*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/janinecb99/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/8
Review Requests: OFF
658 Public Reviews Given
658 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 4 5 6 7 -8- 9 10 11 12 ... Next
176
176
Review of I have control?  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*


Hello Mike Mahoney

My Thoughts: This is a very nice story of a first flying experience. Well done.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the passing of control. It all sounded very military-like.

My Suggestions: I wanted to read about what the first flying maneuvers were.

I enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for sharing this.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
177
177
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Stubborn Writer

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at those uneven relationships where the two want different things.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that he got to find out what it felt like to want more out of a relationship.

My Suggestions: I wanted there to be more hope for them getting together.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
178
178
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow

My Thoughts: This is a cute poem about travels of one of our presidents. It's interesting.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the possible tour destination of seeing the tulips. That's cute.

My Suggestions: I wonder if the poem might be more interesting if there was some possible suggestion of what world events would bring him to Amsterdam. That isn't a usual world leader stop, I think.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it using the random review option. Take care and thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
179
179
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello KenWord

My Thoughts: I love that this space adventure was for love. That made it worth it.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the commander saying he would have rather been with some other woman when he was heading for another.

My Suggestions: I wish there was more of a hint about her youth. Did this planet reverse aging?

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
180
180
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello Charlie

My Thoughts: This is a very interesting collection of apologies that are off.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the going next door for a pumpkin and things getting out of hand. I think it meant that he cheated on her more than she thought.

My Suggestions: I wanted to know if the roommate got thrown out or not.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I saw your post in the newsfeed about it being quiet here tonight so I decided to send you a review. Take care. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
181
181
Review of The Card Reading  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Christina

My Thoughts: This was a powerful series of imagesin this confusing story.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the devil wrapping his wings around her.

My Suggestions: I found it confusing if this was happening to the wife or to the psychic.

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
182
182
Review of Clarence  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Soo Donim

My Thoughts: This was a good story about how it's not such a good idea to be cruel to people.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when Clarence came back into his life again.

My Suggestions: I wish there was some thought of the teasing being wrong.

I did enjoy the story. I found this by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
183
183
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello Harry

My Thoughts: This is a call to get people educated about the way people are treated in different parts of the world.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the time to wean giving hope of leniency.

My Suggestions: I wish I understood how a divorced woman is guilty of adultary, unless that was the reason for divorce.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it by using the random review option. Thank you for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
184
184
Review of Tainted Souls  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Spiritforlife

My Thoughts: It looks like a good start to a romance story.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was talking about finding a soulmate to leave a mark on the soul.

My Suggestions: I'm curious about the mark on the finger. Did something happen over night? Was this person in a fight?

I enjoyed reading this beginning to a story. I found it with the random revies option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
185
185
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello Indelibleink

My Thoughts: This was an interesting chapter in your book.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was John enjoying the hamburgers because he was so hungry.

My Suggestions: I wonder what the brother's plan is. It almost seems like a set up to sell the suster for a short while. But maybe the other chapters explain.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it using the random review tool. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
186
186
Review of Cyber Friend  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Peewee

My Thoughts: This is a very dark story with a difficult ending.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is how Amy somehow ended up with Ken. That was quite a twist.

My Suggestions: It would be nice if there were a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier on the eyes to read. There are a few missing words and mistakes towards the beginning of the story.

I enjoyed reading this piece. But I wanted to know if her family was really dead or not. I found this by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
187
187
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello October

My Thoughts: This was an interesting look at a concert. It seemed like the narrator was detached from the scene.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the end when everything was quiet for a while.

My Suggestions: I wished there was more description of what was being said or the way he looked so I could feel the excitement of the crowd for this star and why.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
188
188
Review of Vagabond  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello KM

My Thoughts: This seems like an interesting description of a homeless abode.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is that someone else lived there before him.

My Suggestions: I wished there was more description of the homeless man or how he lived, where he got his food.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
189
189
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Treven

My Thoughts: This is a very intetesting story about a different kind of person.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when he said he fights for his butler. I thought that was a nice show of thanks to him for raising him.

My Suggestions: I wished he had a lady friend to help balance out his life better. I realize this is chapter two and that might come later in the story.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it with the random review option. Thank you for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
190
190
Review of Coming Home  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello mikemahoney

My Thoughts: This was a very nice coming home story discussing some of the differences between the places.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was marveling over the have a nice day comment. It makes me wonder why they don't do it elsewhere.

My Suggestions: I wish I knew more of what waited for him back in the states. I'm guessing he was away at college, so he has his whole life ahead of him.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
191
191
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Ghost

My Thoughts: I like the idea of skiing through life. I feel like I blog through life lately.

My Favorite Part: I like that he's following the sounds of his family. That grounds the poem in the here and now and makes it more human.

My Suggestions: Aren't the lines supposed to begin with capitals? I was just wondering.

I enjoyed reading this poem and seeing what adventures it would take me on. I found it with the random review option. Thank you for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
192
192
Review of I'm Fine  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Cinnamon Fringe

My Thoughts: This is an interesting tale of just how dangerous scuba diving is.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is where it's explained that she's afraid of water. It makes everything more intense.

My Suggestions: I wish she had followed recommendations to have a dive buddy.

My brother lost one of his dive partners on a dive once. I think it's terrible to go alone. I enjoyed reading the story. I found this with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
193
193
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Elerie

My Thoughts: This is an interesting way to describe school music programs.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the student wanting to touch the brass instrument as if to say it had some kind of magical hold over him.

My Suggestions: aomewhere should be somewhere... I was taught that each line of a poem should be capitalized.

I was in a school music program, so I enjoyed this piece very much. Our groups were very good and the students tried their hardest, so maybe I have different experiences than you. I found this using the random review option. Thank you for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
194
194
Review of Resolving  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Elerie

My Thoughts: This is a nice poem to show the thoughts of a pianist playing music new to him/her.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the yellow, chipped keys and the hairy spider fingers poised over the keys. Those were great images.

My Suggestions: It seemed like a word was missing in the last stanza.

I enjoyed resding this poem. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
195
195
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a great idea for a fun contest. I'll have to think of something to see if I can enter. Take care and congratulations.
196
196
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, I think this is where I go to give my donation. I'm donating 30,000 gps for a 10k Portfolio Awardicon. I'll also post it that other forum mentioned.
197
197
Review of New Beginnings  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Country Girl

My Thoughts: This sounds like a journey of awakenings, a journey to another self.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the vision of the indian woman when the three pebbles were offeted. That was nice.

My Suggestions: It seemed like a couple of words were missing here and there.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
198
198
Review of Well-Hid Panties  
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Tim

My Thoughts: This is an interesting fliry poem. It's fun.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the needed to remove the panties to have fun.

My Suggestions: I did want him to go with his lust and make more of his staring than just staring. I wanted the flirting to amount to more.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
199
199
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Mike

My Thoughts: This is a cute folksy story with a bit of the I told you so sort of ending.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the wife trying to warn the husband who wouldn't listen.

My Suggestions: I think the flashlight shown seemed awkward,.like it was the wrong tense of the word.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
200
200
Review by Janine
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello LL Zern

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at hobby farming. Having a small horse farm in the later years of life is very different.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the explaining of cleaning the sheath to the husband who had difficulty comprehending.

My Suggestions: It looked like there was a word missing right towards the end.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

Write On!!


 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#1970602 by Not Available.




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
290 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 12 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/janinecb99/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/8