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Review of Personal Trek Sig  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Eyestar,

CeruleanSon did a fantastic job with this signature. The Enterprise zooming fron an eye with the iris a bright shining, new star with blue edging. The galaxy of stars that surround the eye and the eystar in bold letters. The whole signature grabs one's attention. I'm jealous.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes.

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey eyestar,

Neat wee poll you have here. I just had to vote for the Wrath of Kahn, since I've always had a thing for Ricardo Montleban since Fantasy Island was on TV.

Once more you have done a great job with an article or poll. Your use of color always adds a brightness to all the text.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Morning eyestar,

THanks for another interesting article or in this case poll to read. Nice Star Trek patch at the beginning. It is well written & easy to follow. THe use of color get each of your points across & liven up the page. To be honest it was hard to choose just one captain. I also favor Benjamin SIsko.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Morning eyestar,

What a cool sig at the beginning of the contest page. You have once again done a fantastic job.

THe colors grab the reader's attention. The blinking arrows of each side of the prompt make it impossible to miss.

Poetry about Star Trek how cool.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
FREEZE!

Slowly remove your hands from the keyboard and careful step away from it.

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WOW! What an article. I never took the time to think about all the different kinds of writers there are. It's kind of scary to realize that there are so many different type of writers out there. Yet as I read thorough your post I realize that I've sort of known all along about all these writers that are listed.

It's a well written article. I didn't spot any mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Thanks for sharing.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Consequences  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Consequences is a nice little tale. It is well written and holds the reader's attention. I like the lesson held within the tale that nothing good happens to those who wish to be dishonest.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar.

The only thing I didn't like: there's no spacing between the paragraphs which made it a bit difficult to read. I realize that many of the paragraphs are only one or two lines. A space after every fifth or sixth paragraph would help.

Great job writing this. Thanks for sharing.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Willow  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Top of the Morn,

WOW! Willow is a powerful poem. It made my heart ache at the love and lost of that love. I can see the willow tree standing next to the water by the sea. The poem has a nice pace and flows from one line to the next smoothly. It paints a vivid picture.

I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job!

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Valkyrie  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Top of the Morn,

Once again you have written a great story. Your fantasy is as good as your tales of horror. To be honest I prefer fantasy to horror.

I got a great big grin at the mind's eye of Sven, a seven foot giant crinching on the ground. The end of the story brought tears. Great job!

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

The story is easy to read and follow. The details give a reader a vivd picture.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of A Guide  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I just read your poepm, A Guide.

WOW! What a powerful piece.

Your words paint quite a vivid picture of the little girl and her cat.

Unless I miss my mark, the poem suggests the little girl is being abused. Am I right? Or am I wrong?

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Like I already said, what a powerful piece. It hit me in the heart and for some strange reason brought tears to my eyes.

Fantastic job!

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of Hide & Seek  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I just read Hide & Seek. It is well write. It has a lot to say about society.

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

May I make a suggestion? SInce it's mostly one line paragraphs, it's a bit difficult to read as is. I would suggest that you put a space after every four to five paragraphs to make it easier to read.

You did a great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I just read your poem, egg with bacon and a side of toast. Well done. Your chose of words paint a very vivid picture. Parts of the poem makes me hungry, while others make me what to puke.

It has a nice flow to it which makes it easy to follow.

I didn't see any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Great job!

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Just read, Andy's Black Magic Healing Spell, very cute.

I realize after reading this spell you wrote it on a lark. But it did make me smile and chuckle in several places. It is well written and quite entertaining.

I didn't spot any technical mishaps in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a great sig. Nice and bright. The colored pencils are a nice touch.

How would I go about creating a sig of my own. My daughter drew me a Ladybug but I don't know how to add a signture line to it?

Keep unleashing your imagination and let lt fly where it wishes!
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Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I just read, Hidden in Plain Thought- Lilly and found it well written and an enjoyable read. The story moves from point A to point B smoothly leading the reader deeper into the tale. You have a great beginning for a novel or short story.

The only rough spot I saw was: “Please recant your dream again, Ms. Kriell,” Officer Hurtt spoke calmly with a soothing tone.
Doesn't recant mean to take back? I've heard it used on crimes show the suspected recanted his confession.

You did a great job & please write the rest of this tale.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review of A Frozen Winter  
Review by Ladybug
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Just read, A Frozen WInter and found it a nice read. My skills at writing poetry are lacking so my reviews may seems lacking, too.

Your poem does have a nice flow and it's easy to follow and understand.

I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination & let it fly where it may.

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thanks for the helpflu tips on making a character come to life. It is well written & I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes.
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Review of Mistaken Suicide  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I just read your tale, Mistaken Suicide. I think you have an excellent beginning for a mystery story or perhaps a novel. You give the reader just enought details to hook them into reading more of your story. Well done.

I did spot a few errors in punctuation:
“Yeah, Sean Donavan, Kyle Simmon's, Mark Evan's, Craig Plye and Tina Wallace.”
I think this should be Kyle Simmons, Mark Evans

The second thing I noticed: her aunt used to say about their english relatives.
English needs to be captialized.

Yet I did enjoy reading this. Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.


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Review of Silent Seduction  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Silent Seduction is a nice wee poem. It gave me something delicious to think about. Naughty by nice.

For such a wee piece it paints a vivid picture of the lady & what she's thinking about her man.

I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar. Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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Review by Ladybug
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I just read your non-fiction article, From Lances to Light Sabers something I normally don't read unless for research. Yet the title caught my attention and I just had to see what it was about.

It is a well written piece and draws an excellent picture of both Science Fiction and Fantasy. It also gives the reader something to think about when they write something themselves.

Thanks for writing a thought giving piece.

I didn't spot any technical error in spelling or grammar.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Moonlight Confessions is a delightful tale that made me smile. The rich details give an added dimension to the tale & creates a vivid picture in the mind's eye. I really enjoy reading this.

It is well written & the pace is just right. The story flows smoothly along.

I didn't spot any technical errors in spelling or grammar. Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read your wee piece entitled, RIDDLE - Old English style. It is well written & without any techincal errors in spelling or grammar that I could find.

I couldn't figure your riddle out, yet when I saw the answer the clues did fit. Good job.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Ritual  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Fantastic. I love it. Your tale the Ritual is quick paced & right to the point. I like the twist your put on it. At the beginning the reader believes she's reading an hot romance, then the twist comes. Great job.

The only mishap I spotted was this: she was forced to crawl alongside her as he. I think her should be him. Otherwise it is well written.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of The Golden Pool  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Bravo W.D.

Once again you have written an enchanting tale that captures the imagination with its wonderful description & even pace. This tale is a depaarture from what I've read of yours in the past. Yet I liked it very much. Yet this fantasy is as enjoyable to read as your tales of horro.

I didn't spot any techincal errors in spelling or grammar.

Great job.

Keep unleashing your imagaination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review of Old Souls  
Review by Ladybug
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love your poem Old Souls. It makes a person wonder how often an old soul is reincarnated. And what these souls do until reincarnation takes place.

The poem is well written without any techincal mishaps of spelling or grammar that I can identify. It has a nice pace and moves along nicely.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes!

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Review by Ladybug
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Just read your tale, The crime at the 13th Stone - Part I. You have a great beginning for a longer story or novel. The story premise is a good one. A strange murder out by some rocks with a missing body. I love mysteries & try to figure out whodunit before the end.

I didn't see any mishaps with spelling or grammar, yet your tale is a bit confusing. You never once identify the woman or man who were killed. The few details you give paint a fairly good picture of the crime. With a few more details about the victims and a bit more background this will be a great tale in my opinion.

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes.

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