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Review of Mumsy Dearest  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Mumsy Dearest

Beautiful poem, What can I say? I'm in awe of this great idea! Well structured with a good humorous flow. Like a classic song.

My favorite lines: https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/211...

Thank you for sharing this. It Made my day!
This is only one opinion:
Awesome! Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: The Dream Recorder

Well written suspense story with a Sci-Fi twist
Great job describing the setting. I can picture the floor of the hospital.
Original and realistic story with strong characters and dialogue.

My favorite lines: “This is The Dream Recorder. With it, you can get rid of the dreams and nightmares you don’t want to remember and keep the ones you do.”

Thank you for sharing this. It was a fun read.

This is only one opinion: Well written in a suspenseful style drawing the reader in and holding his attention. Great dialog throughout. Nice sci-fi twist. Good ending Leaving the Reader wanting more.
Suggestions: I think you meant -at least- in this line -At not while I’m at work.”-
Awesome story Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com


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Review of Rob's Rescue  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Robs Rescue

Beautiful Inspirational and emotional story About the wisdom of our heavenly father.

My favorite line : We may get knocked down, muddy, hard to recognize, but He's always there waiting to pick us up and clean us off and give us another chance."

This is only one opinion: Well done! My favorite line tells it all so true. Even though we may not realize it when we’re down and hard to recognize. Time eventually reveals his wisdom to us. God does work in mysterious ways, his ways eventually become clear then we become aware of his infinite wisdom! Praise God almighty who was… and is… and is still yet to come! Strong faith based story makes the point in a few well chosen words. Kudos! Thank you for sharing. God bless!
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com


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Review of Cosmic Serenade  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Cosmic Serenade
Nice title, very original and unique.
Well written romance poem.
A great job with the rhyming. Has a really good flow.

My favorite lines: Through aphelion's course, I'll walk by your side,
In stellar dance, our love shall abide.
A celestial waltz, two souls entwine,
In cosmic rhapsody, our hearts align.

This is only one opinion: Well done thank you for sharing this. Great job. I find no flaws.
A unique poem,Well written..
Great job, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
My impressions of: Cliffs of the Bird Men

Fantasy story Set in an ancient time, well written As title suggest.
Originally and unique idea. A consistent flow.

This is only one opinion: A unique idea written well with good descriptions. Good narrative.
It's probably just me but the story just did not grab my attention and keep it.
Suggestions: A stronger opening line.
Well Done - Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Time Waits for No Man
Well written poem about the nature of time.
Nice style of writing has a good flow.
Thanks for allowing me to read this, I enjoyed it.

My favorite lines: It makes no difference to time, what you use it to do

All you need is to use your time wisely and leave the rest to God

Nicely ended with this line- Make use of any opportunity you have and use your time wisely.

This is only one opinion: Well written, Time is a very deep subject and indeed it does not wait on you, We must keep our faith just as you said. Strong, emotional and religious. Great job! Well Done - Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of Christmas in July  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of Christmas in July
Well written and structured free verse poem about the Heat. This poem has a very good flow and is realistic yet humorous too.
My favorite line: Until guilt starts setting in, the realization:
What am I doing? Wasting everyone's precious resources
making my home an iceberg
When others less privileged are suffering,

This is only one opinion: Well written I liked it great job thank you for sharing.
Well Done - Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of Baseball  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of; Baseball
Well structured poem about baseball. Fans often get carried away with their traditions and pastimes, Indeed a lot of them get so carried away it becomes comical.
This poem describes truths in baseball as well as other sports a few Stars arise and a lot of less well known. Thousands of spectators sit in uncomfortable seats to watch a few players throwing a ball and hitting it with a bat.
This is only one opinion: I found it very well written, a nice flow and humorous. Well done.
Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Towering Competition

Well written as the title suggests. Realistic yet humorous Style.
Original idea well written in a humorous way.

My favorite lines: Finally, the 'height' category was announced. In a surprising twist, the organizers had decided to give prizes for both - the tallest tower and the shortest. Towers were eager to win in either category, and lined up to be measured. Some towers walked with bent knees, so as not to reveal their real height till it was officially measured.

This is only one opinion: Nicely done, very realistic and entertaining. Reads well with a good flow, Thanks, I Enjoyed reading this.
Well Done! Write On!
Joseph WdC Super Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of Nekky's Story  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

My Impressions of: Nekky’s Story

Clarity: strong emotional poem from a victim's View
Style: Well worded and structured poem
Originality: Powerfully described using few words

My favorite lines: Not even my domestic pets are spared.
My movement is restrained, every
friend of mine is a suspect,
and my conversations are thoroughly
scrutinized.

This is only one opinion: Well written reads well with a good flow, strong and emotional. Thanks, I Enjoyed reading this.
Well Done! Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of Intentions  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Intentions

Well written story about the intentions of a little boy Jared.
Thank you for allowing me to read this. I enjoyed it brings back memories from my days in the principal's office.
This story has a good love very original Style well done.

My favorite of lines:
“You’re not in trouble! Go back to class!”
This is only one opinion:Well described strong characters, very realistic.I like that the principal was fair. Jared was noble
indeed.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My impressions of: Rippled Reflection

Well written story about rippled reflection in a Sci-Fi genre. Good idea written with a unique Style.

My favorite of lines: Memories of long ago is an observation that may apply into the future

Rippled reflection anticipates the change from the former self, into a new and better formation, by overcoming the obstacles that tend to get in the way of telling lies that will bring you down to a level of low self-esteem;
This is only one opinion: Worded well. Reads well, I like the Sci-Fi twist. I really like the last line. Reads A Lot Like A poem. Great job. First line is good, it could be stronger. Thanks, I enjoyed reading this. Rock on!
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of The Fly  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: The Fly

Well done, nice story, humorous, realistic and I assume around 300 words. Original idea very creative Style.
My favorite of lines: No, it does bother me when I get caught…
This is only one opinion: Congratulations on winning the contest. Thank you for sharing this. It was enjoyable to read. I like that the narrator talks to inanimate objects. I guess I'm not alone.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you I am going to try this. I just wanted to say that is the best detailed web page for contest I have seen. I really appreciate how you explained so well how to enter and link the item. Well done Write On! The 300 word limit will be a bit of a challenge. Thank you if I can follow through on this challenge then I am really interested in the Talent Pool.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Time Never Slows as Time Flows

Nicely written and constructed poem about time as the title suggest. Original idea has a nice flow. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this poem. Does time exist? Evidently so funny though how time manages to Reveal his secrets.

My favorite of lines: Memories fade as the time goes by
Many friends I’ve lost along the way
All the while I’ve kept my devil at bay
At times my depression has held sway
This is only one opinion: Nicely done I liked it. Time is a deep subject Indeed. Well done! good lyrics I'm trying to put the tune together in my head.Rock On!
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: The Thing From the Fridge

Enjoyable humorous realistic story about things in the fridge.
Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it.

My favorite of lines: "One more shelf to go. We should have this fridge cleaned out by the end of the week."
This is only one opinion: Congratulations this is an excellent written story. It has a nice realistic yet funny flow. I don't think I would change anything. I like the opening line. People should look in the refrigerator more often.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Stars Truly Rise: Seize The Morning Sun

Reads like a historical or political poem. Well written, nice structure, and has a good flow. Thanks for allowing me to read this, it got my mind going in different directions.
My favorite of lines: Of measured approaches,
All coalescing to a technological
And tool-disciplined drive
Toward some focused, dried-up ridges
And withered hillsides;
This is only one opinion: Well worded, Original idea and style. Strong opening line. I like it, but I couldn't really tell you what it was about. That's the art of poetry.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: My Coffee Addiction

Nicely written poem as title suggests.
Poem about coffee in a romantic way.
Unique idea and style.
My favorite lines: I inhale your
luscious aroma, like chicory, and breathe you in deeply,
my king.
This is only one opinion: Nicely written with a good flow. Unique and original, I like it. Thank you Sharing this. If I had to make a suggestion I might try opening With you are my liquid strength.Only a suggestion.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of What I remember  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: What I Remember
Strong poem about the loss of a pet. Well structured poem with a good flow. Original idea is well worded and a bit emotional.
Thank you for allowing me to read this. I enjoyed it. Pets do become like part of the family and it's hard to let them go.

My favorite of lines: So, there you were put down
I watched you leave this world
Back home in bed, I curled
I was alone.

This is only one opinion: Well written, will bring emotions to any pet owner. Nice twist at the end looking to the Future.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Gingerbread Maneuvers

Clarity: About gingerbreads
Style: Poetry
Originality: Reads well has a good flow

My favorite lines:They'd probably describe some nice little creek,
if they were given the chance to speak

This is only one opinion: Nicely written original title describing poem
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdC Super Power Reviewers Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Some People Live in Houses not Homes

Clarity: read as title suggest
Style: Realistic poetry
Originality: Short and simple yet makes a point

My favorite lines:Angry, fearful houses
This is only one opinion: Well written with a good flow. Strong and emotional Poem making your point in a few lines, nice job
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdC Super Power Reviewers Group writing.com
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My impressions of: Wardrobe Malfunction

Clarity: Exactly as the title suggests.
Style: Realistic poetry
Originality: Realistic poem of a real event
My favorite lines: Now she had to pass the test
Be a young lady at her demure best.
She had to impress the movers and shakers
She had to catch the eye of the MATCHMAKERS!!

This is only one opinion: Well done reads well. Nicely worded and described realistic events told in a humorous way. No suggestions for this masterpiece.
Well done, Write On!
Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
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Review of A Christmas Carol  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impression of:A CHRISTMAS CARROLL
Nicely written has a nice flow and rhythm and well done.
Thank you very much for allowing me to review this l really enjoyed it.
Good job with a unique style for this origonal poem from A Christmas Carroll. Well Done Write On! Keep it up! God Bless.
Joseph---WdC Superpowers Reviewers Group
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Review of SANTA IS A PILOT?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of:SANTA IS A PILOT. Nicely written with a good flow. Thanks for allowing me to read this,I truely enjoyed it.
Unique idea followed up with a funny Chtistmas clasic.I am sure Mrs Clause enjoyed the ride. Great job with ACE PILOT.
WELL Done, Write On! God Bless.
Joseph Writing.com Superpower reviewers group
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of; A Place A Time A Dream
Clarity; Well written. As the title suggests.
Style: Poetry 8 lines
Originality: Unique, Nice dedication to Edgar Allan Poe. Very good rhyming

My favorite line: Time does fly out the window

This is only one opinion:Well written And structured poem with rhymes. has a nice flow. short, simple I like it.
Well Done - Write On! Thanks, I enjoyed reading this.
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