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Review of Who am I?  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "Who am I?" Open in new Window. by Bruce.preast

Does the title describe the story? a great title for this poem.

What is the style? Free verse poetry.

Are there 3 genre listings? Teen, Emotional, Writing

Does the opening line grab my attention? a nice opening.

Is the structure good for the Reader? Well structured very easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Bruce, I really like this one I like the way you structured it.

A great idea for this unique work. You say a lot with only a few words. A deep emotional poem.

Bruce, thanks for sharing this work, it has brought back memories for me.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"What do I say to you" Open in new Window. by Christopher Day

Clarity: a nice title for this work.
Style: spiritual poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion:A well written spiritual poem.

Well worded poem. Kind of like a prayer.

I like the questions.

Christopher thanks for sharing this poem, it has got my mind to thinking.




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Rated: E | (4.0)
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"The Silver Saga, Book 1." Open in new Window. by Elliot

Does the title describe story? A good title for this adventure tale.

What style? Family fantasy drama.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Family, Action/Adventure

My favorite line: --On her other side stood the man himself, Farron Whispers, a devilish grin spread on his face.--

This is only one opinion: Elliot, thanks for sharing this awesome story, this reader has enjoyed it.

A good opening that gets the readers attention from the start.

Well-written and well described adventure tale full of action. This helps to keep the readers attention and helps him to get into the story and visualize the scene.

I like that you used birds like vultures, the owl and the Hawk as characters, even though they did turn out to be mutants. A very creative idea.

Strong likable characters with good dialog. This helps to keep the readers attention.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking down the long paragraphs into several shorter ones. This will look less intimidating to the reader. Consider line spacing also, this will make it easier for the reader. Consider a blank line between the longer paragraphs (at least) this will make it easier for the reader. Consider a cliff hanger ending or a conclusion.

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Review of The Soup  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: "The Soup" Open in new Window. by W.D. Wilcox

Does the title describe story? a good title for this story .

What style? horror

Are there three genre listings? Horror/Scary, Other: By listing three genre's your story will be able to be found by more readers searching for that for that type genre.


This is only one opinion: This is an awesome story especially considering only 200 words.
A very well written and well structured story with a good twist for the end.

Thank you for sharing this story it is a pleasure to read it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review of Magic  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Magic" Open in new Window. by Just Jay

Clarity: The title is great for this awesome short story.

Style:Fantasy story.

Genera listing: Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Contest Entry

My favorite line:--"Yer makin' me nervous," said her friend, eyes darting around the room, all the while ducking his head.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: This is an awesome story written with only a few words.
Perfect for today's reader with their short attention span.

Thank you for sharing this work it is giving this reader some ideas.

Suggestions:None
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"He Never Interrupts" Open in new Window. by Kenzie

Clarity: a great title for this poem.
Style: spiritual poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion:
Kenzie, I absolutely love this poem. I tend to babble on and on myself. This poem really speaks to me.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem it has refurbished my mind.



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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"A Powerful Status - A Global Mark" Open in new Window. by Tim Chiu

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Political, military, personal.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem about the military.

Nicely structured short and to the point just the way today's reader likes things.

Short vague lines that allow the reader to explore using their own personal views.

Tim, thank you for sharing this poem it is a good read and has got this readers mind to working.


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Review of AKIN  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"AKIN" Open in new Window. By Frankie Rae

Clarity: a great title for this poem.
Style: poetically personal.

My 2 cents is only one opinion:Frankie, this is a great poem. I am indeed questioning reality, thank you.
Well worded and written with a nice twist at the end. Well done!
Thank you for sharing this awesome poem, this reader has enjoyed it.


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Review of Living in style  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

My impressions of: "Living in style" Open in new Window. by Benjamin

Does the title describe the story? a great title for this story.

What is the style? humorous entertainment.

Are there 3 genre listings? Animal, Comedy, Entertainment

Does the opening line grab my attention? the opening grabs this readers attention well.

Is the structure good for the Reader? very nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Benjamin thank you for sharing this hilarious story. I have thoroughly enjoyed it.
I think I might have met that mouse before.

Well written and described story, getting the readers attention from the start and keeping it while entertaining.


If I had to make a suggestion:None.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Just Seeking - Socking It to 'Em" Open in new Window. by Tim Chiu

Clarity: Nice title for this poem.
Style: Inspirational, How-To/Advice, Philosophy

My 2 cents is only one opinion: The first stanza is great.
The second stanza makes good sense.
The third stanza makes me want to say "I know what you mean."
The forth, I hear you, the end is in sight.

Thank you for sharing this entertaining work that has made this reader laugh.


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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "The Last Voyage of Havenlight" Open in new Window. by Rodryn

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Adventure fantasy drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Other

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening that grabs this readers attention well.

Is the structure good for the Reader?Well structured story that moves forward at a steady pace, easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Well written story with strong characters and good dialog.

Great descriptions that help the reader picture the scene and get into the story better.

Filled with action and adventure. This helps keep the readers attention.

Well-worded this story has a realistic flow, holding the readers interest.

A nice ending that leaves the reader wanting to turn the page and find out more.

Rodryn, Thank you for sharing this awesome adventure tale, this reader has enjoyed it.

If I had to make a suggestion:Consider a line space between some paragraphs, to make it less intimating for the reader.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of I Wanna Vote  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"I Wanna Vote" Open in new Window. by AmyJo-Time to get going!

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Political poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion:
Very nicely written poem about voting. Short and to the point just the way today's reader likes things. You have said a whole lot in a few words, well done.

AmyJo, I really enjoyed reading this poem thank you for sharing it.


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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of: "And The Birds Have Flown" Open in new Window. by Elliot

Does the title describe the story? A nice title for this story.

What is the style? Nature, poetic.

Are there 3 genre listings? Animal, Nature, Writing

Does the opening line grab my attention?The opening could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the Reader?A good structure. Easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Elliot, this is a beautifully written nature poem. Thank you for sharing it. This reader has enjoyed it.

Well worded in a poetic manner. This work has a nice flow and is very entertaining.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review of Harmony  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

My impressions of: "Harmony" Open in new Window. by Words Whirling 'Round

Does the title describe the story? The title works well with the story.

What is the style? Sci-fi drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Sci-fi, Dark, Satire

Does the opening line grab my attention? The opening could better grab this readers attention.

Is the structure good for the reader? well structured story easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Words Whirling 'Round this is an epic Sci-fi adventure tale.
A good structure for this story which makes it easier for the reader.

Such good descriptions I feel like I've been there. Characters described well. Great job with the dialogue.

Wow what a job of world building. The story carries a consistent and nice flow. Well done. This reader likes it.

If I had to make a suggestion: Consider more action in the opening to grab the reader better right at first.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of Kevin and Lance  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Kevin and Lance" Open in new Window. by scriptboy

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Family drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Sci-fi, Teen, Supernatural

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening however it could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the Reader?A well structured story easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Scritboy this story is very well written with good descriptions. It is easy for the reader to picture the settings.

Strong characters, Kevin and Lance are described well making it easy for the reader to picture them. Good dialogue.

If I had to make a suggestion: a stronger opening to better grab the reader's attention.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of Tainted Fear  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Tainted Fear " Open in new Window. by Ayobami pen

Clarity: This is a good title for this poem.
Style: Horror/Scary, Experience, Environment

My 2 cents are only one opinion:
A nice opening that grabs this reader's attention well.

It is nicely structured, making it easy for the reader.

It turns a bit dark at the invasion.

A strong poem that will make the reader think.

Ayobami pen, Thank you for sharing this strong poem.


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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Ole Man Fisherman " Open in new Window. by white shark

Does the title describe the story? the title describes the story well.

What is the style? biographical nature drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Activity, Travel

Does the opening line grab my attention? A good opening line, but it could grab my attention better.

Is the structure good for the reader? A nice structure makes it easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Hey White Shark, this is a well-worded and entertaining story.
A well-written story, it carries a good flow.

It reads like a true story, I get the feeling you may be a fisherman.

I like the way you laid the story out; it works well.


If I had to make a suggestion: A good proof read and edit never hurts I think I saw at least a couple of typos.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "Love in Quarantine" Open in new Window. by GERVIC

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Short story

Are there 3 genre listings? LGBTQ+, Romance/Love, Experience

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening to this story but it could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader? a nicely structured story that is easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:GERVIC this is a very well written story. Great descriptions that help the reader picture the scene.

Strong characters with good dialogue. Very realistic descriptions.
I did not know that they still had places that didn't allow drinking.
The pandemic was a trying time; it seems to have been over a long time ago when it actually wasn't.

If I had to make a suggestion:.None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "A Tribute to Brooke" Open in new Window. by Jeff

Does the title describe the story? The title describes this story well.

What is the style? biographical friendship.

Are there 3 genre listings? Friendship, Writing.Com, Contest Entry.

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening line.

Is the structure good for the reader? a nice structure, making it easy for the reader.

My favorite line: --Her presence on Writing.Com is undeniable.--

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Jeff, as always, this is a well-worded and well-written article.
Brooklyn sounds like a great person and friend.

It is hard to find someone who will truly listen to your problems when you're having a bad day.

A nice ending line, well done.

If I had to make a suggestion:None.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Hanging on to the Dream" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Does the title describe the story? a nice title for this story.

What style? personal drama.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry: Other. By listing at least 3 genre's, you make your work accessible to more readers looking for this type of story and genre.

My favorite line: --Determined not to open my eyes until I figured it out I lay there listening, dozing a bit too.--

This is only one opinion: Jacky, this is a great, well-written, and humorous story.
A nice structure that makes it easy for the reader.

A nice ending I really like the last line.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

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Review of Him  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Him by Sausage

Does the title describe story? A nice title for this story.

What style? Personal romance drama.

Are there three genre listings? Romance/Love, Drama, Personal

My favorite line: --That could be the end of this suffering.--

This is only one opinion: Sausage thanks for sharing this interesting story.

This well written piece reads much like a true story. Sounds like you like this guy. I would bet that he has noticed you much more than you think.

A strong story the emotion can be felt from it.
Good descriptions that helps the reader picture the scene.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking the long paragraph down into shorter ones to make it less intimidating for the reader.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "No strength to love " Open in new Window. by Ayobami pen

Does the title describe story? the title fairly describes this poem.

What style? Relationship poetry.

Are there three genre listings? Erotica, Emotional, Romance/Love



This is only one opinion: A nicely written and structured poem.
Relationships are tough and can be quite strenuous on our enter soul.
Ayobami, I like this poem thank you for sharing it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of:"A Medical Nightmare (Part 3 of a W-I-P)" Open in new Window. by MJones

Clarity: The title could better describe this story.

Style:health drama.

Genera listing: Experience, Medical, Health



My 2 cents is only One opinion: well written and worded story.
Reads like a true story. Nicely structured this makes it easy on the reader.
Cancer is a scary demon that I would not wish on anyone.

MJones thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.

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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:Alone by Christophher Day

Clarity: This title describes the poem well.
Style: Personal poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Christopher thank you for sharing this great
poem, it has got my mind to spinning.

A good opening line that gets this readers attention.

The emotion can be felt from the lines of this poem. I feel that during life most everyone felt as this poem describes at least once or twice.

This is a strong poem that has got me beginning to philosophy.

It is those dark trying times that make us strong helping us to become the person we are meant to be.

Great writing Christopher.


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Review of Mail Order Garden  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Mail Order Garden" Open in new Window. by tj-dodging Cupid's arrows

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Fantasy drama.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Drama, Contest Entry

My favorite line: --Banned from his own land, He fled his home and created his own home, Castle Addlebrain.--

This is only one opinion: A great idea for this awesome tale. Well written with great detailed descriptions. Making it easy for the reader to picture the setting.

The opening got my attention then the tale held it.

Marty is a strong likable character. Rosco and JoJo are good dragons.
Nice structure, easy for the reader.
A good touch with the farming.
A good ending.

tj thanks for sharing this tale it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

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