.

My favorite lines: - The little man groaned. "You know, I've been summoned over five thousand times since your great-great-great-great-grandpa fell out of a tree, picked up a club, and decided to invent fire," he snarled, "and you, kid, are by far the thickest—!"

-"Text spam and telemarketers. Now that's eternal punishment for the twenty-first century!"

This is only one opinion: Good believable dialogue between Stanley and little man. I enjoyed the story which held my attention well. Keebler Elf was a nice touch, well described with an arrogant yet believable attitude. A superb piece of writing.
Suggestions: The title doesn't seem to match the story.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
{size:3.5{b}}My Impressions of: Stogy Performances come Alive{/b}

This is only one opinion: The author offers their opinion of people and things that were boring in early life. Then they became more lively and popular in later years. The author implies that they had a pretty popular early life and became bored in later years and stuck in a dull routine.
The author points out how some people in later life remain energetic and outgoing. The author implies that they missed out on true love. Old fashioned love, morals and values with long time commitment and loyalty to each other.
I hope it's not too late for you to still find that old fashioned Love Song type of love. This reader has noticed a drastic difference in generations, like night and day. The younger people today seem totally different than they were when I was young. People usually were married at least once by the time they were in their early twenties and quite a few of them lasted. Today's younger generation don't seem interested in that kind of Commitment and marriage until maybe their late thirties. I don't really know the reasons, maybe there's not a good ratio of men to women or vice versa. Maybe it is just because today's society seems to have lost any values and morals that were pounded into our heads by our parents and grandparents. Society is to Liberal and accepting of everything quiet often display things in public that would be better left than private. take TV shows today they would have been x-rated when I was younger.
I really do not know why, only that there is a world of difference. History tends to show patterns similar to this have existed throughout time. I praise the Lord I was born in the time I was. I might not have felt that way then, the grass always looks greener on the other side.
Okay, I didn't really understand this article, but I have to say it must have been strong because it has caused me to start ranting trying to be a philosopher. :)

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Review of rachel  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: rachel

This is only one opinion: It is so hard to lose a family member. Things we took for granted so long we can't do any more. So many regrets yet we must try to look to the bright side. No more pain, sickness or sorrow. Her page has turned to the next chapter. I am sorry for your loss.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Into the Obscure: Ambiguity Chapter 3

Adventure, spy story with Dawn,Joseph,Debora,Gabriela
and Lee fighting their way through.

This is only one opinion: A good idea. I feel like this story has great potential. A long chapter with much for the reader to keep up with. Strong characters with plenty of dialogue. Strong Narrative and great storyline. Too much for this reader to keep up with and loses his attention early in this long chapter before the storyline starts to unfold. I found about the middle to end of the second half of the chapter to hold my attention better. A lot of today's readers may not make it that far.
Suggestions: I know this is a draft of a work in progress, Consider breaking it down to shorter chapters making it less intimidating for the reader. Add more description. Constant dialogue between this many characters confuses the story.

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Review of Star  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
y Impressions of: Star

A nicely written short story about boys and girls' nature..

This is only one opinion: Nicely written short story about young kids and how they react to the opposite sex. It is funny how as young kids the girl or boy we like is the one we will act as if we hate giving us reason to interact. There is a thin line between love and hate. Why? Because the emotion is so strong it can turn from one extreme to the other, staying in a strong state. Well this is a strong story it has got me trying to philosophize. I like it, the story is short, simple and straight to the point. Just how today's reader likes everything. In today's fast-paced society there is no time to waste on unimportant details.

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Review of Morgana la Fay  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Morgan la Fay

Nicely written poem from Morgan la Fays’ point of view.
anaphora style poem


This is only one opinion: I love stories and poems about Camelot times and characters,
I think most people do.I like the anaphora style.
Nicely written poem. Strong and realistic as if written by Morgan herself.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
{{size:3.5}b}My Impressions of: Terabytes and Graphene {/b}

A romance between AI’s set in futuristic settings, with Krim and Amber.

This is only one opinion: Starts out like a romance between Krim and Amber. Ironically, computer generated AI’s experimenting with emotions. They both seem a bit too arrogant to realize their turning human. Strong characters and dialogue for this story with a nice twist at the end. Holds the reader's attention well and leaves him wanting more. Well written.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My Impressions of: Virus Protection using Common Sense

Informative article explaining how viruses can affect the open skin
as well as mouth and nose. Detailing that a mask covering up your
mouth and nose is not enough.

This is only one opinion: Bob and Julie are good characters, well detailed
information about virus protection. Educational newsletter style article. Unfortunately common sense seems to be a lost art with many people.

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Review of Flash Prayers  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My Impressions of: Flash Prayers
A short poem giving praise to God.
The author’s strong faith in the power of Prayer can be felt.

This is only one opinion: Strong, spiritual and emotional poem.
The power of prayer is indeed strong. A daily test of our faith.
Nicely written and refreshing, I enjoyed this. Thank you.

Suggestions: The last line is out of the acrostic format with the rest.
I think that you meant for the a in the first line to go in the fourth line,
A guiding hand instead of a lightning.
Keep writing !

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: "A Reunion in Heaven"

An emotional spiritual poem. The author has a strong faith
which can be clearly felt from this short poem. Those few
words reflect the author's belief in an afterlife in heaven with loved ones as well as the heavenly host. Faith so strong that death is not feared instead welcomed as the opening of the next chapter in the Book of Life.
A well written poem that says a lot in a few words.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Hook to Book Round 3 Sheriff Sam Rabbit

A fantasy children's story about the fictional Sheriff Sam Rabbit.
A unique story written in a humorous Style.
Written as the title suggest


This is only one opinion: A nice and funny children's story holding the reader's attention well from start to finish. Strong characters like Kat the rhyming rat. Good descriptions make it easy to visualize this animated setting for Sheriff rabbit. Sam is easy for the reader to relate to; he must project his persona even though a bit unsure about himself. Good dialogue between characters makes it easy for children to understand this storyline.

Suggestions: With the short attention span of today's reader you might consider breaking the chapters down to fewer words per chapter making it less intimidating for the reader. Consider ending the story with a hint of another mystery to leave the reader wanting more, for a series with these strong characters and narrative.
Keep writing !

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