Great entry. I think this prompt fits the contest it is written for very nicely. You expanded on what the picture provided and gave a vivid description of a story behind the picture. It fits nicely with the theme provided from the image. I really like that it managed to capture a child's wonder in the opening. If I was reading this hook, it would inspire me to want to read the rest of the story it was written for. This is really well done. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best of luck with your writing and Happy new year.
Nice image. I think it would be cool to visit this zoo. I would love to see the Koalas. They don't have them available in the zoos nearby where I live.
wow... nice story. The prompt seemed like it really challenging combining Christmas with a Zombie attack but it feels like you were able to pull it off really well. You made a fun set of characters and lead for this story. The combination of Christmas research and magic lead to wild result. It was a very exciting story to read. I also really liked the resolution. The Snow Golem using Snowballs to counter the zombies made for a really exciting climax. It was a lot of fun to read. Thank you very much for sharing it.
Another really great word search. Silver Bells is a classic Christmas Carol. I love the lyrics and easy going tempo. The word choices in this definitely captured the mood of the song. This was a lot of fun to try. I really enjoyed it. Thank you very much for making it.
This is a great word search honoring a classic Christmas song. You picked a great set of song lyrics as word choices to represent the song. It made made me think of the song as I was trying this. I also really liked that you included the Youtube link to this sing allowing for a musical accompaniment. Great Puzzle!!
This is a very thought provoking question that the entry explores. I have never read "The Greatest Miracle in the world" but it seems like it would be good to read through.
It is interesting to think that just by being here that is a miracle in and of itself as just being able to be alive already managed to beat several odds. It is also comforting to think that there is a divine power guiding us.
I agree with you on the idea that we have free will to a certain extent as I feel like a lot of outcomes are possible from the choices we make. The final opinion shared is a hopeful one. I like to believer that God is guiding us with the hand that we've been given.
Interesting dialogue story. Turning into a turkey is not an easy prompt to work with but I think that you managed to cover it nicely. I like how you formatted the dialogue using bold to distinguish between the two characters. Having the main character selecting a live turkey for thanksgiving dinner and having the Turkey jinxing him was a good setup for explaining why the character was transforming. The metamorphosis was depicted very well conveying the feeling of the character slowly changing into a Turkey and the coworker just going along with it. I also really liked the bit of wordplay at the end incorporating the phrases talking turkey and gobbledygook. Very nicely written!
This is a great short poem that does an excellent job of following the prompt provided. The three stooges are a great pick for a famous partnership and this poem captures their essence very well. The trio were definitely known for their slapstick humor and eye pokes and the poem even manages to to touch upon their recognizable appearance. It also manages to successfully cover their essence within the brief 8 lines allotted. I also liked how it mentions the audience reaction to their performances. Trio really did make the people watching them laugh and smile. They were a lot of fun to see in action.
On a technical level the poem is set up well with an abab couple of stanzas. It makes it very fun for the reader to progress through. My favorite set of rhymes in this was the word hypnotic with chaotic. There is also a very nice rhythm in the poem with the syllable count matching between each of the couplets.
This is a really well done octet that I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you very much for sharing it.
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Great Winter Hanukkah image. 
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My favorite is Aurora. I think because Sleeping Beauty was the first Disney film I saw as a child.
