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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Oh those things that go bump in the night. Some children believe there are monsters under their beds. Well, in this piece a woman has never stopped believing. In fact it is having a negative impact on her life. She is in a hospital being evaluated by doctors about her sanity. A new doctor is on the case. Skeptical, naturally, but listens any way. His goal is to help her. Does she really need help? Or does she really need someone to believe her?

Good character exchange.
Story came together well.
The ending caught be a bit by surprise.
Going to check my bed from now on.
Thank you for sharing.



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By keeping me room clean, isn’t it obvious



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Review of Puzzled Tiger  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have the image of a tiger in the wild. Beautiful yet deadly. Eyes that are alert for any movement. Ready and eager to bring back food for the young ones. Just one thing missing. The prey. Who knows how long she will wait there hidden by the dried grass before there is success.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of I Lost My Way  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We all loose our way sometimes. Our character has done that but turns to God as we should. As one of his children; God will guide us and help us back to the right path. Feeling forgiveness is such a blessing. Communing with Him, walking with Him, finding He is never farther away than a heartbeat comforts the soul.

Our character might make a mistake and get lost again but His arms will always reach out.

Thank you for sharing this reassuring piece.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A great big thank you
That is so pretty.
Too old to have birthdays.
Too old for 39 to work any more.
Still full of spit and vinegar.
Even throw a hissy fit from time to time.

Still don't like cowboy boots cause they hurt when you get kicked.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


At first there was the normal cat and mouse activity. As they grow older; they begin to slow down a bit as we humans do. The cat just lays around and watches the mouse run here and there. Not enough energy to worry; no need to hurry.
No more trial of survival but finding it easy to just get along.

Shouldn't we all do that? Just get along. Too much energy is wasted trying to find out who is in control. Peace is the answer in all situations.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of I Just Sat There  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Apparently this character has done something that is haunting his waking hours. The basement contains an old door that he stares at every chance he can. The memories are turning him insane. One could think it is the guilt doing that as well. The door holds the act that ended the life of a woman. He even has a trophy he clings to. In this mind he sees himself with a bat and hears screaming that isn't there.
In this twisted mind; he must feel if he keeps watch on the door nothing will surface.
Food is cooking upstairs and that seems to be the only thing to interrupt his vision of H-ll. Most certainly he will be there again tomorrow. Clinging to a past that can't be changed but is slowly changing him.

You did well getting to the characters mind.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Lost  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A couple start out together and everything is magic. Time takes it's toll and they begin to drift apart. Where did the perfect go? Who started to change? Why didn't the promises last? People change and the magic wears off. So now the pain begins. The confusion is there with left unanswered questions.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Rage  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Rage is the topic of this piece. We all have the capability of becoming enraged over something. One might say pushed to the limit. We must remember that nothing good will come from it for you or the one you direct it to. There is an old saying 'Give peace a chance'
This piece reminds me of that. Put away the sword of rage and give peace a chance.
Things might really turn out great and brings some happiness to you inside.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Betrayed.  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She believed in her friend.
She offered her shelter and kindness.
In return she hit on her husband and destroyed what they had.
That's not a friend but a betrayer.
Now, her whole life is turned upside down.
Her children suffer too.
All because she let her guard down and counted on truth and honor from a friend.
She will probably find it hard to trust anyone for a while.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Lament  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It's sounds like a young person became disillusioned. Young people begin their adulthood with a certain amount of ideals. Something happened to break those ideals like glass. Because she believe those things were possible; she soon felt like a fool. Still, to this day, she remembers and even pictures what 'should' have been. Regret is all over this piece. Hopefully she will realize that we all fall and even fail at times but you got to keep going.
Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of Winter Morn  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It's winter and naturally we bundle up to leave our home. Perhaps we checked the weather channel and figured it's not to bad. After a few minutes out there the cold penetrates our clothing. It's cold on our exposed skin. It is far beyond crisp when a person starts shivering. No doubt the thought must run through ones mind; I'm going back home. Or walking in the weather is for the birds!!!!!!

Thank you for a cold glimpse of nature.



Yellow
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Review of The Lake  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece is about a man and the lake that brings him serenity. He brings the reader along to experience what he does. Everything is beautiful and calm. The waves of the river flow by and secretly ask him to join. To fish, whether it be keep or catch and release, is all the adventure he needs. The sound of peace surrounds him. Finding solitude the right prescription for a tired mind. Communing with nature is his time. A pleasure inside and out. What better way to reflect on life and the wonder of it all than to be in the middle of nature. Feeling the wind, smelling the dirt after a short rain is without explanation.

Thank you for a glimpse of nature.
Too bad we couldn't linger a bit longer.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A young boy gets his first bb gun. So naturally he begins shooting things. At first just objects then he moves on to birds. His parents tell him that some birds are different and prettier than the others. The ones that aren't pretty is fair game to him. Now, he is an adult and enjoys seeing the different variety of birds that visit his feeders. They all are beautiful and each important. Maturity makes one look at things differently.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of I know its over  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A couple broke up. Sometimes there is confusion and wondering what went wrong. In this case there is an actual letter saying goodbye. Sure it hurt our character but it's better to end it than trying to figure out whether it could have been saved. The lover left, turned away and went back on promises made. Lets put the guilt where it belongs. Hopefully our character will be able to move on now that there has been a some clarity offered.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man reflects on his past. A love now gone forever. The memories haunt him but holds on to them cause that is all he has. Just memories. How could one begin to replace the irreplaceable? Part of him is empty. The love in his heart will never leave him. Goodbye is a word he can't bring himself to say. In the back of his mind is a constant 'what if'.
This is sad
The pain comes through.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of My Heart  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a man who as had his share of painful relationships. There is even someone pouring salt on the wound. So what does he do? He tries to be careful and protect his heart from the pain again. He isn't to sure how to go about it until a certain lady comes along. She really loves him and has captured his heart. She won't allow any hurt to come his way again. She has become his loving shield for his heart.
A good lesson for all of us. Love is out there and never give up.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Lazy day  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Oh don't we all dream of a lazy day. That wonderful day when we have nothing to do but nothing. Laying around, catching a nap. Forgetting all the work worries and traffic traps. Sometimes it seem when we plan for those days, something always gets in our way. In this case our character gets things the way she wants them. Lucky her.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Man v.s. tree  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Now, taking on a big Maple tree is a challenge in itself. A man is determined to remove it because of it's health. It has lost its beauty. Well, he takes down some limbs and then neighbors and firemen get involved to help. This was a neighborhood party without the party. Everyone getting involved. The most encouraging part of all is that people offered help instead of ignoring the man. A real community atmosphere is refreshing.
Thank you for sharing.





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The neighbors want the wood and the brush is cleaned up

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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author has brought a reminder that we should show our love now. Time is ever fleeting and uncertain. Don't let time go by without sharing love with those you love and don't wait until they pass. As the piece suggests; if love is given in life that's when it really counts.
Roses, flowers, hugs, thank yous, a phone call, a visit to catch up with each other and prayers together; show those loving feelings to those you love. Most of all tell them how much they mean to you as often as possible. We never know what tomorrow might bring.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A relationship turns sour over time. There are so many hurtful things done to our character. Yelling for one thing. Mean as a hornet. Selfish to the core. Hateful beyond belief. So how long can a person hold on without completely loosing themselves in the wake. Finally it's over, ended. Just getting out is all that matters now.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was busy but made time for her friend. Trust is so necessary in a relationship. Taking a friend at their word is second nature. Here we have a friend taking advantage of our character. Sadly, she offers the help asked for. Then she finds out she was lied to and used to do something terribly wrong.
That's not friendship; that's being used for personal gain.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of True Love  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This was the day she would find unconditional love. She decides he is the one and he is so glad. She picked him up and he was filled with joy. Already bonding, these two, and next is the trip home.



The piece feels as though it might have been a rescue dog. Bless those that open their hearts to these little animals. All they want is love and have so much love to give in return.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Stars  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She loved him and was enchanted by his eyes.
She saw the very stars inside them. She wasn't expecting those stars to be only illusions. Perhaps they were wishful thinking. Now, she is alone and regrets the time invested and the feelings she had for him. She wanted truth and compassion. She wanted love and hoped it would last. Instead she ended up alone and broken like a piece of fragile glass. Who will pick up the pieces now. Do those pieces sparkle like his eyes did or do they reveal the dull essence of the man of betrayal.
Thank you for sharing.

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The pain the all started,
With the stars in his eyes.

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Review of Hiding Tears  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece is about a person who hides behind a smile. There are many things troubling her but yet she won't let is show. It's not easy to pull this off for a long time.
In a quiet moment, if a tear should fall, there would be someone asking why. So you go on and on pretending things are well. Years pass by and sooner or later, they will come out.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We have a man looking at the heavens and knowing that changes are inevitable. We know there is enough power in the universe to completely cause extinction. Still the sun shines and clouds form, proving each day is different. The sun sets and the moon shines and we think those are certainties. There are no certainties because there is always change. Just as our bodies change. We can't hold on to life since it isn't permanent. We go along and forget that sometime. Maybe even taking our time here for granted. There will come a day for that final change/death. Basically, if you can find a way to live in this moment, cherish this moment, love this moment since it is all we really have. It is a mindset that brings you happiness. We all have heard that saying 'I AM HAPPY TO BE ALIVE'. Keep that in mind when the new dawn comes. Welcome it.

Thank you for sharing.


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