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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Hope and Care for the People

Poem about the healthcare system and workers

This is only one opinion: A very unique idea for this Well written poem. There are some very talented people in the healthcare profession. It is a shame that the system controlling it is such a joke. The insurance And pharmaceutical companies have a big say in the system. Today there are so many similarities between the pharmaceutical companies and the drug cartels, both trying to make the users of their product into addicts That will have to rely on them. Making huge profits is the only concern.
A pretty strong poem to get me ranting. Well done.
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Review of Love's Legacy  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: Love’s Legacy

Delightful story of Billy, Becka and Grandma.
I think grandma's my favorite.

This is only one opinion: I love it.Great story. In life we seem to remember our favorite people at a certain age. We forget The years of adventures they had before us.
Strong characters.Sounds as if it could have been a true story.That grandma is a catbird. You have Inspired emotion and brought back memories. Well done. Awesome!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My impressions of: Episode 6: It's Halloween

Written as Title suggest
screenplay style

This is only one opinion: Well written and humorous story about halloween night. I’m not used to play/script style. Seems like a lot of characters for the story length. Nice writing with much potential.
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Review of sands of time  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: Sands of Time

This is only one opinion: Awesome poem. I love poems and stories about time. You have well documented many of my feelings in this poem. I have found it both inspirational and emotional. Thank you for sharing this it was most enjoyable.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Summary of dream journalists

This is only one opinion: A summary outline of a work in progress. A good narrative and strong characters.
Mario & Pearl are Rebels young around 15 but Seasoned and experienced Fighters in this reality with the war against the devil. After Pearl saves Mario from the octopus she reveals that she is really an angel. Later reveal she has a secret geek power. They then both become members of the Bore hunters society.
Mario and Pearl except the mission to find the devil leader
New characters or introduced. A good idea for a great story, a lot to absorb right here although all well described information. I think there is a lot of potential for this storyline. A great start, keep
writing.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: The Wisdom of The Troll

Poem as Title suggest
Free verse 34 line
My favorite line: ‘e’s ready now yon world to see
This is only one opinion: Your poem brings Grundlebletch von Hoogenspit to life. Well written in the old style, a strong character worded well Sounds like a classic fairy tale. Thank You. I enjoyed this great read. Great Writing.Write on!
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Review of Let It Grow  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Loves' Garden

Short love story

This is only one opinion: Joseph had been gone 3 years, in the south as a slave With all kinds of tails. Fiona didn't know if she could believe some of the things he said. Fiona didn’t know if she could trust her old friend Joseph who was in love with her. Paul tells her she should take Joseph back.
Fiona gets sick & Joseph cares for her in his greenhouse where he grows fresh fruit as they begin to heal. Realistic story, good narrative, strong characters, good descriptions, well written. A good read.

Keep Writing! Write on!


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Review of Morning Sun  
Review by Joseph
Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Morning Sun

This is only one opinion: Nice short poem like an alarm clock time to wake up. The morning is the most productive time we have. I've always made more production in the a.m. It is a scientific proven fact that humans are more productive in the a.m. . Well this short poem got me to thinking… I need to start getting up earlier. Write on!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Spring Aspirations

My favorite line: over hill, dale, valley, meadow and mighty forest.
This is only one opinion: Nicely written free verse poem about the spirit of spring. Indeed spring is a great time of year, the rebirth After the cold winter.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: Taking our eyes off Jesus

This is only one opinion: Sermanette Style story about faith in Jesus. Quotes about Jesus walked on the water yet when Peter walked to join him he took his eyes out of Jesus and sank. So it happens when we take our eyes off and lose Faith even for a moment. In the world today especially faith is what gets us by a reason to keep going. I appreciate you sharing this story. I enjoyed it. Found it strong and emotional, well done.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.0)
My impressions of: Lauren Dickason Is At Fault For Homicide.

Written in journalist style.

This is only one opinion: Hi Mohale, I enjoyed reading your article although a bit sad with the death of kids. Could have come out right off today's headlines.
A good idea for the article and the references to Facebook and the magazines.
The blame of post pregnancy anxiety seems to be a good idea and typical of today's news media, blaming violence with newly created terms for mental diseases. Well written, wouldn’t hurt to go back and proofread and mabe edit one good time at least. I have offered a few suggestions where I think there might be errors, I hope they help.
Keep Writing! Write on!

Suggestions: Proofread, Remove one of the duplicate paragraphs that start with “I’m Honored”at the beginning. The start of Paragraph 4 I think you meant to say -the final Court decision was-. emphasize instead of energize.
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Review of LOCKDOWN  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Lockdown

A screenplay set in a few futuristic world
The characters are under a lockdown. As title suggest
Written in screenplay script Style

This is only one opinion: Well described setting. Strong characters. Original narrative. I like the storyline. I must admit I am not used to reading screenplays, This may be why the story seems to move slowly. I would like to watch it. For reading I would suggest a little more action at the beginning to grab the reader's attention. I like the irony that Sensa created the virus and repents towards the end. A good story I feel that it has much potential.
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Review of Min  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Min

Realistic story about a little girl named Min
Believable true story style

This is only one opinion: Well written story keeps the reader's interest. Very realistic. I feel like I know Min. A lot of us can relate to her story of Leaving Home to find work in a Factory. This story is written so well you don't even notice the years passing. No doubt this could be a true story. In today's society it seems that everyone's looking for the best deal with a cheap price, but they don’t want to know why it's so cheap. I like how Min's mother is trying to marry her off. Great narrative and descriptions with a strong character, well done. I like how you ended it. Thank you for sharing this. It's been a joy to read. Keep Writing! Write On!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Tarot Project 00 - The Foolish Man
The image of The Fool Looked kind of like a leprechaun with an up to no good grin on his face. I like the blue around the top. I do feel like this picture goes with the poem.
About a kindly fool Trying to make a decision on which path to take.

Suggestions: Not sure if this is Intentional- move along's.
To pick a path or find a stool (consider for line 3)
Write On!
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My impressions of: Terot Project 01:The Magician

This is only one opinion:
The image looks like a wizard. This picture does not look like Magnus to me.
I like the first verse better than the second.
The poem seems more fitted for a soldier or officer than a magician.

Consider replacing ”and” with “while” or “as” for the last line. “And” just don’t seem like the right fit.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot 3: The High Priestess

I feel that the image of the high priestess seems to go with this poem. The High Priestess of lady humanity who guides the ladies with her wisdom. If her pillars point down the ladies may get lost and frown.
The image and poem seems to flow well go together
Suggestion: Consider for line 4 -Her star shines eternal- (line-4)


This is only one opinion:
Keep Writing… Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 3: The Empress

Nice image of a lovely lady, I like it. I don't like the lines at the top of her right arm.
This is only one opinion: This image seems to fit nicely with the poem. I like this poem, it has a nice flow.
Suggestions: Consider changing Swift to swiftly.

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My Impressions of: Tarot Project 04: The Emperor

Although this image does fit with the poem, I feel it could be better for the emperor.
This is only one opinion: The image does fit with a poem. For the emperor I just feel a more pleasant image could be used, As the one for the empress.
The second verse does not contain a sign as most of the rest do thus far,like when His sword points down his weakness can be found.
Suggestions: Line 6 consider-making light become more shaded-
Write on!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 05: The Heriophant

My spell check shows the title misspelled (Hierophant)
This image seems to fit well with the poem.

This is only one opinion: The poem has a nice flow and seems to fit the image well. Imbalance Could be replaced with a stronger word such as maybe disturbance or to disturb or awakening. Just a thought.

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My impressions of: Tarot Project: 21 The Universe

I feel the image seems to go well with the poem.
This is only one opinion: Again the second verse does not show an opposite effect as most of the rest. Such as: if the blue moon becomes dark then…Forget the count only Run. Or something similar, just a thought.

Suggestions: Consider replacing “and mote” with “every star”

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My impressions of: Tarot Project: 20 The Final Judgment

This image fits well with the poem. However for the final judgment a different image could be considered, possibly faceless.

This is only one opinion: The title at the top” the final judgment” is different from the beginning of the poem,” the last judgment”. My spell check shows judgment to be the correct spelling(yours has an e). I like this poem fine, I just wanted to show some options. This is a strong one.

Suggestions: Consider for line 2-all that was now past-or -all that can is no more-.

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My impressions of: Tarot Project:19 The Sun

This is only one opinion: This lovely image goes well with the quite strong poem. Maybe experiment with taking the lady out of the image.
Suggestions: Consider for line 3-while in his arms you’ll find no waste- Consider for line 7 -“where”- instead of -“which”-.
Write on!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 18: The Moon

This is only one opinion: This is a nice image for the moon although of dull color, it seems to fit well with the poem. The poem is strong with a good flow.

Suggestions: Fair Moon attracts with calmest light
Both Moth and men confuse their might
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 17: The Star

This is only one opinion: A quite beautiful image for the star, I like it. This image fits well with the poem. The poem is good and flows well. Could play with the words a bit but it is pretty strong the way it stands.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 16: The Broken Tower

This is only my opinion: This image of the broken Tower looks good and seems to fit well with this poem. The poem stands fine on its own, Leaving enough mystery for the reader to fill in the blanks. For the sake of experiments you might consider these suggestions.

Suggestions: Consider for last verse something like this
-feel you're in a self-made prison now
Your world view could be upside down
If firm its set in your mind
Pain and loss is all you find-
Write On!
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My Impressions of: Tarot Project 15: The Devil
This is only one opinion: I like the image, it seems to fit well with the poem. The image looks like the image of the foolish man.
The poem sounds pretty good and has a nice flow. I think in the last line -pan- might be misspelled or a type-o..
Suggestions: Consider for the last line: Are loosed -you may escape the threat-.
Write On!
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My impressions of: The Tarot Project 14: Temperance


This is only one opinion: This image looks good and seems to fit well with the poem. In the image she appears to be smoking a joint. LOL
The poem flows well and seems a good fit with the image. really seems to stand well as is. Could play with the words a bit but the mystery lets the reader fill in the blanks.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project -13-Death

This is only one opinion: This is a powerful image and it does seem to fit well with the poem. The poem reads well with a good flow. I like it, if any changes were made I would make them in the last verse. It stands on its own well enough.
Write On!
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My Impressions of: Tarot project 12: The Hanged Man

This is only one opinion: The image seems to fit well with the poem. In line 2 consider changing -to- to -you-. Consider in line 6 taking out the word -or-. The poem is strong, and it reads well.
Write On!
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My Impressions of: Tarot Project 11: Justice

This is only one opinion: This image looks pretty good and it seems to go well with the poem. Although pretty good her face could be better, like The high priestess. The poem has a nice flow as is.
Suggestions: Consider for line 1- Justice stands fair with eyes to front-. Consider for line 7 replacing “let” with “then” or “then will”.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 10: The Wheel of Fortune

This is only one opinion: Nice image for The Wheel of Fortune.
Seems a good fit for the poem. The poem has a good flow to go well with the picture.
Suggestions: Consider switching around lines two and three.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 09 - The Hermit

This is only one opinion: I like the image of the hermit. This image lines up well with the poem.
I think I like this poem best of the ones thus far, It is straightforward has a nice flow
and don't really need any interpretations.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 8: Fortitude

This is only one opinion: I like this image and it seems a good fit for the poem.
The face of this image would look good for the face of justice,The poem is well
structured and has a nice flow. I think it's one of my favorites thus far.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 07- The Chariot

This is only my opinion: This image does fit well with the poem, Although the character in the image could be better. I like this poem. It has a nice flow and reads well. l have no suggestions. This poem is among my favorites.
Write On!
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My impressions of: Tarot Project 06 - Restricted acess




My impressions Of: A Children’s Book of Tarot: Tarot Project 0-21

This is only one opinion: I have reviewed the Tarot Project. 21 eight line poems, each accompanied with its own colorful image or Tarot card.
Each poem has an image Tailored just for Its unique and original poem.
Each poem is written in an ancient folklore style. An original project that I have enjoyed reading and reviewing. All well written poems with Meticulously picked images. I've made a few suggestions for consideration. I hope they are helpful.

Write On!
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Review of Catching Cold  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Catching Cold

A romance story.
An almost break up
Standing in the rain

This is only one opinion: I found this story very realistic. A story About young love that most people can probably relate to. John is young and either cheated or almost cheated with Carol A girl he had a crush on in high school. Shawna Wants to let him get it out of his system. Make a decision that he wants her and can be loyal without always looking back.
It sounds as though John does love Shawna; he's just obsessed, the way young men get and society expects them to be. Always thinking the grass is greener on the other side. I think he realizes this now and how lucky he really is to have a great girl like Shawna. At the end Shawna is not sure if John is ready to settle down And appreciate what he has.
This is a typical scenario for young love. In today's society we are taught that this is acceptable and problematic.
Well written story with very strong characters and great descriptions. The rain helps to show the emotions.
Well Done - Write On!
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Review of Zombie Hoedown  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: Zombie Hoedown
Poem written in a humorous style for Halloween.
This is only one opinion: Well written poem, evidently for Halloween. Very catchy flow. Good use of characters. Well Done.
Write On!
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Review of "Clowns"  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Clowns

Well written and structured poem about taking off the mask to reveal one's true self.

My favorite line: Stuck between endless reflections and unnecessary deceptions

Followed by doubt of self, others, and affection

This is only one opinion: Thank you for sharing this, Clowns has a strong flow that reads well and speaks to the reader. I enjoyed reading this. Excellent! For a poem titled Clowns I expected to find humorous and funny, instead I found a deep emotional and realistic poem. I feel most of us can relate to putting on a mask to hide our true self.
Keep Writing… Write On!
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Review of "tightening"  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Tightening

Spiritual Poetry
Redemption style

This is only one opinion: Well written poem with a nice realistic flow. Strong and very emotional. We must stay positive, look toward tomorrow and things we can change, for yesterday is behind us and can't be changed.
Keep Writing! Rock on!
Well Done - Write On!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)

My impressions of:Path to Awakening, Higher Consciousness

Research style article


This is only one opinion: A lot of well documented information. Well written and structured.
Very interesting. Today's reader has a short attention span, As it is it's very possible you will lose the attention of most readers. A good job of stating the problem, I really agree with most of the information but a clear and proven solution still eludes us. I often think about the tree of knowledge which is supposed to be restored in the end times. This leads me to think that the genetics or seeds are available waiting to be crossed to restore the tree of life. Although I do not disagree, the article reads a bit preachy for today's reader. Again this is only one opinion.
Well written, grammatically correct, a strong article to make one think.

Keep Writing! Well Done - Write On!
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Review of Our Legacy  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of:Our Legacy

Short poem about man's disregard for the environment

My favorite lines: In the paradise God lent,
man raped to fulfill needs,
signing off the wrongs
with crude-covered hands.

This is only one opinion: Well told poem about man's disregard for our impact on Mother Earth.
Well written poem has a good flow and a realistic truthful tone.

Keep Writing! Well Done - Write On!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of:Meet Me In My Dream Tonight


Well written love poem has a nice unique flow
Very strong Title, Should catch the attention of most browsers.

This is only one opinion: Great job well written and structured. Has a very good sounding flow.
I like it. Written well with a positive outlook.
Keep Writing! Well Done - Write On!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of:Wanderers Desert Race Against Saoirse

Well written story as titles suggests, a race of mythological beings
Great narrative, great descriptions, strong characters
Original idea well told


My favorite lines: The woman says, “Domumen, you crazy bastard. What the hell do you think you’re doing?”

This is only one opinion: Awesome story! Written with a great narrative, awesome descriptions, and very strong characters.I felt as though I knew both characters by the end. Thank you for sharing this. It was a really good read for me. The story has a nice unique flow throughout.

Suggestions: A good proofreading, Here are three lines I think a word was left out or misspelled.- Saoirse mumbling the whole time about what she will do the Domumen. - evening out the water- want they desire-
Keep Writing! Well Done - Write On!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Genius of a Engineered Agent


A good idea for an original style story.

My favorite line; I remembered, more than heard, the landing.

This is only one opinion: Well done, has a good flow. I feel like this work has a lot of potential yet to explore.
Keep Writing! Rock on!
Well Done - Write On!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of:Resonance of affection


As the title suggests
well written in song Style with lyrics
Unique and original idea well done





This is only one opinion: Hey good job, nicely Written song lyrics. Sounds Good! When I figured out that it was a song, the flow came together much better. I'm a dinosaur, I put the tune from Beverly Hillbillies to it, you should try it Sounded pretty d*** good. It really did. Now seriously I liked it! Thank you for allowing me to read it, I found it strong because it changed my mood.
Keep Writing! Rock on!
Well Done - Write On!
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Review of God's Creation  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: God's Creation

Well written inspirational poem as title suggests
Clearly a positive writing style

My favorite line: I sit and watch Gods wonderful creation
I look up to the sky and to God I pray

This is only one opinion:Well said, so often we easily forget
to praise God for all his miraculous creations. Instead we find ourselves only seeking his guidance when we are down and
in need of his help. Well written positive psalm. Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed it as it led me to take a breath and praise God. Well written - Well done, Write On! Thank You
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