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Review of Harold's Darkside  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello DryHearte

My Thoughts: I saw a whole different ending to this poem.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the last line of the poem. It made me think he would have done this if she hadn't married him.

My Suggestions: I didn't like that her husband wanted to pretend to be an intruder. It's creepy.

I did enjoy reading tjis poem and it was well done, but it was creepy, too.

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Review of Obedience  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello Capt. Wolf

My Thoughts: This is an interesting situation. I wasn't expecting it at all.

My Favorite Part: I think the color coding of the conversation added a lot to the story to make it easier to read the rest of the chunks of text.

My Suggestions: I wanted to know more about the relationship they would have when he wasn't pinned, if there was any other relationship.

Thanks for sharing this tale. It is different from anything else I've read.

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Review of Interactive Art  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello Jonas

My Thoughts: This is an interesting story that repeats.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when the second man walked up, because I thought he would save the first man.

My Suggestions: I wanted to know what happened to the body. Did it get flushed with the water?

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it interesting how it perpetuated itself. Thanks for sharing. I found this by using the random review option.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Old Bear

My Thoughts: This is a lovely love story. It's sad that so much time was lost between meetings due to the accident.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that they got back together again.

My Suggestions: I wished he had done more to get back in touch with her before waiting for the anniversary.

I enjoyed reading the story very much. I liked that it was a love story. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Lynda

My Thoughts: This is an interesting history of lighthouses of old. It must have been hard to find people to man the lighthouses.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is how the whole family would pitch in and how the light keep would help save people of wrecked boats.

My Suggestions: It would be nice to see something about the lighthouses of today and how different they are today.

I enjoyed reading this piece. It had very good information in it. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello KRCaudle

My Thoughts: This is an interesting tale of a man who really doesn't care about others.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the description of the yard.

My Suggestions: I wonder what would happen if you just tossed his stuff back onto his side of the yard. I wonder if he would notice.

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Why Do I Write?  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Raydyn

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at the world of writing and what writers go through.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the ending, where you ecplain why you do write.

My Suggestions: ...typed out as quickly, instead of a quickly. ...staring at a computer, instead of staring out a computer.

I enjoyed reading this affirmation of why you write. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Byron Lynn  
Review by Janine
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello Kare

My Thoughts: This is a wonderful tribute poem. I'm glad you captured your thoughts for this person.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the singing to cleanse the person. That's a nice thought.

My Suggestions: Maybe there could be some comments about the person himself to help give people a sense of who he was. It's just a thought.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Keaton

My Thoughts: This is an intetesting look at what someone has left behind. I imagine a girl picked them as girls like to pick flowers and then she was called away.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the description of the city near by, busily unaware of the park's existence.

My Suggestions: It would be nice if othets were there to notice the dead daisies and give their opinion.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello Sam

My Thoughts: One friend has a secret she's not telling the others. This sounds like an interesting beginning to a longer story or a series of stories.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the teenager applying for a job to help her with her future career goals.

My Suggestions: Second was spelled secomd. It was a little confusing what was going on when the other girls joined the main character at school. I got lost in the conversation.

I enjoyed reading this story. Hopefully there will be more stories with these characters to follow. I found this piece by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello Vaishnav

My Thoughts: This is an interesting spy story filled with ghosts from the past.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when the curator asked MI8 for assistance. That says he knows this is a big deal.

My Suggestions: Try reading this slowly out loud to hear awkward phrases and find missing words in the story.

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Fantasy  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello Sophy

My Thoughts: This is a very sweet love poem about a wish for a long life together.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is the image of floating over the coral, looking at all of the colors.

My Suggestions: I wish the poem covered more things the couple would do together in their lives to make it seem like their lives were more full.

I very much enjoyed reading this. It made me happy for you having such wonderful feelings. I found this poem with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Knot  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Dwexen

My Thoughts: This is a sweet love poem that states frustration of wanting to be with someone.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is wanting to be with his/her love so much.

My Suggestions: I had trouble with the negative comment about laughter. Some people are very attracted to people with a cute or hearty laughter. Maybe this is a different kind of laughter, like a sinister laughter.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Kuujamzs

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at how big the world really is.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is how grounded in reality this is. It just tells it like it is and has fun with it.

My Suggestions: It would be easier to read if there was a blank line between paragraphs.

I enjoyed reading this piece. The idea of finding a gift shop worker in Spain is very intriguing. I found this using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Let's pretend  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Ida

My Thoughts: This is a good way to pick up your mood through your writing. I hope you felt better after writing this. I did.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that you let your pain show through, yet you remained upbeat throughout the poem.

My Suggestions: Maybe you could keep up some more positive thoughts to uplift it more.

I enjoyed reading this poem. It showed who you really are underneath the depression. I found this with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Hillbillies  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Cyn

My Thoughts: This is an interesting resume of places you have lived over the years of your life.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is you saying how happy you've been throughout your life. I really like that.

My Suggestions: Maybe you could somehow break this into more than one paragraph and give somedetails about some of the moves with none.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of The forest  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Lauren

My Thoughts: This was an interesting walk through a forest when it was too stormy to be outside.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the creaking of the bridge as he walked across, leaving his footprints behind.

My Suggestions: There is an of near the beginning I think should be an off. It would help if there was a blank line between paragraphs. It makes it easier to read.

I enjoyed reading this tale that sounds like it ends at a murder. I found this piece by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Kids With Fangs  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Whitemorn

My Thoughts: This is a cheery poem about that trick or treat night.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the caution to stay on the sidewalk and out of the mud. I thought that was a good add.

My Suggestions: It seems too late to wrap up the night at 11pm.

I enjoyed this poem with its rhymes. I found it by using the random review tool. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Hello Bob County

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at world domination from invaders. It's very different.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was when he raised both hands to vote. That was cute.

My Suggestions: I think there was a problem with the copy and paste from another program. There are line breaks in strange places. There is a Te in the text. I don't think it's meant as a name of a character.

I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Ziggot  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello BScholl

My Thoughts: This is an adorable little poem about a mess making creature.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part is that messes can be blamed on this creature.

My Suggestions: I would like to hear more about the creature.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I found it using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Blood in the Dust  
Review by Janine
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello David

My Thoughts: This is an interesting look at the old west. Having both men die in the end was unexpected. I thought the marshal would win out in the end.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that he got taken in and had a best friend to grow up with.

My Suggestions: I think whopping cough should be whooping cough. ...a town that was moving away from chaos into order - I think I just did a little rewite of that sentence. It seemed awkward. It's just an idea to possibly get rid of away in the sentence and just have the town move from chaos to order.

I really enjoyed reading this piece. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Jeannie

My Thoughts: This was definately a difficult trip to an important day at work.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the reprieve to give the presentation the next day. That was nice of them to do. It was nice this was used as a way for people to get to know her better.

My Suggestions: I wish she could have been able to pull it off to make it all work, but the actual ending was very good. The cop shouldn't have stopped her.

I enjoyed reading this story very much. I hope you like your gift package review. This was a story that could have other stories done with the same characters. They have a lot of personality.

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Review of Young Blood  
Review by Janine
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello GrandpaSlippers

My Thoughts: This is an interesting story about mutant secret agents.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the female mutant getting rescued and getting away.

My Suggestions: How did they survive the building exploding?

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it with the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Alexyis

My Thoughts: This is an interesting tale of what Hell is like for children.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was the girls getting gifts they liked from the Earth kids.

My Suggestions: pact should be packed, I think.

I enjoyed reading this story. I found it by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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Review of Struck By Luck  
Review by Janine
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Haley

My Thoughts: This is an interesting beginning to a much longer piece.

My Favorite Part: My favorite part was that he thought that he was home and with people who wanted him to cook for them.

My Suggestions: I wish there were more explanations about how he got there and what happened, but I guess that comes later in other chapters.

I enjoyed reading this chapter. I found this piece by using the random review option. Thanks for sharing.

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