A Very well written and expressed writing that touches mind and soul. Some lines although written in simple lamgauge but successfully explain and express the huge deep philosophy and feelings.
These words are most impressive:-
"Now at twenty-eight years old I am having my third daughter and it is clear to me that not all the feelings of becoming a mother for the first time go away after the first time! On my third I still have feelings that I had then like fear, hope, and yes the second guessing my choices"
Very true and inspiring words:-
"Your words can move mountains, if you desire"
"Your words can give power to the powerless,"
The writer infact knows the power of words and also that of inducing and boosting will-power!
It is infact a very postive and impactful writing
VERy sweet emotional poem with very lovely impact on heart and mind. So true description of a friend indeed!
"By God's grace
My angel was sent to me
And through God's blessing
Friends forever we will be"
The poem is so painful but at the sametime a reality of times. There are many people who are drowning in the mud of depression, frustrations and addictions!
The words:-
"now on perscription drugs,
still with gangs and thugs,
her whole world is bending,
and that was her sad ending"
are really sad!
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This is a wonderful idea! WOW!
The knit of words to present the idea in a creative form is even more beautiful and impresses and stimulates perhaps every reader.
The websites mentioned are a good source of knowledge for every reader who reads this useful article.
very emotional and touching poem but it is better to express such painful emotions and then forget. The people who break hearts do not deserve so much of love:-
"Then one day you were gone forever.
I will always remember the day you
Broke our promise....
And broke my heart."
WOW!
"The Door of opportunity
Yet bobbing in the sea"
so positive and inspirational lines,lovely writing!
The format, creativity and knit of words is just wonderful!
"Sometimes it is a Door of Hope
Sometimes not even close
Sometimes we have a need to cope
With ups and down and sorrows and woes"
A very sweet and emotional expression about the family ties and relations.
The lines are touching:-
" The lessons that I learnt while watching them,
The do’s and don’ts I picked along the way,
Are now the familial traits and emblem,
That guide my own behavior to this day."
So true words!
Very emotional and magical words that are enough to explain the situation and scenario:-
"It's been six months since we've last met,
Six months since the day we parted,
Oh darling, oh how I missed you,
Are those feelings still warm and true?"
Choice of words is ver nice and poem touches, so has a very good impact!
THIS is a beutiful poem full of emotions but does not hurt rather induce strentgh into those who are hurt!
increases wil power, a must read song!
"You can bend, but I won't break
My heart's no longer yours to take
I'm getting stronger day by day"
Wondeful words!
WOW! great!
it is
--unique
--- short
--- simple
---- beautiful
---- intelligent!
"Awakening
deep muddy passion
withholding
unraveling
then soulfully flying."
magical words impressive and impactful
Keep writing
fighting with words
VERY sweet and inspirational poem .
The words are wisely chosen and written inpraise of ALmighty God:_
"how blessed we are to have our sins forgiven,
as our voices rejoice, singing in heaven."
Lucky are those who have experienced grace of God in their lives.
This is an unique style of writing fiction!
Is it Poetic fiction!
simple lines drag into fiction and end like a poem.
Over all nice imagery and the unique cname:- nimbus six
"A bronze tibbon eyes the flat horizon while
pink limfs dip their regal necks in dance
and sim beetles scurry underfoot."
It is a very simple, beautifully flowing poem with a touch of emotion. wisely chosen words to make it entertaining reflect the ability of the writer to express a game poetically.
"Hit the ball over,
The opponent shouts, “Fault!”"
Short writing tries to explain and initiate big philosophy.
Unique style
foramt
use of words
makes reader to think many times
"But what are these patterns that will scar – it seems you can keep secrets."
these patterns might be the marks of happenings in life.
The answer to it:-
"Can we predict what happens next?
Where the page lies and in what text"
is perhaps big no!
It is an emotional as well as philosophical writing that catches the attention of readers and compels him to go through it atleast twicw.
OVERall very nice!
A sweet little poem that is simple but wise.
Wisely knit words in a rhyming manner catch everyone's attention.
"Everyone is all the same
A few are unique
In a world of jelly beans
We can all be sweet"
Very true feeling, May it become the truth!
WOW! VERY nice emotional and paining piece infact. The wrtiting looks very wise as writer has stressed upon the fact that there may be a reason behind every happening or act, however the reason may be a logical one or may be some selfishness.
The poem displays the ability of writer to analyse emotional confusions.
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