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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Driving Lessons WC 256

This is only one opinion: I love it. Brings back many memories. I learned how to drive a straight gear in a 1964 Falcon with a 3-speed on the column in much the same circumstances (sneaking it out). A great story holds the reader's attention, short and straight to the point. Thank you. I enjoyed this read.
Keep Writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: A Mothers Love

Story about the bad twin
Reads as the title suggests
Unique idea for this story with a nice twist at the end

This is only one opinion: Nice short story. A very realistic tone. Most parents seem to have a favorite or at least the sibling sees it that way. Good work keeps the reader's interest without a clue as to which direction the end will be. Good twist for the end with the same sentence you started with.
Thanks, this was a good read.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: That Haunting Love Story

Romance, Fantasy,ghost
Contest entry

This is only one opinion: Strong characters in this realistic story. Poor Violet, I hate that she had to wreck and get killed but at least finally she got to be with Stan even if it was as a cat. I don't know if I ever heard a Pastor say cool. Nice twist for the end. I enjoyed reading this, Thanks.
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Review of Mask  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.0)
My impressions of: Mask

This is only one opinion: You're right it seems life has us wear different masks, for different occasions. I feel like you may have left a word out in this line-- Death awaits us all,
and takes what may please
quickly,--
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My impressions of: The Fight will make you Tougher

Greeting card style poem
As the title suggest

This is only one opinion: Written like a get well soon card, good idea for a poem. You’re right the fight does make us tougher. Nice poem.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My impressions of: Tomorrow will be Lucky

This is only one opinion: Thank you I sure could use some Good luck. Good work, You are right if we make it to tomorrow we're pretty lucky, and we’ve beaten the odds. Well written poem about keeping positive.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: Lost Wallet, Lost Friend

This is only one opinion: Both versions sound, I too like the second one better. Consider removing the first sentence to the comma and maybe adding Maddison’s last name. Consider shortening or deleting the third sentence. Just suggestions to consider. Good storyline, as a reader I’m inclined to want to read more. Good work.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Delights of the Day

This is only one opinion: The Villanelle is a difficult form. I often get lost trying to find the perfect words, knowing that is impossible. I like Delights of the Day. It has a good sound, the structure is correct. Good work.
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Review of Amnesia?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Amnesia

Romance poem

My favorite line: One thousand times I’d forget your name, but remembered it one thousand and one


This is only one opinion: Nicely structured poem. Strong, emotional and a bit humorous. Has a good flow.
I like it. Thanks for sharing this work. I enjoyed reading Amnesia.
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Review of The Whisper  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My impressions of: The Whisper



This is only one opinion: A story about Elara, a girl who had been on her own since losing her parents. She finds comfort in her Aunts library and a book she begins to read. She loses herself in the book. At the end of this story she bumps into Jack, I think that's where the story is about to begin.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: The thickety spellbound Chapter10

Sci Fi Fantasy


This is only one opinion: Well written fantasy story. Holds the readers attention. Paula reflects on her memories of events from this mystical reality, where she has mixed feelings. Strong characters, great narrative. Well Done!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Gladys To The Rescue

Short sci-fi story

This is only one opinion: Nicely written sci-fi story about Dr. Carver and his robot named Gladys who wants to operate on him. Strong characters and descriptions, especially for a 500 word story.
Kudos! Well Done!
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Unity and Equality for Human Rights

This is only one opinion: Well written story, all true. If citizens could stand together and agree with one voice we might change something. We are too busy arguing about insignificant things and complaining about the system.
The Constitution is a beautiful document, well said. However, if the founding fathers were here today our government would probably put them in jail.
Well written, Keep it up you got my vote.
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Review of Unrequited  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
My impressions of: Unrequited

Novel
Modern Relationships
Realistic reads like a biography

This is only one opinion: Well written story about Mark A college professor, figuring out that he is gay. Sam, his student the same age who has a thing for Mark. Sam's roommate Laura, a speak your mind type girl. Amanda, Mark's roommate and her new romance Roberto. Mark's first trip to a gay bar. Well written and constructed. Strong characters and great descriptions. Well told narrative. No mistakes in grammar or formatting that I noticed.
Very professional written manuscript.

Suggestions: With the short attention spans of today's reader it wouldn't hurt to edit and make shorter. Lost this reader's attention about halfway to three quarters in, maybe too much description when the story needs to move on towards the end. Honestly I was only expecting a few chapters, so it could just be me. That's just one opinion.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
My impressions of: Kingdom Hearts: Aqua’s Tiny Love

Fantasy fiction
short story



This is only one opinion: Aqua finds a four inch tall man named Mattacue and puts him in her cleavage. Leaves more questions than it answers. Mattacue is a familiar name from an old fable.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: On The Tip Of His Quill

Poetic style.

This is only one opinion: A poetic style story about the relationship between man and God. References to where God might reside. Everyone has their individual walk with God whether they realize it or not. Nice Poetic writing.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Battagram Students Cable Car incident

News article style.

This is only one opinion: Written informative with good details and quotes from .com blogs. Looked good as if out of today's headlines from a blog or newspaper.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: For all those who will not…#11

A story written in poetic style

This is only one opinion: Deep and emotional writing.
Sounds like a story of love lost, or the one that got away.
Well done, I can feel your emotion in this story. A rare talent.
Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: How To Sooth Obsesive Thoughts

As Title suggest
How to, self help article
Good idea for OCD Disorder


This is only one opinion: Well written advice for compulsive disorders. I like that you wrote we all have OCD to some extent. This is so true, although there are many people who will never admit it to themselves are anyone else. Good job defining differences in Love and obsession. This should be useful as I know a lot of people who don’t understand the difference. Well done!
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Review of A Banana Split  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My impressions of: Banana Split

This is only one opinion: Well written. I love banana splits and you have inspired me to go get one or make one. It has been a while.
So I’m just going to be happy, Celebrate life in a positive way.
Well said!
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Review of Moon Cathedral  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Moon Cathedral

My favorite line: It was closer to us than the sky; the moon had come to earth

This is only one opinion: I like The Interpreter Manola And his hand expressions with the crowd in the beginning. I liked the phrase -snapping pictures like a paparazzi-. Well written story holds the reader's attention well. I like the sci-fi twist at the end. Well done
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Review of Comrades  
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Dope man, dope. You're preaching to the choir, brother.
My impression of Comrades.
I agree, you're right. Question is. You're going to try to do something to change it or ***** about it.
Most of us just ***** about it.
Looks like A school paper. Somebody trying to kill time.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: My life Events

Kudos on the achievements

This is only one opinion: Nicely written poem about life events, sounds like you had plenty of them. I like that you're writing now. If this is not true events then good job you fooled me.
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Review of Tiny White Puffs  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Tiny white puffs

A poem about snow falling in little white puffs

This is only one opinion: 8 line poem created on my birthday. I love the snow, always snowed when I was a kid, nowadays hardly ever. I think it's the greenhouse effect.
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Review of The Reflection  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Reflection

Nice story about high school sweethearts.

This is only one opinion: After High School the author goes in search of Julie, his high school sweetheart while Reminiscing on some of their Adventures. Well written I think I've been to horse born Hill.
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