Doors are closed to those who don't knock. The doors lock after
a while when one gives no option to it opening. There are windows
too..or maybe some refer the windows to doors. Either way..its
an opening waiting to be discovered.
When I think of the atom..I think how it cant be seen but its here.
We do see it all the time. I think the same with spirits they are
here we just refuse to believe. It matters:)
Wow..I don't know what to say. I know I should say something.
It sounds like you have a problem with drugs, guns etc..so maybe
go into rehab where they can help you get a new start. They really
help to support your willingness to have a better life.
You have to be want to leave all this behind though. Thats the
toughest step for most..leaving so called friends behind and the
life they know so well. But it will get better if you take that step
into change. :) let it happen..start walking now :)
Beautiful. You must be speaking of Jesus or some
heck of a guy :)
Where you wrote "His energy shared by just standing there,"
We all have this..no matter what we emit something from
within. It touches upon others which affects their light..their
energy. We breathe each other. Sometimes one has to cough
maybe feeling chocked..fresh air is needed..keep moving and
one will be uplifted with great relief :) Nature transmits a wonder euphoria :)
This is a poem of life..we all go through it..
Seeing how you find so much going on inside
yourself..I know you'll achieve comfort. In the darkness
is a light..it radiates for you..soul searching helps to
discovery unknown paths. When we long for something
we tend to walk in that direction and in doing so attain much
welcomed wisdom :)
Happiness is waiting for you :) Your poem is titled "Always
Lost"..you have been found :)
Why are people afraid to talk to one another.
Communicate..one doesn't have to say
they're in love with the other but talking
lets one know where one stands :)
This is sad..did she actually go? Communication is so important.
Did you sense something was not connecting. If you think back,
you'll probably remember something that is if you want to.
"I surely don't want you if you don't want any part of me" this is so
true..one cannot force love. One cannot do it alone either..its team
work. No one should have to wear handcuffs or shackles..only if they want to :)
This is interesting. I agree with a lot of what you say. When you write
"Some lies were small and easily overlooked."..these small likes
help people to become liars. I found that once a person gets away with
a lie and then another no matter how big..it gets bigger. The guy with
the big lie probably started with smaller ones.
Animals are wonderful you're right..they love you unconditionally and
they are straight up :)
I know God has a sense of humor. He has all the emotions we do.
Be careful the cat doesn't get your magic..I mean..mouse :)
I agree..praise is important to all children. It's a way
of knowing the way :) and if we don't give direction
the path becomes an open road with many confusing
signs
In fact..praise is good for anyone at anytime...for animals
too. It reinforces the behavior being praised to continue.
If a child who misbehaves gets all the attention then chances
are others will follow.
They also helped the candy industry :) Reese's Pieces is what
they really came for..yeah..the truth..sugar addicts :)
It is greater than ourselves..we love it..aliens and sugar :)
I find it very neat how you wrote this piece. I like it very much :)
This fits everyone in someway whether its psychological
weakness or a moral weakness..we all have some
psychological problem to deal with. A protagonist may
hide his feeling but believe me it bleeds though.
I like where you state "as negative emotions creep into the
mind, they transform into moods and eventually into traits"
Thats so true. I find that very interesting.
I find people use the word 'Hate" way too much. Its powerful..
its strong emotions..it shouldnt be used at all but when it
is one has to remember the strength it carries.
The blank page says plenty :) I agree..leave it blank..let
everyone read what they see. The space becomes a place
for everyone. There is something written that each of us
sees..its written in our own language. We speak from who
we are.
I like this poem. :) where you say.." with power in its impotence"
that is such a powerful statement. I love it. Less is so much
more.
Your poem can be relating to mother nature.
Shes lovely one minute..nasty the next. :)
She tolerates noting..she just is. Nature
always wins. One day she will swoop down
and change things..a big difference will take
place..she holds us in her talons. Respect
her or fall from her grace..she could eat you
at any time :)
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Shoebox..a good place for the pictures. The pain wears thin. One cannot
tolerate too much at one time. Your feet get sore retracing the
steps. I really find it sad where you stated "Mom hated me.
I hated dad. Dad hated us both." but you speak truth on how you feel.
Its funny how we have our pictures taken to remind us of the time..for a
memory. But they are a mismatch. Where you say.." Pictures are
so deceiving." What one felt in the picture is different from what
actually was. It makes one wonder how many times pictures are brought
out and a happy family comes to thought.
Wonderful! I think your mom is very smart. :) Something so simple
to think of at a time of need.. like reading books to your dolls so you
can become a better reader is so awesome. Im so happy you love
reading and writing. If you didnt..I wouldnt have read this piece
today and that would be sad because it gave me strength. You are a
strong individual..I admire that..you have great qualities :)
This is very sad but it happens. Its not just with same sex couples
but with others too. Sometimes parents or relatives or anyone can
think they know whats best when in reality it hurts all around.
Don't worry..the one you loved knows you were there..your feelings
were known. I hope you found peace. I pray you found strength to forgive
and let go. This type of thing can consume ones thoughts..their life.
Your friend, your love would not have wanted that.
I dont know if this is a true story but I do know it happens.
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