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Review of cowboy_Dave  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful world
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Review of Got Milk?  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love raw milk. It's against the law to sell it here in Virginia.
When we lived in up state New York, my son helped a farmer
with the bulk tank. In return my son "got milk". yummie..
My in laws had a farm..I loved fetching the cows..it scared me
once. As I was walking with the cows down the hill..I heard a
thundering sound behind me..I saw nothing..it got louder. Then
I saw the heifers running towards me. I thought they might
trample me. They didn't.
I like your stories very very much. You put humor in your writing.
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Review of Problem Solved  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like smiling..this did it for me. I hope you get your
reputation soon..I'd love to hear some stories. :)
I can say with out a doubt by reading your story:
actions speak louder that words :)
Keith's daughter should marry a veterinarian..problem solved. :)
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Review of Happy Days  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it :) here's mine

Happy Days

yesterday is gone
now is here to stay awhile
tomorrow will wait


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Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think you're on a roll...you'll do fine :)
Wow..sharing your tips was a strike against
you it seams. :) Not really..good guys do not
come in last..they are the first ones to be
grabbed for help.. Everyone will come to
you for more wisdom. They are the grasshoppers..
remember that :)
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Review of Black Magic Love!  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Sounds good to me! Black Magic Woman..good song.
For some reason Im taken to Godsmack too..Voodoo..
Then Im sailing through Jimi Hendrix ..Voodoo..
They arent the same but its magic :)

"giving a man the things he never
Knew he needed, till they are his." awesome :)

"What will be the true cost of my
Dealings with this Black Magic love?" You'll find out when you
cross that bridge..if you do..just don't cross her :)

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Review of The Blog  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.0)
I dont blog. Is this where people talk nonsense?
Any place there's a lot of people..there will be
confusion.

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Review of On That Birthday  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
What? drop that guy. A friend? Taking his calls from prison..are you
looking for another ride? He will take you for a ride..one quite different
from the last. This guy doesn't think. First of all..the guy knew he had
a hit..he knew that mark was going to be there. Second..you got arrested
why wouldn't good ole Roger say something sooner. He doesn't sound like
any hit man I know. They aren't that careless..and why a bike.
I dont know..I hope this is a fictional story. :)
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
SO true. We want everything disposable too but when it comes
to disposing it, some throw it out the window or over the fence
or bank or where ever is convenient. There's that word convenient.
That's what it's about. People want it..they want it now. I think
patience is growing into a thing of the past. I always think of
Noah when it comes to patience. It took him years to build the arch..
others teased and taunted him but he had faith AND patience. So nice.
It's also true how many are looking for spirituality and truth. All they
gotta do is connect with mother nature :) mom is waiting for them :)
Its gonna happen one day whether we want it or not. Nature has a
pattern..it's always changing..we seem to be going the opposite
direction but she'll bring us back..one way or the other. The earth
is our place of life and death. What goes around comes around
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Review of My Storoems  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
You're rather funny :) I love M&Ms..I like your "storoems" too. :)
Nice flavor..yummmm
Is "storoem" a made up word. Your own recipe to a new candy :)
I like it. I write all kinds of poems..some probably don't exist
if that makes sense. I just write..what ever it is..it is.
Is there really esoteric poetry. I'm confused. How can a poem
belong to a select few unless its given directly to them. Do you
mean its meaning is understood by a select few? Well..poetry
is for the reader..the message is there to be taken by the viewer.
We each have our own window. :) Good luck with your recipe :)

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Review of The Promise  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I dont know if I believe in promises. I do believe in
God. I keep his word..thats for sure. It feels me full
of direction. Sometimes it can be confusing..a lot
of intersections. One has to keep moving with God
or crash. Trying to take a path without God is a dead end.
I believe in soulmates. I agree..its all in the beat . The song
of the heart leading the way.
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Review of For Stacy  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Stacy sounds special. You both are lucky
to have such a nice friendship :)
Its really nice what you did here for Stacy.
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.0)
You HOPE your wallet's in the car :)
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ive learned to be more selective..men are awesome...they've got his whole
thing going on that's magnetic. Its this whole animal instinct we have
inside..its the child in us..who likes to play, tease and smile. We don't have
to have sex, or marry them..or be lovers..just enjoy the company..then one
day someone might come along worth knowing. Take day at a time and try
not expecting anything..just walk the path of friendship :)

I do wanna say..I understand where you're coming from.
closing down shop..out of business..no one home..
don't bother to knock I wont answer. Be careful though..
one can find their feelings are being repressed and that's not
good for anything. Tears are helpful..smiles are needed..laughter a must.:)
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Can I come
to your house to eat
I'll help cook :)

emm yummie yummie
All your work paid off
I want more :)


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Review by 2bemar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A tear was streaking down his cheek.. so he must be in love with her.
Im thinking its not a marriage because most girls never give up on
a place..and usually they dont leave without a fight from hell. really..
girls can be horror stories when scorned. Ive seen it.
"He missed his chance to be with her" ..his chance..that gets me to
thinking. I read..Its his home. It could be his daughter. Maybe he's been
wanting to spend time with her but hes been so busy..

I like this. It gets me to wondering.


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Review by 2bemar
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
So I guess you'll never walk ..I mean..as babies we learn
to walk..we fall and get up again..then running starts.. Somethings
running comes before walking..we hit the wall to stop ourselves.
It seems you have already fallen once. Why so protective.
How can you lock something out your not familiar with. How would
you recognize it. I don't know..I feel love is all around and it will
sneak up on you when least expected. Just give it a smile..spend
some time with it...no expectations..just listen to its beat..your
heart will dance.
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Review of True Friends  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.5)
I agree..one has to practice what they expect from others.
Do unto others as you would have them do unto you.
This can be hard at times..I find when a person loves
Jesus its especially tough because people expect you
to be Christ like which is what Christian means..walking in
Christ. Staying strong in faith will work out.
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Review of Happy Wanderer  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes we see the world through the eyes of others.
Like reading a poem..maybe I haven't been to many places
but that's what writing is all about..flying me to a destination
I must see.. take me away..let me taste, smell and hear the
song.
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Review of The Rule of Three  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think the body gives warning signs before a big fall in illness. I mean
You said you had fallen before. I know how it is though..one thinks it
will pass..its probably nothing..if it gets worse then I'll do something..
right? I think we all do this. I'm happy to hear things worked out.
I know how awful life can be when others are taking control.
You whole ordeal sounds frightening. I see you gained strength.
The desire to live free..Im glad you found your wings :)
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's hard for the elderly. Its hard for the loved one's too.
One can't know the heartache it causes on both sides
unless they're been there. Visiting is a must. I agree
there has to be smile given to them each day.
Your piece speaks truth. I thank you for sharing this
with us. Its something we all have to face sometime in our
lives.
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (5.0)
We thank you..someone is doing something positive for
these children..they can use their energy to bring happiness.
It's nice to see children smile..there's been enough tears.
So willing to learn. Let the music play on :)
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Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.0)
I use all my mirrors. I know how someone or something can come
out of the blue. Learn to use your mirrors. Even then I still look
carefully. I pull out slowly and even stop to look again. This
saved me few times..it works well. Drivers don't always see you
nor pedestrians.
I honestly feel the girl was excited and inexperienced and moved a little
too quickly. I also believe one can look carefully and others aren't..
things happen..
This was intersting
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Review of Glazed Doughnuts  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Yummie...I use to eat donuts and coffee. Now I make desserts.
I enjoy baking. Your dad sounds so sweet :)
I like this.
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Review of Positivity  
Review by 2bemar
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought Id give this a try. I found this interesting and entertaining

angel
beautiful white
ascending, purifying, healing
brought love and hope
celestial
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