Susan of Pudlin! Sooooooo roared the N Wind ----------> SSSSSSSAAAAANNNNNN !!!!!!!! O'Pudlin!
Uh, oh, Teff's hamburger with relish, verb sand menu lecture again.
O'Pudlin. Adolescent Lit has less extra mayo with horseradish annoyance than your baggage here of hads, thats in the wrong place, that becauses. Novelist to novelist, Susie Q, you're not listening to teacher, Sr. Tessandra Teff.
Can see from your posts on Auto Rewards ... if its new on AR this revver finds it. Can see copyrite, Jan. Okay, story line good. Empahasize the research.
Note Mary Reily's pink spot outline in Whitechapel, London in
Plus why rehash these verb sandwich convos over lunch once more. You may as well say meet me in Boston Harbor. Don't make me come out of Maine, someone will need to rescue me, they're talking 12 foot drifts. Yikes!
On That: In Philly speak and in America we use that ---- thus: That's great.
We watch our fence blow away, two or three kids flush into an incoming Jan wave in Jersey, and say, "That's great."
Q -- Whatyamean y lost the money at the track?
A -- Now that's just great.
Yes, colloguial. Your setting of 1847 sounds marvelous for ships. Give us some live research, quote the source. Impress!
Chronological order:
like that -- glad
Like First Parish Church (Church of Latter Day Yankees)
The father that ammassed great wealth sentence. NO THAT, toss it. Bye.
Note: The above's your hook. A novelist will place hooks at the end of a chapters to hook in the fish for next chapter line. With this common mistake of this hook 'amassed great wealth' it will add to Eliza's flair while properly mittened, sliding on ice. In her (Susan's) opening lines.
Plus this actually makes me want to knit, seriously. Susan knows, I mean her no harm, Mr & Mrs America and all the ships at sea.(Walter Winchel)
ELIZA JANE is Kiddie Lit genre also. Historic if you pick up the pace, America wants to know about the original blue states N of Jersey, Mass. Lunch better be Lobster, Susan.
Here's a rewrite present for you.
"Winter came early, barely Indian Summer prior to frost, snow falling thru Dec."
Hint -- Rent STORM OF THE CENTURY by Steven King. Background accent.
Please check TEFF'S REVS out, where Teffy brags on your prolific writing skills etc (Pssst --- Pudlin's stories are fabulous).
Hey, tiny rev related favor for moi. Por favor -- See if you can make out the rules for me below. Are they getting it? Post this Rev & Rev reply as a post on .... you decide, Miss Susan.
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THANKS!!!! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!
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