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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love makes you blind when you are with someone and you try your hardest to be with them but your feelings take over. He looks like the man you feel in love with and then you realize the parts that make you want to leave him but you can't because love has overcome again. Hopefully he will decided if he just wants you or many more! I have been there dealt with that, and now his new wife has to deal with him! Keep On Writing and Have a great day!






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Review of Love is not  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow this was an interesting poem to read about what love is not. Its noted through this how love is not. What about what love is too. This has a lot of imagery in this! It paints many pictures in my head as I read this. I hope that life has gotten better since you have wrote this and need love. I hope that you are going to be better! I hope that Life is good now!

Hope you have a great day! Keep on Writing!!!





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Review of Silent Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this is really deep. I am sorry to hear that you are depressed, it's not fun. It makes it hard to live or love when you are depressed. I hope that you are doing better with the whole depression idea! I am one that gets depressed a lot and I write to get everything out as I see fit. I think that you have talent here and hope to see you here!! I will be back to review more of your port!

Have a great day and Keep on Writing!!!






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Review of The Home Sampler  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I personally know for a fact that it is hard to live with a unmedicated person without med's. I was with someone that had a mental illness and it was not medicated, he has multiple personalities instead. There was so much abuse that went with the drinking because he couldn't control his personalities! I, myself, also am BiPolar and OCD and went with out my med's for a who had a lot of problems to be with anyone because I didn't think It was needed.

I think that this poem has so much imagery from the descprition as you read this and see the picture of how it is to live with BiPolar. I went through a divorce where I again was not medicated and my kids would go into through room and shut the door and let me cool down. There dad never learned that and dealt with my mine.

I hope that you are able to get through so that you can see if he will go and get med's so you can live a peaceful life!!!

Have a Great day! Keep On Writing!!






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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow this is deep! Its amazing how love can hurt you in many ways! You put a lot emotion into this poem! I see the descriptions that paint a picture in your mind as you read this! The imagery is so defined as you read this! I hope that you have another love now so that you are happy! I hope to come back to your port and see more of your work!! I think you are a great poet!!! Have a great day and Keep On Writing!!!






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Review of Our Timeless Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This i a beautiful poem that I see nothing wrong with! I love all the imagery that you can picture with the descriptions of the word. I love how you could where you where you are "Now intertwined in heartfelt, joyous belief'" paints a beautiful picture with the imagery and descriptions!!! I hope that you are still together and hope to see more items to review! Keep ON Writing!!!




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Rated: E | (5.0)
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! I think this is a great story about prayer and how it really does work! I am so glad you have your daughter! Sorry about your still born. That to me is worse than a miscarriage. I am glad you were able to pray for her to win and come back to you! Its amazing when every little thing is important including counting little fingers and toes to make sure they are still there! Good luck and Keep On Writing!





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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is awesome outline by Writer Digest that you have shown. We can use this to write the novel that everyone wants to do! It is great out line and I may come back to use it if you don't mind! This has a lot of detail that you can dig into so that you can have so much help with! Thank you for sharing this with us! Keep on Writing!




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Review of Prison  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1993946 by Not Available.
! I have been to IN state prison for a ex to visit. I think that it is really hard to really let you brother know how you really feel but he will know you love him always in there! I feel for you and know that they read and see everything that you send of give to them there! They need to the love from you while they are there! I wish you good luck! Have a great day and Keep on Writing!





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Rated: E | (4.5)
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! This is a beautiful poem of loss, and I hope that every year it gets a little easier for you! I think you did a great job with your feelings! Its hard to understand death on top of losing someone and it hurts so bad. Thank you for your entry! Keep On Writing!!!




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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an awesome group to be in!! They have everything that we can do to write the novel in November! I glad this is a helpful group eventually I will need inspiration and good kick in the boot to get going! I cant wait to see where my novel turns out when were done!!! Have a great writing day!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As always this is great story like all the others that start off as Writer's Cramp submission. This was ac cute way to introduce another cat to the story! I love how Magnus has his human trained to get up when he is ready to eat and not when the human wants to feed him in the morning! That tabby cat probably was a cutie too!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a beautiful webpage! I love the way you have set it up with the Earth Day websites. I love how you have many of the WDC members who have been quoted with their ideas of a Earth Day too. I saw that there is on that link on here that is an invalid link. I have gone through and look at the links you have on here! There are some really talented members that feel the same passion as you for keeping the earth clean and making it a place forever that we will always be here to enjoy!! I cant wait to read more of the links when I come back to this!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This a great way yo get started in your port on what to read! You have so many different choices to read and review! I cant wait to get started in your port! Great way to have "The Best Of Your Port!!" I will be trying to go through the items and see what I can do with reviewing all these! I love how you have a wonderful image that has your space and your name. You definitely have a variety of different short stories and especially with your biggest project "WDC Power Reviewers!!! I am glad to be part of this group with all the reviewing!!!!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an awesome activity!! It is addicting to come back to and do again!!! I am on my way to getting everything done to win my next MB!!! I hope to soon be able to get "Wodenhouse" MB! I think this activity keeps you on your toes! It is great because you have a new adventure each time!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this is a great competition to be part of during Writing.com's 14 birthday party! I love that you have to review newbies in this because they do not get much attention unless they are in activities! I personally think that this should be around more than just on WDC birthday time!

Keep Writing!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really cool group that I would like to join if possible! I know that you help out alot through WDC and I would love to be a member! I like to be part of groups that has members participating to give out great reviews and its helps the writer with tips that they can go back and work on in their pieces!
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Review of Greed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Punctuation/Spelling:

From what I could see as I was reading there were not any spelling or punctuation errors.

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I couldnt see any grammar errors.

Plot:

The plot was unexpected that greed took over and the father took care of it all and they have learn to start over make their own money and learn to live on their own... I think the father had the best idea by building the rocket and having everything go into the rocket!

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I think that each character had their own problems in the story. Other than that there was no problems with the story.

Here are a few that I noticed was going on:

1. The oldest, Darrel, thought that he was going to be able to keep all houses, mansion, and yacht and the money with his girls to make a better life.

2. The younger brother, Robert, has learned that his bookies will be coming after him for the money he owes.

3. The mother, Betsy, has lost everything she had hidden from her husband, and put it on his rocket! She will have to learn to live in poverty pretty much now.

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I think the mansion was the best setting and then the rocket launch where the rocket took off too!

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1. Robert is the yougest son with gambling problem.

2. Betsy is the wife that was cheating and spending all the money.

3. Darrel is the oldest that ran the business and had homes, a mansion, and yacht with women too.

4. David knew 6 years ago he was going to die and built a rocket all these years and has everything in it with him to the moon!

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All and all this was a great story to read and I enjoyed reviewing it too!!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Im am glad to be back on this blogging trip for 30 days! I cant to continue on with this group over the 30 days!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)








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Punctuation/Spelling: For puctuation and spelling there are no errors!


Grammar:
As for the grammar there are no errors on this. The flow is great as you read through this! You can see the paper flowers that will always hate the rain. Made me go and look at my vegiables that I am growing or atleast trying too!

Plot: As for the plot, it was a great way to describe your paper flowers with the wonderful picture you have and knowing if they ever get wet they will be ruined forever!~

The problem:There was no problems other than knowing they will be ruined in the rain!


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The flowers were in pretty vase!

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1.The flowers were the characters and were lovely as long as they do not get watered. They will bleed and no longer be there anymore!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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 One way ticket to my heart Open in new Window. (E)
A poem for my mother
#1990988 by svufandom Author IconMail Icon
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This a great poem to your mother!! I think that you did a great job with the imagery and description as you read through this! This is short and concise that paints a picture in your mind as you read through this. There is also great flow through the poem too! There is no misspelled words! I hope that you were able to show your mother the poem to her! Hope you have a great day!!!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Our Hall of Fame where all our angels' achievements are archived.
#1189941 by iKïyå§ama Author IconMail Icon
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This is cool to see who all were the Hall of Fame! I think that you have done a great job with The WDC Angel Army!!! I am glad to be part of the Hall of fame!! I just saw under my old second account. This is really great that you have done this for those to make the hall of fame! I have seen many of the angels that have been given plaques!! This is great that you have no misspelled words and the description is awesome!! Have a great day!



Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

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Review of The Angel Army  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Our mission? To welcome and promote a positive community within WDC. Join us today!
#1188342 by iKïyå§ama Author IconMail Icon
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This is so beautiful! I love that you are always helping out WDC with your angel army! This has description of everything you need to know about the angel army! You have everything you need to know about the Angel Army! I cant wait to look at more in your port! I will come back and raid your port some more!!!Have a great day!



Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

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Review of Noticing Newbies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


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Noticing Newbies Open in new Window. (13+)
A warm welcome to our newbies; come meet new and not-so-new members of Writing.Com!
#126963 by The StoryMistress Author IconMail Icon
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This is a great group for showing newbies work! I will definitely be coming back and put in a few newbies too! I think that there are many newbies out that pieces of work are superb! Hope to read many newbies with my reviewing! Have a great day!!!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

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Review of Weekly Goals  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I am reviewing:
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Motivate yourself to conquer your goals this week! Post on Monday; update us on Friday!
#1949474 by The StoryMistress Author IconMail Icon
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This is an awesome idea so that everyone gets better at their goals done. I think that I am going to do this weekly to make sure I get my poetry or stories and reviewing done! I hope that all the other members choose to do this too! Hope you have a great day!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

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