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Review of Darkness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a dark and sad poem. I can feel the lady's pain and distress and her fear. I can also hear the hope in her voice as she wonders if she'll be saved. Everything seems in order with the spelling and grammar. Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Candle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Oh how clever, shaping your wee poem like a real candle. Great idea!

I love it. It has a great rhythm and moves as a quick pace. It brought a smile to my face. It seems as if the candle was a living breathing character. You did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

Ladybug
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Review of Whisper  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Magnificant. Your poem speaks from the heart to the heart. I can hear the pain and longing in the words. It has a nice pace and gently tugs the reader along line by line.

It is well written. You did a wonderful job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Fairies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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WHat a sweet wee poem. I love fairies and this is a delightful read. It has a wonderful rhythm to it and draws the reader deep line by line. It makes one wish that they could see a fairy or two.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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WOW! What a powerful poem. It speaks to my heart and I feel her pain. Your words paint a vivid picture of the lady in distress. It also makes me angry with the gent who broke his lady's heart. SHame on him.

This is well written. You did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

Ladybug
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Review of My favorite name  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Very nice. Your wee poem has a lot of emotion pack within such few words. I never really gave my name much thought until now. Names are more important than most people realize. Your name does follow from birth to grave.

This is well written and you did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Why Aren't You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Very nice. This tiny poem paints a wonderful picture of budding love that may never be. It moves along at a wonderful pace and pulls the reader gently along. It touched my heart for it made me remember my first love. Thank you.

Great job.

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Review of beyond the gates  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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For only thirty-six words, you revealed a lot. This tiny poem is packed with emotion and a longing for death unless I miss the point of this poem. Those few words also paint a vivid picture.

This is well written. Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of THE MUSE SPEAKS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your muse speaks words of wisdom that are inspiring. His steady voice calms the nerves and opens the gates to imagination. Your muse paints words that are magical to the ear and makes me what to cheer.

Great job.

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Review of The Dragons Creed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fantastic. Your wee poem paints a vivid picture of a fledgling dragon flipping pages in a book. This piece has a nice beat to it and gently pulls the reader along.

Great job.

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Review of Lightning Strike  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm sorry to hear about your 100 year old tree. I bet it feels as if you've returned to the stone age without phone or internet. For such a tiny piece it makes its point. Storms and lightning are dangerous things.

You did agood job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You have a nice wee tale here. It's well written without any spelling or grammar mishaps. And in a few words it paints a vivid pciture of someone with a broken heart.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

Ladybug

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Review of Kite Tails  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Your wee tale is quite interesting. It has a nice pace and is easy to read. I can hear and see the excitement in your character as he goes hunting for the perfect kite tail. I was a bit disappointed when the tale ended abruptly when the girl told him where to find the kite tails in the store. I was hoping for a detail or two about that special tail he sought so desperately.

Did he find the perfect tail?

This is well written for such a short piece.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh wow! What a powerful piece on the fear of being fat. My whole insides are shaking at the mere thought of someone being that desperate to be so thin that they believe they're fat at ninety-eight pounds. My heart goes out to the character. This hits close to home. I've never wanted to lose weight that I wanted to end it all, yet I have struggle since a teen with being over weight. I know it's no picnic for those who struggle with a weight issue. Whether it's a few pounds or a 100 plus.

This tale is well written and a bit heart breaking. Well done.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Help Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! What an emotional little poem. Your details describe Autism extremely well and paints a vivid picture. I can see this teen's fear and hear the longing in his voice. This poem pack a wallop. I can tell this piece was written from the heart. It made my eyes tear. Those who've never been around an autistic child or teen don't alway understand his or her reaction to them.

You wrote a beautiful piece. Great job.

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Review of Chameleon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a neat little poem about your muse. I love the way you describe how she inspires you through your dreams. WHat a clever wee muse you have.

Mine is like that, waits until I'm on the brink of sleep then hits me with inspiration.

I can see your muse in my mind's eye scampering through your dream and leaving nuggets of inspiration behind.

Great job. This is a well written poem.

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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a nice wee poll you have here. What a dilemma? Both Spike and Angel deserve to be the ultimate vamp. Angel, dark and broody. Spike with his bad boy additude.

YOu have a simple questionnaire with no spelling or grammar mishaps. I like the fact that it's straight to the point. Great job.

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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo! You definately got my attention. You give just enough to whet the appetite making it impossbile not to want to read more about Serrius and just what he's up too. I usually don't read things like this, but I'm glad I took the time.

I didn't spot any mishaps with spelling or grammar.

This part of the story flows along smoothly and leads the reader deeper into the tale.

Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
WOW! THis second part of the Witch's Diary is as well written as the first part and draws the reader deeper into tale. I'm like Melissa and have a zillion questions running through my mind about the creature and such. I shall definately read more of the WItch's Diary.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar.

You did a great job and I'm looking forward to read more of this tale.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of The Bottle of Rum  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a nice poem. It's awe inspiring. I'm jealous. I can't write poetry very well.

Your poem paints a vivid picture of the setting and two souls intertwined as one. I love it when I can see a picture in my mind of the characters and setting, even in something as short as a poem.

Well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
BRAVO! THis wee tale brought a tear to my eye. It is wonderfully written and goes straight for the heart. I love the details that describe the land and the chalice. ANd the surprise and shock of the wee girl when she cleans the chalice off and it starts to sing.

Do you plan to write more of this tale? I would like to know what cause the land to go silent. Where the chalice came from and why is it lying in the mud near the river? Was it lost? Stolen then hidden away? There are many possibilities here.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Nice job. Your poem is simple and to the point. I can see your vampire and the lady in love. Your use of rich detail gives the poem a vivid picture in the mind's eye.

The only mishap I spotted was the use of double i in the word passions. Or perhaps you did that on purpose.

This was well written.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Morning arakun,

WOW! What a great beginning for a novel. You got my attention right away and held it all the way to the end. I can't wait to read more of the WItch's Diary.

I love your references to Children of the King by Stephen King and the old soap opera, Dark Shadows. I use to watch Dark Shadows when I came home from high school. Oops! I Just dated myself.

You have used enough details to paint a vivid picture of the old house and the young witch. All in all your visual details give your tale its flare.

Great job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Evening EvilEgg,

Nice handle. Just took a peek at your article, SteamPunk: A List of Themes. Thanks for writing such an informative piece. I didn't have any idea what SteamPunk was before reading this. It was quite helpful.

You did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
WOW! Your wee tale, Crack paints a very vivid picture. The details make it quite easy to see Magenta and Ben. The end surprised me.

The only suggestion: perhaps you could put a few more spaces between paragraphs. I noticed many of your paragraphs are rather short. Pehaps grouping them by threes or fours.

Otherwise you did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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